高考英语书面表达写作技巧[教学课件].ppt

高考英语书面表达写作技巧[教学课件].ppt

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,书面表达写作技巧,词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）,1.覆盖了所有的要点2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑4.语言得体,要点全,连接词,如何算是一篇好文章？

语言地道，规范,acomposition,topicsentence（主题句）,supportingsentences（扩展句）,ending（结尾句）,过渡词：

first,second,finally,and,besides,also,but,however,whatsmore,Writingacompositionisjustlikemakingasandwich.,一改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。

可以把状语置于句首.,Theboyisveryhungryandhehurriedhome.,Hungry,theboyhurriedhome.,Theboy,hungry,hurriedhome.,二.Transformationofsentencesinwriting（写作中的句型转换）,A.合并为简单句,把其中一句改为分词短语Hehadfinishedsupper.Hewentouttohaveawalkthen.,Havingfinishedsupper,hewentouttohaveawalk.,二.Transformationofsentencesinwriting（写作中的句型转换）,2.把其中一句改为介词短语Hewasbroughtin.Hishandsweretiedbehindhisback.,Hewasbroughtinwithhishandstiedbehindhisback.,B.合并为复合句TheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnight.Thenewscheeredeveryoneofus.,ThenewsthattheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnightcheeredeveryoneofus.,2Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast.Allthesemakepeopleslivesconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.which,Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast,makespeopleslivesconvenient,pleasant,C.把复合句改为简单句,1.把从句改为分词短语,Shewasanxioustofindajobaftershefinishedherstudies.,Havingfinishedherstudies,shewasanxioustofindajob.,2.把从句改为介词短语,Iinsistedthatheshouldgo.,Iinsistedonhimgoing.,三.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用以下结构：

倒装句,强调句,主从复合句,分词状语,With复合结构,Thoughheiswealthy,heworkshard.,Wealthyasheis,heworkshard.,Inspiteof/Despitehiswealth,heworkshard.,Hedidntgetupuntil7oclock.,Itwasnotuntil7oclockthathegotup.,Notuntil7oclockdidhegetup.,Ihadagoodidea.,Agoodideaoccurredto/struck/cametome.,Icameupwithagoodidea.,注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调的词来代替一些单词，以增加文采。

四.use“complicated/advancedwords”,A.Second,twentyyearsago,teenagerslistenedtomusicwithtaperecorders.Differently,todayweusemp3,mp4andevenmp5whichareeasytotake.B.Anotherchangeisincommunication.Insteadofwritingletters,teenagersnowadayspreferwritinge-mailsorcallingtokeepintouchwithfriends.C.First,teenagersoftwentyyearsagolearnfromLeiFengandZhangHaidi,whilenowweconsiderBillGatesandasourrolemodels.D.Whatgreatchangestheyare!

E.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinteenagerslifeduringthepasttwentyyears.CorrectOrder:

_,ECABD,一，改变句子的开头方式,二，句型转换,A.合并为简单句,把其中一句改为分词短语,把其中一句改为介词短语,B.合并为复合句,C.把复合句改为简单句,把从句改为分词短语,把从句改为介词短语,三，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语、with复合结构等.,四，注意使用高级词汇代替一些单词，以增加文采。

五.有效使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，使文章结构紧凑。

1汉式英语2句式单一平铺直叙3基础词汇掌握不牢4书写不规范,Commonmistakes,9分,6分,24分,Writingsteps:

Attention,1.格式2.人称3.时态4.要点5.语法6.字数7.书写,书面表达（满分30分）你校学生会准备办一期英语墙报，主题为：

保护环境从我做起。

请你根据下图所示写一篇英语短文。

注意：

1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

WhatcanIdoforourenvironment?

Everyonecandosomethingforourenvironment.,saveelectricity,turnoffthelights,protectourforests,usepaperwisely,notusethingslikepapercupsordisposablechopsticks,usebothsidesofpaper,Doyou,includeenoughinformation?

useproperlinkingwords?

makeanyspellingorgrammarerrors?

Isyourhandwritingclearenoughtoread?

check,ourshowtime,WhatcanIdoforourenvironment?

Everyonecandosomethingforourenvironment.Tolovetheenvironmentistoloveourselves.Astome,IwilltrytosaveelectricityinmydailylifebyrememberingtoturnoffthelightswhenIamthelastpersontoleavetheclassroomintheevening.Inordertoprotectourforests,Iwillusepaperwisely.Itisbothsidesofpaperthatshouldbeusedwheneveritispossible.Whatsmore,neverwillIusethingslikepapercupsordisposablechopsticksbecausetheyaremadeofwood.,Inaword,withdoingallthesesmallthings,wewillnotonlyimproveourenvironmentbutalsohelpmakeourworldabetterplacetolivein.,Romeisnotbuiltinoneday.,Practicemakesperfect!

Mayyousucceed!