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Aterribleearthquakehit/struckTangshaninthe1980s.
大多数同学使用了therebe结构,这是对的,但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。
另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构,且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇,更是难能可贵的。
2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。
IreceivedyourletterwhichwaswrittenonAugust15ththismorning.(多数人使用的方式)
YourletterofAugust15threached/gottomethismorning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)
2.使用一些强势句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。
如:
3)阿福救了我妹妹。
AhFusavedmysister.(一般句式)
ItwasAhFuthatsavedmysister.(强调句式)
4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。
Weweregladtoseecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell.(一般陈述句)
Howgladweweretoseecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell.(感叹句)
3、句式多样,复杂得体。
在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用,还可使用简化句等;
一些较复杂的结构如独立主格,分词结构等也可使用。
下面的表达中A句简单句多,而且多处使用therebe结构,显得单调、乏味,而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。
5)这是一套25平方米的住房,住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;
卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。
It'
saflatof25squaremetres.Thereisabedroomintheflat.Thereisabathroomandakitcheninit,too.Inthebedroom,thereisabed;
thereisasofa,adeskandachairaswell.
saflatof25squaremetres,withabedroom,abathroomandakitchen.Inthebedroomthereisabed,asofa,adeskandachair.
三、布局谋篇----独具匠心
在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。
在布局谋篇上,NMET2002范文堪称典范。
请看:
Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.
60%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefees.Theybelieveapublicparkshouldbefreeofcharge.Peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoythemselves.Chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway.Whatismore,itwillbecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls,whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity.
Ontheotherhand,40%thinkthatfeesshouldbechargedbecauseyouneedmoneytopaygardensandotherworkers,andtobuyplantsandyoungtrees.Theysuggested,however,feesshouldbechargedlow.
1)该文使用Opinionsaredivided...作交代句,开门见山,随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分),使全文结构紧凑,表达严谨。
2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整,如“40%的同学认为应收门票,但不宜过高。
”前部分作为主题句放在句首,而后部分另起一句放在句末:
Theysuggested,however,feesshouldbechargedlow.这样就分清了轻重缓急,主题突出,条理清楚。
3)范文使用了and,whatismore,however等连词,在段落之间使用了ontheotherhand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的),这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系,使文章表达连贯,浑然一体。
4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway.等细节,这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。
总之,要想使自己的文章有亮点,吸引读者,在考试中获得高分,就应在用词、造句、谋篇上下功夫,哪怕是有一处特长都是“亮”点,都是值得肯定的。
初中英语作文写作方法:
一、掌握常用过渡性词语
叙事文常用的句子间连接词
atfirst;
atlast;
intheend...
then/next/afterthat...
when/while/assoonas/not...until...
atthesametime;
attimes;
onceinawhile;
sothat
Toone’ssurprise/joy
Luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately...
inaword/inall
议论文常用连接词
表示并列:
either...or;
neither...nor;
both...and;
notonly...butalso;
表示递进的:
besides;
what’smore;
what’sworse;
(moreover);
表示原因的:
because;
for...;
becauseof...;
thanksto...;
(forthereasonthat...);
表示结果的:
so;
asaresult;
so...that...;
therefore;
表示目的的:
sothat...;
inorderthat...;
(inorder)to...;
表示对比的:
while;
ontheonehand+ontheotherhand;
Eachcoinhastwosides.;
prefer...to...;
wouldratherdo...thando...;
表示转折的:
however;
but;
表示举例的:
forexample;
forinstance;
suchas...;
like...;
thatistosay...
表示总结的:
inall/short;
inaword;
inbrief/total;
lastbutnotleast;
last;
表示利弊的:
begood/badforsb.;
beharmfultosb.;
doharmtosb.;
...havegreat/muchinfluenceonsb.;
sth.benefitsb.;
sb.benefitfromsth.affect;
haveaneffectonsb.;
表示喜爱的:
love/like/enjoy...;
befondof...;
beinterestedin...;
showgreatinterestin...;
loseoneselfin...;
putone’sheartinto...;
begoodat;
bepoorat;
beweakin;
表达个人想法的:
Ithink/believe...;
(as)forme;
inmyopinion/view;
asastudent;
fromthebottomofmyheart;
personally;
其他:
ingeneral;
generallyspeaking;
tobeshort;
tobehonest;
totellthetruth;
asweknow;
makeupone’smindtodo;
inaway;
二、记住作文万能句式
Iwillworkhardtomakemydreamcometrue.
Ihopeyourdreamwillcometrueoneday.
Ittakessb.+时间+todo...
Sb.spend(某种人称时态)+时间/钱+onsth./(in)doingsth.
It’simportant/necessary/useful/useless/common...(forsb.)tov...
It’snice/kindofsb.tov..
It’stimeforsb.todosth.
It’sawasteoftimeto...
It’s...years/dayssincesb.+ved
It’sgreatfuntodo=sb.havegreatfundoing
It’sapitythat...
It’sanhonorto...
I’m/We’renotallowedto...
I’mafraidofmakingmistakes...
Therebe...doing...
Greatchangeshavetakenplacein...
sthis/arewellworthv-ing.
Itseems/seemedthat...
Itseems(im)possibletov...
Itissaidthat...
Asthesayinggoes,...
...and....aredifferentinmanyways.
too+adj./adv.todo
Therearemanydifferencesbetween...and...
Ihavemadeupmymindto...
Iamsurethat...
Iamnotsurewhether/if...
Iwouldrather....than...
Itdoesn’tmatterif...
Thankyouforv-ing.
Ifeveryonecanmakeacontributiontotheearth/nature/society,ourlifewillbebetterandbetter.
have/lookforachancetodo
dooutdooractivities
be/getusedto(doing)sth.
learn...from...
beproudof/takepridein...
playanimportant/activepart/rolein...
agreewithsb.todosth.
withthehelpofsb.=withone’shelp
(反义:
withoutone’shelp)
be/getreadytodosth.=be/getreadyforsth.
payattentionto...
takegoodcareof...
makefriendswith...
geton/alongwellwith...
wishyousuccessful/success
astimegoesby...
graduatefrom...
lookingbacktothepastthreeyears,...(用现在完成时态)
passthe(final)exam
sticktodoing
keepyoumindonyourgoals
makeupone’smindtodosth.(onsth.)
makeadecisiontodo
workhardatEnglish
onceinawhile/attimes/nowandthen
fromthenon
inthefuture(将来)/infuture(从今以后)
increaseourknowledge
infact/asamatteroffact
inthebeginning/atfirst
feellikegivingup
havetrouble/difficultyin(doing)sth.
have(no)timetodo
haveexperiencein(doing)sth.
followone’sadvice/suggestions
mastersomebasic...skills
berequiredtodo
asksb.forhelp
can’twaittodo
besupposedtodo
encouragesb.todo
deal/dowith...
workout/solvetheproblems
allsorts/kindsof...
athomeandabroad
oneof...
befullof...
learnsth.byoneself
comeupwithgoodideas
besurprisedatsth.(todosth.)
inorderto
keephealthy/fit
agoodwaytov...
keep(on)trying
worryabout.../beworriedabout...
inone’sspare/freetime
bekind/friendlyto
bestrictwith
helpothers
saythankyouto...
havefun/enjoyoneself/haveagoodtime
plentyof+C/U
worryabout/beworriedabout
asksb.forhelp/turntosb.forhelp/callsb.forhelp
bepopularwith...
sharesth.withsb.
knowlittle/muchabout...
作文万能短语
do/tryone’sbesttov...
be/feelsorryfor...
helpsb.(to)dosth./withsth.
in/duringclass
before/afterclass
teachsb.todosth.
increaseourknowledge/enlargeourvocabulary
三、熟悉写作步骤:
1审题:
审清作文体裁(类型)时态、人称等细节;
2列提纲(文章结构框架):
分几段,以及每段大体内容;
3写作:
在提纲的基础上补充要点;
4复查:
2遍----1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题;
2遍不出声读查,靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等;
5誊抄:
不允许做任何的更改。
总之做到三审:
体裁、时态、人称;
三思:
词汇-->
短语-->
句式;
三查:
要点、拼写和语法、连贯。