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论说文对比选择型杨扬
论说文–对比选择型
1.什么是对比选择型
现象解释型议论文即要求学生比较两种观点或做法,或是阐述某事物的利弊或优缺点,进而表明自己对问题或事物的态度或观点,也就是做出选择。
这种类型的作文提纲一般为:
第一段:
对要评论的事物或现象进行整体介绍
第二段:
陈述两种不同观点或做法及理由,或者阐述某一事物的利弊或优缺点,采用类比、举例等方法层层分析
第三段:
表明自己的观点,做出公正客观的判断
从历年真题作文的命题来看,对比选择型论说文也占有很大的比重,从01年到11年的25套真题作文中,现象解释型的题目出现了4次,所占比例为16%。
以下表格里列举了属于现象解释型议论文的真题题目:
年份
题目
提纲
2011年6月
OnlineShopping
1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚
2.网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题
3.我的建议
2008年6月
RecreationalActivities
1.娱乐活动多种多样
2.娱乐活动可能使人们受益,也可能有危害性
3.作为大学生,我的看法。
2006年12月
SpringFestivalGala
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
2006年1月
ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists?
1. 名校校园成为旅游新热点
2. 校园是否应该对外开放,不同人看法不同
3. 我认为…
2.模板学习
模板一:
阐述两种观点或做法
Currently,thereisnoconsensusofopinionsamongpeopleastotheviewof___________.Somepeoplesuggestthat_______________whilesomeothersarguethat____________.
Peoplewhoareinfavoroftheideaof______believethat________________(reason1).Theyalsoarguethat_____________.(reason2)
However,otherpeoplestandonadifferentground.Theyconsider____________(reason1).What’smore,theyfirmlypointedoutthat_________________.(reason2)
There’ssometruthinbothargument.ButasfarasIamconcerned,Iamonthesideofthelatterargument.Afterall____________________.
模板二:
说明利弊或优缺点
Nowadays,peoplebenefitalotfrom__________.Likeeverythingelse,___________hasbothfavorableandunfavorableaspects.Generally,theadvantagescanbelistedasfollows.Tobeginwith,______________.Besides,_____________.Mostimportantofall,____________.
Buteverycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.First,_____________.Tomakematterworse,_____________.Worstofall,________________.
Astome,theadvantagesof_________faroutweighthedisadvantages.Therefore,wehaveeveryreasontobelievethat_____________willembraceitsbrightfutureduringthenextdecade.
3.真题演练
1)(2011年6月)Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofOnlineShopping.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:
1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚
2.网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题
3.我的建议
审题谋篇
从提纲中不难看出,本次作文属对比分析型中的对比利弊的议论文。
第一段:
阐述说明现象;第二段:
阐述分析网上购物的利于弊;第三段:
阐述个人观点。
Onlineshopping
Nowadays,withtheInternetbecominganincreasinglycloserfriendtoourdailylife,peoplebenefitalotfromonlineshopping.Likeeverythingelse,ithasbothfavorableandunfavorableaspects.Generally,theadvantagescanbelistedasfollows.Tobeginwith,onlineshopping,toalargeextent,helpsustosaveourvaluabletime,whichcanbeinvestedintoourwork,leisure,andstudy.Moreover,whenshoppingonthee-mall,weareexposedtomoreoptionsatthesametime.Thisadvantageenablesustoselectourdesiredproductinabetterpriceandquality.
However,everycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Ontheonehand,sinceitisimpossibleforustoseeandcheckthegoodsonline,someimmoralsellersmaysendusunsoundandfakeones,resultinginbiggerlossofourmoneyandmood.Ontheother,whenwefillinourpersonalinformationandthecreditcardnumberonline,theseprivaciesareatriskofbeingleakedandresoldtomorepeople,whichwouldbringaboutsomeundesiredandunexpectedconsequences.
Toconclude,everynew-bornphenomenoncanbeadouble-bladedsword.Butastome,theadvantagesofonlineshoppingfaroutweighthedisadvantages.Therefore,wehaveeveryreasontobelievethatonlineshoppingwillembraceitsbrightfutureduringthenextdecade.
2)(2008年6月)Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofRecreationalActivities.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:
1.娱乐活动多种多样
2.娱乐活动可能使人们受益,也可能有危害性
3.作为大学生,我的看法。
审题谋篇
从三段式提纲不难判断本次作文属于对比选择型议论文。
第一段:
阐述现象;第二段:
娱乐活动的利弊;第三段:
提出个人观点。
RecreationalActivities
Intheeraofinformationandtechnology,abundantrecreationalactivitiesareavailableforpeopletoreleasetheirstrainandstress.
Thereisaheateddebateoverwhethertheyaregoodforthepublicornot,especiallyforthecollegestudents.Itiscommonlyacceptedthatrecreationishelpful.Foronething,itcankeepushealthyphysicallyandmentally.Foranother,itgoeswithoutsayingthatvariousactivitiesbroughtbymoderntechnologyhavegreatlyenrichedourexperiencesandbroughtmuchexcitementtous.
Incontrast,othersclaimthattheseactivitiesbringmanyproblems.Theypointoutthatifpeoplespendtoomuchtimeonrecreationalactivitiessuchassportsandcomputergames,theymightfailtoconcentrateontheirstudyingandworking,whichinturnmayleadtofurtherconsequences.
Asforme,Iholdthebeliefthatrecreationalactivitiesdomoregoodthanharm.Theydogiveusagoodchancetorelax,andthereby,makeusstudyandworkmoreefficiently.ItisadvisabletoarrangethetimereasonablyandI’msurewewillbenefitmorefromrecreationalactivities.
3)(2006年12月)Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutetowriteashortessayonthetopicofSpringfestivalgala.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
审题谋篇
从三段式提纲不难判断本次作文属于对立观点型议论文。
第一段:
阐述支持方的观点;第二段:
阐述反对方的观点;第三段:
提出个人观点。
SpringFestivalGala
Currently,thereisnoconsensusofopinionsamongpeopleastotheviewofwhetherSpringFestivalGalashouldbecancelledornot.Somepeopleassertthecontinuanceofitwhilesomeothersarguethatitistimetocancelit.
PeoplewhoareinfavorofthefirstideabelievethattheSpringFestivalGalahasbeenconsideredindispensableasaformofcelebrationofChineseLunarNewYear.Peopleareaccustomedtoenjoyingthegrandsightandsounditpresentsasabrilliantfeast.
However,otherpeoplestandonadifferentground.Theyarguethatitisquiteconsumptivetospendsuchamountoftimeandmoneyonit.Besides,theprogramsatSpringFestivalGalahaveremainednearlythesameformsincetheywereborn.
There’ssometruthinbothargument.ButasfarasIamconcerned,Iamonthesideoftheformerargument.Afterall,SpringFestivalGalaservesasanentertainmentthatpeopleofallagescanenjoy.What’smore,itisalsoanoccasionforthefamiliestogather,chatandlaugh.Inaword,theSpringFestivalGalaisatraditionandtreasureoftheChinesepeople,andwestillneedit,maybeabetterone.
4)(2006年1月)Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofShouldtheuniversitycampusbeopentotourists?
Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:
1. 名校校园成为旅游新热点
2. 校园是否应该对外开放,不同人看法不同
3. 我认为…
审题谋篇
从三段式提纲不难判断本次作文属于对比选择型议论文。
第一段:
阐述支持方的观点;第二段:
阐述反对方的观点;第三段:
提出个人观点。
ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists?
1Inrecentyears,touristshavefrequentlybeenseenwalkingaroundandtakingphotosoncampuses,especiallyinsomefamousuniversities,suchasPekingUniverisityandTshinghuaUniversity.
Whentalkingaboutwhethertheuniversitiesshouldbeopentotouristsornot,differentpeoplewillofferdifferentopinions.Somepeopletakeitforgrantedthattouristsshouldhaveanaccesstothecampus.Accordingtothem,itwillcreateacloserrelationshipbetweentheuniversityandthepublic.However,othersholdthatthephenomenonshouldnotbepermitted.Intheiropinion,crowdsoftouristswillinevitablydisturbthelearningatmosphereoncampus.Besides,sometouriststramplegrasstotakephotos,andsculptontreestoleavewords.
Frommyperspective,thephenomenonshouldbepermittedbutpracticedwithextremecare.Ontheonehand,byvisitingtheuniversities,itwillbeagoodchancetosatisfypeople’scuriosityaboutthefamousuniversities.Ontheotherhand,itwillresultinasignificantincreaseinthepopularityoftheuniversityitself.Takingtheabove-mentionedfactorsintoconsideration,Imayreasonablyconcludethatitistimewegotridoftheideaofreservingcampusonlyforeducation.
2Nowadays,manyfamousuniversitycampuseshavebecomeoneofthepopulartouristattractions.IthasbeenshownonTVandontheradiothateveryyearthousandsandthousandsofmiddleschoolstudentsvisitTsingHuaUniversityandPekingUniversityandotherfamousuniversitiesinChina.Intheplacefarawayfromthecapitalcity,thelocalstudentsalsovisittheuniversitiesfamousintheirownprovince.Sofarasthepresentsituationisconcerned,isitagoodorbadthingtoopentheuniversitycampusfortourists?
Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.
Ononehand,somepeoplearguethatitisagoodthingforthestudentstovisitthefamousuniversitycampusinthatitcanenablethemiddlestudentstogetmoreinformationabouttheuniversityandtheycanhaveenoughtimeandopportunitytopreparethemselveswiththechancetogetintotheuniversity.Ontheotherhand,somepeopleholdanegativeviewaboutthisphenomenon.Intheiropinion,thepublictourismwillhavenegativeeffectontheuniversitiesbecauseitwillnotonlydoharmtotheenvironmentbutalsototheintellectualatmosphere.
Inmyopinion,thetourismtotheuniversitiesisnotagoodthing.Thecampusismainlyaplaceforstudy.Withtheincreasingtourismonthecampus,itwillruinthespiritualatmosphereinthislearningfield.
4.模拟演练
1)Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofOnOverseasStudy.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:
1)出国留学的现象越来越多
2)人们对此看法不同
3)我的看法
OnOverseasStudy
Thereisnoconsensusofopinionsamongpeopleastowhetherstudentsshouldstudyabroadornot.Somepeopleareoftheviewthattheyouthshouldgooverseasfo