四级冲刺写作学生.docx

1、四级冲刺写作学生0602考神团队四级冲刺抢分班 写作，翻译讲义老师王菲四级写作评分标准 大学英语四级考试写作部分要求考生达到教育部高等教育司最新教学大纲中的一般要求，即“能完成一般性写作任务；能描述个人经历、观感、情感和发生的事件等；能写常见的应用文；能就一般性话题或提纲在半小时内写出120个词的短文，内容基本完整，用词恰当，语意连贯。能掌握基本的写作技能。” 考试时间为30分钟，所占分值为15%。 作文评分原则1. 检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级写作要求2. 作文采用总体评分法。阅卷人就总体印象给出奖励分，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。3. 从内容和形式两个方面对作文进行综合评判

2、。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应该表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而合适地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。 作文评分标准1. 本题满分为15分。2. 阅卷标准共分五等：2分， 5分， 8分， 11分及14分。评分标准0分-白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想。2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错

3、误。分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本无语言错误，仅有个别小错。范文对比阅读 The importance of team work9 分作文People accept widely that to work oneself is good because it can prove ones ability. However, teamwork is very important in modern society. Teamwork has become a slogan of many companies and they requ

4、ire workers to have teamwork spirit.We can prove the thing that teamwork is very important by many facts that is as following. First, companies and individuals are required to have teamwork by complicated modern society. Second, teamwork makes work environment become good, which makes people coopera

5、te and enjoy the work. Third, teamwork also can make companies save the time and make more money. Finally, teamwork can make all peoples knowledge unite together, so we can solve problems better and more quickly.As far as I am concerned, I think the most important quality in my work environment is t

6、eamwork spirit. If there is the help that is given by the team, I can solve my questions more easily, and I can increase my work effectiveness. Teamwork can also threaten my abilities and make me study more knowledge. Therefore, from the abovementioned, I think that to choose to work with a group of

7、 people is very wise.The importance of team work14 分作文It is widely accepted that to work independently has the obvious advantages in that it can prove ones ability. However, teamwork is more important in modern society. It has become slogan and a required quality in more and more companies.The impor

8、tance of teamwork can be proved by the following facts. First, modern society is complicated system, which requires teamwork between companies and individuals. Second, teamwork provides a cooperative, friendly and enjoyable work environment. Third, teamwork also can help companies save the time and

9、make more profits. Finally, with all peoples knowledge combined, we can solve problems better more quickly.From my point of view, teamwork spirit is the most important quality in my work environment. With the help of the team, my problems can be solved more easily and thus my work efficiency can be

10、improved greatly. Besides, teamwork can also challenge my abilities and urge me to improve myself continuously. Therefore, I think that it is a rather wiser choice to work with a group of people than to work independently. 文章内容充实&正确1 expert testimony 2 statistics 3 example4 personal experience5 logi

11、c and reasoning6 known facts 7 analogy 例1主题句：Lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nation .1 Lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nation.Dr. David from Harvard University declared after a nationwide survey “Americans get less sleep than they used to.”2 Lack of sleep has become an epidem

12、ic in the nation.When in college, I used to sleep about nine hours every day, but now I can sleep for six hours if I want to finish my job on time, I usually feel tired at work.3 Lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nation.Its well known that people around us consider sleep the least importan

13、t item on their list if they faced with heavy pressure from work, family or friends.4 Lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nation.From the poll of 18th and 19th ,sleep scientists have concluded that the average person used to sleep about 9.5 hours at night, By 1950s and 1960s , sleep schedule

14、 had been reduced dramatically, to between 7.5 and 8 hours ,and most people had to wake to an alarm clock.5 Lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nation.The president, for example, used to admit that he found his job hard to deal with, because among other things, he could only sleep for four t

15、o five hours a day. Besides, many employers complain that their staff cant work efficiently in the afternoon, for they cant get enough time for sleep the day before. And the police also reports more traffic accidents because many drivers concentrate on the problem of lack f sleep. 6 Lack of sleep ha

16、s become an epidemic in the nationWe may have found that in spring when trees and bushes come in full blossom, bees usually spend less time in their hive. Because they have more honey-making jobs to do. Similarly, when people have more work to do, they tend to sleep less, and this has come true for

17、us.7 lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nation.Nowadays, the step of life has become increasingly fast, and people are expected to shoulder more responsibilities at work. Besides, as social interactions become more convenient and broader, people have to spend more time keeping friends and o

18、ther acquaints in frequent contact. As they cant find more time in one day, all they can do is to borrow the sleeping time.例2：主题句：Education is also very important for elderly people.1 Education is also very important for elderly people. Prof. Wang from Beijing university reported in his study that m

19、any elderly people attend various trainings after their retirement, and this is not only helps them improve their skills in these fields, but also provides them with an opportunity to communicate with other elderly people, making their free time more interesting. 2 Education is also very important f

20、or elderly people. A recent study by the municipal government reveals that more than 88 percent of the retired people attend different kinds of training programs provided by the elderly university. This study also shows that 92.5 percent of these elderly university students agree that these training

21、 classes not only teach them useful skills, but also help them to kill their free time more easily. 3 Education is also very important for elderly people. According to our school newspaper, most old people in the residential area near our university attend many kinds of training classes such as pain

22、ting and singing. This helps them to spend a richer and more meaningful life. Mr. Ma even comments that his retired life is better than his working life before.4 Education is also very important for elderly people. Both my grandparents are active participants in the elderly university in my hometown

23、. My grandpa learns how to paint Chinese painting, and my grandma learns how to cook. The study keeps them busy and happy, and they used to tell me that this study experience is very important for them.5 Education is also very important for elderly people. Usually old people have more time to deal w

24、ith because they have to quit working. Attending different kinds of trainings can first of all engage their time so that they will not feel bored. Besides, these trainings can also help old people learn some useful knowledge which can help make their more colorful. Therefore, it is quite important f

25、or old people to seek a certain kind of education.6 Education is also very important for elderly people. We all know that there is a saying that “live and learn”. This means that we should keep learning no matter how old we are. This kind of learning can help the old to keep in pace with the society

26、, and to acquire some useful knowledge to make their retied life more interesting.7 Education is also very important for elderly people. When a house is just finished, it does not need much maintenance, but when it becomes old, you have to do much repairing work if you still want it to be functional

27、. When a machine is first made, it does not require much care to run smoothly, but when it turns old, you have to oil it more often and replace broken parts more often in order to keep it running. Similarly, when people become old, we also have to supply new information and ideas to their mind if we

28、 want to keep them mentally functional. Obviously, education is the solution.语言提升练习1 This causes the white pollution to our environment. Plastic bags cannot disappear by natural decomposition. So it is very harmful.2 The grading system at our college should be abolished. The students dont like to tr

29、y to get grades. The instructors dont enjoy giving grades.3 A good case in point is Changhong TV, which was caused by frequent promotions to lose its position as premium TV and which, in just a few years, went from RMB 48 in net profits to RMB 50 in losses.4 Some economists are in favor of the Holid

30、ay Economy, which, they believe , has many advantaged, the first one of which is tourism-based Holiday Economy will raise consumption and therefore help to spur the domestic demand.5 There is an increasingly loud voice from the public which call for firm action against pollution.6 In reality, most p

31、eople deem buying lottery tickets as an interesting way by which they make donation to public welfare.7 When a teacher passes knowledge to the students, he is also learning.8 With our market explodes with possibilities, foreign firms struggle to find qualified local managers.9 There arises the probl

32、em: What should we do to get rid of the wrong attitudes towards the migrant workers?10 The beauty industry is fashionable because of the following reasons.11 Nowadays the number of college graduates who cannot find jobs is becoming more and more.12 Nowadays the traffic in big cities is getting more crowded than ten years ago.13 People should equip cars with special devices to reduce auto emission.14 We should make great efforts to improve