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2021届高考英语模拟题之书面表达精选精析

（一）11

读后续写类25篇

（二）

1.（2020·山东潍坊市·高三月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Itwas1939,andtheGreatDepressionhadmadeallourlivesmuchharder.Butwedidn’tknowhowpoorwewereuntilourfathersatmybrotherandmedownonthecouchinourlivingroomtohaveatalk.

IwillalwaysrememberthesadlookinFather’seyesashestareddownathishands,rubbingthembackandforth,whilehesearchedforthewordstotellusthatourfamilywasn’tgoingtobecelebratingChristmasthisyear.

Amonthlater,onChristmasEve,Ilayawakeinbedlateintothenight,tryingtotalkmyselfoutofsneakingintoourlivingroomtoseeifSantahadcome.Igatheredmycourage,thentiptoeddownthehallway,hopingIwouldseethebrightsparklinglightsofourChristmastreestandingproudlyinthecornerofourlivingroom,likeitdideveryyear.

Instead,Iwasgreetedbymyseventeen-year-oldbrother,Frank,whosleptonourlivingroomcouch.“Hey,littleone,whatareyoudoingup?

”hewhispered.

Istartedtocry.“There’snoChristmastree.”

Therewouldbenopresents,nosinging,noChristmasdinner.Itfeltlikewewerethesaddestfamilyintheworld.Mydisappointmentoverwhelmedme.IlookedforwardtoChristmaseachyear.Itwasn’tonlythepresents.ItwasthatspecialfeelingIgotfromseeingmyfamilyhappy.Wehadn’tbeenhappyinsuchalongtime.

OnChristmasmorning,thesunshoneintoourchillybedroom,wakingmeup.“MaybeSantacame!

Maybehecame!

”Isuddenlyinsisted.Myeyessearchedthelivingroom,buttherewasnoChristmastree.Ibrokeintouncontrollabletears.

IrantoFatherintearsandthrewmyarmsaroundhim.“Wearen’tgoingtohaveChristmasthisyear.”

“Now,now,now,calmdown.Gooninandseeyourmother.Shewillcomfortyou.”Dadslowlypushedthebedroomdooropen,leadingmeintotheroom.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Outofthecornerofmyeye,Inoticedsomethingdifferentinthebedroom.

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Withmyquestionanswered,everythingdawnedonme.

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【答案】Outofthecornerofmyeye,Inoticedsomethingdifferentinthebedroom.“MerryChristmas,mydearestchild,”saidMomwithhertwowarmarmsholdingmegently.“Whatisthisinthesparklingbox?

Doyouwanttoknow?

”Thensheputitintomyhandsandtoldmetoopenit.ExcitedlyIuncoveredit,intheboxlayatinymusicboxwithasmallChristmastreeonit.Howwonderfulitlooked!

“ButDadtoldmethatitistheGreatDepressionnow,andwearelivingahardlife.HowcouldyougetthemoneyformyChristmasgift?

”Mothertoldmethatshehadsoldhergoldring.

Withmyquestionanswered,everythingdawnedonme.Itwasmother’struestloveforherdearestchildthatmadehersellherfavouritegoldringwhichhadaccompaniedherforalongtime.Nomotherintheworldwouldliketodisappointherchildonsuchanimportantday.IkissedMomonhercheekssayingMerryChristmastoher.Thatspecialmusicboxtaughtmealesson—nomatterhowtoughthelifeis,myfamilywouldfaceitbravelyaslongasthereisloveinourheart.

【分析】

本文以人物情感为线索展开，讲述了作者在美国经济大萧条时期家庭困难没钱买圣诞树过圣诞节的故事。

根据原文所述，作者在圣诞节早上醒来没发现一丁点的圣诞节节日迹象后开始失望地哭闹起来，谁知妈妈在卧室里像变戏法一样地送他一份圣诞节礼物，为贫困的家庭带来节日的气息。

【详解】

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“在我眼角的余光里，我发现房间里有些不一样的东西。

”可知，第一段可描写“不一样的东西”，是什么，它怎么来的以及作者情绪的细微变化。

②由第二段首句内容“我的问题得到回答后，我明白了一切。

”可知，第二段可描写作者明白了事情的真相以及得到了什么感悟，从妈妈对孩子的爱和孩子的感激之情入手。

2.续写线索：

发现不一样的东西——卖金戒指——音乐盒——提问——感激——感悟

3.词汇激活行为类

①打开：

uncoveredit/openedit

②生活艰难：

livingahardlife/livingatoughlife

③.陪伴：

accompanyher/haveitscompany/bewithher

情绪类

①.兴奋：

excitedly/thrilledly

②.勇敢：

bravely/courageously

【点睛】

[高分句型1].Thatspecialmusicboxtaughtmealesson—nomatterhowtoughthelifeis,myfamilywouldfaceitbravelyaslongasthereisloveinourheart.（nomatterhow引导的让步状语从句和aslongas引导的条件状语从句）

[高分句型2].Itwasmother’struestloveforherdearestchildthatmadehersellherfavouritegoldringwhichhadaccompaniedherforalongtime.（Itis…that…强调句，及由关系代词which引导限制性定语从句）

2.（2020·重庆北碚区·高三月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Twomonthsago,myfriendLisa,HarryandI,plannedtodosomethingadventurous,sowedecidedtoexploreadeepcaveintheoutskirtofourcitywithsomefood,water,torchesandmostimportantlyourcellphones.Butthingswerenotgoingwell.Wecouldnotfindanyvehicletodropusthere.Atlonglast,wemanagedtofindataxiwhichtookustotheoutskirtofthecity.AnotherevidenceofbadluckwasthatHarryhadlefthiscellphoneathome.

Afterwegotoutofthetaxi,someofthelocalstoldusthewaytothecave.Thecavelookedveryattractiveyetstillmysterious:

thecavewassodark,andthetinysoundsmadebytheinsectsandanimalscouldbeheardproperly,pullingusintothecavewithsomeunknownsupernaturalpower.Asweweremovingforwardwemademarksontherocksalongourpathtoremindusoftheexitofthecave.Andwealwayskeptourmobilesinswitchonmodetocontacteachotherincasewegotseparatedandevenworse,lostinthecave.

Asweweremovingforward,Harryfeltthatsomebodywasfollowingourfootstepsbuthelefthisintuitiontoajoke.Whenwereachedinthedeepofthecave,welostourwayandgraduallythefogspreadeverywhereandwewerenotabletoseeeachotherproperly.Allofusgotveryscaredofwhatwashappeningaroundus.Suddenly,wenoticedthatHarrywasnotwithusandthenwevaguelyheardashoutfromthedepthofthecaveandwethoughtitwasHarry,sowestartedsearchingforhim.Butourtorcheswereleftnouseinsuchthickfog.

续写词数应为150左右

Paragraph1:

Sowegropedourwaytowardsthedirectionoftheshout.

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Paragraph2:

AfterwereunitedwithHarry,wetriedtofindthewayout.

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【答案】Sowegropedourwaytowardsthedirectionoftheshout.Frightenedaswewere,westillmadeupourmindtosearchforHarry.Hardlycanweseeanythinginthecompletelydarksituation,sowehadtofeelourwaytosearchHarrywithallstrength.Slowlyandcautiouslymovingforward,weheldourhandstightlyinordernottobeseparated.Withthevoiceapproaching,werealizedwewouldmeetHarryimmediately.Fortunately,whenfindingHarrysittingontheground,wesighedwitharelief.

AfterwereunitedwithHarry,wetriedtofindthewayout.Withouthesitation,wedecidedtohuntforthesemarkswhichwehadmadebefore.“Igetit!

”Harryscreamed.Lookingupquickly,wefoundtheseclearmarkseasily.Itwaswiththehelpofthesemarksthatwequicklyfoundtheexit.Whenwalkingoutofthecave,weknewweweresaved.Fromthisexperience,whatwelearntwasthatitwasdangeroustoexploretheunknownwordwithoutafullydetailedplan.

【分析】

本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了作者和小伙伴们一起去探索一个位于城市郊区的山洞。

山洞里面太黑又有雾，所以Harry和我们走散了。

当听到Harry的呼救后，我们一起找到了Harry，最终逃离了山洞。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“所以我们摸索着朝着呼喊的方向走去。

”可知，第一段可描写我们是如何在山洞中寻找Harry的。

②由第二段首句内容“我们和Harry重逢后，我们试图找到出路。

”可知，第二段可描写我们利用之前所做的记号逃离山洞的过程。

2.续写线索：

听到声音——寻找Harry——找到Harry——寻找出口——逃离山洞——领悟感受

3.词类激活

行为类

①寻找：

huntfor/searchfor/find

②大叫：

scream/cry

③接近：

approach/drawnear

情感类

①小心：

cautious/careful

②害怕：

scared/frightened

【点睛】

[高分句型1].Frightenedaswewere,westillmadeupourmindtosearchforHarry.（运用了as引导让步状语从句时的倒装结构）

[高分句型2].Withouthesitation,wedecidedtohuntforthesemarkswhichwehadmadebefore（运用了which引导的限制性定语从句）

[高分句型3].Itwaswiththehelpofthesemarksthatwequicklyfoundtheexit.（运用了强调句结构）

3.（2020·沙坪坝区·重庆八中高三月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Daisy,togetherwithherfather,motherandelderbrother,happilylivedinabeautifulvillagesurroundedwithbeautifulnature.Steppingoutsidethehouse,theysawflowerssmilinginthesunshineandbutterfliesdancinginthegarden.Thefamilysurvivedongrowingseasonalplants.

Whiletheylivedaveryhappylife,Daisydidnotlovethewonderfulatmosphereofthevillage.Shereallywantedtomovetothecityandenjoytheurbanlife.Shehadafantasytogoshopping,tryonfashionabledresses,watchmovies,andeatinfancyrestaurantsandcafes.

However,therewashardlyanychancethatDaisy’sfamilywouldmovetothecityastheyhadeverythinginthevillage.Oneday,Daisyfeltasleepduringtheearlynoonandshehadasoundsleep.Ofcourse,shehadastrangedream.Shesawherdeceased（已故的）grandmotherinherdreamasafairyandhergrandmothergranted（同意给予）herawish.Daisyrequestedherthatshewouldlovetoenjoythecitylifeasshealwaysdesired.

GrandmotherunderstoodthedesireofDaisy,butstillwantedtoconvinceherthatpeacefulvillagelifewasbetterthancitylife.ShetoldDaisy,“Baby,youcannothaveaccesstofreshfruitsandvegetablesfromplantsasyouhaveatyourhome.Youcannotbreathefreshair.Youcannotplaywithanimals.Youwil