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Test3Writing

Part1

25June,2002

DearSirs,

ShuguangConsultantsGroupisorganizing’02SummerCooperationProjectsTalksatChinaGrandHotel,Beijing,from10-12Julyat9:

00July10th.Therewillbeabout1000ChineseProjectsforjointventuresattendtheopeningceremony.SincethisagreatgatheringofManufacturesandforeignenterprises,andyouaretheManagingDirectorofLondonoffice,youshouldparticipateit.

YoursSincerely

JohnSmiths

Part2

Outline:

Para.1:

whatisthemistake?

（2-3）

Para.2:

Happeningandeffects（5-7）

Para.3:

Wish/comment（1-2）

Mybigmistake

Everyonemakesmistakes.Iamofnoexception.ThemistakeImadetwoyearsagoupset/disturbedmealot.

（Toerrishuman.Toforgiveisdivine.）

Oneday,whenIwascookinginthekitchen,mydaughter,4yearsold,cameinwithoutmynotice.WhenIputthevegetableintothepot,theoilsplashedout.Iheardascreambehind.Itwasmydaughter.Shegottwoburnedscarsonthefaceandcriedaloud.Ihastenedtothehospital.Iwasanxiouswhenthedoctorwashealingtheburnedscars.Myheartachedalot.Later,shegotthepermanenthurtonherfaceandIfeltveryguiltysincethen.Itwasmycarelessnessthatcausedthehurt.

IhopethatIwon’tmakethesamemistakeagainandbecarefulinwhateverIamdoing.Itwasalastinglessonforme.

Test5

May15,2009

DearMrs.ABoyce,

Ihavereadfromthelocalnewspaperthatyouwanttohirereceptionistsforthesummermonths.Iamthepersonsuitedforthework.Iam22,female,anEnglishmajor,junior/senior.SinceIamfreeinthesummerholiday,Icanworkmorningsorevenings.

Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Thankyou!

YoursSincerely

JoanSmith

Qualifications:

Part2

LifeisMuchBetterTodayThaninthePast

Outline:

Para.1:

statethefactasthetitle.（Lifeismuchbettertodaythaninthepast,whichcanbedemonstrated/showedin/fromthefollowingthreeaspects/respects.）

Para.2.Statethethreeaspects.

1）Tobegin/startwith/Inthefirstplace,asaresultofimprovedmedicalcareandbetterlivingconditions,ourlifespan/expectancyhasbeenincreasedby5yearsinChinawithanaverageof70yearsold.）

2）Next,/Then/Inaddition/besides/Easieraccesstotheworld.（internet,transportation,globalcooperation）…

Finally/Intheend/Lastbutnottheleast,Morevariedformsofentertainmenttoenjoyoursparetime.

Para.3.Anaturalconclusion.

（Allinall,/tosumup/inshort/inbrief/inconclusion/insummary/Inaword/onthewhole）

Foronething,….Foranother,

Ononehand,….;ontheother

Test7Writing

Part2

Themostimportantsubjectsforstudents

Nowadaysyoungpeoplearesupposedtoattendschoolsandcollegestostudy.Inmyopinion,themostimportantsubjectsforthemaremathematics,ChineseandEnglish.

Tobeginwith,mathematicsmakesoneexact.（moredevelopingsentences.）

Next,it’sourdutytopreserveanddevelopourmothertongue—Chinese…..

Finally,Englishisbecominganalmostinternationallanguage.Itisindispensableinmanyfields…..

Onthewhole,asfarasIcansee,theabove-mentionedsubjectsarevitaltoyoungstudentsatschool.

Test9

Writing

Part1

Sept.4th2007

DearTonyJohns,/Tosomeoneitmayconcern,

Afterhavingreadyourletter,Icanseethatyouweresohelpfulandconsiderate.Youmadetherightchoiceandhadthegoodreasonforyourabsence.WillitbeconvenienttoyouifIarrangeournextappointmentat3p.m.nextMonday?

Pleaseconfirmwhetheryoucanmakeit.

Yourssincerely

Wang

Part2

Howcanpeoplewiselyinvestmoney

Nowadays,peoplehavemoremoneythaninthepast.Inmyeyes,theycanwiselyinvesttheirmoneyintwoways.

Foronething/Ononehand,peopleshouldinvestineducation.Itisalife-longprocess,astheproverbgoes,toliveistolearn.Nomatterwhatformstheytake,peopleshouldlearnhowtoupdate/improvetheirskillsandbroadentheirknowledgeinordertomeetthedemandsofthefast-pacedsociety.

Ontheother,peopleshouldinvestininsurance.Asthesayinggoes,misfortunebefallsapersonovernight,whoknowswhatmighthappentoustomorrow?

Therefore,wehavetosetasidepartofourearningtoinsuranceinordertosafeguard/protectusmateriallyinthelongrun.

Inaword,peoplecansensiblyinvesttheirmoneyineducationandinsurance.

Test10

Writing1

DearMr.Enright,

Iwasgladtoreceiveyourletter.ThankyouforyourhospitalityandkindnesswhilewestayedinChicago.PleasecometoChinawhenitisconvenienttoyou.

Idohopewecanhavefurthercooperationwithyouinthisfield.

LookforwardtoyourearlyvisitinChina.

Yourssincerely

LiPing

Test12

Part2

15thJuly,2004

DearMr.RichardJackson,

Accordingtoourschedule,I’dliketobookthedateson4-6September,2004.Sincetherewillbe45ofusaltogether,I’llreserve20standardroomsand5singlerooms.Icanacceptthecostoftheweekendsinyourbrochure.

Thankyou.

YoursSincerely

TonyBlacks

Part2

Publictransportisnecessary

inthefuture

Somesaythatthereisnofutureforpublictransportbecausetravelingbycarissomuchconvenient.Idon’tseeeyetoeyewith/agreewiththem.Myjustifications/reasonsareasfollows:

Ononehand,noteveryonecanaffordacar.Ineverycountry,therestillexistpoorpeople,evendisabledones.Theyneedpublictransporttogotoandfromtheirworkorgoabout.

Ontheother,toomanycarsonthestreetswillcertainlyleadtoserioustrafficjamsandairpollution.Itwouldbeimpossiblefordriverstomovearoundandforpeopletoliveahealthylife.

Inbrief,consideringbotheconomicallyandenvironmentally,Ifirmlybelievethatthereisstillagreatdemandforpublictransportinthefuture.

Test13

Part2

Areportontransportinmyarea

Accordingtomyrecentsurveyontransportinmyarea,therearethreemainmeansoftransportation—bicyclesand,busesandtaxis.Butthereisstillmuchroomtobeimproved.

Asforcyclists,therearenocyclingroadsfortheminpartsofthecity.Thegovernmentshouldseetobroadentheroadtoprotectpeoplefrompossibleaccidents.

Next,Ithinkthereshouldbeanelectronicboardateachbusstoptoindicatebusnumberandthepossibleduetime.Itwillbeofgreatconveniencetothepassengers.

Lastly,astotaxis,thetransportdepartmentshouldtrainmorequalifieddriverstoobeythetrafficrulestoreplacethoseirresponsibleonesassoonaspossible.

Test15

DearMr.Mathews,

IwasgladtoreceiveyourletterofMay25.Thankyouforyourinvitation.

Ihavebeencollectinginformationonhightechnologysincemylastpresentationanditwillbeagreathonorformetoupdateitatthiscomingannualconference.Iherebywritetoconfirmmyparticipation/attendanceatit.

YoursSincerely/Faithfully/Truthfully/Respectfully

J.Higgins

ThePurchasingManager

（Encls:

1copyofinvoice/namelist/offer

P.S.:

）

Inmyopinion/asfarasIamconcerned/Icansee/Iknow/asforme/Ithink