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写作大小作文练习版本二

【第一段】

简要描述图片，略微引向主题

图片基调

相关细节

引向主题

【第二段】

点明图片寓意，进行充分拓展

1.举例论证

2.因果分析

3.利弊分析

4.正反论证

5.….

TD1D2C

A：

化立论为驳论

大众观点

提出质疑

详实论据

得出结论

B：

化苍白为哲理

哲理引入

具体阐释

详实论据

得出结论

孔子

老子

孟子

李子

马子

Idioms600.doc

C：

化平淡为修辞

Displayedbythiscartoonisasimpletruth:

…….However,suchadoctrinehasbeenwavedasidebymostofus.Anycases?

Haven’tyoueverfound….?

Haven’tyouevernoticed….?

Why…?

Why…?

Why…?

Aren'tthey…….?

【第三段】

根据上文论调，进行对应评论

1.社会弊病（生态环境）

控制：

外控，内控

Correspondinglawsandregulationsshouldbeputintopracticeto….

Officialinterventionshouldbeactivatedtodirectthisproblemtoapositivesituation.

Finesorpenaltiesshouldbecastonthismattertoputanendtoit.

Mediasupervisionshouldbeputonthismattertoreducetheprevalenceof…..

Self-discipline

Self-restrict

Self-restrain

Self-control

Theabilityofself-disciplineshouldbecultivatedamongthosewho…..

Awarenessof….

Theawarenessof…shouldbenurturedamongthosewho….

Rightattitude…

Rightattitudeto….shouldbeadvocatedamongthosewho….

Socialconvention…

Anewsocialconventionconcerning…shouldbeestablishedamongthosewho……

Howcanweputtheproblemof…undercontrol?

Itoccurstomanythat…….Thatisaway,butapassiveone.Actually,wealsoneedto…,withtheassistanceofwhichwecanfundamentallyputthistrendtoanend.

Suchmisconductsof…mustbeputundercontrolimmediately!

Buthow?

Suggestionsfromthegeneralpublicinvolve…,…,and…Theseproposalshavebeenputintopracticeforyears,withfruitfulrewards.Isthatenough?

Actually,whatweneedismorethanwhatmentionedabove,butanewwaythat……..

2.社会风尚

支持

理由：

惠及自身与他人

惠及当下与未来

参与

Askedaboutmyattitudeto…,Iamtosay…iseitherbeneficialtoindividualsorelevatingtosociety.Actually,thisescalatingeffectwillnotlastformerelyseveralyears.Asasocialwealth,thisvirtueof…maybedeliveredfromoneindividualtoanother,fromonedecadetoanother,andfromgenerationtoanother.Asacollegeman,Iamdeterminedtobearole-modelin…...（Ascollegemen,wehavethedutytojoininthecampaignof……）

Ididnotdoitforyou.

IdidnotmarryyoubecauseIloveyou.

IdidnotcatchtheflightbecauseIgotupearly.

ImissedtheflightbecauseIgotuplate.

Escalate

Elevate

elevator

《狗镇》舞台剧

3.个人问题

求助：

expert,senior,friend,book,well-writtenworks

自助：

具体问题具体分析

Howcanwestepoutoftheshadowof…?

Onceuponatime,facingthesamesituation,Iwassuggestedbyfriendstoseekhelpformseniors,experts,orbooks.Thatwasaway,buthelpfromotherisnotnecessarilyavailableallthetime.Evenifitis,itisnotalwayssuitabletome.ThereforeIamdeterminedto…,to…,to…,andto….

2400

2350

1850

Exercise1

Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould

1）describethedrawingbriefly,

2）interpretthephenomenonitreflects,andthen

3）giveyourcomments.

YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.（20points）

学生的对联

图片基调ironic

相关细节

Couplet

Thefirstline…

Thesecondline…

Thehorizontalscroll…

引向主题

dishonest

Emergingfromthecartoonisanironicscenethatthecoupletpastedbystudentsmirrorstheirundesirableattitudetowardcollegeexaminations.Thefirstlinereads,“therewillbenoupgradewithoutcheatinginexams”,whilethesecondlinebears,“intheirminds,successinexamsoutweighsdignity.”Thehorizontalscrollsummarizestheiridea:

they,regardlessofthevirtueofhonesty,aredeterminedtopasstestsbyanymeans.

大众观点诚信

提出质疑反问

详实论据考试作弊：

偷看，小抄，手势，手机，耳语…

得出结论

不再诚信，个人，教育，社会

Itisgenerallyacceptedthat…

Itisconventionallyholdthat…

Itissharedbythegeneralpublicthat…

Itisdeeplyrootedinthemindofthepublicthat…..

Itiswidelysharedthatnoothergroupintheworldcanbeashonestascollegestudents.Butisthatatruthanymore?

Examplesagainstthispublicviewareabundantandwithineasyreach.Fromthepointofcollageexaminationsalone,itisnotsurprisingtoseecandidatesdeliveringkeysbygesture,bywhispering,orevenbymobilephone.Evidently,amountingnumberofstudentsnolongercherishthevirtueofhonesty.Thisdelinquencyexertsnegativeinfluenceeitherontheiroveralldevelopmentoronthequalityofeducation,nottomentiontheimpactonsocialatmosphere.

PreferAtoB

AispreferabletoB.

Intheirminds,AoutweighsB.

Exercise2

Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould

1）describethedrawingbriefly,

2）explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen

3）giveyourcomments.

YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.（20points）

ThedreamofaBird

图片基调alarming

相关细节

Abirdisholdingagun.

Heisstaringatthesky.

Heishidinginthebush.

Humanbeingsaresoaringinthesky.

Hewantstorevengeonhuman.

引向主题

Whatpeopleoncedidwithhim.

Depictedbythecartoonisanalarmingscenariothatabird,holdingagunandhidinginthebush,isstaringattheskywherehumanbeingsaresoaring.Obviously,helongsforadaywhenbecomesahunter,shootingpeopleforfun.Evidently,hisdreamderivesfrom/rootsin/isprovokedby/isevokedby/istriggeredby/issparkedbywhatpeopleoncedidwithhim.

【版本一】

Ithasbecomea“commonsense”thatnootherageplaceemphasisonenvironmentalprotectionsomuchastoday.Butdoeseveryofustakepartinthiscampaign?

Theanswerisratherdisappointing.Thefollowingmisdeedsordelinquencyarefamiliar.Itisnotsurprisingtoseesomeofushuntingwildlifeforfun,cookingthemforfood,orsellingthemforprofit.Meanwhile,itisnotuncommontofindsomefactoriesemmitingtoxicgaswithatmospherepolluted.Evidently,thesenseofachievingabetterenvironmentisnotsopervasiveasweexpect,whichmaybedetrimentaltoourwell-beingorlong-termdevelopment.

【版本二】

哲理引入

Asanesteemedthinkeronceput,“….”

Nevereasilyletgoofthetruth,“….”

Nevershrugoffthemotto,“….”

Nevereasilywaveasidethemotto,“”

Theintendedmeaningofthecartooncanbesummarizedasamotto,“…”

Thecartoonistusestheuniquematphortoendowusthat…..

具体阐释

Thatis,….

Simplystateit,….

Inotherword,…..

Putitanotherway,….

详实论据

得出结论

Thenaturemaytreatusthewaywetreatit.

Whatwedowiththenatureistobeansweredfor.

【版本三】

Displayedbythiscartoonisasimpletruth:

itisourobligationtobeongoodtermwithournature.However,suchadoctrinehasbeenwavedasidebymostofus.Anycases?

Haven’tyoueverfoundsomeofushuntingwildlifewithspeciesendangered?

Haven’tyouevernoticedsomefactoriesover-miningwithgeographicdisastersrecurring?

Wherehastheirconsciencegone?

Wherehastheirsenseofsocialresponsibility?

Wherehastheirinsightofthefuturegone?

Aren'tthesevirtuesswallowedbygreediness,sacrificinglong-termbenefitsforinstantsatisfactionofeconomy?

Sacrifice…for….

Exhibitedbythiscartoonisamotto:

thenaturemaytreatusthewaywetreatit.Toputitanotherway,itmayrewardusfruitfullyonconditionthatweareongoodtermwithit,whilepunishusifwemistreatit.Inthepast,naturalresourceswereavailableanytimeandanywhereinthatpeopleneverwenttoofarinexploitingthem.Currently,thingshaschanged–ourgreedinesshasdeprivedusoftherightstoenjoythoseonceabundantresources.Thebirdinthepicture,byhisrevenge,intendtowarnusthathumansmaypayaheavypriceforwhattheydidwiththenature.

Deprivesb.of….

Beongoodtermwithit

Getonwellwithit.

Exercise3

Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould

1）describethedrawingbriefly,

2）explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen

3）giveyourcomments.

图片基调

相关细节

引向主题

Haveyoueverbeencaughtinadilemmaoradelicatesituation?

Ifso,youmayfeelthesamesorrowandpuzzleasthemandoesinthepicture.

Theman,facingseveraldirections,iswalkingbackandforth,wonderingwheretogo.Thecaptionisremindinghim,aswellasallofus,thatwhattroublesusisnotadversitiesthemselvesbutourindecisiveness.

Remindsb.sth.

Remindsb.that…

Exercise4

Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould

1）describethedrawingbriefly,

2）explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen

3）giveyourcomments.

图片基调sarcastic

相关细节

overall/excessive

sitting

explaining

excusinghimselffor…

引向主题

Behonesttocustomers

Undertheridiculousappearanceofthecartoonliesasocialevilwhichmayexertheavypressureoneachconsumer.Inthedrawing,sittinginfrontofapatient,asurgeonisexplaining“outoftheconsiderationofyourhealth,Irenderyouanoverallmedicaltreatment.”Actually,heisexcusinghimselfforhisexcessiveremedy.Suchexcuseisnotrareinalmostanybusiness!

Toliveistolearn.

Asanesteemedscholaronceput,“Totakegoodcareofcustomersistocarehimselfforanybusinessorsocialagencies.”Inotherword,itisimpossibleforanyfirmtoflourishifitpaysnoattentiontotheinterestsofconsumers.However,asignificantnumberofagencies,likethedoctorinthepicture,letgoofthetruth.Letustakebanktransactionforexample.Inseveralbanks,agedpeoplearealwayspersuadedintopurchasingsomesubstandardmoneymanagementservices,resultingtofinancialloss.Evidently,suchbusinesses,iftheycontinuethesemisconducts,maybeabandonedbythegeneralpublic.

Persuadesb.intodoing….

Dissuadesb.fromdoing….

Imposeheavypressureon…

Exert…..on….

Exercise5

Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingd