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与未来同行Awalkintothefuture精
与未来同行！
Awalkintothefuture!
2008年考研英语写作考前预测和串讲
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资料编辑：
王军
特别感谢：
西安人信培训学校（交大考研）考研英语辅导团队
写在前面的话：
感谢你们的目光让我有勇气迎接人生一个又一个挑战；感谢你们的笑容让我永远感恩人世间的温暖和宽容；感谢你们的忠诚让我有机会与大家一起分享语言的美丽。
我会永远以感恩的情怀去回报我的每一位学生，无论过去、现在还是未来。
我希望我所做的一切能够给你带去信心、能够让你在成功中感受幸福和满足！
让我们感谢考研，是它让我们彼此有了一次愉快的相逢和约定。
再次预祝同学们2008年考研成功！
第一部分写作要点最后提示
A:
大原则
1）写作在命题形式上相当灵活，目前总体上已放弃了机械命题，避免考生猜题、押题，每年出题都在求变，考生应该把握解题规律，掌握模式化语言，以不变应万变。
2）写作最重要的是不能跑题，在做题前列出提纲和主干来是很有必要的。
3）机械背诵范文已经不能应对新的试题设计，因此必须掌握不同文章的架构设计和精彩语言表达模式，以此构筑起文章得分“亮点”，得到评卷老师的欣赏。
4）应用文部分要掌握模式化语言，其次一定要注重内容表达的全面性和准确性，确保覆盖所有任务点。
5）图表作文的复习不能忽视。
懂得如何通过坐标和图表纵横比较、说明事实，并且从表面看到实质，了解变化反映的深层意义。
同时考生还应该掌握图表术语，比如“增长、降低、突增至……保持稳定”等一批单词和词组的表达。
6）图画作文的难点在于对图画的描述，侧重考察考生看图说话的能力，如果直接表达不清楚，就要考虑用迂回策略达到目的，但不能偏离主题。
其次要点破图画的寓意，分析背后的原因或影响，这是文章的重头戏，所以要培养对图片的敏感和逻辑思维能力。
B:
高分法宝
1）语言准确化
语言准确化主要表现为两个方面：
一是词汇准确化；二是句子准确化。
避免写病句，避免直译思维。
学生按照汉语思维直译，导致表达错误和不地道、不准确的情况非常严重。
2）用词多样化
比如说图画作文，我们会用到show,我们也可以说reveals,indicates,illustrates等等。
再比如“认为”，我们可以说think,也可以说hold,maintain,insistthat。
表达“越来越”不要老说moreandmore，还可以用agrowingnumberof…,aconsiderablenumberof，ontherise等。
句子的多样化主要为以下五个方面：
1）句子开头多样化
2）主语多样化
3）定语多样化
4）短句变长句。
5）强调和倒装。
3）结构清晰化
结构清晰化就是要求考生把主题句写在段首，自然段中，句子与句子之间要注意过渡词汇的使用。
分析原因或者列举段落我们提倡“条理原则”，即要经常说首先，其次，然后，最后。
比如，首先：
to（begin/start）with/firstandforemost/mostimportantofall;其次：
then,furthermore,moreover,what’smore,inaddition,besides;最后：
lastbutnotleast,finally。
如果是讲两种人或两种情况，可以ontheonehand,ontheotherhand或foronething,foranother。
4）内容简单化
考研作文是为了考察考生的英语语言表达能力，所以切记不用把内容想得过于复杂，复杂内容用英文表达的难度就会大大提高，所以关键我想说的话通过一定的逻辑联系表达清楚即可。
C:
语言表达技巧
1.Challenges,tosomeextent,areconsideredtobeatestfortheyoungpeople.（简单句中加上插入语）
2.Toacertainextent,goodmannersareindispensabletotheharmoniousrelationshipamongus.（简单句前面加上程度状语）
3.Seeingsuchapicture,wecannothelpsaying…（简单句前面加上分词短语）
4.Withconfidenceandcourage,weareabletofacevariouschallenges,overcomevariousdifficulties,andevensurpassourselves.（排比句型增加句子可读性）
5.Agoodcaseinpointisthosescientistswhohavegivenupmanythingssuchascomfortablelife,decentposition,evenhighsalaryforthesuccessfullaunchofShenZhouVI.（举例子方法）
6.Accordingtoarecentsurveymadeby…..,70%oftheyoungpeopleacrossthecountryaresufferingfromthepsychologicalproblem.（列数据方法）
7.Withtheriseofthepeople’slivingstandardinrecentyears,thedesiresforthemateriallifeisbecomingstrongerthanbefore,whichmakesitpossiblefortheconsumptiontoincrease.（非限制定语从句的方法）
8.Theindividualgrowthisusuallythefirstfactortobeconsidered,butitisnotthemostimportantone.Themostimportantaspectofthephenomenonhasmuchtodowiththefutureofournation.Itisinthisaspectthatwefindqualityeducationmustbecarriedoutinordertoproducethequalifiedpersonnelsforthesociety.（经典升华段）
9.Basically,whatreallymattersisourcourageandconfidencetofacethosedifficulties.（主语从句表达评论或现象）
10.Thereisnodenyingthatautomobilesareindicationsofcivilization,progressanddevelopment;nevertheless,automobilescausetheseriousproblemofairpollution.（名词性从句引出观点）
11.Onlyinthiswaycanweachievethebalancebetweenhumanbeingsandnature.（倒装句表达）
12.Withpropermeasures,thisproblemcanbetackled.（介词效果）
13.Itisknowledgeandopportunitythatchangeourfates.（强调句效果）
附：
考前必备习惯表达
王军老师2008考研英语写作核心必备+必背得分句
（1）大作文必备
1.Energycrisisisbecomingmoreseriousthaneverbefore,especiallyinthebigcities.
2.Creatingaharmonioussocietyisoffar-reachingsignificancetoournation.
3.Toreversethecurrentsituation,honestyshouldbeadvocatedinthemodernsociety.
4.Participatinginvolunteers’activitieswillgreatlyenrichourcampuslife.
5.IliketowatchTVverymuchbecauseitisinformative,educationalandentertaining.
6.Weconsideritnecessarytobehaveourselvesinthepublicplaces.
7.Asfarascollegestudentsareconcerned,weshouldconcentrateonstudy.
8.Onlyinthiswaycanweadaptourselvestorapiddevelopmentofthemodernsociety
9.ItistruethattheopeningpolicyhasresultedinapositiveeffectonChina’seconomicdevelopmentthereyears.
10.Onlythosewhoareequippedwiththebasicskillstosurviveinthefiercecompetitionwillbemorelikelytohaveapromisingfuture.
11.Thequalityoftheproductshasbeenconsiderablyimprovedduetotheapplicationofscienceandtechnology,which,tosomeextent,hasincreasedthecompetitivenessofthedomesticallymadeproducts.
12.Suchsocialphenomenoncanbefoundeverywhere,whichinthelongrunhasresultedinthegreateconomiclosses.
13.What’simportantistocombinewhatwehavelearnedfrombookstothesocialpractice.
14.Thewasteproblemshasarisenalongwiththeimprovementofthemateriallife,suchas…
15.Obviously,weshouldarousepeople’sawarenessofdevelopinggoodlivinghabitofthrift.
16.Itisanundeniablefactthatone’sattitudetowardslifeiscloselyassociatedwithhisfuturedevelopment.
17.Weshouldattachgreatimportancetotheenvironmentalprotectionandtheglobalsustainabledevelopment.
18.Understandingoneselfcorrectlyplaysavitalroleinattainingone’sgoals.
19.Asfortheyoung,weshouldhaveanoptimisticandpositiveattitudetowardsfuture.
20.Toacertainextent,weshouldattributethesuccesstoourconstanteffortsandstrongdetermination
21.Weshouldbeawareoftheimportanceofbroadeningourviewthroughpractice.
22.Sometimes,praiseandunderstandingarewearebadlyinneedof,especiallywhenweareintrouble.
23.Westronglybelievethatoursocietywillbefullofloveandharmonyaslongaswe….
24.Nodoubt,therapidprogressinscienceandtechnologybenefitsusalotinavarietyofaspects.
25.Itistruethaton-lineeducationhasbroughtusalotofbenefitsanditsadvantagesareobviousandcanbelistedasfollows；Tobeginwith,…besides…,mostimportantly,…
26.However,peopleholddifferentopinionsaboutA.Somearguethat….whileothersmaintainthat…
27.Ontheotherhand,thesocialpracticeoffersusachancetoknowmoreaboutourselves.
28.Comparedwithtraditionteaching,creativeteachinghasmanyuniqueadvantages.
29.Wecancometotheconclusionthat…
30.Theextensionandapplicationofadvancedagriculturaltechnologyhavegreatlycontributedtothedevelopmentofmodernagriculture,whichmakesitpossibleforustoimprovethelifethefarmers.
31.Themajorreasonsforsuchaproblemcanbebrieflylistedasfollows.
32.Inorderto…..,someeffectivemeasuresmustbetakento….
33.Fromtheperspectiveofindividualgrowth,bothfamilyandsocietywillhaveaprofoundinfluenceonthem.
34.Thechildrenintheruralareashavebeendeprivedoftherightstoreceiveeducationduetopoverty.
35.Courageandgoodpreparationwilldeterminewhetherwecanfacethenewchallengesornot.
36.Thestatisticspresentedhereprovedthatthisisaphenomenonwhichdeservesourattention.
37.Theouterspaceexplorationwillenableustoknowmoreabouttheuniverse,whichwillhaveapositiveeffectonthepeacefuluseoftheresourcesonotherplanets.
38.Thefrequentcommunicationamonguswillgreatlycontributetoourmutualunderstanding.
39.Takinguppart-timejobwillenrichourcampuslife.
40.Itisestimatedthatthetimespentonsportsamountsto10hoursaweek.
41.Thegapdoesexistbetweencityandcountryside.
42.Now,wearefacedwithaseriousproblemrelatedtothesurvivalofourhumanbeings.
43.Howtohandlethisproblem?
Severalfactors,Ithink,mustbetakenintoconsideration.
44.Whenitcomesto…
45.Withaviewto….,weshould…..
46.Itishardtoimaginewhatourlifewouldbelikewithoutenergy.
47.TheinvestigationmadebyWHOrevealedthatbirdfluposesathreattooursurvival.
48.Weshouldlaunchaworldwidecampaigntobringthespreadofbirdfluundercontrol.
49.Itcanbepredictedthattheglobaltemperaturewillcontinuetoriseduetothegreenhouseeffect.
50.Moreandmorepeoplecometorealizethathonestyismoreimportantinthemarketeconomy.
51.Thosewhogiveloveandcaretothosedisabledshouldbehighlypraised.
52.Itisimportanttotranslatethebookknowledgeintoability.
53.Thepeople’sopinionsabout…varyfrompersontoperson.
54.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlife.
55.Theshortageofresourcesisaninevitableresultofoverpopulation.
56.Accordingtothistable,wecanseethatChinahasexperiencedanalarmingincreaseinpopulationinthepastfewyears.
57.Recently,thisphenomenonhasarousedwideconcern.
58.Itisadvisabletoattachgreatimportancetolanguagestudy.
58.Readingisbeneficialtousinmanyrespects.
59.Theprivatecarsmakeourlifecomfortableandconvenientthanbefore.
60.Self-confidenceiscrucialtooursuccess.
（2）图表图画必备
1.Let’stakeacloserlookatthetwopictures.Theoneontheleftshowsthat…,whereastheoneontherightillustrates…
2.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatdrawingsaimatrevealingacommonproblemintheworld:
howto…
3.Asisdescribed/portrayed/illustrated/showninthepicture,manypeoplenowadaysliketo….
4．Whatdoestheauthorreallywanttotellus?
Inmyopinion,hisrealimplicationisthateveryonehastomeetdifficultiesintheirlifeexperiences.
5．Thepurposeofthepicturesistowarnusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtothedecreaseofoceanresources.
6．Theideaconveyedbythecartoonisapparent:
thefinishingpointisjustanewstartingpoint.
7．Icannothelprelatingthesedrawingstoreality.Theyclearlyshowhowhumaninterpersonalrelationshipshavedeveloped.
8．Thegraphshowsthattheincidenceofviolentcrimehasinfactdroppedinmos
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