1、(5) a. On the contrary, the percentages of milk and meat are on a rise.b. On the contrary, the percentages of milk and meat are on the rise.(6) a. We cant avoid being beaten by the others.b. We cant avoid being beaten by others.(7) a. And once the artificial-intelligent robots were put into use, wha
2、t would these clever “people” do to their producers?b. And once robots with artificial-intelligence were put into use, what would these clever “people” do to their producers?(8) a. For an example, with the wide adoption of the automatic working apparatuses, more and more people will lose their jobs
3、in the future.b. For example, with the wide adoption of the automatic working apparatuses, more and more people will lose their jobs in the future.(9) a. Almost everyday I open TV at 6:30 p.m. and wait for the news program.b. Almost everyday I turn on the TV at 6:(10) a. Then, during the second part
4、, were showed some pictures of the foreign customs.b. Then, during the second part, were showed some pictures of foreign places and customs.(11) a. My favourite programme is called “The Animal World”, which is provided by CCTV every Sunday night.b. My favourite programme is called “Animal World”, wh
5、ich is provided by CCTV every Sunday night.(12) a. It provides us with natural scenes and the life of all kinds of wild animals, with the explanation by the narrator.b. It provides us with views of natural scenes and a look of the life style of all kinds of wild *2012新东方考研英语写作*2012新东方考研英语写作*animals,
6、 with an explanation by the narrator.(13) a. Not only do the leaders of the countries visit the foreign countries, but also the common people visit abroad.b. Not only do the leaders of countries often visit the foreign countries, but also the common people visit abroad.(14) a. I think they are the q
7、uestions of great interest.b. I think they are questions of great interest.(15) a. In short, the bad ads can be classified into two categories. One category has the bad purpose. The advertisers want to sell cigarettes, drinks, guns and so on. .The other category of bad ads are those in which the adv
8、ertiser use violence and sex to promote their sales.b. Generally speaking, the bad ads can be classified into two categories. One category has a bad purpose. The advertisers want to sell things like cigarettes, alcohol, and guns. .The other category of bad ads are those in which the advertiser use v
9、iolence and sex to promote their sales.(16) a. This seems to be on fashion now.b. This seems to be in fashion now.(17) a. And also, they treat the firecrackers as the heritage of the Chinese culture.b. And also, they treat firecrackers as the heritage of the Chinese culture.(18) a. Finally we can te
10、ach ourselves and learn the new knowledge.b. Finally we can teach ourselves and learn new knowledge.(19) a. Higher English level will help you to find a satisfactory job in the future.b. A higher English level will help you to find a satisfactory job in the future.(20) a. Some students whose major i
11、s chemistry, math or physics and so on would think that when they graduate from the college theyll not apply English any more.b. Some students with majors like chemistry, math or physics would think that when they graduate from college theyll not use English any more.(21) a. Such opinion leads to su
12、rprising waste of water.b. Such an opinion leads to a shocking waste of water.(22) a. And wide spread of education is also a good reason.b. And the wide spread of education is also a good reason.(23) a. The given graph tells us the changes of life expectancy and infant mortality of the developing co
13、untries in 1960 and 1990.b. The given graph tells us the changes of life expectancy and infant mortality in the developing countries in 1960 and 1990.*2012新东方考研英语写作*2012新东方考研英语写作*(24) a. There are other countless examples. All in all, we must keep the proverb in mind for lifetimePractice makes perfe
14、ct.b. There are other countless examples. In a word, we must keep the proverb in mind for a lifetimePractice makes perfect.(25) a. Community services as well as mass media are both golden chances to practice our ability, through which we can learn to cooperate with people, to contribute our intellig
15、ence to the society.b. Community services is a golden chance to use our ability, through which we can learn to cooperate with people and contribute our intelligence to society.(26) a. I dont think numbers have anything to do with the luck.b. I dont think numbers have anything to do with luck.B. Noun
16、s 名词-可数名词1) a. Even a lot of entertainment such as TV, recording and films need electricity.b. Even a lot of entertainment such as TV, recordings and films need electricity.2) a. People who suggested this said that one cause of the heavy traffic is traffic accident.b. People who suggested this said
17、that one cause of the heavy traffic is traffic accidents.3) a. Two solutions have been recommended so far, and each one has both advantage and disadvantage.b. Two solutions have been recommended so far, and each one has both advantages and disadvantages.4) a. Man has lived in this world for thousand
18、s of years. They fight against nature from time to time and they survive.b. Human beings have lived in this world for thousands of years. They have fought against nature from time to time and they have survived.5) a. As long as we dont give up and believe in ourselves, and in the meantime learn some
19、thing from failure, well certainly make our marks in the end.b. As long as we dont give up keeping believing in ourselves, and in the meantime learn something from failure, well certainly make our mark in the end.6) a. With money we can travel widely and have more experience.b. With money we can tra
20、vel widely and have more experiences.7) a. What money will ring you depends on your personal belief and goal in life.b. What money will ring you depends on your personal beliefs and goals in life.8) a. During this process, job interview has arisen and appeared more and more important.*2012新东方考研英语写作*
21、2012新东方考研英语写作*b. During this process, the job interview has arisen and appeared more and more important.9) a. First, the interviewer can tell something about the job to the interviewee such as the wage, the work conditions and some other things which is relevant to the job.b. First, the interviewer
22、can tell something about the job to the interviewee such as the wages, the working conditions and something else which is relevant to the job.10) a. They think that fresh water comes from such varieties of sources that it is always sufficient for use.b. They think that fresh water comes from such a
23、variety of sources that it is always sufficient for use.11) a. The primary cause is that we can expand our horizon.b. The primary cause is that we can expand our horizons.12) a. In their opinion, people who change their job frequently are superficial and tactless.b. In their opinion, people who chan
24、ge their jobs frequently are imprudent and tactless.13) a. They range from foods, clothes to radios, TV sets, and even some medicine is fake, which has brought a lot of troubles in our daily life.b. They range from foods, clothes to radios, TV sets, and even medicines are fake, which has brought a l
25、ot of troubles to our daily life.14) a. First, government should forbid the fake commodities by law.b. First, the government should forbid the fake commodities by law.-不可数名词1) a. The fresh air and beautiful sceneries will attract people to leave the overcrowded city.b. The fresh air and beautiful sc
26、enery will attract people to leave the overcrowded city.2) a. Nowadays radios and TV play a more and more important role in our daily life.b. Nowadays radio and TV play a more and more important role in our daily life.3) a. For example, setting off firecrackers often sets fire to buildings, and caus
27、es many damages.b. For example, setting off firecrackers often sets fire to buildings, and causes a lot of damage.4) a. They think only when they are absorbed in one work can they do it well.b. They think only when they are devoted to one job can they do it well.-集合名词1) a. Even a lot of entertainmen
28、ts such as TV, recordings and films need electricity.-名词前的数量1) a. A great deal of new subjects, which are actually derived from both natural and social science, has come into existence and enrich the sea of human knowledge greatly.b. A great number of new subjects, which are actually derived from bo
29、th natural and social science, has come into existence and enriched the sea of human knowledge greatly.-用词不当1) a. They have little chance to find jobs.b. They have little chance to find work.2) a. They dont get equal pay for equal job.b. They dont get equal pay for equal work.3) a. For example, in reporting, a reporter can use it(tape recorder) instead of the old means of writing them on a notebook.b. F
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