精选精析11读后续写类25篇二届高考英语模拟题之书面表达精选精析一.docx

1、精选精析11读后续写类25篇二届高考英语模拟题之书面表达精选精析一2021届高考英语模拟题之书面表达精选精析（一）11读后续写类25篇（二）1.（2020山东潍坊市高三月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was 1939, and the Great Depression had made all our lives much harder. But we didnt know how poor we were until our father sat my brother and me down on the couch in our li

2、ving room to have a talk.I will always remember the sad look in Fathers eyes as he stared down at his hands, rubbing them back and forth, while he searched for the words to tell us that our family wasnt going to be celebrating Christmas this year.A month later, on Christmas Eve, I lay awake in bed l

3、ate into the night, trying to talk myself out of sneaking into our living room to see if Santa had come. I gathered my courage, then tiptoed down the hallway, hoping I would see the bright sparkling lights of our Christmas tree standing proudly in the corner of our living room, like it did every yea

4、r.Instead, I was greeted by my seventeen-year-old brother, Frank, who slept on our living room couch. “Hey, little one, what are you doing up?” he whispered.I started to cry. “Theres no Christmas tree.”There would be no presents, no singing, no Christmas dinner. It felt like we were the saddest fami

5、ly in the world. My disappointment overwhelmed me. I looked forward to Christmas each year. It wasnt only the presents. It was that special feeling I got from seeing my family happy. We hadnt been happy in such a long time.On Christmas morning, the sun shone into our chilly bedroom, waking me up. “M

6、aybe Santa came! Maybe he came!” I suddenly insisted. My eyes searched the living room, but there was no Christmas tree. I broke into uncontrollable tears.I ran to Father in tears and threw my arms around him. “ We arent going to have Christmas this year.”“Now, now, now, calm down. Go on in and see

7、your mother. She will comfort you.” Dad slowly pushed the bedroom door open, leading me into the room.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Out of the corner of my eye, I noticed something different in the bedroom._With my question answered, everything dawned on me._【答案】Out of the corner of my eye, I

8、 noticed something different in the bedroom. “Merry Christmas, my dearest child ,”said Mom with her two warm arms holding me gently. “What is this in the sparkling box? Do you want to know?” Then she put it into my hands and told me to open it .Excitedly I uncovered it , in the box lay a tiny music

9、box with a small Christmas tree on it. How wonderful it looked! “But Dad told me that it is the Great Depression now, and we are living a hard life .How could you get the money for my Christmas gift ?” Mother told me that she had sold her gold ring .With my question answered, everything dawned on me

10、. It was mothers truest love for her dearest child that made her sell her favourite gold ring which had accompanied her for a long time. No mother in the world would like to disappoint her child on such an important day. I kissed Mom on her cheeks saying Merry Christmas to her . That special music b

11、ox taught me a lessonno matter how tough the life is , my family would face it bravely as long as there is love in our heart.【分析】本文以人物情感为线索展开，讲述了作者在美国经济大萧条时期家庭困难没钱买圣诞树过圣诞节的故事。根据原文所述，作者在圣诞节早上醒来没发现一丁点的圣诞节节日迹象后开始失望地哭闹起来，谁知妈妈在卧室里像变戏法一样地送他一份圣诞节礼物，为贫困的家庭带来节日的气息。【详解】【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“在我眼角的余光里，我发现房间里有些不一样

12、的东西。”可知，第一段可描写“不一样的东西”，是什么，它怎么来的以及作者情绪的细微变化。由第二段首句内容“我的问题得到回答后，我明白了一切。”可知，第二段可描写作者明白了事情的真相以及得到了什么感悟，从妈妈对孩子的爱和孩子的感激之情入手。2.续写线索：发现不一样的东西卖金戒指音乐盒提问感激感悟3.词汇激活行为类打开：uncovered it/opened it生活艰难：living a hard life/ living a tough life.陪伴：accompany her/ have its company/be with her情绪类.兴奋：excitedly/ thrilledly

13、.勇敢：bravely/courageously【点睛】高分句型1. That special music box taught me a lessonno matter how tough the life is , my family would face it bravely as long as there is love in our heart.（no matter how引导的让步状语从句和as long as引导的条件状语从句）高分句型2. It was mothers truest love for her dearest child that made her sell h

14、er favourite gold ring which had accompanied her for a long time.（It is that 强调句，及由关系代词which引导限制性定语从句）2.（2020重庆北碚区高三月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Two months ago, my friend Lisa, Harry and I, planned to do something adventurous, so we decided to explore a deep cave in the outskirt of our ci

15、ty with some food, water, torches and most importantly our cell phones. But things were not going well. We could not find any vehicle to drop us there. At long last, we managed to find a taxi which took us to the outskirt of the city. Another evidence of bad luck was that Harry had left his cell pho

16、ne at home.After we got out of the taxi, some of the locals told us the way to the cave. The cave looked very attractive yet still mysterious: the cave was so dark, and the tiny sounds made by the insects and animals could be heard properly, pulling us into the cave with some unknown supernatural po

17、wer. As we were moving forward we made marks on the rocks along our path to remind us of the exit of the cave. And we always kept our mobiles in switch on mode to contact each other in case we got separated and even worse, lost in the cave.As we were moving forward, Harry felt that somebody was foll

18、owing our footsteps but he left his intuition to a joke. When we reached in the deep of the cave, we lost our way and gradually the fog spread everywhere and we were not able to see each other properly. All of us got very scared of what was happening around us. Suddenly, we noticed that Harry was no

19、t with us and then we vaguely heard a shout from the depth of the cave and we thought it was Harry, so we started searching for him. But our torches were left no use in such thick fog.续写词数应为150左右Paragraph 1:So we groped our way towards the direction of the shout._Paragraph 2:After we reunited with H

20、arry, we tried to find the way out._【答案】So we groped our way towards the direction of the shout. Frightened as we were, we still made up our mind to search for Harry. Hardly can we see anything in the completely dark situation, so we had to feel our way to search Harry with all strength. Slowly and

21、cautiously moving forward, we held our hands tightly in order not to be separated. With the voice approaching, we realized we would meet Harry immediately. Fortunately, when finding Harry sitting on the ground, we sighed with a relief.After we reunited with Harry, we tried to find the way out. Witho

22、ut hesitation, we decided to hunt for these marks which we had made before. “I get it!” Harry screamed. Looking up quickly, we found these clear marks easily. It was with the help of these marks that we quickly found the exit. When walking out of the cave, we knew we were saved. From this experience

23、, what we learnt was that it was dangerous to explore the unknown word without a fully detailed plan.【分析】本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了作者和小伙伴们一起去探索一个位于城市郊区的山洞。山洞里面太黑又有雾，所以Harry和我们走散了。当听到Harry的呼救后，我们一起找到了Harry，最终逃离了山洞。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“所以我们摸索着朝着呼喊的方向走去。”可知，第一段可描写我们是如何在山洞中寻找Harry的。由第二段首句内容“我们和Harry重逢后，我们试图找到出路。”可知，第二

24、段可描写我们利用之前所做的记号逃离山洞的过程。2.续写线索：听到声音寻找Harry找到Harry寻找出口逃离山洞领悟感受3. 词类激活行为类寻找：hunt for/search for/ find大叫：scream/cry接近：approach/draw near情感类小心：cautious/ careful害怕：scared/ frightened【点睛】高分句型1. Frightened as we were, we still made up our mind to search for Harry.（运用了as引导让步状语从句时的倒装结构）高分句型2. Without hesitati

25、on, we decided to hunt for these marks which we had made before（运用了which引导的限制性定语从句）高分句型3. It was with the help of these marks that we quickly found the exit.（运用了强调句结构）3.（2020沙坪坝区重庆八中高三月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Daisy, together with her father, mother and elder brother, happily lived in a

26、 beautiful village surrounded with beautiful nature. Stepping outside the house, they saw flowers smiling in the sunshine and butterflies dancing in the garden. The family survived on growing seasonal plants. While they lived a very happy life, Daisy did not love the wonderful atmosphere of the vill

27、age. She really wanted to move to the city and enjoy the urban life. She had a fantasy to go shopping, try on fashionable dresses, watch movies, and eat in fancy restaurants and cafes.However, there was hardly any chance that Daisys family would move to the city as they had everything in the village

28、. One day, Daisy felt asleep during the early noon and she had a sound sleep. Of course, she had a strange dream. She saw her deceased (已故的) grandmother in her dream as a fairy and her grandmother granted (同意给予) her a wish. Daisy requested her that she would love to enjoy the city life as she always

29、 desired.Grandmother understood the desire of Daisy, but still wanted to convince her that peaceful village life was better than city life. She told Daisy, “Baby, you cannot have access to fresh fruits and vegetables from plants as you have at your home. You cannot breathe fresh air. You cannot play with animals. You wil