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四级冲刺写作学生

0602考神团队四级冲刺抢分班写作，翻译讲义

@老师王菲

四级写作评分标准

大学英语四级考试写作部分要求考生达到教育部高等教育司最新教学大纲中的一般要求，即“能完成一般性写作任务；能描述个人经历、观感、情感和发生的事件等；能写常见的应用文；能就一般性话题或提纲在半小时内写出120个词的短文，内容基本完整，用词恰当，语意连贯。

能掌握基本的写作技能。

”考试时间为30分钟，所占分值为15%。

●作文评分原则

1.检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级写作要求

2.作文采用总体评分法。

阅卷人就总体印象给出奖励分，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。

3.从内容和形式两个方面对作文进行综合评判。

内容和语言是一个统一体。

作文应该表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。

要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而合适地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。

●作文评分标准

1.本题满分为15分。

2.阅卷标准共分五等：

2分，5分，8分，11分及14分。

评分标准

0分-----白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想。

2分――条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

５分――基本切题。

表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。

有较多的严重语言错误。

８分－－基本切题。

有些地方表达思想不清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。

１１分――切题。

表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

１４分――切题。

表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本无语言错误，仅有个别小错。

范文对比阅读

Theimportanceofteamwork

9分作文

Peopleacceptwidelythattoworkoneselfisgoodbecauseitcanproveone’sability.However,teamworkisveryimportantinmodernsociety.Teamworkhasbecomeasloganofmanycompaniesandtheyrequireworkerstohaveteamworkspirit.

Wecanprovethethingthatteamworkisveryimportantbymanyfactsthatisasfollowing.First,companiesandindividualsarerequiredtohaveteamworkbycomplicatedmodernsociety.Second,teamworkmakesworkenvironmentbecomegood,whichmakespeoplecooperateandenjoythework.Third,teamworkalsocanmakecompaniessavethetimeandmakemoremoney.Finally,teamworkcanmakeallpeople’sknowledgeunitetogether,sowecansolveproblemsbetterandmorequickly.

AsfarasIamconcerned,Ithinkthemostimportantqualityinmyworkenvironmentisteamworkspirit.Ifthereisthehelpthatisgivenbytheteam,Icansolvemyquestionsmoreeasily,andIcanincreasemyworkeffectiveness.Teamworkcanalsothreatenmyabilitiesandmakemestudymoreknowledge.Therefore,fromtheabovementioned,Ithinkthattochoosetoworkwithagroupofpeopleisverywise.

Theimportanceofteamwork

14分作文

Itiswidelyacceptedthattoworkindependentlyhastheobviousadvantagesinthatitcanproveone’sability.However,teamworkismoreimportantinmodernsociety.Ithasbecomesloganandarequiredqualityinmoreandmorecompanies.

Theimportanceofteamworkcanbeprovedbythefollowingfacts.First,modernsocietyiscomplicatedsystem,whichrequiresteamworkbetweencompaniesandindividuals.Second,teamworkprovidesacooperative,friendlyandenjoyableworkenvironment.Third,teamworkalsocanhelpcompaniessavethetimeandmakemoreprofits.Finally,withallpeople’sknowledgecombined,wecansolveproblemsbettermorequickly.

Frommypointofview,teamworkspiritisthemostimportantqualityinmyworkenvironment.Withthehelpoftheteam,myproblemscanbesolvedmoreeasilyandthusmyworkefficiencycanbeimprovedgreatly.Besides,teamworkcanalsochallengemyabilitiesandurgemetoimprovemyselfcontinuously.Therefore,Ithinkthatitisaratherwiserchoicetoworkwithagroupofpeoplethantoworkindependently.

文章内容充实&正确

1experttestimony

2statistics

3example

4personalexperience

5logicandreasoning

6knownfacts

7analogy

例1主题句：

Lackofsleephasbecomeanepidemicinthenation.

1Lackofsleephasbecomeanepidemicinthenation.

Dr.DavidfromHarvardUniversitydeclaredafteranationwidesurvey“Americansgetlesssleepthantheyusedto.”

2Lackofsleephasbecomeanepidemicinthenation.

Whenincollege,Iusedtosleepaboutninehourseveryday,butnowIcansleepforsixhoursifIwanttofinishmyjobontime,Iusuallyfeeltiredatwork.

3Lackofsleephasbecomeanepidemicinthenation.

It’swellknownthatpeoplearoundusconsidersleeptheleastimportantitemontheirlistiftheyfacedwithheavypressurefromwork,familyorfriends.

4Lackofsleephasbecomeanepidemicinthenation.

Fromthepollof18thand19th,sleepscientistshaveconcludedthattheaveragepersonusedtosleepabout9.5hoursatnight,By1950sand1960s,sleepschedulehadbeenreduceddramatically,tobetween7.5and8hours,andmostpeoplehadtowaketoanalarmclock.

5Lackofsleephasbecomeanepidemicinthenation.

Thepresident,forexample,usedtoadmitthathefoundhisjobhardtodealwith,becauseamongotherthings,hecouldonlysleepforfourtofivehoursaday.Besides,manyemployerscomplainthattheirstaffcan’tworkefficientlyintheafternoon,fortheycan’tgetenoughtimeforsleepthedaybefore.Andthepolicealsoreportsmoretrafficaccidentsbecausemanydriversconcentrateontheproblemoflackfsleep.

6Lackofsleephasbecomeanepidemicinthenation

Wemayhavefoundthatinspringwhentreesandbushescomeinfullblossom,beesusuallyspendlesstimeintheirhive.Becausetheyhavemorehoney-makingjobstodo.Similarly,whenpeoplehavemoreworktodo,theytendtosleepless,andthishascometrueforus.

7lackofsleephasbecomeanepidemicinthenation.

Nowadays,thestepoflifehasbecomeincreasinglyfast,andpeopleareexpectedtoshouldermoreresponsibilitiesatwork.Besides,associalinteractionsbecomemoreconvenientandbroader,peoplehavetospendmoretimekeepingfriendsandotheracquaintsinfrequentcontact.Astheycan’tfindmoretimeinoneday,alltheycandoistoborrowthesleepingtime.

例2：

主题句：

Educationisalsoveryimportantforelderlypeople.

1Educationisalsoveryimportantforelderlypeople.

Prof.WangfromBeijinguniversityreportedinhisstudythatmanyelderlypeopleattendvarioustrainingsaftertheirretirement,andthisisnotonlyhelpsthemimprovetheirskillsinthesefields,butalsoprovidesthemwithanopportunitytocommunicatewithotherelderlypeople,makingtheirfreetimemoreinteresting.

2Educationisalsoveryimportantforelderlypeople.

Arecentstudybythemunicipalgovernmentrevealsthatmorethan88percentoftheretiredpeopleattenddifferentkindsoftrainingprogramsprovidedbytheelderlyuniversity.Thisstudyalsoshowsthat92.5percentoftheseelderlyuniversitystudentsagreethatthesetrainingclassesnotonlyteachthemusefulskills,butalsohelpthemtokilltheirfreetimemoreeasily.

3Educationisalsoveryimportantforelderlypeople.

Accordingtoourschoolnewspaper,mostoldpeopleintheresidentialareanearouruniversityattendmanykindsoftrainingclassessuchaspaintingandsinging.Thishelpsthemtospendaricherandmoremeaningfullife.Mr.Maevencommentsthathisretiredlifeisbetterthanhisworkinglifebefore.

4Educationisalsoveryimportantforelderlypeople.

Bothmygrandparentsareactiveparticipantsintheelderlyuniversityinmyhometown.MygrandpalearnshowtopaintChinesepainting,andmygrandmalearnshowtocook.Thestudykeepsthembusyandhappy,andtheyusedtotellmethatthisstudyexperienceisveryimportantforthem.

5Educationisalsoveryimportantforelderlypeople.

Usuallyoldpeoplehavemoretimetodealwithbecausetheyhavetoquitworking.Attendingdifferentkindsoftrainingscanfirstofallengagetheirtimesothattheywillnotfeelbored.Besides,thesetrainingscanalsohelpoldpeoplelearnsomeusefulknowledgewhichcanhelpmaketheirmorecolorful.Therefore,itisquiteimportantforoldpeopletoseekacertainkindofeducation.

6Educationisalsoveryimportantforelderlypeople.

Weallknowthatthereisasayingthat“liveandlearn”.Thismeansthatweshouldkeeplearningnomatterhowoldweare.Thiskindoflearningcanhelptheoldtokeepinpacewiththesociety,andtoacquiresomeusefulknowledgetomaketheirretiedlifemoreinteresting.

7Educationisalsoveryimportantforelderlypeople.

Whenahouseisjustfinished,itdoesnotneedmuchmaintenance,butwhenitbecomesold,youhavetodomuchrepairingworkifyoustillwantittobefunctional.Whenamachineisfirstmade,itdoesnotrequiremuchcaretorunsmoothly,butwhenitturnsold,youhavetooilitmoreoftenandreplacebrokenpartsmoreofteninordertokeepitrunning.Similarly,whenpeoplebecomeold,wealsohavetosupplynewinformationandideastotheirmindifwewanttokeepthemmentallyfunctional.Obviously,educationisthesolution.

语言提升练习

1Thiscausesthewhitepollutiontoourenvironment.Plasticbagscannotdisappearbynaturaldecomposition.Soitisveryharmful.

2Thegradingsystematourcollegeshouldbeabolished.Thestudentsdon’tliketotrytogetgrades.Theinstructorsdon’tenjoygivinggrades.

3AgoodcaseinpointisChanghongTV,whichwascausedbyfrequentpromotionstoloseitspositionaspremiumTVandwhich,injustafewyears,wentfromRMB48innetprofitstoRMB50inlosses.

4SomeeconomistsareinfavoroftheHolidayEconomy,which,theybelieve,hasmanyadvantaged,thefirstoneofwhichistourism-basedHolidayEconomywillraiseconsumptionandthereforehelptospurthedomesticdemand.

5Thereisanincreasinglyloudvoicefromthepublicwhichcallforfirmactionagainstpollution.

6Inreality,mostpeopledeembuyinglotteryticketsasaninterestingwaybywhichtheymakedonationtopublicwelfare.

7Whenateacherpassesknowledgetothestudents,heisalsolearning.

8Withourmarketexplodeswithpossibilities,foreignfirmsstruggletofindqualifiedlocalmanagers.

9Therearisestheproblem:

Whatshouldwedotogetridofthewrongattitudestowardsthemigrantworkers?

10Thebeautyindustryisfashionablebecauseofthefollowingreasons.

11Nowadaysthenumberofcollegegraduateswhocannotfindjobsisbecomingmoreandmore.

12Nowadaysthetrafficinbigcitiesisgettingmorecrowdedthantenyearsago.

13Peopleshouldequipcarswithspecialdevicestoreduceautoemission.

14Weshouldmakegreateffortstoimprove