考研英语写作大作文课堂练习演示.docx

1、考研英语写作大作文课堂练习演示Exercise 1Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) interpret the phenomenon it reflects, and then3) give your comments.【第一段】简要描述，引向主题图片总体描述有关细节描述总结引向主题【第二段】点明寓意，充分拓展：例证，正反论证，因果分析，权威数据，名言哲理1. 大众观点质疑例证结论（

2、分析）2. 哲理名言根据本文主旨进行解释论证结论3. 灵活提出论点；灵活运用修辞。【第三段】针对上文，有效评论建议（个人，社会）；态度1. 个人建议他人帮助：他人鼓励、帮助、建议自身改变：自我训练（真确认识困难，正确认识自我）How to step out of the shadow? The vast majority hold that the best policy is to consult to an expert or senior when one is confused or bewildered. That is a way, but advices from others

3、are not always applicable or suitable to the confused guy. Even worse, suggestions from others are not always available anytime. Actually, a feasible approach is as follows: to weigh the negatives and positives, to make sure what is the sole purpose, to make a decision conforming to the needs, and t

4、o be prepared for the side-effect. To weigh the difficulties confront us, to assess our ability reasonably, and to maximize the value of what we can do! This is a right way toward success, and a way to eliminate of feeling of inadequacy. 2002贵阳800黄Poe 坡The road Id not taken2. 社会建议外控：passiveCorrespon

5、ding laws and regulations should be laid out .Fines and other punishment (penalties) should be put into practice.Governmental intervention should be activated to direct this phenomenon into a positive situation. Media supervision should be cast on this matter to have a control over it. 内控：the innerm

6、ost controlThe awareness of should be cultivated among .The value of should be brought home to .The ability of self-discipline over should be nurtured among .【庸俗版本】As a consequence, it is imperative for us to work out concrete solutions to this problem of eco-destruction. There are at least two poss

7、ible ways to deal with it. The first way to tackle it is to appeal to department concerned to cast intervention on this trend. Another policy that is worth adopting is to lay out laws and regulations to control this misconduct. In aggregate, the earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of

8、 it, In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures should be adopted before thing get worse, of which the most urgent one is to make people aware of harm of this behavior. As long as every of us realizes the value of ., we can definitely overcome this difficulty. 【启蒙版本】How to put thi

9、s problem of eco-destruction under control? It occurs to many that the effective policy it to ban it by legal mean, governmental intervention, or heavy punishment. That is a way, but this mechanism is only a passive way, is a time consuming process, and only works on extreme cases. Actually an appli

10、cable approach, which may fundamentally solve this problem, is to cultivate the general public the awareness, by mass-media, by school education or by family cultivation, that the planet earth is our only home, so it is our duty to take care of it. This awareness will spark the fire of anti-environm

11、ent-destruction campaign. among people. 【主动版本】This problem can be put under control with the combination of intervention from department concerned, legal means, and, more than anything, self-discipline. Currently, proper penalties and corresponding laws and regulations have been put into practice, w

12、ith fruitful reward. However, if there were also the general awareness that the planet earth is out only home and the resources on it is actually indeed limited, which requires our self-discipline on over-mining or over-exploring, this delinquency would be put to an end. 【高尚版本】As to countermeasures

13、to this problem, it occurs to the vast majority that governmental intervention and legal restriction can be counted as a package deal. But is that comprehensive enough to put an end to this delinquency? Actually, that is merely a passive way! What we really need is some innermost changes, self-disci

14、pline for one. Were there general awareness that resources on earth is indeed limited, and we should restrict our desire to over exploit them, this delinquency would be put to an end. 3. 风尚态度大众支持态度个人长远、深远看法Be good to the societyBe beneficial to .Neither elevating nor poisonous.As to attitude to this

15、 phenomenon, the majority of us cling to the idea that mutual assistance will definitely be elevating to our society. Actually, this escalating effect will not last for merely several years. As this virtue is a valuable asset of our nation, we are willing to hand it over to our descendants, while th

16、ey will deliver it from one individual to another, from one decade to another, and from one generation to another. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)学生的对联简要描述，引向主题图片总体描述有关细节描述总结引向主题Emerging from the cartoon is an ironic scese that couplet pasted by students mirrors their attitude

17、 toward college examinations. The first line reads “there would be no upgrade without cheating in examination”, while the second line bears “they prefer passing the tests to gaining dignity”. Absurdly, the horizontal hanging scroll summarizes their idea: regardless of the virtue of honesty, they are

18、 determined to pass examinations by any means. 大众观点质疑例证结论（分析） “No other groups can be found to be more honest than college students”, which is hold by the vast majority. But is that the case anymore? Actually, some acute problems have arisen. This picture provides us with an opportunity to have a be

19、tter insight into the misconducts among students. To name only a few, it is not surprising to see some candidates delivering notes or making gestures during examinations. Equally, it is not uncommon to find some of them taking advantage of mobile phones to transmit keys. Evidently, students in mount

20、ing numbers no longer cherish the virtue of honesty, either for firece competition or for laziness in themselves, seeking sound scores by anymeans. Exercise 3Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intend

21、ed meaning, and then3) give your comments.You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)The dream of a BirdA bird is hiding in the bush, is holding a gun, and is looking at the sky.The bird want to shoot people(he also wants to be a hunter) People are flying in the sky图片总体描述有关细节描述总结引向主题Depic

22、ted by this cartoon is an alarming scenario that a bird, holding a gun and hiding out in the bush, is staring at the sky where human beings are soaring. Obviously, he is longing for a day when becomes a hunter shooting people for fun. Undoubtedly, what he imagines is what he was exposed to. 【版本一】 “N

23、o other ages lay more amphasis on envronment protection than today”, which is hold by the vast majority. But are we offering a satisfying answer to the public conerning ecological balance currently? Actually, some acute problems are prevailing. This picture provides us with an opportunity to have a

24、better insight into the misconducts among the general public. To name only a few, it is not surprising to see some folks shooting wild life for fun, cooking them for food, and even selling them for profit. Equally, it is not uncommon to find that some wealthy guys view it an honor to treat their fri

25、ends to a wild dish banquet. Evidently, people in mounting numbers no longer cherish the awareness of environmental protection, seeking instant satisfaction at the cost of long-term benefit of human.【版本二】The implication of this cartoon can be summarized as a motto in our daily life: what we do with

26、the nature is to be answered for. Simply put it, to take care of natural resources is to take care of ourselves and our descendants. There is no denying that we will consume some resource for survival, for fun, and for development. Unfortunately, some of us have gone to an extreme, regardless of the

27、 sustainability of these resources. They are so greedy that may sacrifice long-term profit for current content.【版本三】IgnoreNeglectDiscardShrug offWave asideConceived in this scenario is a motto: it is our duty to get on well with the nature. However, some of us have shrugged it off! Are there any oth

28、er cases more convincing than the following ones to exemplify this trend? Havent you ever seen anyone over-hunting for huge profit regardless of the eco-balance? Havent you ever noticed some of us over-mining with geographic disasters recurring? Where has their sense of responsibility gone? Where ha

29、s there insight of future gone? Where has the outlook of sustainable development gone? They have been swallowed by our greediness. Where have all the flowers gone?Dog Ville 狗镇The following cases are familiar and convincing. To illustrate, Cases to prove this point are within easy reach. .Exercise 4W

30、rite an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) give your comments.A man is walking back and forth. = choices, options, dirctionsWonder / be perplexed / bewildered 反问引入主题图片信息总结Have you

31、 ever been trapped in dilemma or delicate situation? If so, you may feel the sorrow as the man depicted in this cartoon: facing several directions, perplexedly and nervously, the guy is walking back and forth, wondering where to go. Meanwhile, the caption is reminding him, as well as all of us, that

32、 for those who are indecisive, what they suffer from is less adversity than choice.哲理名言根据本文主旨进行解释论证结论The implication of this cartoon can be summarized as a philosophic topic in our daily life: better trying than crying. Simply put it, in face of seemingly delicate choices, we should better march forward decisively than hesitate. There is no denying that we will inevitably run up against dilemma, which requires pondering. However