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六级英语写作策略整理

英语写作策略——遣词造句

用英语写出下列句子

（1） 越来越多的学生发现学英语变得越来越重要了。

StudentsingrowingnumbersfindlearningEnglishhasbecomeincreasinglyimportant.

（2） 如今人们消耗的蔬菜越来越多了。

Vegetableconsumptionisontherisenowadays.

（3） 经济的发展需要越来越多的服务人员。

Thereisanincreasingdemandforservicepeoplewiththedevelopmentofeconomy.

（4） 越来越多的证据显示第二种管理风格比第一种更有效。

Theevidenceismountingthatthesecondstyleofmanagementismoreproductivethanthefirstone.

措词攻略

（1）使用书面语词汇

口语词汇

书面语词汇

about

approximately

brave

courageous

buy

purchase

car

automobile

choice

option

enough

sufficient

find

discover

finish

accomplish

first

initial

giveup

surrender

hide

conceal

livelongerthan

survive

lucky

fortunate

make

manufacture

man-made

artificial

outofdate

obsolete

overcome

conquer

putoff

postpone

putupwith

tolerate

takepartin

participatein

unwilling

reluctant

wordy

redundant

（2）善用具体词汇

笼统词

具体词

good

kind、honest、just、generous、affectionate、selfless、friendly

cry

weep、sob、whimper、sniffle、wail、moan、groan

scientist

mathematician、physicist、biologist、chemist、linguist

fruit

apple、banana、peach、watermelon、grape、pear、orange、lemon

foralongtime

forhourslong、forthreeweeks、forfiveyears、fordecades、forcenturies

形体化

A. Theinjuredfootballerlimped（跛行）slowlyoffthefield.

B. Thevictoriousarmymarched（迈进）intotheconqueredcity.

C. Thepedestriansrushed（快步走）hereandthereintherain.

D. Theman,whosewifewasexpectingthefirstbaby,waspacing（踱步）nervouslyupanddownthehospitalcorridor.

E. Themanagerstrode（大步走）intotheofficeandaskedwhowaslateforwork.

F. Wewandered（瞎转）aroundforhourslookingforthehouse.

G. Shejustdrags（步履拖沓）alongafteruswhereverwego.

感官化

A. Raincamedownandbrokethesilence.

B. Afteralonghush,bigraindropscamepitter-patteringdown,shatteringtheeeriesilence.

细节化

speak讲话                                talk交谈

tell讲述                                 explain解释   

mention提及                              narrate讲述

lie撒谎                                  whisper耳语

discuss讨论                              utter出声

persuade劝说                             quote引述

libel诋毁                                murmur低语

comment、observe、remark评价            declare、announce宣称

（3）同义替换

A. Welovedthefoodsomuch,especiallythefishdishes.

B. Ipreferwalkingalone.

C. Ireallyadmirepeoplewhocanworkinsuchdifficultconditions.

D. IwanttotravelbecauseIenjoymeetingpeopleandseeingnewplaces.

E. Sheisfondofplayingthepiano.

F. Babiesareattractedtobrightcolours.

G. Idon’tcareforcoffee.

H. ManysoccerfansarecrazyaboutDavidBeckham.

I. He’sthefirstrealboyfriendshe’shadandshe’smadabouthim.

J. ManyWesternersarekeenonJackieChan’skungfufilms.

K. Hehasbeenaddictedtothedrug.

L. Someadultsarehookedoncomputergamesaswell.

陈词滥调

建议替换词

sometimes

nowandthen、fromtimetotime、onceinawhile、occasionally

show（表明）

indicate、reveal、suggest、illustrate、demonstrate、manifest

person、people

individuals、characters

have（有）

enjoy、possess

think

believe、claim、maintain、argue、insist、harbourtheideathat、holdtheviewthat、itiswidelyacknowledgedthat

thing

affair、issue、matter

should

besupposedto（但表示虚拟语气的should不能替换）

famous

well-known、popular、renowned、legendary、prestigious、high-profile

hardworking

industrious、conscientious

important、necessary

essential、crucial、indispensable、ofvitalimportance、ofgreatmomentum/magnitude/significance

cause

giverise/birthto、leadto、resultin、trigger、contributeto

becauseof

thanksto、dueto、onaccountof、onthegroundsof

many

avarietyof、numerous、awidearrayof

couldn’t、didn’t

failedto

remember

bear/keepinmindthat、learnbyheart

very

exceedingly、extremely

makesb.dosth.

enablesb.todosth.

maybe…、perhaps…

Chancesarethat…

inmyopinion/view

personally、formypart、asfarasIamconcerned、frommyownperspective

inordertodosth.

inaneffort/attempttodosth.、forthepurposeofdoingsth.、withaviewtodoingsth.

payattentionto

place/putapremiumon、setgreatstoreby

drawpublicattention

arousewidepublicconcern

catchupwiththerecentprogress

keeppacewith/keepabreastofthelatestdevelopment

trytodosth.

attempttodosth.、meantodosth.、endeavourtodosth.

beagainststh、disagreewithsth

oppose、objectto、frownonsth

advantagesanddisadvantages、meritsanddemerits、goodpointsandbadpoints

benefitsandrisks、prosandcons、promisesandthreats、strengthsandweaknesses

doharmto、hurt

endanger、jeopardize、compromise

beautiful、interesting

fascinating、enchanting、inviting、captivating

Differentpeoplehavedifferentideas.

Viewson…varyfrompersontoperson；Thereasonsarevaried；Anumberoffactorscouldaccountforthis.

Therearetwocauses.

Peopleholdontothisviewpointpartlybecause…,partlybecause…；Thecausesaretwofold.

（4）注意搭配

搭配松散：

A.  Myteacherhelpedmeverymuch.（alot）

B.  Chineseeconomyhasdevelopedverymuch.（rapidly）

C.  Afriendmustknowyouverymuch.（well）

搭配错误

A.  quickfood

B.  Myfatherisanexcessivesmoker.

C.  Theydidalotofefforttofinishthejobontime.

D.  Iproposedtotakeafinalpartywithotherclassmates.

E. Iaskedhertogooutofthekitchenandwaittheresult.

（1）长短句更替

A. Theanimaltrainerdoveintothepool.Thetrainerwasskilledandathletic.Shewasexcitedwhenshedoveintothepool.Sheswamwithtwodolphins.Thedolphinswerebabies.Thedolphinswereplayful.Thetrainerswamwiththedolphinsforoveranhour.Whenthetrainerswamwiththedolphins,shewashappy.

B. Theskilled,athleticanimaltrainerexcitedlydoveintothepool,whereshehappilyswamforoveranhourwithtwoplayfulbabydolphins.

C. Theanimaltrainerwasskilledandathletic.Sheexcitedlydoveintothepool,wherethereweretwoplayfulbabydolphins.Sheswamwiththemhappilyforoveranhour.

下面是五种将短句变长的方法，请注意划线部分的改动。

1）将简单句合并为并列句和复合句

例1：

Thetyphooncontainedstrongwindandheavyrain.Duringthestorm,theroofofthetownlibrarycollapsed.Theroofofthepostofficedidthesame.Thetorrentialrainfloodedthecountyroads.Schoolscancelledclassesduetotheconditions.

改为：

Thetyphoon,containingstrongwindandheavyrain,causedtheroofsofthetownlibraryandthepostofficetocollapse,createdfloodsoncountyroads,andforcedschoolstocancelclasses.

例2：

Today,greatwealthaboundsinNingbo.Thewealthiscentredintheoilindustry.However,fewmanufacturingjobsarestillavailable.

改为：

AlthoughthereismuchwealthcentredinNingbo’soilindustrytoday,therearefewmanufacturingjobsavailable.

2）改短句为非限定性动词短语，包括不定式、分词和动名词短语

例1：

WhenJerrylefttheroom,hewaswhiningandcrying.HewasconvincedthatIwasacruelman.

改为：

Whiningandcrying,JerrylefttheroomconvincedthatIwasacruelman.

例2：

Inreality,wecanoftenfindthatmanypeoplearecomplainingthattheirdifficultiesaresogreatthattheycannotovercomethesedifficultiesthemselves.

改为：

Inreality,wecanoftenfindmanypeoplecomplainingthattheirdifficultiesaretoogreattoovercome.

例3：

Theproblemwhichwasnotsolvedwillbediscussedatthenextmeeting.

改为：

Theunsolvedproblemwillbediscussedatthenextmeeting.

例4：

IstillrememberthatIwastakentothecountrybymyuncleasachild.

改为：

Istillrememberbeingtakentothecountrybymyuncleasachild.

3）改短句为介词短语

例1：

TherearemanyreasonswhyIopposebilingualeducationattheprimaryschoollevel.

改为：

Foranumberofreasons,Iopposebilingualeducationattheprimaryschoollevel.

例2：

Althoughitwasraininghard,hegotthereintime.

改为：

Hegotthereintimeinspiteofheavyrain.

4）改短句为同位语结构短语

例1：

BeijingisthecapitalofChina.Itisalsothesecondlargestcityinthiscountry.

改为：

ThecapitalofChina,Beijingisthesecondlargestcityinthiscountry.

或者：

Beijing,thecapitalofChina,isthesecondlargestcityinthiscountry.

或者：

Beijing,thesecondlargestcityinChina,isthecapitalofthiscountry.

例2：

NoamChomskyisaworld-renownedlinguist.HeisInstituteProfessorofLinguisticsatMIT.HerecentlypublishedhisfourthbookonAmericanforeignpolicies.Heisseventy-oneyears’oldatthetime.

改为：

NoamChomsky,aworld-renownedlinguistandInstituteProfessorofLinguisticsatMIT,recentlypublishedhisfourthbookonAmericanforeignpoliciesattheageofseventy-oneyears’old.

5）改短句为独立主格结构短语

例1：

Sirenswereblaringandthefireengineswerejustpullingup.

改为：

Sirensblaring,thefireengineswerejustpullingup.

例2：

Itrainedonandon.Streetswerefloodedandbuseswereboggeddown.

改为：

Itrainedonandon,streetsfloodedandbusesboggeddown.

例3：

Hetooksomeorangejuiceoutofthefridgeandwalkedtothekitchenwindow,holdingtheglassinhishand.

改为：

Hetooksomeorangejuiceoutofthefridgeand,glassinhand,walkedtothekitchenwindow.

（2）使用非人称主语组织句子

1）物称主语

A. 她哭了起来。

l  Shebegantocry.

l  Tearscametohereyes.

B. 今天早上醒来时我想到了一个好主意。

l  IthoughtofagreatideawhenIwokeupthismorning.

l  AgreatideadawnedonmewhenIwokeupthismorning.

C. 一见照片，我就想起了童年。

l  WhenIsawthephotos,Icametothinkofmychildhood.

l  Thephotosremindedmeofmychildhood.

D. 我说不出话来。

l  Icouldn’tsayanything.

l  Wordsfailedme.

E. 这个运动首先在上海兴起。

l  ThemovementoriginatedinShanghai.

l  Shanghaifirstsawtheriseofthemovement.

2）it充当形式主语

A. It’srainingcatsanddogs.大雨滂沱。

B. Itneveroccurredtomethatshewouldbesodispleased.我从未想到她会如此不高兴。

C. ItcomesasasurprisetolearnthatmorepeoplearemurderedinNewYorkthaninthewholeoftheUK.得知纽约一地被害人数竟胜于整个英国我很吃惊。

3）there＋系动词结构

A. Thereseemstobenodoubtaboutit.此事似是无疑。

B. Therecomesatimewhendyingseemsbetterth