考研英语写作大作文课堂练习演示.docx

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考研英语写作大作文课堂练习演示

Exercise1

Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould

1）describethedrawingbriefly,

2）interpretthephenomenonitreflects,andthen

3）giveyourcomments.

【第一段】

简要描述，引向主题

图片总体描述有关细节描述总结引向主题

【第二段】

点明寓意，充分拓展：

例证，正反论证，因果分析，权威数据，名言哲理……

1.大众观点质疑例证结论（分析）

2.哲理名言根据本文主旨进行解释论证结论

3.灵活提出论点；灵活运用修辞。

【第三段】

针对上文，有效评论

建议（个人，社会）；态度

1.个人建议

他人帮助：

他人鼓励、帮助、建议

自身改变：

自我训练（真确认识困难，正确认识自我）

Howtostepoutoftheshadow?

Thevastmajorityholdthatthebestpolicyistoconsulttoanexpertorseniorwhenoneisconfusedorbewildered.Thatisaway,butadvicesfromothersarenotalwaysapplicableorsuitabletotheconfusedguy.Evenworse,suggestionsfromothersarenotalwaysavailableanytime.Actually,afeasibleapproachisasfollows:

toweighthenegativesandpositives,tomakesurewhatisthesolepurpose,tomakeadecisionconformingtotheneeds,andtobepreparedfortheside-effect.

Toweighthedifficultiesconfrontus,toassessourabilityreasonably,andtomaximizethevalueofwhatwecando!

Thisisarightwaytowardsuccess,andawaytoeliminateoffeelingofinadequacy.

2002

贵阳

800黄

Poe坡

TheroadI’dnottaken

2.社会建议

外控：

passive

Correspondinglawsandregulationsshouldbelaidout…..

Finesandotherpunishment（penalties）shouldbeputintopractice….

Governmentalinterventionshouldbeactivatedtodirectthisphenomenonintoapositivesituation.

Mediasupervisionshouldbecastonthismattertohaveacontroloverit.

内控：

theinnermostcontrol

Theawarenessof…shouldbecultivatedamong….

Thevalueof…shouldbebroughthometo…..

Theabilityofself-disciplineover…shouldbenurturedamong….

【庸俗版本】

Asaconsequence,itisimperativeforustoworkoutconcretesolutionstothisproblemofeco-destruction.Thereareatleasttwopossiblewaystodealwithit.Thefirstwaytotackleitistoappealtodepartmentconcernedtocastinterventiononthistrend.Anotherpolicythatisworthadoptingistolayoutlawsandregulationstocontrolthismisconduct.Inaggregate,theearthisourhomeandwehavethedutytotakecareofit,……

Inviewoftheseriousnessoftheproblem,effectivemeasuresshouldbeadoptedbeforethinggetworse,ofwhichthemosturgentoneistomakepeopleawareofharmofthisbehavior.Aslongaseveryofusrealizesthevalueof….,wecandefinitelyovercomethisdifficulty.

【启蒙版本】

Howtoputthisproblemofeco-destructionundercontrol?

Itoccurstomanythattheeffectivepolicyittobanitbylegalmean,governmentalintervention,orheavypunishment.Thatisaway,butthismechanismisonlyapassiveway,isatimeconsumingprocess,andonlyworksonextremecases.Actuallyanapplicableapproach,whichmayfundamentallysolvethisproblem,istocultivatethegeneralpublictheawareness,bymass-media,byschooleducationorbyfamilycultivation,thattheplanetearthisouronlyhome,soitisourdutytotakecareofit.Thisawarenesswillsparkthefireofanti-environment-destructioncampaign.amongpeople.

【主动版本】

Thisproblemcanbeputundercontrolwiththecombinationofinterventionfromdepartmentconcerned,legalmeans,and,morethananything,self-discipline.Currently,properpenaltiesandcorrespondinglawsandregulationshavebeenputintopractice,withfruitfulreward.However,iftherewerealsothegeneralawarenessthattheplanetearthisoutonlyhomeandtheresourcesonitisactuallyindeedlimited,whichrequiresourself-disciplineonover-miningorover-exploring,thisdelinquencywouldbeputtoanend.

【高尚版本】

Astocountermeasurestothisproblem,itoccurstothevastmajoritythatgovernmentalinterventionandlegalrestrictioncanbecountedasapackagedeal.Butisthatcomprehensiveenoughtoputanendtothisdelinquency?

Actually,thatismerelyapassiveway!

Whatwereallyneedissomeinnermostchanges,self-disciplineforone.Weretheregeneralawarenessthatresourcesonearthisindeedlimited,andweshouldrestrictourdesiretooverexploitthem,thisdelinquencywouldbeputtoanend.

3.风尚态度

大众支持态度个人长远、深远看法

Begoodtothesociety

Bebeneficialto….

Neitherelevatingnorpoisonous.

Astoattitudetothisphenomenon,themajorityofusclingtotheideathatmutualassistancewilldefinitelybeelevatingtooursociety.Actually,thisescalatingeffectwillnotlastformerelyseveralyears.Asthisvirtueisavaluableassetofournation,wearewillingtohanditovertoourdescendants,whiletheywilldeliveritfromoneindividualtoanother,fromonedecadetoanother,andfromonegenerationtoanother.

YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.（20points）

学生的对联

简要描述，引向主题

图片总体描述有关细节描述总结引向主题

Emergingfromthecartoonisanironicscesethatcoupletpastedbystudentsmirrorstheirattitudetowardcollegeexaminations.Thefirstlinereads“therewouldbenoupgradewithoutcheatinginexamination”,whilethesecondlinebears“theypreferpassingtheteststogainingdignity”.Absurdly,thehorizontalhangingscrollsummarizestheiridea:

regardlessofthevirtueofhonesty,theyaredeterminedtopassexaminationsbyanymeans.

大众观点质疑例证结论（分析）

“Noothergroupscanbefoundtobemorehonestthancollegestudents”,whichisholdbythevastmajority.Butisthatthecaseanymore?

Actually,someacuteproblemshavearisen.Thispictureprovidesuswithanopportunitytohaveabetterinsightintothemisconductsamongstudents.Tonameonlyafew,itisnotsurprisingtoseesomecandidatesdeliveringnotesormakinggesturesduringexaminations.Equally,itisnotuncommontofindsomeofthemtakingadvantageofmobilephonestotransmitkeys.Evidently,studentsinmountingnumbersnolongercherishthevirtueofhonesty,eitherforfirececompetitionorforlazinessinthemselves,seekingsoundscoresbyanymeans.

Exercise3

Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould

1）describethedrawingbriefly,

2）explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen

3）giveyourcomments.

YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.（20points）

ThedreamofaBird

Abirdishidinginthebush,isholdingagun,andislookingatthesky.

Thebirdwanttoshootpeople（healsowantstobeahunter）

Peopleareflyinginthesky

图片总体描述有关细节描述总结引向主题

Depictedbythiscartoonisanalarmingscenariothatabird,holdingagunandhidingoutinthebush,isstaringattheskywherehumanbeingsaresoaring.Obviously,heislongingforadaywhenbecomesahuntershootingpeopleforfun.Undoubtedly,whatheimaginesiswhathewasexposedto.

【版本一】

“Nootherageslaymoreamphasisonenvronmentprotectionthantoday”,whichisholdbythevastmajority.Butareweofferingasatisfyinganswertothepublicconerningecologicalbalancecurrently?

Actually,someacuteproblemsareprevailing.Thispictureprovidesuswithanopportunitytohaveabetterinsightintothemisconductsamongthegeneralpublic.Tonameonlyafew,itisnotsurprisingtoseesomefolksshootingwildlifeforfun,cookingthemforfood,andevensellingthemforprofit.Equally,itisnotuncommontofindthatsomewealthyguysviewitanhonortotreattheirfriendstoawilddishbanquet.Evidently,peopleinmountingnumbersnolongercherishtheawarenessofenvironmentalprotection,seekinginstantsatisfactionatthecostoflong-termbenefitofhuman.

【版本二】

Theimplicationofthiscartooncanbesummarizedasamottoinourdailylife:

whatwedowiththenatureistobeansweredfor.Simplyputit,totakecareofnaturalresourcesistotakecareofourselvesandourdescendants.Thereisnodenyingthatwewillconsumesomeresourceforsurvival,forfun,andfordevelopment.Unfortunately,someofushavegonetoanextreme,regardlessofthesustainabilityoftheseresources.Theyaresogreedythatmaysacrificelong-termprofitforcurrentcontent.

【版本三】

Ignore

Neglect

Discard

Shrugoff

Waveaside

Conceivedinthisscenarioisamotto:

itisourdutytogetonwellwiththenature.However,someofushaveshruggeditoff!

Arethereanyothercasesmoreconvincingthanthefollowingonestoexemplifythistrend?

Haven’tyoueverseenanyoneover-huntingforhugeprofitregardlessoftheeco-balance?

Haven’tyouevernoticedsomeofusover-miningwithgeographicdisastersrecurring?

Wherehastheirsenseofresponsibilitygone?

Wherehasthereinsightoffuturegone?

Wherehastheoutlookofsustainabledevelopmentgone?

Theyhavebeenswallowedbyourgreediness.

Wherehavealltheflowersgone?

DogVille《狗镇》

Thefollowingcasesarefamiliarandconvincing.

Toillustrate,……

Casestoprovethispointarewithineasyreach.

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Exercise4

Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould

1）describethedrawingbriefly,

2）explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen

3）giveyourcomments.

Amaniswalkingbackandforth.

→=choices,options,dirctions

Wonder/beperplexed/bewildered

反问引入主题图片信息总结

Haveyoueverbeentrappedindilemmaordelicatesituation?

Ifso,youmayfeelthesorrowasthemandepictedinthiscartoon:

facingseveraldirections,perplexedlyandnervously,theguyiswalkingbackandforth,wonderingwheretogo.Meanwhile,thecaptionisremindinghim,aswellasallofus,thatforthosewhoareindecisive,whattheysufferfromislessadversitythanchoice.

哲理名言根据本文主旨进行解释论证结论

Theimplicationofthiscartooncanbesummarizedasaphilosophictopicinourdailylife:

bettertryingthancrying.Simplyputit,infaceofseeminglydelicatechoices,weshouldbettermarchforwarddecisivelythanhesitate.Thereisnodenyingthatwewillinevitablyrunupagainstdilemma,whichrequirespondering.However