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评分标准

Globalscoring_overallrating

一.TR（TaskResponse任务反应情况）

二.CC（Coherence&

Cohesion连贯和衔接）

三.LR（LexicalResources词汇资源）

四.GR&

A（GrammaticalRange&

Accuracy语法范围和精确度）

写作步骤

1审题分析题目理解话题，遇到生词大胆猜确定Argumentation/Report

2构思brainstorming写下ideas/keywords.

Argumentation型,正反各列最多三点

Report型，列出causesandsolutions

原则

Equality

Safety

Education

Environment

Health（physical/psychological）

Cultureandcivilization

Scienceandtechnology

Timeandmoney

Emotion/morality

3.列outline确定几段，每段中心句，使用准备套句和过渡句

4.动笔

5检查语法，拼写

题目分析

1.Report

要求分析某个问题或现象，找出原因，说明影响,提出解决方法

1.18

Manychildrenfinditisdifficulttoconcentrateorpayattentionatschool.Whatarethecauses?

Whatarethepossiblesolutionstothisproblem?

2.Argumentation

Argumentation要求考生就某一话题或观点进行评价，驳斥，力求说服考官大人，常常以一般疑问句形式出现

5.10

Nowadayswomenhavefull-timeworkthesameasmen,logicallymenshouldsharehouseworkequallywithwomen.Doyouagreeordisagree?

2013.01.19

A类

Inmodernsociety,fatherhoodshouldbeemphasizedasmuchasmotherhood.Doyouagreeordisagree?

Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.

Dotheadvantagesof......outweighitsdisadvantages?

Doyouthinkitisanegativeorpositivedevelopment

Report探讨成因与对策

模式

第一段提出问题，描述现状，表明写作目的

第二段分析数个原因

第三段提出相应对策或影响

结尾段总结，发出号召或者倡议，展望未来

模板

Inrecentyears/recently/nowadays,名词词组hasbecomeahot/thorny/pressingissue,改写作文题/自由发挥与主题相关句子.People（parents,teachers,citizens....）havebeenattachinggreaterimportancetothismatter,foritmayinduceahostofproblemssuchas名词.….Inthisessay,Iaimtoexplore/discuss/analyzethiscomplicated/serious/severe/worryingphenomenonfromdiverseperspectives,andbringupsomeeffectivemeasures/solutions.

Tomymind,anarrayoffactorscontributetothiscomplexsituation.Thefirstimportantreason/causeis..Anothermajorfactoris..Andthemostfrequentlystressedoneis…

Confrontedwithsuchathornyissue,peoplecomeupwithavarietyofconstructivemeasures.Firstofall…Moreover….Lastbutnottheleast,…

Wheneveryoneisfullyawareoftheseverity/significance/risks,andtakesfeasiblemeasures,Ifirmlybelievethatwewillbeableto../Boththegovernmentandordinarycitizensshouldmakeconcerted/jointeffortsto…

1.Thegapbetweentherichandthepoorisbecomingwider.Therichisgrowingricherandthepoorisgrowingpoorer.

Whatarethecausesofthisproblem?

Whatsolutionscanyouproposetosolvethisproblem?

Nowadays,thewideninggapbetweentherichandthepoorhasbecomeathornyissue,peoplehavebeenattachinggreaterimportancetothissocialproblem,foritmayinduceahostofconsequencessuchashatredtowardthebillionaireorevensocialriot.Inthisessay,Iaimtoexplorethiscomplicatedphenomenonfromdiverseperspectives,andbringupsomeeffectivemeasures.

Tomymind,theoriginsoftheproblemcomeasfollows.Tobeginwith,therichpeoplearealreadyblessedwithsuperioreducation,betterresources,someofthemarebornintothepurpleandcanmakeuseoftheirwealthaccumulatedbytheirancestorstomakewiseinvestment,whiletheimpoverishedpeoplehavenoadvantageinstartingtheirbusiness,forhugefundproblemhasalwaysbeenanimpediment/barrier/hurdleontheirwaytotakethefirststep.

Besides,itisalwaystherichpeoplethatareinthedominantpositionsinthesociety,thustheyaremorelikelytomakepolicieswhichareinfavoroftheirinterest.Andtheincreaseoffortune/wealthseemstobeaprivilegeoftheirown.

Anotherfactorweneedtopointoutisthatmostoftherichpeoplearealwaysadventurousandwillingtoacceptchallengesandwilltrytheirbesttoachieveagoaldespiteconstantfailures.Onthecontrary,somepoorpeoplearealwayscountingonluckandfreelunchinsteadofstrivinghardforachange,therefore,theirchancesofmakingmoneywillslipawayeverytimetheychoosetoavoiddifficultiesandburythemselvesincomplaint.

Thesituationcannotlasttoolongandtheremustbesomewaysout.First,governmentsareobligedtomoderatelyredistributesocialwealthbyposingheaviertaxestotherichclassandinvestingmoreinthewarfareofthepeoplelivinginpoverty.Inaddition,theauthoritiesconcernedaresupposedtoenactfavorablefinancialpoliciesforthosepeoplewhowanttostartacompany,forexample,low-interestloan.

Toliveinacommonwealthsocietyistheultimategoalofmankindandwemustcherishthehopethatwiththejointeffortsfromgovernmentandthepoorpeoplethemselves,thegapbetweentherichandthepoorwillbeeventuallybridged.

2.Sciencetellsussomeactivitiesaregoodforourhealthandtherearesomeunhealthyactivities.Butmillionsofpeoplestilldothoseunhealthyactivities.

Whyisithappening?

Whatcanwedotochangethissituation?

stayingup

eatingjunkfood

goingonastrictdiet

increasingpressurefromworkandstudyleaveslittletimeforbedtimeorforadecentmeal.

lackofselfcontrolandtimemanagementskill.

workrequirement

duetothewrongconceptofbeauty,manygirlssacrificehealthforaslimbody.

Despitethefactthatphysicianswarnusthatcertainactivitiesmayleadtocancerorotherseriousdiseases,alargenumberofdrinkersandsmokersarestillunwillingtodroptheircupsorthrowthecigarsaway.Inthisessay,Iaimtoexplorethiscomplicatedphenomenonfromdiverseperspectives,andbringupsomeeffectivemeasures

Whysoaremanypeopleobsessedwithsuchharmfulactivities?

Firstly,wecanneverdenythehealingeffectofcigaretteoraglassofwinewhenwefeeldepressed,frustratedandlonelyorsimplyneedaninspiration.Secondly,lackofself-controlandperseveranceisthemaincauseofourconstantfailuresinkickingoutthebadhabit.

WhenitcomestotheaddictiontotheinternetorTVwatching,（whichbringsphysicaldamageaswell,say,obesity,failureofeyesight..）,thedisillusionoftheirdreamshouldberesponsible.Thosepoorpeople,bywatchingthesurrealbuthappyTVdramasorcommunicatingwiththeircyberfriends,canfindspiritualsatisfactionandemotionalrelief.

Thesolutions,inmyopinion,maycomeasfollows.Tobeginwith,widerpromotionofthehazardsoftherelevantpracticesshouldbemadebythemedia.Besides,thevictimsareencouragedtoseekhelpfromfriendsandfamilyorcommunitieswhichcouldprovideprofessionaladviceandcare.Anothereffectivewayistodivertattentiontohealthysports,suchasswimmingorplayingbadminton,whichcanalsobringfunandrelaxation.

Wearedreamingtoenjoyahealthylife,butweshouldbeconsciousoftheharmunderdisguise.Withourjointefforts,Ifirmlybelievethatthesituationwillchangeforthebetter.

3.Theriseoflivingstandardinacountryoftenonlybenefitscitiesratherthanruralareas.

Whatproblemscanbecaused?

Howtoreducetheseproblems?

Manycountrysidepeoplewhowanttoseeksuperiorlifeinthecitywillposeproblemstothecityfirst,suchassurgingurbanpopulation,trafficproblems,morefiercecompetitionsinthejobmarket

Inaddition,thevillageswillsufferfromthenegativeimpactofthepopulationdrain.（braindrain.）itisnotunusualtofindthatmanyfarmsfalldisused,forthestrongyounglaborareinthecity.Anotherfactweshouldnoticeisthatmanycountryfactorieswillgobankruptbecauseofyounglaborshortage.

Thegapbetweenthecityandthevillagewillbewidenedintermsoffoodvarieties,nutrition,transportconvenience,entertainmentmeansandhousingcondition.Thus,theremightemergesomesocialconflicts,fortheruralresidents/dwellers/inhabitantsmightshowdiscontentwiththesocialinequality

Theabsenceofalargenumberofcapablepeople,（whoareusuallythehardcoreofthefamily,）willmakeoldpeopleandchildrenunattended,therefore,theproblemofhealthandeducationofchildrenisbecomingincreasinglyserious.

First,thegovernmentshouldgiveprioritytotheinfrastructureconstructionoftheruralareas.Moremoneyshouldbeinvestedinthedevelopmentofroads,medicalcareandeducation.Besides,morejobopportunitiesshouldbeprovidedtotheruralinhabitants/dwellerswhoneednotseekjobsinthecity.Lastbuttheleast,moretalentscanberetainedintheirhometownifthegovernmentcouldproviderewardsorincentives.

Itisyouthatmakemeunderstandthetruemeaningoflove.

ARGUMENTAION

1,对称型counter-argument

第一段引入性话语，引出话题，简单陈述对该问题不同看法.

第二段陈述一方观点，具体论证

第三段过渡到另一方观点，具体论证

结尾段总结双方表明立场看法

Somepeoplethinksuccessoflifeisbasedonhardworkanddeterminationbutothersthinktherearemoreimportantfactorslikemoneyandappearance.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.

引言段写法

交代背景，引出话题，呈现双方观点

模板

Recently,……hasbecomeahot-buttonissueonwhichpeopleretaindifferentviews.somepeopleclaimthat…However,othersarguethat…Beforerenderingmyposition,Ithinkitisessentialtoexplorebothsidesofthehotissue.

科技类

4.MobilephonesandtheInternetplayanimportantroleinthewaypeoplerelatetooneanothersocially.Isthisapositiveornegativedevelopment?

Advantages:

1.Theproductionefficiencyisgreatlyenhancedbythepopularityoftechnology.

2Technologicalinventionscouldbringgreatconveniencetoourdailylivesandliftthestandardofliving.

disadvantages：

1.AlongwiththeleisureenrichedbytheInternet,peopletendtoignore/neglectthecommun