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专业英语四级写作

专业四级考前恶补--写作

【写作佳句及惯用表达】

Dailylifeneedsadvertisementsbecausethemainfunctionofadvertisingistodisseminateinformationoncommodities,services,culture,employment,studentenrolmentandevenmarriage.

日常生活需要广告，因为广告的主要功能是传播有关商品、服务、文化、就业、招生、甚至婚姻方面的信息。

Advertisementsprovidethemostdirect,comprehensiveanddetailedinformation.Wegettoknowabouthouseholdgoodsfromadvertisements.Advertisingcanbebeneficialtothecustomersifitistruetoitsclaims.

广告提供最直接、全面和详细的信息。

我们从广告上了解家用商品。

广告如果名副其实，对消费者是有益的。

Advertisingcreatesmassmarkets.Withoutadvertisements,manufacturersmayfinditdifficulttoselltheirproducts.

广告可开拓市场。

如果没有广告，生产者就可能难以销售他们的产品。

Withoutadvertisements,newspapers,commercialradiosandtelevisioncompaniescouldnotsurvive.

（如果）没有广告，报社、商业广播电台、电视公司就不能生存。

Advertisementsaremisleadingandcheating.Theyarefilledwithfloweryphrasesandemptypromises.

广告起误导作用，并具有欺骗性。

广告中充满着华丽的词语和空洞的诺言。

Fakeadvertisingcheatsconsumersand,insomeseriouscases,threatensgulliblepeople’slives.

虚假广告欺骗消费者，而且严重地对轻信广告的人们的生命构成威胁。

Advertisersareinconsiderateofthepublic.Whattheycareaboutismakingmoney.

广告商不顾大众利益。

他们所关心的就是赚钱。

Advertisementsarenotbasedonthequalityofthegoods,butontheprinciplethatifonekeepstalkingaboutthesamethinglongenough,eventuallypeoplewillpayattentiontoit.

广告的制作并不是根据产品的质量，而是根据这样的原则：

一个人只要长时间一直谈论同一东西，最终人们就会去注意它。

Advertisingencouragesconsumersto“keepupwiththeJoneses”,namely,itcreatesanacquisitivesocietyandademandformaterialthings.

广告鼓励消费者攀比，换句话说，广告创造出一个贪婪的社会及对物质的需求。

Consumersareencouragedbyadvertisementstobuyinsurance（fear）;buycosmetics（vanity）;andeatmorethannecessary（greed）.

广告鼓励消费者买保险（恐惧）；买化妆品（虚荣）；多吃（贪婪）。

Admonishyourfriendsinprivate,praisetheminpublic.

对朋友私下劝戒，公开表扬。

【写作范文】

Advertisingiscommonthroughouttheworldasawayoflettingthepublicknowaboutaproduct.Somepeoplefeelthatadvertisingisgenerallyhelpful,whileothersfeelitisoftenharmful.Discussyourideaofgoodandbadeffectsofadvertising,anddecidewhetheryouthinkitisgenerallyhelpfulorharmful.Usespecificexamplestosupportyourdiscussion.

Writeacompositionofabout150wordsonthefollowingtopic:

TheGoodandBadEffectsofAdvertising

Youaretowriteinfourparagraphs.

Inthefirstparagraph,stateyourpointofview.\;

Inthesecondparagraph,describetheharmfuleffectsandgivespecificexamples.

Inthethirdparagraph,describethehelpfuleffectsandgivespecificexamples.

Inthelastparagraph,restateyourpointofview.

Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriacy.

Failuretofollowtheinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.

Inmostcountriesintheworld,advertisingiscommon.Youcanseepostersondoors,signsonbuses,picturesinmagazines,andcommercialsonTV.Thoughthesesignsofadvertisingareoftendisliked,Ifeelthat,overall,advertisinghasverypositiveresults.Theharmfuleffectsofadvertisingareobvious.

Whenyouarelisteningtobeautifulmusicontheradio,acommercialisdisturbingwhenitinterruptsyourprogramandchangesyourmood.Televisioncommercialsaretheworstofall.Yourprogramisstopped,andyouareforcedtowatchanadvertisementunlessyouactivelychangethechannelorleavetheroom.Ithinkthatthereshouldbelawstolimittheadvertisers’righttointerruptTVandradioprograms.

Ingeneral,however,Ithinkthatthepositiveresultsofadvertisementsarebeneficialtosocietyandindividuals.WhenIdoshopping,Icanuseadvertisementsinnewspaperstocompareprices,features,andqualityoftheproductIwanttobuy.Bybeingmoreinformed,Icanbuysomethingthatwillbenefitmeinthelongrun.Withadvertisements,peoplesavealotoftimeinshopping,lookingforjobs,etc.

Allinall,forawiseandeducatedshopper,thehelpfuleffectsofadvertisingoutweightheharmfuleffects.

【学习要点】

①commercial商业广告

②benefitmeinthelongrun从长远来说对我有益。

比较intheshortrun:

从短期来说

③allinall总的说来；总之

【要点提示】

Adisseldomwelcome;andthosewhowantitthemostalwayslikeittheleast.

忠言逆耳，就是最需要忠告的人也总是最不喜欢它。

结构分析：

Ⅰ.Introduction

DS:

①②...（过渡句）

TS:

Thoughthesesignsofadvertisingareoftendisliked,Ifeelthat,overall,advertisinghasverypositiveresults.（作者的观点。

Thoughclause使得表达上更严密。

）

Ⅱ.Body

TS1:

Theharmfuleffectsofadvertisingareobvious.（提出广告有害的一面）

DS:

①...②...③...④...（论据—supportingfacts）

TS2:

Ingeneral,however,Ithinkthatthepositiveresultsofadvertisementsarebeneficialtosocietyandindividuals.（广告有益的方面）

DS:

①…② … ③ …（论据—supportingfacts）

Ⅲ.Conclusion

Allinall,forawiseandeducatedshopper,thehelpfuleffectsofadvertisingoutweightheharmfuleffects.（作者的结论。

allinall起总结作用）

【模拟训练1】 ［35MIN.］

SomepeopleenjoyadvertisementsonTV.OtherssaythatadvertisementsonTVareannoying.WhatdoyouthinkarethereasonsforthegrowingnumberofadsonTV?

AndwhatisyourattitudetowardadsonTV?

Usespecificreasonsforyouranswer.

Writeacompositionofabout150wordsonthefollowingtopic:

MyViewonAdvertisementsonTV

Youaretowriteinthreeparagraphs.

Inthefirstparagraph,stateyourpointofview.

Inthesecondparagraph,givespecificexamplesforyourview.

Inthelastparagraph,restateyourpointofview.

Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriacy.

Failuretofollowtheinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.

Youressaymaybebasedontheoutlinebelow:

Ⅰ.Introduction

TS:

Nowadaysadvertisementsareverycommon.

DS:

① … ② … ③ … （supportingfac

ts）

Ⅱ.Body

TS:

Therearetworeasons,Ithink,forthegrowingnumberofadsonTV.

DS:

①First, … Thus, … ，They … Byadvertising,eachproducertries…②Second, … They … ③Consequently…

（specificreasons）

Ⅲ.Conclusion

AsfarasIamconcerned,Iaminfavorof/againstTVadsbecause… But… 

模拟训练参考范文

MyViewonAdvertisementsonTV

Nowadaysadvertisementsareverycommon.WheneveryouturnonTV,youarelikelytoseeads.Theadvertisersaretryingtoinformyouofthemanydifferentsortsofup-to-dateproductsonthemarket.Besides,itoftenoccurswhileyouareabsorbedinwatchingawonderfulfilmonTV;endlesscommercialsinterruptyoufromtimetotime,andmakeyouquiteannoyed.

Therearetworeasons,Ithink,forthegrowingnumberofadsonTV.First,inacompetitiveeconomy,theconsumerusuallyhasthechoiceofseveraldifferentbrandsofthesameproduct.Thus,manufacturersareconfrontedwithaproblem—howtokeeptheirsaleshighenoughtostaycompetentinthebusiness.Theysolvethisproblembyadvertising.Byadvertising,eachproducertriestoconvincetheconsumersthatitsproductispreferable.Second,mostconsumersareinterestedinads.TheywanttogetfromTVadsthefirsthandinformationaboutnewproducts,whichenablesthemtochoosetheonetheylikebest.Consequently,adsincreasealotontheTVscreen.

AsfarasIamconcerned;IaminfavorofTVadsbecausemostofthemareinterestingandinformative.ButthereisnodenyingthatsomeTVadsaretediousandboring.SoIfeelTVstationsarefacedwithanarduoustasktostrengthenthecontrolofads,toimprovetheirqualityandtomakethemattractive.

Test2 Bicycle·自行车

Aftertheworkisdone,reposeissweet.

  工作到完毕，休息感甜蜜。

【写作佳句及惯用表达】

1.AbicycleisreallyanimportantmeansoftransportationinChina.

在中国，自行车是一种重要的运输工具。

2.Chinaiscalledthekingdomofbicycles.

中国被称为自行车王国。

3.Bicyclesdonotcauseairorsoundpollution.

自行车不造成空气或声音污染。

4.Comparedwithcars,bicyclescausenoenvironmentalproblems.

与汽车相比，自行车不造成环境问题。

5.Bicyclessaveenergyandparkingplaces.

自行车节省能源和停车场所。

6.Ridingbikestotravelandappreciatethenaturalsceneryisreallyawonderfulexperience.

骑自行车旅行、欣赏自然风景的确是很美妙的活动。

7.Thebicycleallowsustogoanywherenearbyeasily.

骑自行车可使我们很容易地到达附近的任何地方。

8.Bikesarenotveryexpensiveonaverage,andalmosteveryfamilycanaffordthem.

自行车一般不贵，几乎家家都能买得起。

9.Duringtherushhours,youcanoftenseeaboilingseaofbicyclesrunninginalldirections.

在高峰期间，你可经常看见沸腾的自行车海洋涌向四面八方。

10.Ridingbikesregularlydoesgoodtoyourhealth.

经常骑自行车有益于健康。

【写作范文】

Inventionssuchastheelectriclampandthetelevisionhavehadanimportanteffectonourlives.Chooseanotherinventionthatyouthinkisimportant.Givespecificreasonsforyourchoice.

Writeacompositionofabout150wordsonthefollowingtopic:

Bicycle

BicycleshavebecomemoreandmorepopularinChina.Peopleridebikestotheirworkplaces,toshoppingareas,toschools,andsoon.Duringtherushhours,youcanoftenseeaboilingseaofbicyclesrunninginalldirections.Withthelargestnumberofbikeridersintheworld,Chinaisoftenreferredtoasthekingdomofbicycles.

Allarenotfriendsthatspeakusfair.

说我们好话的未必全是朋友。

Comparedwithcars,bikeshavemanyadvantages.First,theyarenotveryexpensive,andalmosteveryfamilycanaffordthem.Second,theyareveryhandyandconvenientthoughtheyarenotasfastascars.Withabike,youcangoanywhereyoulike,andyoudon’thavetolookforalargeparkingplace.Byridingbikes,youcanavoidtrafficjamsandthussavethetimeandthemoneyfortakingtaxis.Third,theydonotcauseairorsoundpollution.

Ridingbikesdoesgoodtoyourhealthifyourideitregularly.Inmoderntimes,peopleareusuallytoobusytospareanytimeforphysicalexercise.Ridingabiketoyourworkplaceregularlyservesasagoodwaytokeepyourselfstrongandhealthy.

Therefore,abicycleisreallyanimportantmeansoft