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浙江省版高考英语总复习专题十七概要写作教师用书
专题十七 概要写作
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【考情探究】
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考情分析
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概要写作
1.对原文主旨及要点的理解和呈现情况;2.概括要点时语法结构和词汇应用的准确性;3.概要文章上下文的连贯性;4.对各要点表达的独立性情况
提供一篇350词以内的短文,要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要
在申请大学之前,最好亲自去目标学校看一下。
如果时间和金钱不允许,就在网上获取信息
分析解读 概要写作是综合性的写作考查。
要求考生首先对原文有准确的理解、对原文的结构和要点有准确的把握,然后再用高级的语法结构及合适的连接词写出包含所有要点的短文。
所以,考生要想做好本题,就必须注意以下几点:
(1)准确理解文章。
(2)把握文章的各个要点。
(3)使用准确的语法结构、丰富的词汇和合适的连接词。
(4)使用自己的语言表述,不要照抄原文中的句子。
【真题典例】
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
It’sareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapplybecausetheirwebsitescanallstarttolookandsoundthesame.Nothingwillgiveyouthesenseofwhatitwillactuallybeliketoliveonacollegecampus(校园)likevisitingandseeingforyourselfthedorms,classroomsandathleticequipmentand,ofcourse,thestudents.Itseemsalittlecrazyoncesenioryearhitstofindthetimetovisitcollegecampuses,anditcanalsobepriceyiftheschoolsyouareapplyingtohappentobemorethanacarrideaway.Butkeepinmindthatyouaremakingadecisionaboutthenextfouryearsofyourlife,anddoalltheresearchyoucantomakesureyouaremakingtherightone.
There’snoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.Infact,alotofcollegeapplicationsevenaskifyouhavevisitedcampus,andobviously,ifyouliveacrossthecountrythatwon’tbeasmuchofapossibility,butifyoulivenearby,gocheckitout!
Ifcampusvisitsaren’tgoingtohappenbeforeyouapply,attheveryleastyoushouldfindsometimebetweenapplyingandgettingyouracceptanceletterstovisittheschoolsyou’dliketoattend.Itcansaveyoualotofheartacheifyouruleoutnowthethingsthatyoudon’tlikeaboutcertaincampuses,thingsthatyouwouldn’tknowunlessyouactuallyvisit.
Now,iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible,thencheckouttheonlinecollegefairsatCollegeWeekLive.It’sachancetochatonlinewithadmissionsofficers,students,andcollegecounselors(顾问),anditwon’tcostyouapenny!
Youcanregisterforitsonlinecollegefairat.Whilevisitinganonlinecollegefaircan’ttaketheplaceofanactualcampusvisit,itcanbeaveryusefultoolthatalongwithallyourotherresearchwillhelpyoumakeaninformeddecisionaboutwhichcollegesoruniversitiesyou’dliketoattend.
概要写作的文章一般都是说明文或议论文。
文章结构比较清楚,段落之间的逻辑关系也很紧密。
文章第一段开门见山,提出观点:
在你申请大学之前,要去亲自看看目标大学。
第二段特别指出一定要去看看附近的大学。
第三段的内容是,如果你在申请之前没有去过;在申请之后,或得到offer之前,一定要去看看,免得将来后悔。
第四段的主要内容是如果无法亲自去参观的话,可以登录网站了解相关的信息。
并提供了网站的信息。
参考范文
范文鉴赏
Itisawisechoiceforyoutopayapersonalvisittothecollegeyouareapplyingto,especiallytheonesthatareclosetoyou.(要点1)Inordertoavoidbeingregretful,youshouldatleastvisitthecollegeyoudecidedtoattend.(要点2)Ifalltheaboveisnotaffordable,itwillbehelpfultosearchtheonlinecollegefairsatCollegeWeekLivewhereyoucangetthenecessaryinformation(要点3).
1.范文准确地把握了各个段落的要点。
2.各个要点之间的连接和逻辑都很顺畅,相互关系密切。
3.句子之间用了比较好的连接方式。
如第一句的especially;第二句的Inorderto,第三句的If。
4.文章使用了比较高级的词汇和结构。
如,Itisawisechoice;youareapplyingto;thatareclosetoyou;avoidbeingregretful;notaffordable;whereyoucangetthenecessaryinformation。
【三年模拟】
模拟题组
Writing1(2019浙江五校)
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Thesedaysoursocietydevelopsrapidlyandforcespeopletorush.Itappearsthatpeoplehavegotusedtobeinginahurry.However,it’sbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone.
Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofdoingwronginarush.Whenpeopledotheirjobsortakeactioninahurry,theycan’tmakeasounddecisionandprobablyregretlater.Asthesayinggoes,“Hastemakeswaste.”Weshouldthinkcarefullybeforemakingadecisionanddoourworklessquickly.Weshouldnotmakemistakesbydoingworkhurriedly.
Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter.Forexample,takingatraintosomeplacecertainlywilltakemoretimethantakingaplane.However,takingatrainmakespeoplehaveenoughtimetogettoknowalotofnewfriends.Besides,itallowspeopletofullyenjoythebeautifulsceneryalongtheway.Onthecontrary,beinginahurrywillmakeuslosechancesofenjoyingourlives.
Finally,slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthconditionsforus.Asisknowntoall,takingactioninahurrybotherspeopleandraisestheirstress.Peoplethinkiftheyarenotinahurry,theywillbecomealoserandthatannoysthem.Butbeinginahurrycanhurtpeoplebothphysicallyandmentally.Accordingtosomestudies,peoplewhohaveaslowerpacesufferfewerdiseases,tendtobehappierandlivemuchlongerthanthosewhoselifeistense,eveniftheformerfinishjobsmoreslowlythanthelatter.
Inshort,workingquicklywillbringaboutmorematerialbenefitstomakeoursocietymoreadvanced.Yet,muchstresscan’tbringenjoyment,friendsandhealth,whicharemuchmoreimportantthanmoneyandothermaterialadvantages.Therefore,takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeataslowerpace.
答案
【写作提示】
本文是一篇议论文。
文章论述了降低生活节奏的各种好处。
文章结构清楚,观点明确。
同时在第一段提出了主旨,第二至第四段进行了论述,最后一段给予了总结。
【参考范文】
Despitebeingaccustomedtothefastpaceinmodernsociety,peoplearerecommendedtoleadaslowerlife.(要点1)Slowingdownlowersthepossibilityofcommittingerrorsmadebyhurrydecisions.(要点2)Itcanalsoprovideuswithmoreopportunitiestoenjoylife.(要点3)Besides,aslowerlifeissupposedtobringbetterhealthconditionphysicallyandmentally.(要点4)Therefore,aslowlifeisstronglysuggested.(要点5)
Writing2(2019浙江宁波返校考)
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Haveyouheardanoldsaying“Thegrasslooksgreenerontheothersideofthefence”?
Itmeansotherplacesoftenlookbetter,moreinterestingthantheplacewhereyoulive.“Let’sgotoKFCfordinnerandthenwatchsomeJapanesecartoons!
”Weallknowit:
moreandmoreChinesekidsloveAmericanandJapanesefoodandmovies.SomepeopleworrythatyoungChinesearebeginningtofeelthatway.TheyseeyoungChineseignoring(忽视)Chinesecultureand,instead,buyingJapanesecartoonbooks,watchingKoreansoapoperasandevencelebratingwesternholidays.
Foreignbooksandsoapoperasaregood,butChinesewritersandactorsarejustasgood.Asforholidays,Christmasisnice,butitcanneverhavethemeaningforChinesethatSpringFestivalhas,andtheWesthasnothingtocomparewiththeMid-AutumnFestival.Chinahaslotsofcoolthingsinitsculture:
calligraphy,BeijingOpera,quickmealsonthestreets,andevenJayChou!
Andlet’snotforgetthepartofChinesecultureIlikebest:
itsfriendliness.NotallcountriesareaswarmasChina.
It’sgoodtoenjoyotherculturesandlearnfromthem,buttheycanneverreplaceyourownculture.It’sgoodtolookontheothersideofthefence,butmakesureyoutakeagoodlonglook.Youwillfindthatthegrassisn’talwaysgreener.
Althoughsomepeoplebecomeworriedaboutthat,Idon’tthinktheyshould.Willwegetmorepowerfulwithoutlearningfromothercountries?
WillChinesepeoplelivemorehappilywithoutAmericanfastfood?
Besides,it’sfuntolearnaboutdifferentcultures.Chinesekidscanlearnaboutotherculturesandhavefun,buttheyalsoneedtolearnmoreabouttheirownculture.BeproudofChinesecultureandofbeingChinese!
答案
【写作提示】
本文是议论文。
文章论述了“本地的花不香”这种盲目崇洋媚外的现象。
文章结构清楚,概括时根据自然段的中心思想组织要点。
【参考范文】
ManyyoungChinesepreferforeignitems,consideringthemtobebetter.(要点1)Nevertheless,Chinesecultureisequallygood,colorfulandevenmoremeaningful,suchasitsfestivals,calligraphyandfriendliness.(要点2)Foreigncultures,whicharenotalwaysgood,canneverreplaceyourownculture.(要点3)Inaword,ChinesekidsneedtolearnmoreandtakeprideinChineseculturewhileenjoyingothercultures.(要点4)
Writing3(2019浙江杭州模拟)
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
“IthinkI’mnothingmorethanadeadfish.”“Idon’twanttodoanything.”“I’msobeatandsosad.”...Theyounggenerationinourcountryusedtoenjoytheir“happyculture”butnowtheyhavebecome“beatandsad”slowlyandsecretly.Somepeopleevencalledit“thebeatculture”.The“beat”youthsdon’twanttodoanything.Theyhavenopurpose,nodesireandtheyaretotallydepressedandtheyonlywanttoliveanaimlesslife.The“GeYouslouch(葛优瘫)”andthesong“Ifeellikehavingbeendrained”aretheexamples.
Manymediaconcernthemselvesaboutthisphenomenonandtrytopersuadetheyouthsintoembracingpositiveandhealthyfeelingsandencouragethemtoworkhardtogetridofdecadence.Thisisreallyakindgesture.However,wedon’thavetoworrytoomuchaboutthis“beatculture.”Infact,it’snotanegativething.“Beat”nevermeansdespair,butawayofself-mockery(自嘲)andpressurerelief.
Ingeneral,theyouthsinChinaarenot“beat”.Accordingtoarecentinternationalresearch,theyouthsinChinaholdpositiveattitudetowardsthefuture.29%oftheChineseintervieweesbelievetheywillliveandworkinpeaceinChinabecause“aslongasyouworkhard,youcanhaveyourownday”.Around93%oftheChineseintervieweesbelievethefutureispromisingbecauseofmedicineindustry,renewableenergysourcesandcomputer.ComparedwithChineseyoungsters,youthsindevelopedcountriesaremorepessimistic.
Ofcoursetherearesomesocialreasonsfortheappearingof“theBeatCulture”.Asurbanizationdevelopsrapidly,youthslivinginbigcitiesarefacingnewchallengesthattheirforefathershaveneverencounteredbefore.Lonelinessandfeelingsofinsignificanceandpowerlessnessareeasytogetaholdoftheyoungpeople.Withoutpropercare,theycouldthreatentheyouths’mentalityandcausemanysocialproblems.Theseproblemsprobablyneedouratt