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1.文章中长短句结合，每篇都有些精彩的恰当的长句，长句的使用时没有结构性的语法错误。

说长句恰当是指在写长句时要自然，不要为长而长，显得做作。

2.每篇都有一些亮眼的词和词语，我在以下文章用红色标识一些（不是全部），这些亮词可以提升文章的档次。

3.题目要求的三点（三个方面）都有谈到，要求的内容无缺失。

4.文章没有重大的语法错误（当然有些小的错误）。

OnlineShopping

Nowadays,withtheconsiderableimprovementininformationtechnology,thereisanincreasingtrendofonlineshopping.SomefamouswebsitessuchasTaoBao,Amazon,andAlibabaareattractingmoreandmorenetizens.

Thereasonswhyonlineshoppingissopopulararevarious.Firstly,itcan’tbedeniedthatit’sveryconvenient.Youjustneedtoapplyforanaccount,sitinfrontofyourcomputerclickingonthescreenandwaitforthemerchandisetobedeliveredtoyou.What’smoreonlinestoresprovidemorechoicesandwecancomparethepriceseasilywithouthangingaroundthestreets.Meanwhile,wecangetthemostfashionableinformationfromsomanywebsites.

However,aseverycoinhastwosides,thebadsidesofonlineshoppingcan’tbeignored.Forexample,maybetheclothesorshoesyouorderedarejustnotfityou.Ittakesalotoftroubletochangeandreturnthem.Sometimes,thequalityofthegoodsmaybefarfromyourexpectation.Worstofall,someevilguysusethiskindoftechnologytocheatonline.

AsfarasI’mconcerned,thereismuchofonlineshoppinglefttobeimproved.Ononehand,it’saneffectivewaytopreventthedisadvantagesifourgovernmentcancarryoutmoredetailedrulesaboutshoppingonline.Ontheotherhand,consumersoughttobecautiousenoughtoidentifywhetherthewebinformationisrealornot.Solongasbothmanufacturersandconsumersarekeptinorder,therearechancesinimprovingtheonlineshoppingenvironmentandguaranteetherightsofconsumers.

信科一班张梅玲10251001127

Onlineshoppinggainsitspopularitynowadays

法1梁佩玲（Lynn）10250701119

Withthedevelopmentandthepopularityofcomputers,onlineshoppinghasbecomehotandfashionable.Hereconsumershaveawiderangeofchoicesandbuyalmosteverythingtheyneed.

ShoppingontheInternethasalotofadvantages,ofwhichthemostimportantisperhapsitsconvenience.Peopledon’thavetowastealotofenergyandprecioustimetogooneshoptoanothertochoosethecommoditiestheywant.Thisisespeciallydesirabletothedisabledandthebusypeoplewhocannotgototheshopsinperson.Thegoodscomeinallshapes,sizesandcolors.Alltheyneedtodoistositinfrontofthecomputersandclick.Thecommoditiestheyorderwillbedeliveredtothemsoon.

However,shoppingonlinealsohasitsdisadvantages.Itisunsafeandnotreliable.Firstly,theconsumerscan’tseethegoodsortrythemonpersonally.Sometimes,therealgoodsmaynotbethesameaswhattheyhaveseenontheInternet.Inotherwords,thequalitycannotbeguaranteed.Secondly,someshopsarenotregistered.Oncecheated,youwillfindthatyouhavenowheretogotocomplain.Worsestill,youmayloseprivacywithyourbankaccountcodeavailableonthenet.

AsfarasI’mconcerned,theconvenienceandexcitementofonlineshoppingisbeyondalldoubts.Inthemeantime,wemustalwayskeepinmindthatcertaintrapsdoexist,sowe’dbettermakesurethesellersaretrustworthybeforebuying.Inaddition,weshouldalsoguardourselvesfromthepotentialhackerswhomightstealouraccountinformation.

民商法

（1）班冯迪心10250705152

Noonecandenythefactthatshoppingonlinehasbecomeafashion.OnlineshoppingisbecomingmoreandmorecommonallovertheworldincludingChina.However,likeanythingelse,onlineshoppinghasitsmeritsanddrawbacks.

Justasitsnameimplies,onlineshoppingistoconducttheshoppingactivitiesonline.Onlineshoppinghasmanyadvantages.Firstofall,youcangetbetterunderstandingabouttheproductsthatinterestyoujustthroughInternet.Thenonceyoudecidetobuyacertainproduct,youcanjustbuyitwithyour“E-wallet”andwithoutsteppingoutofyourhouse.It’stimesavingthatpeopledon’tneedtospendtimeshoppinginstores.Theonlythingpeoplehavetodoistowaitforthearrivalofthegoods.

Despitealltheadvantagesmentionedabove,peoplehavetotakeariskwhenpurchasingaproductinthevirtualworld.Youmaynotreceiveyourgoodsafterremittingmoney,oryoumayreceivegoodsthataremuchdifferentfromwhatyouhaveseenonthecomputerscreen.

Inmyopinion,weshouldbewisetoonlineshopping.Weoughttochoosesomemerchantswithgoodreputationwhenshoppingonline.Furthermore,aswearerealpeoplelivingintherealworld,it’sofgreatimportanceforustokeepabalancebetweenshoppingintherealstoresandinthevirtualones.

OnlineShopping

Nowadays,onlineshoppingisgrowingrapidly.ThankstothedevelopmentofInternetandadvancedelectroniccommerce,weareabletopurchasegoodswithouttakingastepoutofourhouse.Allwehavetodoissittinginfro