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雅思考官大作文

IELTSWritingSample

Youshouldspendabout40minutesonthistask.

Writeaboutthefollowingtopic:

Schoolchildrenarebecomingfartoodependentoncomputers.Thisishavinganalarmingeffectonreadingandwritingskills.Teachersneedtoavoidusingcomputersintheclassroomatallcostsandgobacktoteachingbasicstudyskills.

Doyouagreeordisagree?

Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperience.

Writeatleast250words.

modelanswer:

Nowadaysmoderntechnologyhastotallychangedourapproachtostudy.Inmanycountriesstudentsnolongerhavetocopynotesbyhandfromtheblackboard;insteadtheteachergivesthemaphotocopy.Ratherthanmessyinkandpen,studentspresentatyped-upcopyoftheirassignments.Theircomputerevencheckstheirspellingastheygo.Infact,somepeoplebelievethatmoderntechnologydoesalotofourthinkingforusand,asaresult,wearegoingtoloseourabilitytothinkforourselves.

Inmyopinion,spellingskillshavedefinitelydeterioratedinrecentyears.Somanyyoungpeopleusemobilephonestosendtextmessageswherespeedandconcisenessaremoreimportantthanspellingorgrammar.Someteacherscomplainthatthesestudentstakethesameattitudetowardtheirassignments.

Ontheotherhand,typedassignmentsaremucheasiertoreadandaremuchneater.Frankly,Ifindsomenotesortextswhicharehandwrittenalmostimpossibletoread.Doctors,forexample,haveareputationforillegiblehandwriting,whichcouldleadtodisastrousmedicalmistakes.Perhapsitistimewefocusednotonhandwritingbutonpresentinginformationasaccuratelyaspossible.

OneadvantageofcomputersisthataccesstotheInternethasopenedupanewworldoflearningforus.Wenolongerhavetowaitforabookthathasalreadybeenborrowedfromthelibrarybeforewedoourresearch.Infact,theInternetcanclearlybeusedtoresearchinformationinthesamewayasalibrarybutmoreconveniently.

Onthewhole,ratherthanholdingstudentsback,Ibelievemoderntechnologyhasactuallyimprovedstandardsofeducationconsiderably.

（276words）

IELTSWritingSample

Youshouldspendabout40minutesonthistask.

Writeaboutthefollowingtopic:

Governmentsshouldmakemoreefforttopromotealternativesourcesofenergy.

Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?

Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperience.

Writeatleast250words.

modelanswer:

Ithasbeenknownforsometimenowthatamovetowardssourcesofenergywhicharenotcarbon-basedisurgentlyrequiredtostoptheeffectsofglobalwarming.Inmyview,therearetoofewgovernmentswhoseemtobepromotingtheuseofothertypesofenergysuchaswind,wave,solarandnuclearsourcesofenergy.

Governmentsatpresentaretooreliantoncoal,oilandgas.Althoughsomegovernmentsaredoingresearchintotheuseofalternativeenergysources,manyarenot.Energyfromthewind,theseaandthesundoesnotpollutetheenvironmentandisaneverlastingsourceofpower.Nuclearpowerisclean,andalthoughitisnottotallyunproblematic,itwouldprovidealargeamountofenergyanddramaticallyimprovetheenvironment.CountriessuchasFrancehavemadegooduseofnuclearpower.

Myfeelingisthatmoreusecouldbemadeofwindpower.Insomecountries,therehasbeenareluctancetousewindturbines,eveninareaswhicharenotdenselypopulated,assomepeoplebelievetheyareeyesores.Personally,Ibelievetheyarenotonlyuseful,butbeautifulaswell.Governmentsshouldspendmoretimeandeffortpromotingthebenefitsofthissourceofenergyandtryingtomakethepublicunderstandthereasonforchange.

Inconclusion,Ibelievethat,ifgovernmentsforcedeveryonetohaveawindturbineandsolarpanelsonthebuildingtheylivein,mademoreuseofwavepowerandbuiltmorenuclearpowerstations,thentheywouldmanagetoavertthedangersthatareseriouslythreateningtheEarth.（268words）

IELTSWritingSample

Youshouldspendabout40minutesonthistask.

Writeaboutthefollowingtopic:

CountriessuchasChina,IndiaandJapanhaveunsustainablepopulationgrowths.Infactmanyexpertsareoftheopinionthatthepopulation‘explosion’whichisnowaveryworryingconcern,isthemostseriousthreattolifeonthisplanet.

Givesomesuggestionstoaddressthisproblem.Writeatleast250words.

modelanswer:

Itistruethatthepopulation‘explosion’whichhastakenplaceoverthelastcentury,isaveryseriousproblem.Oneofthemainreasonsforthisunacceptablepopulationgrowthisalackofunderstandingabouttheenvironment.Over-populationisthemajorreasonforwater,soilandairpollution.Itisalsooftenthecauseofstarvationandevenwars.Expertshaveputforwardmanysuggestionstoaddressthisproblem.Thefollowingarejustafewofthese.

Themostimportantweaponwehavetofightpopulationgrowthiseducation.Thisshouldstartataveryearlyagei.e.beforechildrenevengotoschool.TVcartoonsandchildren’sprogramscanbeusedtoeducatetheveryyoung.Athighschoollevel,studentscanbetaughtabouttheproblemmoredirectly.Atuniversitylevel,scholarshipsshouldbemadeavailabletostudentswhowishtostudyfurtherinthisfield.Internationalexchangegroupsmayalsohelptoincreaseawareness.

Anotherimportantmeansofcontrollingpopulationgrowthistodisadvantagepeoplewhohavemorethanoneortwochildren.Thiscanbedone,asitisinChina,bymeansofahighertax.Althoughitiscontroversial,personswhocomeforwardtobesterilizedcouldbegivenasumofmoney.Itmayalsobepossibletomakeitadvantageousforpeopletohaveonlyonechildbygivingsuchcouplesaspecialtaxdeduction.

Itshouldalsobepossibletomakecontraceptiondevicesfreetothepublicandeasilyobtainable.

Thisproblemisaverydifficultonetoaddressbutweshouldmakeeveryefforttodoso.Therearemanyotherproblemswhicharerelatedtoover-populationsuchasincreasingcrime,illiteracyandpollution.Sobyaddressingoneproblemwewouldbeaddressingtheothersaswell.

（298words）

IELTSWritingSample

Youshouldspendabout40minutesonthistask.

Writeaboutthefollowingtopic:

Illiteracyhastraditionallybeenviewedaslargelyathirdworldproblem.

HoweveritisbecomingapparentthatincountriessuchastheUSAandAustralia,illiteracyisontheincrease.

Discusspossiblecausesforthisanditseffectonsociety.

Writeatleast250words.

modelanswer:

Itistruethatilliteracyisbecomingaseriousprobleminindustrialisednations.Thisissurprisingasmostpeoplethinkthatthisisaproblemonlyinunder-developednationssuchasinpartsofAfricaandIndia.Illiteracyisrelatedtomanyotherproblemssuchaspoverty,over-populationandgovernmentalcorruption.LetustakeamoredetailedlookatthecausesofthisgrowingprobleminmanyWesternnations.

Oneofthemostobviousreasonsfortheincreaseinilliteracyistheadventoftelevision.Childrennolongerhavetoreadtoobtaininformation.Neitherdotheyhavetoreadtorelax.Todaychildrengethomefromschoolandgostraightto“thebox”towatchtheirfavoriteprogram.Watchingtelevisionismucheasierandmoreexcitingthanreading.

Anotherreasonfortheincreaseinilliteracyisthefactthatsomanywomenwork.Thismeansthatchildrenareoftenaloneathomeandsotheyareunsupervised.Whenparentsgethometheyareoftentootiredtospendqualitytimewhittheirchildren.

Itisalsotruethatmanypeopleblameschoolsforthedeclineinilliteracy.Inmanycountriestherehasbeenamoveawayfromteachingbasicskillssuchasreadingandwriting.

Therearemanyeffectsofthisgrowingilliteracyrate.Themostobviousisunemployment.Thismayinturnleadtoalcoholanddrugabuse.Ultimatelytheeconomyofthecountrybeginstosufferandthereisadropinlivingstandards.

Toaddressthisproblem,parentsneedtobecomemoreawareoftheirresponsibilitiesandschoolsneedtoconsiderachangeintheirteachingmethods.Ifthisworseningtrendisnotreversed,theproblemofilliteracywillbecomeveryserious.

（286words）

IELTSWritingSample#141

Youshouldspendabout40minutesonthistask.

Writeaboutthefollowingtopic:

Usingacomputereverydaycanhavemorenegativethanpositiveeffectsonyourchildren.

Doyouagreeordisagree?

Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperience.

Writeatleast250words.

modelanswer:

Itendtoagreethatyoungchildrencanbenegativelyaffectedbytoomuchtimespentonthecomputereveryday.Thisispartlybecausesittinginfrontofascreenfortoolongcanbedamagingtoboththeeyesandthephysicalpostureofayoungchild,regardlessofwhattheyareusingthecomputerfor.

However,themainconcernisaboutthetypeofcomputeractivitiesthatattractchildren.Theseareoftenelectronicgamesthattendtobeveryintenseandratherviolent.Theplayerisusuallythe‘hero’ofthegameandtoomuchexposurecanencouragechildrentobeself-centredandinsensitivetoothers.

Evenwhenchildrenuseacomputerforotherpurposes,suchasgettinginformationoremailingfriends,itisnosubstituteforhumaninteraction.Spendingtimewithotherchildrenandsharingnonvirtualexperiencesisanimportantpartofachild'sdevelopmentthatcannotbeprovidedbyacomputer.

Inspiteofthis,theobviousbenefitsofcomputerskillsforyoungchildrencannotbedenied.TheiradultworldwillbechangingconstantlyintermsoftechnologyandtheInternetisthekeytoalltheknowledgeandinformationavailableintheworldtoday.