公开课如何写建议信.ppt

公开课如何写建议信.ppt

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36.B37.F38.D39.G40.E61.that62.a63.and64.sounds65.going66.celebration67.over68.yourself69.sent70.beautifullyOnceuponatimetherewasaboywhofondofreading.However,hewasverypoortobuyanybooks.Thatwasthereasonthathehadtoborrowbooksfromarichmanwhoownedalotofbooks.Theboyknewclearlythathehastofinishreadingthebookshehadborrowedthemandreturnthemtotheownerassoonaspossible.Arichman,whowasreadytolendanyofhisbooktotheboy,readfewofhisownbooks.Withtimegoingon,theboyreadalotsbutfinallybecameafamouswriterinhistime.Thoughtherichmanhadsomanybooks,heremainedamanwithlittleknowledgebecauseofheseldomreadhisbooks.Recently,ourclasshavehadaheateddiscussionaboutwhethertheBeijingZooshouldbemovedoutofthecity.Someofmyclassmatesareinfavorofthemove.Theysaylargecrowdsoftouriststothezoowillresultintrafficjams.Theyalsosaythatoncemoved,animalswillhavemorespaceandbetterlivingconditionsinthesuburbs.However,otherstudentsareagainsttheidea,sayingthattheBeijingZoo,builtin1906,hasahistoryof100years,andiswellknownathomeandabroad.Soitshouldremainwhereitis.Whatsmore,ifwemovethezoo,someanimalsmaydie.Tomoveornot,thisisabigdecisionwhichhastobemadebypeopleinBeijing.Yourstruly,LiHuawritingDearMr.Wang,Knowingthatourlibraryisgoingtobuybooks,Idliketogivesomeadvice.Whatweneedmostarepopularsciencebooks.Theyhelpusunderstandsciencesubjectsbetterandarouseourcuriosityaboutscientificdiscoveries.Inadditiontoreadingforknowledge,wereadforfunandinspiration.ThatiswhyIrecommendanothercategoryofbooks:

literarybooks.Theynotonlyofferusjoyandexcitement,butalsoencourageustothinkcritically.Illbegladifyoucanconsidermyrecommendation.Yourssincerely,LiYue建议信EndingexpressyourhopeBeginningstateyourpurposeBodygiveadvice&reasons1.Imgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon2.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning3.Knowingthat,Idliketogivesomesuggestions.A.stateyourpurposeA.stateyourpurposesentencepatternsB.giveyouradviceB.giveyouradvice1.Itshelpful/importantto2.Itwouldbeagoodideato3.IwouldliketosuggestthatC.expressyourhopeC.expressyourhope1.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyadviceintoconsideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.3.Imsureifyoutakemyadvice,youwill表达愿望：

表达愿望：

55、我相信如果你接受我的建议，你会变、我相信如果你接受我的建议，你会变得更加苗条和保持健康。

得更加苗条和保持健康。

Theuseofsentencepatterns表明意图：

表明意图：

1.1.你给你给Jane回回信就如何减肥提建议。

信就如何减肥提建议。

提出建议：

提出建议：

22、健康饮食、健康饮食33、多锻炼、多锻炼44、喝足够多的水、喝足够多的水Knowingthatyouhavetroubleinlosingweight,Idliketogivesomesuggestions.Itisimportanttohaveahealthydiet.Itishelpfultodomoreexercise.Itwouldbeagoodideatodrinkenoughwater.Iamsureifyoutakemyadvice,youwillbecomeslimmerandstayhealthy.假设你叫李华，你的好朋友假设你叫李华，你的好朋友JaneJane最近发现自己最近发现自己在发胖，很苦恼。

她写信请你给她就如何减肥提建议。

在发胖，很苦恼。

她写信请你给她就如何减肥提建议。

请你根据下面的内容给简写一封信，词数请你根据下面的内容给简写一封信，词数100100左右。

左右。

11、健康饮食、健康饮食22、多锻炼、多锻炼33、喝足够多的水、喝足够多的水Itishelpfultodomoreexercise.Itwouldbeagoodideatodrinkenoughwater.Itisimportanttohaveahealthydiet.DearJane,Knowingthatyouhavetroubleinlosingweight,Idliketogivesomesuggestions.First,itisimportanttohaveahealthydiet.Inaddition,itwouldbeagoodideatodrinkenoughwater.Besides,itishelpfultodomoreexercise.Iamsureifyoutakemyadvice,youwillbecomeslimmerandstayhealthy.Inordertoloseweight,youcaneatmorevegetablesandfruits.Themoreexerciseyoutake,themorefatyouwillburnoff,andyouwillbethinner.Becausewatercansupportourbodyandactivities,andhelpusloseweight.DearJane,Knowingthatyouhavetroubleinlosingweight,Idliketogivesomesuggestions.First,itisimportanttohaveahealthydiet.Inordertoloseweight,youcaneatmorevegetablesandfruits.Besides,italsohelpsifyoutakemoreexercise.Themoreexerciseyoutake,themorefatyouwillburnoff,andyouwillbethinner.Inaddition,itshouldbeagoodideatodrinkenoughwater,becausewatercansupportourbodyandactivities,andhelpusloseweight.Imsureifyoutakemyadvice,youwillbecomeslimmerandstayhealthy.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。

请你根据下列要点写回信。

1.参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。

引出话题，表明写作意图1.参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。

提出建议：

总结，表达愿望连接词（多个建议+多个理由）评分标准11、是否覆盖所有内容要点、是否覆盖所有内容要点22、是否恰当使用语法结构、是否恰当使用语法结构33、是否运用多样句式和丰富的词汇、是否运用多样句式和丰富的词汇44、是否使用连接词、是否使用连接词55、全文结构是否完整合理、全文结构是否完整合理DearPeter,ImgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyoullbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,