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1Futurism,anearlytwentieth-centurymovementinart,rejectedalltraditionsandattemptstoglorifycontemporarylifebyemphasizingthemachineandmotion.

2But,forasmallgroupofstudents,professionaltrainingmightbethewaytogosincewell-developingskills,allotherfactorsbeingequal,canbethedifferencebetweenhavingajobornot.

3Foragroupofremaininginexistence,aprofit-makingorganizationmust,inthelongrun,producessomethingconsumersconsiderusefulordesirable.

4ForaresultoftwoorthreecenturiesofscientificinvestigationwehavecometobelievethatNatureisunderstandableinthesensethatwhenweaskherquestionsbywayofappropriateobservationsandexperiments，shewillanswertrulyandrewarduswithdiscoveriesthatendure.

5Atthesametime,youngpeopleshouldbeencouragetocommunicatewiththeirpeersanddeveloptheirinterpersonalskills,whichmayhelpthemgreatlytoreducedependenceintheirparents.

6Whenanewmovementinartattainsacertainfashion,itisadvisabletofindoutwhattheiradvocatesareaimingat,for,howeverfarfetchedandunreasonabletheirprinciplesmayseemtoday,itispossiblethatinyearstocometheymayberegardedasnormal.

7Numerousothercommercialenterprises,fromtheaterstomagazinepublishers,fromgasandelectricutilitiestomilkprocessors,bringbetterandmoreefficientlyservicestoconsumersthroughtheuseofcomputers.

8TheAmericaneconomicsystemis,organizingaroundabasicallyprivate-enterprise,market-orientedeconomyinthatconsumerslargelydeterminewhatshallbeproducedbyspendingtheirmoneyinthemarketplaceforthosegoodsandservicesthattheywantmost.

9Thus,intheAmericaneconomicsystemitisthedemandofindividualconsumers,coupledwiththedesireofbusinessmentomaximizeprofitsandthedesireofindividualstomaximizetheirincomes,whichtogetherdeterminewhatshallbeproducedandhowresourcesareusedtoproduceit.

10Theindividualnowhasmoreinformationavailablethananygeneration,andthetaskoffindingthatoneinformationrelevanttohisorherspecificproblemiscomplicated,time--consuming,andsometimesevenoverwhelming.

参考答案

1Futurism,anearlytwentieth-centurymovementinart,rejectedalltraditionsandattemptstoglorifycontemporarylifebyemphasizingthemachineandmotion.

错误:

and并列连接两个谓语，应当是平行构造。

所以attempts应当改为attempted.

2But,forasmallgroupofstudents,professionaltrainingmightbethewaytogosincewell-developingskills,allotherfactorsbeingequal,canbethedifferencebetweenhavingajobornot.

错误:

培育良好的技能不是well-developing而是well-developed.

3Foragroupofremaininginexistence,aprofit-makingorganizationmust,inthelongrun,producessomethingconsumersconsiderusefulordesirable.

错误:

Foragroupofremaininginexistence应当是Foragrouptoremaininexistence.只有后者才可以做一个目的状语。

produces应当是produce，由于在插入语inthelongrun的前边有must.

4Foraresultoftwoorthreecenturiesofscientificinvestigation，wehavecometobelievethatNatureisunderstandableinthesensethatwhenweaskherquestionsbywayofappropriateobservationsandexperiments，shewillanswertrulyandrewarduswithdiscoveriesthatendure.

错误:

Foraresultof应当是Asaresultof.介词搭配不当.

5Atthesametime,youngpeopleshouldbeencouragetocommunicatewiththeirpeersanddeveloptheirinterpersonalskills,whichmayhelpthemgreatlytoreducedependenceintheirparents.

错误:

shouldbeencourage应当是shouldbeencouraged,情态动词的被动语态.dependencein应当是dependenceon,介词搭配不当.

6Whenanewmovementinartattainsacertainfashion,itisadvisabletofindoutwhattheiradvocatesareaimingat,for,howeverfarfetchedandunreasonabletheirprinciplesmayseemtoday,itispossiblethatinyearstocometheymayberegardedasnormal.

错误:

theiradvocates应当是itsadvocates.Its在这里指代的是anewmovementinart.所以不能是their.

7Numerousothercommercialenterprises,fromtheaterstomagazinepublishers,fromgasandelectricutilitiestomilkprocessors,bringbetterandmoreefficientlyservicestoconsumersthroughtheuseofcomputers.

错误:

efficientlyservices应当是efficientservices.这也是很多同学经常犯的一个错误。

副词不能修饰名词，必需得改为形容词。

8TheAmericaneconomicsystemis,organizingaroundabasicallyprivate-enterprise,market-orientedeconomyinthatconsumerslargelydeterminewhatshallbeproducedbyspendingtheirmoneyinthemarketplaceforthosegoodsandservicesthattheywantmost.

错误:

organizingaroundabasicallyprivate-enterprise应当是organizedaroundabasicallyprivate-enterprise.这里应当是过去分词来做一个伴随状语，而不应当是如今分词，由于它是主语的承受者。

inthat应当是inwhich.由于只有inwhich才能引导一个定语从句。

inwhich=where,在引导一个定语从句时，后面需要加上一个完好句。

而inthat只能引导一个状语从句=because.

9Thus,intheAmericaneconomicsystemitisthedemandofindividualconsumers,coupledwiththedesireofbusinessmentomaximizeprofitsandthedesireofindividualstomaximizetheirincomes,whichtogetherdeterminewhatshallbeproducedandhowresourcesareusedtoproduceit.

错误:

which应当是that.与前面的itis构成一个强调句型。

强调原句中的主语。

10Theindividualnowhasmoreinformationavailablethananygeneration,andthetaskoffindingthatoneinformationrelevanttohisorherspecificproblemiscomplicated,time--consuming,andsometimesevenoverwhelming.

错误:

oneinformation应当是onepieceofinformation.由于information是不行数名词，前面必需加量词修饰。

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11Whiletalkingtoyou,yourcould-beemployersisdecidingwhetheryoureducation,yourexperience,andotherqualificationswillpayhimtoemployyouandyourwaresandabilitiesmustbedisplayedinanorderlyandreasonablyconnectedmanner.

12Witheconomicgrowthhascomecentralization:

fully76percentofJapan’s119millioncitizenslivesincitieswhichcommunityandtheextendedfamilyhavebeenabandonedinfavorofisolated,tow-generationhouseholds.

13Aftersixmonthsofarguingandfinal16hoursofhotparliamentarydebates,Australia’sNorthernTerritorybecamethefirstlegalauthorityintheworldtoallowdoctorstotakethelivesofincurablyillpatientswhomwishtodie.

14Thegreatinterestinexceptionalchildrenshowninpubliceducationoverthepastthreedecadesindicatethestrongfeelinginoursocietythatallcitizens,whateverhisspecialconditions,deservetheopportunitytofullydeveloptheircapabilities.

15Yourhumormustberelevantwiththeaudienceandshouldhelptoshowthemthatyouareoneofthemorthatyouunderstandtheirsituationandareinsympathywiththeirpointofview.

16Thepeoplewhogetoninthisworldarethepeoplewhogetupandlookforcircumstancestheywant,andiftheycannotfindthem,makethem.SuchistheremarkmadebyBernardShaw,agreatwriter.Thisviewhasbeensharednowbymoreandmorepeople.

17Thecurrentpassiontomakingchildrencompeteagainsttheirclassmatesoragainsttheclockproduceatwo-layersystem,inwhichcompetitiveA-typesseeminsomewaybetterthantheirBtypefellows

18Sciencemovesforward,theysay,notsomuchthroughtheinsightsofgreatmenofgeniusasbecauseofmoreordinarythingslikeimprovingtechniquesandtools.

19Theshareholdersassuchhavenoknowledgeofthelives,thoughtsorneedsoftheworkmenemployingbythecompanyinwhichheholdshares,andhisinfluenceontherelationsofcapitalandlaborarenotgood.

20Duringthediscussionofrocksingingversesatlastmonthsstockholdersmeeting,Levinassertthatmusicisnotthecauseofsocietysillsandevencitedhisson,ateacherintheBronx,NewYork,whousesraptocommunicatewithstudents.

参考答案

11Whiletalkingtoyou,yourcould-beemployersisdecidingwhetheryoureducation,yourexperience,andotherqualificationswillpayhimtoemployyouandyourwaresandabilitiesmustbedisplayedinanorderlyandreasonablyconnectedmanner.

错误:

Whiletalkingtoyou在这里没错。

当主句的主语和状语从句的指代的是同一个人或物时，状语从句的主语可以省略，这就是状语从句省略构造。

yourcould-beemployersis应当是yourcould-beemployersare.否那么主谓不全都。

payhim应当是payhimorher.

12Witheconomicgrowthhascomecentralization:

fully76percentofJapan’s119millioncitizenslivesincitieswhichcommunityandtheextendedfamilyhavebeenabandonedinfavorofisolated,tow-generationhouseholds.

错误:

119millioncitizenslives应当是119millioncitizenslive.否那么主谓不全都。

which应当是where或inwhich.which引导的定语从句应当是一个不完好的〔句子〕，where或inwhich的后面才能加上一个完好句

13Aftersixmonthsofarguingandfinal16hoursofhotparliamentarydebates,Australia’sNorthernTerritorybecamethefirstlegalauthorityintheworldtoallowdoctorstotakethelivesofincurablyillpatientswhomwishtodie.

错误:

whomwishtodie应当是whowishtodie.whom引导的定语从句应当是一个不完好的句子，whom在定语从句中只能做宾语。

而在who引导的定语从句，who既可以做主语，也可以做宾语。

14Thegreatinterestinexceptionalchildrenshowninpubliceducationoverthepastthreedecadesindicatethestrongfeelinginoursocietythatallcitizens,whateverhisspecialconditions,deservetheopportunitytofullydeveloptheircapabilities.

错误:

Indicate应当是indicates.由于该句的主语是Thegreatinterest。

否那么主谓不全都。

whateverhisspecialconditions应当是whatevertheirspecialconditions.Their在这里指代allcitizens。

15Yourhumormustberelevantwiththeaudienceandshouldhelptoshowthemthatyouareoneofthemorthatyouunderstandtheirsituationandareinsympathywiththeirpointofview.

错误:

mustberelevantwith应当是mustberelevantto.介词搭配不当.

16Thepeoplewhogetoninthisworldarethepeoplewhogetupandlookforcircumstancestheywant,andiftheycannotfindthem,makethem.SuchistheremarkmadebyBernardShaw,agreatwriter.Thisviewhasbeensharednowbymoreandmorepeople.

错误:

Thisviewhasbeensharednow应当是Thisviewisshared