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与未来同行Awalkintothefuture精
与未来同行!
Awalkintothefuture!
2008年考研英语写作考前预测和串讲
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资料编辑:
王军
特别感谢:
西安人信培训学校(交大考研)考研英语辅导团队
写在前面的话:
感谢你们的目光让我有勇气迎接人生一个又一个挑战;感谢你们的笑容让我永远感恩人世间的温暖和宽容;感谢你们的忠诚让我有机会与大家一起分享语言的美丽。
我会永远以感恩的情怀去回报我的每一位学生,无论过去、现在还是未来。
我希望我所做的一切能够给你带去信心、能够让你在成功中感受幸福和满足!
让我们感谢考研,是它让我们彼此有了一次愉快的相逢和约定。
再次预祝同学们2008年考研成功!
第一部分写作要点最后提示
A:
大原则
1)写作在命题形式上相当灵活,目前总体上已放弃了机械命题,避免考生猜题、押题,每年出题都在求变,考生应该把握解题规律,掌握模式化语言,以不变应万变。
2)写作最重要的是不能跑题,在做题前列出提纲和主干来是很有必要的。
3)机械背诵范文已经不能应对新的试题设计,因此必须掌握不同文章的架构设计和精彩语言表达模式,以此构筑起文章得分“亮点”,得到评卷老师的欣赏。
4)应用文部分要掌握模式化语言,其次一定要注重内容表达的全面性和准确性,确保覆盖所有任务点。
5)图表作文的复习不能忽视。
懂得如何通过坐标和图表纵横比较、说明事实,并且从表面看到实质,了解变化反映的深层意义。
同时考生还应该掌握图表术语,比如“增长、降低、突增至……保持稳定”等一批单词和词组的表达。
6)图画作文的难点在于对图画的描述,侧重考察考生看图说话的能力,如果直接表达不清楚,就要考虑用迂回策略达到目的,但不能偏离主题。
其次要点破图画的寓意,分析背后的原因或影响,这是文章的重头戏,所以要培养对图片的敏感和逻辑思维能力。
B:
高分法宝
1)语言准确化
语言准确化主要表现为两个方面:
一是词汇准确化;二是句子准确化。
避免写病句,避免直译思维。
学生按照汉语思维直译,导致表达错误和不地道、不准确的情况非常严重。
2)用词多样化
比如说图画作文,我们会用到show,我们也可以说reveals,indicates,illustrates等等。
再比如“认为”,我们可以说think,也可以说hold,maintain,insistthat。
表达“越来越”不要老说moreandmore,还可以用agrowingnumberof…,aconsiderablenumberof,ontherise等。
句子的多样化主要为以下五个方面:
1)句子开头多样化
2)主语多样化
3)定语多样化
4)短句变长句。
5)强调和倒装。
3)结构清晰化
结构清晰化就是要求考生把主题句写在段首,自然段中,句子与句子之间要注意过渡词汇的使用。
分析原因或者列举段落我们提倡“条理原则”,即要经常说首先,其次,然后,最后。
比如,首先:
to(begin/start)with/firstandforemost/mostimportantofall;其次:
then,furthermore,moreover,what’smore,inaddition,besides;最后:
lastbutnotleast,finally。
如果是讲两种人或两种情况,可以ontheonehand,ontheotherhand或foronething,foranother。
4)内容简单化
考研作文是为了考察考生的英语语言表达能力,所以切记不用把内容想得过于复杂,复杂内容用英文表达的难度就会大大提高,所以关键我想说的话通过一定的逻辑联系表达清楚即可。
C:
语言表达技巧
1.Challenges,tosomeextent,areconsideredtobeatestfortheyoungpeople.(简单句中加上插入语)
2.Toacertainextent,goodmannersareindispensabletotheharmoniousrelationshipamongus.(简单句前面加上程度状语)
3.Seeingsuchapicture,wecannothelpsaying…(简单句前面加上分词短语)
4.Withconfidenceandcourage,weareabletofacevariouschallenges,overcomevariousdifficulties,andevensurpassourselves.(排比句型增加句子可读性)
5.Agoodcaseinpointisthosescientistswhohavegivenupmanythingssuchascomfortablelife,decentposition,evenhighsalaryforthesuccessfullaunchofShenZhouVI.(举例子方法)
6.Accordingtoarecentsurveymadeby…..,70%oftheyoungpeopleacrossthecountryaresufferingfromthepsychologicalproblem.(列数据方法)
7.Withtheriseofthepeople’slivingstandardinrecentyears,thedesiresforthemateriallifeisbecomingstrongerthanbefore,whichmakesitpossiblefortheconsumptiontoincrease.(非限制定语从句的方法)
8.Theindividualgrowthisusuallythefirstfactortobeconsidered,butitisnotthemostimportantone.Themostimportantaspectofthephenomenonhasmuchtodowiththefutureofournation.Itisinthisaspectthatwefindqualityeducationmustbecarriedoutinordertoproducethequalifiedpersonnelsforthesociety.(经典升华段)
9.Basically,whatreallymattersisourcourageandconfidencetofacethosedifficulties.(主语从句表达评论或现象)
10.Thereisnodenyingthatautomobilesareindicationsofcivilization,progressanddevelopment;nevertheless,automobilescausetheseriousproblemofairpollution.(名词性从句引出观点)
11.Onlyinthiswaycanweachievethebalancebetweenhumanbeingsandnature.(倒装句表达)
12.Withpropermeasures,thisproblemcanbetackled.(介词效果)
13.Itisknowledgeandopportunitythatchangeourfates.(强调句效果)
附:
考前必备习惯表达
王军老师2008考研英语写作核心必备+必背得分句
(1)大作文必备
1.Energycrisisisbecomingmoreseriousthaneverbefore,especiallyinthebigcities.
2.Creatingaharmonioussocietyisoffar-reachingsignificancetoournation.
3.Toreversethecurrentsituation,honestyshouldbeadvocatedinthemodernsociety.
4.Participatinginvolunteers’activitieswillgreatlyenrichourcampuslife.
5.IliketowatchTVverymuchbecauseitisinformative,educationalandentertaining.
6.Weconsideritnecessarytobehaveourselvesinthepublicplaces.
7.Asfarascollegestudentsareconcerned,weshouldconcentrateonstudy.
8.Onlyinthiswaycanweadaptourselvestorapiddevelopmentofthemodernsociety
9.ItistruethattheopeningpolicyhasresultedinapositiveeffectonChina’seconomicdevelopmentthereyears.
10.Onlythosewhoareequippedwiththebasicskillstosurviveinthefiercecompetitionwillbemorelikelytohaveapromisingfuture.
11.Thequalityoftheproductshasbeenconsiderablyimprovedduetotheapplicationofscienceandtechnology,which,tosomeextent,hasincreasedthecompetitivenessofthedomesticallymadeproducts.
12.Suchsocialphenomenoncanbefoundeverywhere,whichinthelongrunhasresultedinthegreateconomiclosses.
13.What’simportantistocombinewhatwehavelearnedfrombookstothesocialpractice.
14.Thewasteproblemshasarisenalongwiththeimprovementofthemateriallife,suchas…
15.Obviously,weshouldarousepeople’sawarenessofdevelopinggoodlivinghabitofthrift.
16.Itisanundeniablefactthatone’sattitudetowardslifeiscloselyassociatedwithhisfuturedevelopment.
17.Weshouldattachgreatimportancetotheenvironmentalprotectionandtheglobalsustainabledevelopment.
18.Understandingoneselfcorrectlyplaysavitalroleinattainingone’sgoals.
19.Asfortheyoung,weshouldhaveanoptimisticandpositiveattitudetowardsfuture.
20.Toacertainextent,weshouldattributethesuccesstoourconstanteffortsandstrongdetermination
21.Weshouldbeawareoftheimportanceofbroadeningourviewthroughpractice.
22.Sometimes,praiseandunderstandingarewearebadlyinneedof,especiallywhenweareintrouble.
23.Westronglybelievethatoursocietywillbefullofloveandharmonyaslongaswe….
24.Nodoubt,therapidprogressinscienceandtechnologybenefitsusalotinavarietyofaspects.
25.Itistruethaton-lineeducationhasbroughtusalotofbenefitsanditsadvantagesareobviousandcanbelistedasfollows;Tobeginwith,…besides…,mostimportantly,…
26.However,peopleholddifferentopinionsaboutA.Somearguethat….whileothersmaintainthat…
27.Ontheotherhand,thesocialpracticeoffersusachancetoknowmoreaboutourselves.
28.Comparedwithtraditionteaching,creativeteachinghasmanyuniqueadvantages.
29.Wecancometotheconclusionthat…
30.Theextensionandapplicationofadvancedagriculturaltechnologyhavegreatlycontributedtothedevelopmentofmodernagriculture,whichmakesitpossibleforustoimprovethelifethefarmers.
31.Themajorreasonsforsuchaproblemcanbebrieflylistedasfollows.
32.Inorderto…..,someeffectivemeasuresmustbetakento….
33.Fromtheperspectiveofindividualgrowth,bothfamilyandsocietywillhaveaprofoundinfluenceonthem.
34.Thechildrenintheruralareashavebeendeprivedoftherightstoreceiveeducationduetopoverty.
35.Courageandgoodpreparationwilldeterminewhetherwecanfacethenewchallengesornot.
36.Thestatisticspresentedhereprovedthatthisisaphenomenonwhichdeservesourattention.
37.Theouterspaceexplorationwillenableustoknowmoreabouttheuniverse,whichwillhaveapositiveeffectonthepeacefuluseoftheresourcesonotherplanets.
38.Thefrequentcommunicationamonguswillgreatlycontributetoourmutualunderstanding.
39.Takinguppart-timejobwillenrichourcampuslife.
40.Itisestimatedthatthetimespentonsportsamountsto10hoursaweek.
41.Thegapdoesexistbetweencityandcountryside.
42.Now,wearefacedwithaseriousproblemrelatedtothesurvivalofourhumanbeings.
43.Howtohandlethisproblem?
Severalfactors,Ithink,mustbetakenintoconsideration.
44.Whenitcomesto…
45.Withaviewto….,weshould…..
46.Itishardtoimaginewhatourlifewouldbelikewithoutenergy.
47.TheinvestigationmadebyWHOrevealedthatbirdfluposesathreattooursurvival.
48.Weshouldlaunchaworldwidecampaigntobringthespreadofbirdfluundercontrol.
49.Itcanbepredictedthattheglobaltemperaturewillcontinuetoriseduetothegreenhouseeffect.
50.Moreandmorepeoplecometorealizethathonestyismoreimportantinthemarketeconomy.
51.Thosewhogiveloveandcaretothosedisabledshouldbehighlypraised.
52.Itisimportanttotranslatethebookknowledgeintoability.
53.Thepeople’sopinionsabout…varyfrompersontoperson.
54.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlife.
55.Theshortageofresourcesisaninevitableresultofoverpopulation.
56.Accordingtothistable,wecanseethatChinahasexperiencedanalarmingincreaseinpopulationinthepastfewyears.
57.Recently,thisphenomenonhasarousedwideconcern.
58.Itisadvisabletoattachgreatimportancetolanguagestudy.
58.Readingisbeneficialtousinmanyrespects.
59.Theprivatecarsmakeourlifecomfortableandconvenientthanbefore.
60.Self-confidenceiscrucialtooursuccess.
(2)图表图画必备
1.Let’stakeacloserlookatthetwopictures.Theoneontheleftshowsthat…,whereastheoneontherightillustrates…
2.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatdrawingsaimatrevealingacommonproblemintheworld:
howto…
3.Asisdescribed/portrayed/illustrated/showninthepicture,manypeoplenowadaysliketo….
4.Whatdoestheauthorreallywanttotellus?
Inmyopinion,hisrealimplicationisthateveryonehastomeetdifficultiesintheirlifeexperiences.
5.Thepurposeofthepicturesistowarnusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtothedecreaseofoceanresources.
6.Theideaconveyedbythecartoonisapparent:
thefinishingpointisjustanewstartingpoint.
7.Icannothelprelatingthesedrawingstoreality.Theyclearlyshowhowhumaninterpersonalrelationshipshavedeveloped.
8.Thegraphshowsthattheincidenceofviolentcrimehasinfactdroppedinmos