届高考英语二轮复习精题汇编短文改错2.docx

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届高考英语二轮复习精题汇编短文改错2

精题分解：

短文改错

（2）

1、（2011·陕西省咸阳市高三模拟考试

（一））第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：

在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：

把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：

在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Timeandtidewaitnoman.Mymotherisbecomingamiddle-agewoman

quietly.Shehadbeenbusyrunningafterusalltheyears.Myfatherisverybusyevery

dayoutside.Buttheheavyburdenfallsonmymother’sshoulder.Becausemyschoolis

farfrommyhome,Ihavetogotoschoolbythetrainandmymotherseesmeoffatthe

stationeverytime.Ioftenchooseaseatwhereisclosetothewindow,soIcanseeher.

However,Ialwayscan’thelpruntearsfrommyeyes.Allthebuildingsandpeople

outsidethewindowdisappear.IwavegentletomymotherandIlookathertillthe

viewofherbackdisappears.Uptonow,evenifheisbusy,shestilldoesitasusual.

Theviewofmymother’sbackwillneverchangeinmyheart.

答案

短文改错：

Timeandtidewait∧noman.Mymotherisbecomingamiddle-agewoman

formiddle-aged

quietly.Shehadbeenbusyrunningafterusalltheyears.Myfatherisverybusyevery

has

dayoutside.Buttheheavyburdenfallsonmymother’sshoulder.Becausemyschoolis

Soshoulders

farfrommyhome,Ihavetogotoschoolbythetrainandmymotherseesmeoffatthe

stationeverytime.Ioftenchooseaseatwhereisclosetothewindow,soIcanseeher.

which/that

However,Ialwayscan’thelpruntearsfrommyeyes.Allthebuildingsandpeople

running

outsidethewindowdisappear.IwavegentletomymotherandIlookathertillthe

gently

viewofherbackdisappears.Uptonow,evenifheisbusy,shestilldoesitasusual.

she

Theviewofmymother’sbackwillneverchangeinmyheart.

2、（2011·陕西省西安铁一中高三摸底考试）

Hecarelessputhishandintoit.Hardashetried,hecouldnotpullitout.Hisfathertriedhisbest,too,buttheireffortswereinavain.Theywerethinkingofbreakingthevasewheneverthefathersaid,“Now,myson,whyhaveonemoretry?

OpenyourhandorholdyourfingersoutstraightasyousawIdoing,andthenpull.”Tohissurprise,thechildsays,“Ican’tholdmyfingersstraightlikethat,because

Idon’twanttodropmypenny.”Thousandofussometimesaresobusyholdontotheworld’sworthlesspennythatwe

cannota

chieveliberation.

答案

76.in---of77.careless--carelessly

78.去掉a79.whenever--when

80.why与have之间加not81.or--and

82.i--me83.says--said

84.Thousand--Thousands85.hold--holding

3、（2011·陕西省西安地区高三八校联考试题）

DearTony，

Nicetotalktoyouagain.Iwouldlovetotellyousomethingaboutmynewinvention，thatcan

catchsnakesbutnotharmthem.

FirstIboughtanice一creammakermakingofsteel.Betweentheoutsideandtheinsidewallof

thebowlthereissomejelly,whichfreezewhencooled.Iputthebowlintothefridge.Thenin

theeveningIplacedafrozenbowlinthesnakes'habitatandtheice一cu

besontopofthebowl

tokeepcool.FinallyIcoveredthewholethingwithalargebucket.ThenextmorningwhenI

removedthebucketorthebowl,Ifoundthesnakesverysleepily.Icollectedthepassivesnakes

usinganetandreleaseditallbackintothewild.

Whatdoyouthinkofmyinvention?

Gladtohearfromyouradvice.Thankyou.

Bestwishes.

Cathy

4、（2011·陕西省长安一中高三上学期第三次模拟考试）

IwatchTVuntilnearly12oclock,soIcouldnotgoovermylessons．ThismorningIgotupverylatethatIhadtohurryschoolwithoutbreakfastyetIwaslateofthefirstclass．WhenIenteredtheclassroom,themathsteacherhadtostopexplainingaimportantproblem,andalltheeyesfixeduponme．Myfaceturnedtored．SomethingevenworsehappenedtomeintheEnglishclass．Theteacheraskedmetorecitethetext,butIcouldspeaknothingbutSorry,asIdidnotspendanytimepreparingmylessons．Theteacherlookedatmewithhiscoldlyeyes,Istoodatmybenchwithoutdaringtoraisemyhead．WhataterribledayIhad!

Iwillneverdoanythinglikethis．

答案

76．watch--watched77．very---so78．hurry后加to79．of--for80．a—an

81．eyes后加were82．to去掉83．speak--say84．as--for85．coldly—cold

5、（2011·陕西省宝鸡市高三教学质量检测

（一）A卷

IstillrememberhownervouslyIwasonmyfirstdayinthenewschoolthereyearsago,whenIfounddifficulttofollowmyteacherinthefirstEnglishclass.TheteacherspokeEnglishthroughouttheclass,thatwastotallydifferentfromlessons1hadtakenbefore.

Inthemorningclassthenextday,theEnglishteachercametomewhileIamreadingthetextaloudasotherstudents．Afterlistentomeforawhile,shegavemeabigsmileandsaidhelikedmyvoiceverymuch．Thesmileshoneonthewholedayandthefollowingdays．Aweeklater,IwasvolunteeredtotakechargeofEnglishstudyinmyclass．Thanktothecomfortingsmileinmyfirstmorningclass,Ibegantoconfident．

答案

6、（2011·山西省太原市高三上学期调研考试）

AftersupperLiuWeicameandaskmetogoandseeafilmwithfilm.Inourwaytothecinema,wesawthelittlegirlsittingbytheroadsidecrying.Weboughtheracaketostophercry.Whenweaskedshelived,shesaidshedidnotknow.Sowetookhimtothepolicestationandaskedthepolicestotakecareofher.Afterthatwewenttothecinema.Andwhenwegotthere,themoviewasalmostover.Althoughwemissedthemovie,butwefeltveryhappybecausewedidawelldeed.

答案

7、（2011·山西省山西大学附属中学高三12月月考）

NevershallIforgetthefirstEnglishlessongivingbyMissLiu.OneMondaymorning,whensheenteredtheclassroom,wefoundoutthatshewasayoungandbeautifullady.Thensheintroducedheran

dsaidtheyshouldn’tcallherTeacherLiubutMissLiu.Later,sheletusgototheblackboardandsaidsomethingaboutourselvesinEnglishinturns.Whenitwasmyturn,IfelttooshythatIdidn’tdaretosayanythingbeforetheclass.Shewentuptomeandsaidkind,“Don’tbeafraid.Ibelieveyoucandowell.”Atlast,Iwenttotheblackboard.

ShepraisedmeforthatIhaddone.

答案

改错

giving—given去掉outher---herselfthey---wesaid----sayturns---turn

too---sokind---kindlydo后加itthat---what

8、（2011·山西省霍州一中高三上学期期中考试）

LastSundayIsawaworststorminyears.Itcamesuddenandwentonforoverthreehours.Afterlunch,Iwentintomyroomtohavearest.Theairwashot,butallwasquiet.Thenastrongwindstartedtoblowintomyroom.Piecesofpaperonmydeskflewhighintotheairandsomeflewouttheopenwindow.AsIranouttocatchit,bigdropofrainbegantofall.WhenIcomebackintomyhouse,itwasrainingmoreharderandharder.ThenIheardaloudcrashingsoundfromthebackofthehouse.WhenIranoutofmyroomtofindoutthathadhappened,abigtreehadfallendownandbrokethetopofthebackroom.

答案

LastSundayIsawaworststorminyears.Itcamesuddenandwentonforoverthree

thesuddenly

hours.Afterlunch,Iwen

tintomyroomtohavearest.Theairwashot,butallwasquiet.

and

Thenastrongwindstartedtoblowintomyroom.Piecesofpaperonmydeskflewhigh

intotheairandsomeflewout∧theopenwindow.AsIranouttocatchit,bigdropof

ofthemdrops

rainbegantofall.WhenIcomebackintomyhouse,itwasrainingmoreharderand

camemuch

harder.ThenIheardaloudcrashingsoundfromthebackofthehouse.WhenIranoutof

myroomtofindoutthathadhappened,abigtreehadfallendownandbrokethetopof

whatbroken

thebackroom.

9、（2011·山西省高考考前适应性训练）

Severalweeksago,myparentswereawayforbusiness,andIhadtobeallbymefor

twodays.Myparentsstartearlythatmorning,andIgotupsoonaftertheyleft.Thefirstone

nightIwasscared,soIturnedonallthelightandkeptthemonthewholenight.Forfearof

getuplatethenextmorning,Iputthreealarmclocksnearbedandsetthealarmsat6:

00,6:

10,

and6:

15.InordertoproveIcouldtakecaremysel

f,Iwashedmyownclothes,thoughIcan

waitformymothertodoit.IreallyfeltproudofmyselfbutthoughtIwasabiggirl.

答案

10、（2011·宁夏银川一中高三第五次月考试题）

Mymomlearnedearlyonhowtocookforalargefamily．Grewuponasmallfarm,shewastheoldofsevenchildren．Soyoucanimagineresponsibilitythatfellonhershoulder．Shemomtaughtherhowtomakepiesandcanfruitsandvegetables．Shelethermakemealsforcompanies,too．Asawifeandamother,mombakedandcookedevenmuch,becauseIhavesixbrothersandfoursisters．Withsoalargefamily,momwasalwaysmakedeliciousdisheswhileweweregrowingup．Shealwaysusedthefreshestherbsandvegetablesfromourgarden．Andforeachbirthday,shewouldmakethebirthday-child’sfavoritemeal．

【答案】

Grew—Growing;old—oldest;responsibility前加the;shoulder—shoulders;She—Her;let—lets;mother前a去掉;much—more;so—such;make—making

【解析】文章主要测试以下几方面：

现在分词；形容词和副词；冠词；名词；代词；动词（主谓一致）等。

第一行：

句子Grewuponasmallfarm,shewastheoldofsevenchildren的译文如下：

（她）生长在一个小农场，她是七个孩子中最大（oldest）的一个；再根据主谓一致及省略结构可知：

grew和she属于主动关系，所以：

grew改为growing；old改为oldest；

第二行：

句子译文：

所以你可以想想他肩负的责任。

她母亲教他如何制作馅饼，水果和蔬菜罐头。

此处：

responsibility属于特指：

onhershoulders上面的责任；另外，shoulder属于可数名词，而且考虑现实人的“肩膀”应该是两个，故此使用复数结构：

shoulders；结合所学知识可知：

她母亲应该表达为：

hermother，故此，she改为：

her；

第三行：

根据主谓一致可以识别出：

let改为lets（she属于第三人称单数）；句子中：

Asawifeandamother,主要表示：

母亲作为一位妻子和母亲，所以属于单数结构，只能使用一个冠词。

例如：

Thereisablackandwhitecat。

这儿有只黑白相间的猫（只有一只）；

第四行：

根据所学知识：

even通常用来加强比较级，此处句子：

Asawifeandamother,mombakedandcookedevenmuch,becauseIhavesixbrothersandfoursisters．的译文：

作为一位妻子和母亲，妈妈烤制更多食物，因为我有六个弟弟，四个妹妹，所以：

much改为more；句子：

Withsoalargefamily,momwasalwaysmakedeliciousdisheswhileweweregrowingup．的译文：

如此大一个家

庭，妈妈总能做出美味的食物，供我们成长，结合所学知识：

so只能修饰：

adj或者adv，而such用来修饰：

名词，所以：

so改为such；另外，momwasalwaysmakingdeliciousdishes中动词：

make应该使用主动结构：

making