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各地期末考试英语短文改错汇编二
1.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:
在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:
把多佘的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:
在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Afterschool,IwasabouttoenterintomyapartmentwhenIsawalittledirtydogliebesidethedustbin.Helookedextremelyweak.Immediatelythehomelessdogfilledmeofsympathy.SoIdecidedtotakehimhome.Igavehimsomefoodandabath.Afterthebathhelookedenergyandrefreshed.Whatalovelydog!
Whenmyparentsgothome,IaskedthatIcouldkeepthedog.Tomysurprisedandjoy,theyagreed.Uptonow,hehasbecomememberofourfamilyandeveryonehadenjoyedhiscompany.Lookedatthecuteandhappydogtoday,IrealizethatIwasrighttohelphim.Iofferedhimashelterandhebroughtourselvesgreathappinessandlaughter.
答案及解析:
1.
Afterschool,Iwasabouttoenterin﹨tomyapartmentwhenIsawalittledirtydoglie
lying
besidethedustbin.Helookedextremelyweak.Immediatelythehomelessdogfilledmeof
with
sympathy.SoIdecidedtotakehimhome.Igavehimsomefoodandabath.Afterthebathhe
lookedenergyandrefreshed.Whatalovelydog!
energetic
Whenmyparentsgothome,IaskedthatIcouldkeepthedog.Tomysurprisedandjoy,
if/whethersurprise
theyagreed.Uptonow,hehasbecome∧memberofourfamilyandeveryonehadenjoyed
ahas
hiscompany.Lookedatthecuteandhappydogtoday,IrealizethatIwasrighttohelphim.I
Looking
offeredhimashelterandhebroughtourselvesgreathappinessandlaughter.
2.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:
在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:
把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:
在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Inthetwoclassthismorning,ourphysicsteacheranalyzedthehardproblemforu8andthengaveusthekeytoit.Whilethekeyseemedalittleunreasonable,nooneandIdoubtedit.Thinkinghiskeywascontroversial,Idevotedmetotheproblemheartandsoul,tryingtofigureitoutinadifferentlyway.Twentyminuteslate,Isucceededinfinding,inmyopinions,therightkey.WhenIexplainedhimmythought,hepraisedmeandsaidIwasright.
ThroughthismatterIhadlearntthatquestioningisverymuchimportantontheroadtothetruth.
答案及解析:
2.
Inthetwoclassthismorning,ourphysicsteacheranalyzedthehardproblemforu8and
seconda
thengaveusthekeytoit.Whilethekeyseemedalittleunreasonable,nooneandIdoubtedit.
but
Thinkinghiskeywascontroversial,Idevotedmetotheproblemheartandsoul,tryingtofigureit
myself
outinadifferentlyway.Twentyminuteslate,Isucceededinfinding,inmyopinions,therightkey.differentlateropinion
WhenIexplained∧himmythought,hepraisedmeandsaidIwasright.
to
ThroughthismatterIhadlearntthatquestioningisverymuchimportantontheroadtothe
havemuch
truth.
3.
Nowadays,manyteenagersspendtoomanytimeoncomputers.Thenumberofstudentswhocometoschoolinthemorningarealreadycompletelyexhausting.Thecauseofthisisstayinglateatnightplayingcomputergamesandchatwiththeirfriendsonline.Mostofthemdon’trealizejusthowdamagingtotheirhealthythisis,letalonetheeffectithasontheirgrades.Irecentlyreadanarticleaboutthedamagethatplayingcomputergamesaredoingtokids.Thearticleclaimedforthatlotsofthegameskidsplayareextremelyharmful.Itsaidthatatbesttheyareturningteensintodullpeoplewhichhavenosociallifeandatworstintopotentialkiller!
答案及解析:
3.
Nowadays,manyteenagersspendtoomanytimeoncomputers.Thenumberofstudentswho
muchA
cometoschoolinthemorningarealreadycompletelyexhausting.Thecauseofthisisstaying∧
exhaustedup
lateatnightplayingcomputergamesandchatwiththeirfriendsonline.Mostofthemdon’trealize
chatting
justhowdamagingtotheirhealthythisis,letalonetheeffectithasontheirgrades.Irecentlyread
health
anarticleaboutthedamagethatplayingcomputergamesaredoingtokids.Thearticleclaimedfor
is去掉
thatlotsofthegameskidsplayareextremelyharmful.Itsaidthatatbesttheyareturningteens
intodullpeoplewhichhavenosociallifeandatworstintopotentialkiller!
who/thatkillers
to。
8.claimedforthat---claimedthat句意:
文章声称许多孩子的游戏是有害的。
Claimed的后面是that引导的宾语从句,故把claimedforthat---claimedthat。
9.whichhave---who/thatpeople是先行词,指人,故把whichhave---who/that。
10.killer---killers根据句意可知名词用复数形式,故把killer---killers。
【知识归纳】
表示情感的现在分词和过去分词
surprising令人惊讶的,surprised感到惊讶;frightening令人害怕的,frightened感到害怕;moving令人感动的,moved感动;exciting令人兴奋的,excited感到兴奋;boring令人厌烦的,bored感到厌烦。
现在分词的主语通常指事物;过去分词的主语通常指人。
【知识拓展】
修饰可数名词和修饰不可数名词的词
1.some和any的用法:
(1)两者修饰可数单数名词,表某一个;任何一个;修饰可数复数名词和不可数名词,表一些;有些。
〔2)一般的用法:
some用于肯定句;any用于疑问句,否定句或条件句。
Iamlookingforsomematches.Doyouhaveanymatches?
Idonothaveanymatches.(3)特殊的用法:
(A)在期望对方肯定的回答时,问句也用some。
Willyoulendmesomemoney?
(=Pleaselendmesomemoney.)(B)any表
biscuits.(=several)Hetooklittlebutter.(=notmuch)
4.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:
在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:
把多余的词用斜线(
)划掉。
修改:
在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
IhappentomeetsomeAmericantouristsatthegateoftheSummerPalacelastweek.IgreetedthemwithEnglishandthenwebegantochat.IgottoknowthattheywerecollegestudenttravellinginChina.MostofuswerefondofChinesemedicine.Theywerebusytakepicturesandweresurprisingatthechangesthathadtakenplaceinthepastfewyears.Afterthat,wewentboatandhadagoodtime.Wewereexchangedoure-mailaddressessothatwecouldwritetoeachotherinthefuture.Theythankedmeagainandagain.IwasgladlytohaveachancetopracticemyoralEnglish.Whatwonderfulexperienceitwas!
答案及解析:
4.
IhappentomeetsomeAmericantouristsatthegateoftheSummerPalacelastweek.IgreetedthemwithEnglishandthenwebegantochat.IgottoknowthattheywerecollegestudenttravellinginChina.MostofuswerefondofChinesemedicine.Theywerebusytakepicturesandweresurprisingatthechangesthathadtakenplaceinthepastfewyears.Afterthat,wewentboatandhadagoodtime.Wewereexchangedoure-mailaddressessothatwecouldwritetoeachotherinthefuture.Theythankedmeagainandagain.IwasgladlytohaveachancetopracticemyoralEnglish.Whatwonderfulexperienceitwas!
81.happen→happened
82.with→in
83.student→students
84.us→them
85.take→taking
86.surprising→surprised
87.boat→boating
88.去掉were
89.gladly→glad
90.wonderful前面加a
86.surprising→surprised.考查形容词。
surprising“令人惊讶的”一般修饰物,surprised“感到惊讶的”一般修饰人。
此处修饰They,故surprising→surprised.
87.boat→boating.考查固定短语。
goboating“去划船”是固定短语,故boat→boating.
88.去掉were.考查语态。
句中we和exchange是主动关系不是被动关系,指我们交换地址,故去掉were.
89.gladly→glad.考查形容词。
be动词后面是形容词做表语,故gladly→glad.
90.wonderful前面加a.考查冠词。
句中experience“经历”是可数名词,此处指一次很好的经历,故wonderful前面加a.
5.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两赴,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:
在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:
把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:
在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Apartfrommymother,I’vebeenveryluckytohavinghadtwoteacherswhohavebeenfundamentalinfluencesinmylife.Thefirstwasmyfirstpianoteacher.Shereallygotmeinterestinginthepianoandmadeahugeimpressioninmeataveryearlyage.Shehelpedmetolearnthebasictechniquesanddevelopunderstandingoftheinstrument.Then,whenIwas16,Istartstudyingwithmysecondinspirationalteachers.HemadememuchmoreconfidentandencouragedmetoenterforcompetitionsevenwhenIfeltcertainandunconfidentaboutdoingthis.Hehadenormousfaithinus,anditwasthis,morethananythingelse,whichinspiredmetomakemusicmycareer.
答案及解析:
5.
Apartfrommymother,I’vebeenveryluckytohavinghadtwoteacherswhohavebeen
have
fundamentalinfluencesinmylife.Thefirstwasmyfirstpianoteacher.Shereallygotmeinteresting
interested
inthepianoandmadeahugeimpressioninmeataveryearlyage.Shehelpedmetolearnthe
on
basictechniquesanddevelop∧understandingoftheinstrument.Then,whenIwas16,Istart
anstarted
studyingwithmysecondinspirationalteachers.Hemadememuchmoreconfidentand
teacher
encouragedmetoenterforcompetitionsevenwhenIfeltcertainandunconfidentaboutdoing
去掉uncertain
this.Hehadenormousfaithinus,anditwasthis,morethananythingelse,whichinspiredmeto
methat
makemusicmycareer.
86.teachers→teacher.考查名词。
根据修饰词mysecond可知名词用单数,指第二个老师。
故teachers→teacher.
87.去掉enter后的for.考查及物动词。
句中enter是及物动词后面直接加宾语,不用加介词。
故去掉enter后的for.
88.certain→uncertain.考查句意。
此处指我对参加比赛感到不确定和没信心,和and后的unconfident并列,故certain→uncertain.
89.us→me.考查代词。
与句中的主语I一致,指我参加比赛,老师对我有信心。
故us→me.
90.which→that.考查强调句。
句中包含强调句,结构为:
itwas+被强调部分+that+其他,用that引导,故which→that.
6.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:
在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:
把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:
在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadaysmillionsofpeopleofallagetakepleasureina hobbywhichisbothinterestedandfun. Andeveryyearmoreandmorepeoplestartastampcollectionofyourownanddiscoveraninterestwhichcanevenlastlifetime.Starting yourcollectionofstampswaseasybecausetheyarenowhere.Holidayandbirthdaypostcardsandletters beingsentbyyourfriendsandrelativescanprovideyouforstampsfromallover theworld.Butonceyou’vetakencollectingserious,youwillproba