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(5)a.Onthecontrary,thepercentagesofmilkandmeatareonarise.
b.Onthecontrary,thepercentagesofmilkandmeatareontherise.
(6)a.Wecan’tavoidbeingbeatenbytheothers.
b.Wecan’tavoidbeingbeatenbyothers.
(7)a.Andoncetheartificial-intelligentrobotswereputintouse,whatwouldtheseclever“people”dototheirproducers?
b.Andoncerobotswithartificial-intelligencewereputintouse,whatwouldtheseclever“people”dototheirproducers?
(8)a.Foranexample,withthewideadoptionoftheautomaticworkingapparatuses,moreandmorepeoplewilllosetheirjobsinthefuture.
b.Forexample,withthewideadoptionoftheautomaticworkingapparatuses,moreandmorepeoplewilllosetheirjobsinthefuture.
(9)a.AlmosteverydayIopenTVat6:
30p.m.andwaitforthenewsprogram.
b.AlmosteverydayIturnontheTVat6:
(10)a.Then,duringthesecondpart,we’reshowedsomepicturesoftheforeigncustoms.
b.Then,duringthesecondpart,we’reshowedsomepicturesofforeignplacesandcustoms.
(11)a.Myfavouriteprogrammeiscalled“TheAnimalWorld”,whichisprovidedbyCCTVeverySundaynight.
b.Myfavouriteprogrammeiscalled“AnimalWorld”,whichisprovidedbyCCTVeverySundaynight.
(12)a.Itprovidesuswithnaturalscenesandthelifeofallkindsofwildanimals,withtheexplanationbythenarrator.
b.Itprovidesuswithviewsofnaturalscenesandalookofthelifestyleofallkindsofwild
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animals,withanexplanationbythenarrator.
(13)a.Notonlydotheleadersofthecountriesvisittheforeigncountries,butalsothecommonpeoplevisitabroad.
b.Notonlydotheleadersofcountriesoftenvisittheforeigncountries,butalsothecommonpeoplevisitabroad.
(14)a.Ithinktheyarethequestionsofgreatinterest.
b.Ithinktheyarequestionsofgreatinterest.
(15)a.Inshort,thebadadscanbeclassifiedintotwocategories.Onecategoryhasthebadpurpose.Theadvertiserswanttosellcigarettes,drinks,gunsandsoon....Theothercategoryofbadadsarethoseinwhichtheadvertiseruseviolenceandsextopromotetheirsales.
b.Generallyspeaking,thebadadscanbeclassifiedintotwocategories.Onecategoryhasabadpurpose.Theadvertiserswanttosellthingslikecigarettes,alcohol,andguns....Theothercategoryofbadadsarethoseinwhichtheadvertiseruseviolenceandsextopromotetheirsales.
(16)a.Thisseemstobeonfashionnow.
b.Thisseemstobeinfashionnow.
(17)a.Andalso,theytreatthefirecrackersastheheritageoftheChineseculture.
b.Andalso,theytreatfirecrackersastheheritageoftheChineseculture.
(18)a.Finallywecanteachourselvesandlearnthenewknowledge.
b.Finallywecanteachourselvesandlearnnewknowledge.
(19)a.HigherEnglishlevelwillhelpyoutofindasatisfactoryjobinthefuture.
b.AhigherEnglishlevelwillhelpyoutofindasatisfactoryjobinthefuture.
(20)a.Somestudentswhosemajorischemistry,mathorphysicsandsoonwouldthinkthatwhentheygraduatefromthecollegethey’llnotapplyEnglishanymore.
b.Somestudentswithmajorslikechemistry,mathorphysicswouldthinkthatwhentheygraduatefromcollegethey’llnotuseEnglishanymore.
(21)a.Suchopinionleadstosurprisingwasteofwater.
b.Suchanopinionleadstoashockingwasteofwater.
(22)a.Andwidespreadofeducationisalsoagoodreason.
b.Andthewidespreadofeducationisalsoagoodreason.
(23)a.Thegivengraphtellsusthechangesoflifeexpectancyandinfantmortalityofthedevelopingcountriesin1960and1990.
b.Thegivengraphtellsusthechangesoflifeexpectancyandinfantmortalityinthedevelopingcountriesin1960and1990.
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(24)a.Thereareothercountlessexamples.Allinall,wemustkeeptheproverbinmindforlifetime——Practicemakesperfect.
b.Thereareothercountlessexamples.Inaword,wemustkeeptheproverbinmindforalifetime——Practicemakesperfect.
(25)a.Communityservicesaswellasmassmediaarebothgoldenchancestopracticeourability,throughwhichwecanlearntocooperatewithpeople,tocontributeourintelligencetothesociety.
b.Communityservicesisagoldenchancetouseourability,throughwhichwecanlearntocooperatewithpeopleandcontributeourintelligencetosociety.
(26)a.Idon’tthinknumbershaveanythingtodowiththeluck.
b.Idon’tthinknumbershaveanythingtodowithluck.
B.Nouns名词
-可数名词
1)a.EvenalotofentertainmentsuchasTV,recordingandfilmsneedelectricity.
b.EvenalotofentertainmentsuchasTV,recordingsandfilmsneedelectricity.
2)a.Peoplewhosuggestedthissaidthatonecauseoftheheavytrafficistrafficaccident.
b.Peoplewhosuggestedthissaidthatonecauseoftheheavytrafficistrafficaccidents.
3)a.Twosolutionshavebeenrecommendedsofar,andeachonehasbothadvantageanddisadvantage.
b.Twosolutionshavebeenrecommendedsofar,andeachonehasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.
4)a.Manhaslivedinthisworldforthousandsofyears.Theyfightagainstnaturefromtimetotimeandtheysurvive.
b.Humanbeingshavelivedinthisworldforthousandsofyears.Theyhavefoughtagainstnaturefromtimetotimeandtheyhavesurvived.
5)a.Aslongaswedon’tgiveupandbelieveinourselves,andinthemeantimelearnsomethingfromfailure,we’llcertainlymakeourmarksintheend.
b.Aslongaswedon’tgiveupkeepingbelievinginourselves,andinthemeantimelearnsomethingfromfailure,we’llcertainlymakeourmarkintheend.
6)a.Withmoneywecantravelwidelyandhavemoreexperience.
b.Withmoneywecantravelwidelyandhavemoreexperiences.
7)a.Whatmoneywillringyoudependsonyourpersonalbeliefandgoalinlife.
b.Whatmoneywillringyoudependsonyourpersonalbeliefsandgoalsinlife.
8)a.Duringthisprocess,jobinterviewhasarisenandappearedmoreandmoreimportant.
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b.Duringthisprocess,thejobinterviewhasarisenandappearedmoreandmoreimportant.
9)a.First,theinterviewercantellsomethingaboutthejobtotheintervieweesuchasthewage,theworkconditionsandsomeotherthingswhichisrelevanttothejob.
b.First,theinterviewercantellsomethingaboutthejobtotheintervieweesuchasthewages,theworkingconditionsandsomethingelsewhichisrelevanttothejob.
10)a.Theythinkthatfreshwatercomesfromsuchvarietiesofsourcesthatitisalwayssufficientforuse.
b.Theythinkthatfreshwatercomesfromsuchavarietyofsourcesthatitisalwayssufficientforuse.
11)a.Theprimarycauseisthatwecanexpandourhorizon.
b.Theprimarycauseisthatwecanexpandourhorizons.
12)a.Intheiropinion,peoplewhochangetheirjobfrequentlyaresuperficialandtactless.
b.Intheiropinion,peoplewhochangetheirjobsfrequentlyareimprudentandtactless.
13)a.Theyrangefromfoods,clothestoradios,TVsets,andevensomemedicineisfake,whichhasbroughtalotoftroublesinourdailylife.
b.Theyrangefromfoods,clothestoradios,TVsets,andevenmedicinesarefake,whichhasbroughtalotoftroublestoourdailylife.
14)a.First,governmentshouldforbidthefakecommoditiesbylaw.
b.First,thegovernmentshouldforbidthefakecommoditiesbylaw.
-不可数名词
1)a.Thefreshairandbeautifulscenerieswillattractpeopletoleavetheovercrowdedcity.
b.Thefreshairandbeautifulscenerywillattractpeopletoleavetheovercrowdedcity.
2)a.NowadaysradiosandTVplayamoreandmoreimportantroleinourdailylife.
b.NowadaysradioandTVplayamoreandmoreimportantroleinourdailylife.
3)a.Forexample,settingofffirecrackersoftensetsfiretobuildings,andcausesmanydamages.
b.Forexample,settingofffirecrackersoftensetsfiretobuildings,andcausesalotofdamage.
4)a.Theythinkonlywhentheyareabsorbedinoneworkcantheydoitwell.
b.Theythinkonlywhentheyaredevotedtoonejobcantheydoitwell.
-集合名词
1)a.EvenalotofentertainmentssuchasTV,recordingsandfilmsneedelectricity.
-名词前的数量
1)a.Agreatdealofnewsubjects,whichareactuallyderivedfrombothnaturalandsocialscience,hascomeintoexistenceandenrichtheseaofhumanknowledgegreatly.
b.Agreatnumberofnewsubjects,whichareactuallyderivedfrombothnaturalandsocialscience,hascomeintoexistenceandenrichedtheseaofhumanknowledgegreatly.
-用词不当
1)a.Theyhavelittlechancetofindjobs.
b.Theyhavelittlechancetofindwork.
2)a.Theydon’tgetequalpayforequaljob.
b.Theydon’tgetequalpayforequalwork.
3)a.Forexample,inreporting,areportercanuseit(taperecorder)insteadoftheoldmeansofwritingthemonanotebook.
b.F