浙江省版高考英语总复习专题十七概要写作教师用书.docx

1、浙江省版高考英语总复习专题十七概要写作教师用书专题十七概要写作挖命题【考情探究】考点考查内容考查方式考情分析2018.112018.62017.112017.62016.10概要写作1.对原文主旨及要点的理解和呈现情况;2.概括要点时语法结构和词汇应用的准确性;3.概要文章上下文的连贯性;4.对各要点表达的独立性情况提供一篇350词以内的短文,要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要在申请大学之前,最好亲自去目标学校看一下。如果时间和金钱不允许,就在网上获取信息分析解读概要写作是综合性的写作考查。要求考生首先对原文有准确的理解、对原文的结构和要点有准确的把握,然后再用高级的语法结构及合适

2、的连接词写出包含所有要点的短文。所以,考生要想做好本题,就必须注意以下几点:(1)准确理解文章。(2)把握文章的各个要点。(3)使用准确的语法结构、丰富的词汇和合适的连接词。(4)使用自己的语言表述,不要照抄原文中的句子。【真题典例】阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Its a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply because their websites can all start to look and sound the same. Nothing will give you the sense of

3、 what it will actually be like to live on a college campus(校园)like visiting and seeing for yourself the dorms, classrooms and athletic equipment and, of course, the students. It seems a little crazy once senior year hits to find the time to visit college campuses, and it can also be pricey if the sc

4、hools you are applying to happen to be more than a car ride away. But keep in mind that you are making a decision about the next four years of your life, and do all the research you can to make sure you are making the right one.Theres no excuse not to visit the schools in your local area. In fact, a

5、 lot of college applications even ask if you have visited campus, and obviously, if you live across the country that wont be as much of a possibility, but if you live nearby, go check it out!If campus visits arent going to happen before you apply, at the very least you should find some time between

6、applying and getting your acceptance letters to visit the schools youd like to attend. It can save you a lot of heartache if you rule out now the things that you dont like about certain campuses, things that you wouldnt know unless you actually visit.Now, if time and money are making it impossible,

7、then check out the online college fairs at CollegeWeekLive. Its a chance to chat online with admissions officers, students, and college counselors(顾问), and it wont cost you a penny! You can register for its online college fair at . While visiting an online college fair cant take the place of an actu

8、al campus visit, it can be a very useful tool that along with all your other research will help you make an informed decision about which colleges or universities youd like to attend.概要写作的文章一般都是说明文或议论文。文章结构比较清楚,段落之间的逻辑关系也很紧密。文章第一段开门见山,提出观点:在你申请大学之前,要去亲自看看目标大学。第二段特别指出一定要去看看附近的大学。第三段的内容是,如果你在申请之前没有去过;

9、在申请之后,或得到offer之前,一定要去看看,免得将来后悔。第四段的主要内容是如果无法亲自去参观的话,可以登录网站了解相关的信息。并提供了网站的信息。参考范文范文鉴赏It is a wise choice for you to pay a personal visit to the college you are applying to,especially the ones that are close to you.(要点1)In order to avoid being regretful, you should at least visit the college you decid

10、ed to attend.(要点2)If all the above is not affordable, it will be helpful to search the online college fairs at CollegeWeekLive where you can get the necessary information(要点3).1.范文准确地把握了各个段落的要点。2.各个要点之间的连接和逻辑都很顺畅,相互关系密切。3.句子之间用了比较好的连接方式。如第一句的especially;第二句的In order to,第三句的If。4.文章使用了比较高级的词汇和结构。如,It i

11、s a wise choice;you are applying to;that are close to you;avoid being regretful;not affordable;where you can get the necessary information。【三年模拟】模拟题组Writing 1(2019浙江五校)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。These days our society develops rapidly and forces people to rush. It appears that people have got used to

12、 being in a hurry. However, its better for people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done.The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrong in a rush. When people do their jobs or take action in a hurr

13、y, they cant make a sound decision and probably regret later. As the saying goes, “Haste makes waste.” We should think carefully before making a decision and do our work less quickly. We should not make mistakes by doing work hurriedly.Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life bett

14、er. For example, taking a train to some place certainly will take more time than taking a plane. However, taking a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new friends. Besides, it allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way. On the contrary, being in a hurry

15、will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives.Finally, slower life pace provides better health conditions for us. As is known to all, taking action in a hurry bothers people and raises their stress. People think if they are not in a hurry, they will become a loser and that annoys them. But being i

16、n a hurry can hurt people both physically and mentally. According to some studies, people who have a slower pace suffer fewer diseases, tend to be happier and live much longer than those whose life is tense, even if the former finish jobs more slowly than the latter.In short, working quickly will br

17、ing about more material benefits to make our society more advanced. Yet, much stress cant bring enjoyment, friends and health, which are much more important than money and other material advantages. Therefore, take your time and live your life at a slower pace.答案【写作提示】本文是一篇议论文。文章论述了降低生活节奏的各种好处。文章结构清

18、楚,观点明确。同时在第一段提出了主旨,第二至第四段进行了论述,最后一段给予了总结。【参考范文】Despite being accustomed to the fast pace in modern society, people are recommended to lead a slower life.(要点1)Slowing down lowers the possibility of committing errors made by hurry decisions.(要点2)It can also provide us with more opportunities to enjoy

19、life.(要点3)Besides, a slower life is supposed to bring better health condition physically and mentally.(要点4)Therefore, a slow life is strongly suggested.(要点5)Writing 2(2019浙江宁波返校考)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Have you heard an old saying “The grass looks greener on the other side of the fence”?It means

20、other places often look better, more interesting than the place where you live. “Lets go to KFC for dinner and then watch some Japanese cartoons!” We all know it:more and more Chinese kids love American and Japanese food and movies. Some people worry that young Chinese are beginning to feel that way

21、. They see young Chinese ignoring(忽视)Chinese culture and, instead, buying Japanese cartoon books, watching Korean soap operas and even celebrating western holidays.Foreign books and soap operas are good, but Chinese writers and actors are just as good. As for holidays, Christmas is nice, but it can

22、never have the meaning for Chinese that Spring Festival has, and the West has nothing to compare with the Mid-Autumn Festival. China has lots of cool things in its culture:calligraphy, Beijing Opera, quick meals on the streets, and even Jay Chou! And lets not forget the part of Chinese culture I lik

23、e best:its friendliness. Not all countries are as warm as China.Its good to enjoy other cultures and learn from them, but they can never replace your own culture. Its good to look on the other side of the fence, but make sure you take a good long look. You will find that the grass isnt always greene

24、r.Although some people become worried about that, I dont think they should. Will we get more powerful without learning from other countries?Will Chinese people live more happily without American fast food?Besides, its fun to learn about different cultures. Chinese kids can learn about other cultures

25、 and have fun, but they also need to learn more about their own culture. Be proud of Chinese culture and of being Chinese!答案【写作提示】本文是议论文。文章论述了“本地的花不香”这种盲目崇洋媚外的现象。文章结构清楚,概括时根据自然段的中心思想组织要点。【参考范文】Many young Chinese prefer foreign items, considering them to be better.(要点1)Nevertheless, Chinese culture i

26、s equally good, colorful and even more meaningful, such as its festivals, calligraphy and friendliness.(要点2)Foreign cultures, which are not always good, can never replace your own culture.(要点3)In a word, Chinese kids need to learn more and take pride in Chinese culture while enjoying other cultures.

27、(要点4)Writing 3(2019浙江杭州模拟)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。“I think Im nothing more than a dead fish.”“I dont want to do anything.”“Im so beat and so sad.”.The young generation in our country used to enjoy their “happy culture” but now they have become “beat and sad” slowly and secretly. Some people even c

28、alled it “the beat culture”. The “beat” youths dont want to do anything. They have no purpose, no desire and they are totally depressed and they only want to live an aimless life. The “Ge You slouch(葛优瘫)”and the song“I feel like having been drained” are the examples. Many media concern themselves ab

29、out this phenomenon and try to persuade the youths into embracing positive and healthy feelings and encourage them to work hard to get rid of decadence. This is really a kind gesture. However, we dont have to worry too much about this “beat culture.” In fact, its not a negative thing. “Beat” never m

30、eans despair, but a way of self-mockery(自嘲)and pressure relief. In general, the youths in China are not “beat”. According to a recent international research, the youths in China hold positive attitude towards the future. 29% of the Chinese interviewees believe they will live and work in peace in Chi

31、na because “as long as you work hard, you can have your own day”. Around 93% of the Chinese interviewees believe the future is promising because of medicine industry, renewable energy sources and computer. Compared with Chinese youngsters, youths in developed countries are more pessimistic.Of course

32、 there are some social reasons for the appearing of “the Beat Culture”. As urbanization develops rapidly, youths living in big cities are facing new challenges that their forefathers have never encountered before. Loneliness and feelings of insignificance and powerlessness are easy to get a hold of the young people. Without proper care, they could threaten the youths mentality and cause many social problems. These problems probably need our att