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雅思写作改错练习附答案
雅思写作改错练习(附答案)
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雅思写作改错练习(附答案)
1Futurism,anearlytwentieth-centurymovementinart,rejectedalltraditionsandattemptstoglorifycontemporarylifebyemphasizingthemachineandmotion.
2But,forasmallgroupofstudents,professionaltrainingmightbethewaytogosincewell-developingskills,allotherfactorsbeingequal,canbethedifferencebetweenhavingajobornot.
3Foragroupofremaininginexistence,aprofit-makingorganizationmust,inthelongrun,producessomethingconsumersconsiderusefulordesirable.
4ForaresultoftwoorthreecenturiesofscientificinvestigationwehavecometobelievethatNatureisunderstandableinthesensethatwhenweaskherquestionsbywayofappropriateobservationsandexperiments,shewillanswertrulyandrewarduswithdiscoveriesthatendure.
5Atthesametime,youngpeopleshouldbeencouragetocommunicatewiththeirpeersanddeveloptheirinterpersonalskills,whichmayhelpthemgreatlytoreducedependenceintheirparents.
6Whenanewmovementinartattainsacertainfashion,itisadvisabletofindoutwhattheiradvocatesareaimingat,for,howeverfarfetchedandunreasonabletheirprinciplesmayseemtoday,itispossiblethatinyearstocometheymayberegardedasnormal.
7Numerousothercommercialenterprises,fromtheaterstomagazinepublishers,fromgasandelectricutilitiestomilkprocessors,bringbetterandmoreefficientlyservicestoconsumersthroughtheuseofcomputers.
8TheAmericaneconomicsystemis,organizingaroundabasicallyprivate-enterprise,market-orientedeconomyinthatconsumerslargelydeterminewhatshallbeproducedbyspendingtheirmoneyinthemarketplaceforthosegoodsandservicesthattheywantmost.
9Thus,intheAmericaneconomicsystemitisthedemandofindividualconsumers,coupledwiththedesireofbusinessmentomaximizeprofitsandthedesireofindividualstomaximizetheirincomes,whichtogetherdeterminewhatshallbeproducedandhowresourcesareusedtoproduceit.
10Theindividualnowhasmoreinformationavailablethananygeneration,andthetaskoffindingthatoneinformationrelevanttohisorherspecificproblemiscomplicated,time--consuming,andsometimesevenoverwhelming.
参考答案
1Futurism,anearlytwentieth-centurymovementinart,rejectedalltraditionsandattemptstoglorifycontemporarylifebyemphasizingthemachineandmotion.
错误:
and并列连接两个谓语,应当是平行构造。
所以attempts应当改为attempted.
2But,forasmallgroupofstudents,professionaltrainingmightbethewaytogosincewell-developingskills,allotherfactorsbeingequal,canbethedifferencebetweenhavingajobornot.
错误:
培育良好的技能不是well-developing而是well-developed.
3Foragroupofremaininginexistence,aprofit-makingorganizationmust,inthelongrun,producessomethingconsumersconsiderusefulordesirable.
错误:
Foragroupofremaininginexistence应当是Foragrouptoremaininexistence.只有后者才可以做一个目的状语。
produces应当是produce,由于在插入语inthelongrun的前边有must.
4Foraresultoftwoorthreecenturiesofscientificinvestigation,wehavecometobelievethatNatureisunderstandableinthesensethatwhenweaskherquestionsbywayofappropriateobservationsandexperiments,shewillanswertrulyandrewarduswithdiscoveriesthatendure.
错误:
Foraresultof应当是Asaresultof.介词搭配不当.
5Atthesametime,youngpeopleshouldbeencouragetocommunicatewiththeirpeersanddeveloptheirinterpersonalskills,whichmayhelpthemgreatlytoreducedependenceintheirparents.
错误:
shouldbeencourage应当是shouldbeencouraged,情态动词的被动语态.dependencein应当是dependenceon,介词搭配不当.
6Whenanewmovementinartattainsacertainfashion,itisadvisabletofindoutwhattheiradvocatesareaimingat,for,howeverfarfetchedandunreasonabletheirprinciplesmayseemtoday,itispossiblethatinyearstocometheymayberegardedasnormal.
错误:
theiradvocates应当是itsadvocates.Its在这里指代的是anewmovementinart.所以不能是their.
7Numerousothercommercialenterprises,fromtheaterstomagazinepublishers,fromgasandelectricutilitiestomilkprocessors,bringbetterandmoreefficientlyservicestoconsumersthroughtheuseofcomputers.
错误:
efficientlyservices应当是efficientservices.这也是很多同学经常犯的一个错误。
副词不能修饰名词,必需得改为形容词。
8TheAmericaneconomicsystemis,organizingaroundabasicallyprivate-enterprise,market-orientedeconomyinthatconsumerslargelydeterminewhatshallbeproducedbyspendingtheirmoneyinthemarketplaceforthosegoodsandservicesthattheywantmost.
错误:
organizingaroundabasicallyprivate-enterprise应当是organizedaroundabasicallyprivate-enterprise.这里应当是过去分词来做一个伴随状语,而不应当是如今分词,由于它是主语的承受者。
inthat应当是inwhich.由于只有inwhich才能引导一个定语从句。
inwhich=where,在引导一个定语从句时,后面需要加上一个完好句。
而inthat只能引导一个状语从句=because.
9Thus,intheAmericaneconomicsystemitisthedemandofindividualconsumers,coupledwiththedesireofbusinessmentomaximizeprofitsandthedesireofindividualstomaximizetheirincomes,whichtogetherdeterminewhatshallbeproducedandhowresourcesareusedtoproduceit.
错误:
which应当是that.与前面的itis构成一个强调句型。
强调原句中的主语。
10Theindividualnowhasmoreinformationavailablethananygeneration,andthetaskoffindingthatoneinformationrelevanttohisorherspecificproblemiscomplicated,time--consuming,andsometimesevenoverwhelming.
错误:
oneinformation应当是onepieceofinformation.由于information是不行数名词,前面必需加量词修饰。
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11Whiletalkingtoyou,yourcould-beemployersisdecidingwhetheryoureducation,yourexperience,andotherqualificationswillpayhimtoemployyouandyourwaresandabilitiesmustbedisplayedinanorderlyandreasonablyconnectedmanner.
12Witheconomicgrowthhascomecentralization:
fully76percentofJapan’s119millioncitizenslivesincitieswhichcommunityandtheextendedfamilyhavebeenabandonedinfavorofisolated,tow-generationhouseholds.
13Aftersixmonthsofarguingandfinal16hoursofhotparliamentarydebates,Australia’sNorthernTerritorybecamethefirstlegalauthorityintheworldtoallowdoctorstotakethelivesofincurablyillpatientswhomwishtodie.
14Thegreatinterestinexceptionalchildrenshowninpubliceducationoverthepastthreedecadesindicatethestrongfeelinginoursocietythatallcitizens,whateverhisspecialconditions,deservetheopportunitytofullydeveloptheircapabilities.
15Yourhumormustberelevantwiththeaudienceandshouldhelptoshowthemthatyouareoneofthemorthatyouunderstandtheirsituationandareinsympathywiththeirpointofview.
16Thepeoplewhogetoninthisworldarethepeoplewhogetupandlookforcircumstancestheywant,andiftheycannotfindthem,makethem.SuchistheremarkmadebyBernardShaw,agreatwriter.Thisviewhasbeensharednowbymoreandmorepeople.
17Thecurrentpassiontomakingchildrencompeteagainsttheirclassmatesoragainsttheclockproduceatwo-layersystem,inwhichcompetitiveA-typesseeminsomewaybetterthantheirBtypefellows
18Sciencemovesforward,theysay,notsomuchthroughtheinsightsofgreatmenofgeniusasbecauseofmoreordinarythingslikeimprovingtechniquesandtools.
19Theshareholdersassuchhavenoknowledgeofthelives,thoughtsorneedsoftheworkmenemployingbythecompanyinwhichheholdshares,andhisinfluenceontherelationsofcapitalandlaborarenotgood.
20Duringthediscussionofrocksingingversesatlastmonthsstockholdersmeeting,Levinassertthatmusicisnotthecauseofsocietysillsandevencitedhisson,ateacherintheBronx,NewYork,whousesraptocommunicatewithstudents.
参考答案
11Whiletalkingtoyou,yourcould-beemployersisdecidingwhetheryoureducation,yourexperience,andotherqualificationswillpayhimtoemployyouandyourwaresandabilitiesmustbedisplayedinanorderlyandreasonablyconnectedmanner.
错误:
Whiletalkingtoyou在这里没错。
当主句的主语和状语从句的指代的是同一个人或物时,状语从句的主语可以省略,这就是状语从句省略构造。
yourcould-beemployersis应当是yourcould-beemployersare.否那么主谓不全都。
payhim应当是payhimorher.
12Witheconomicgrowthhascomecentralization:
fully76percentofJapan’s119millioncitizenslivesincitieswhichcommunityandtheextendedfamilyhavebeenabandonedinfavorofisolated,tow-generationhouseholds.
错误:
119millioncitizenslives应当是119millioncitizenslive.否那么主谓不全都。
which应当是where或inwhich.which引导的定语从句应当是一个不完好的〔句子〕,where或inwhich的后面才能加上一个完好句
13Aftersixmonthsofarguingandfinal16hoursofhotparliamentarydebates,Australia’sNorthernTerritorybecamethefirstlegalauthorityintheworldtoallowdoctorstotakethelivesofincurablyillpatientswhomwishtodie.
错误:
whomwishtodie应当是whowishtodie.whom引导的定语从句应当是一个不完好的句子,whom在定语从句中只能做宾语。
而在who引导的定语从句,who既可以做主语,也可以做宾语。
14Thegreatinterestinexceptionalchildrenshowninpubliceducationoverthepastthreedecadesindicatethestrongfeelinginoursocietythatallcitizens,whateverhisspecialconditions,deservetheopportunitytofullydeveloptheircapabilities.
错误:
Indicate应当是indicates.由于该句的主语是Thegreatinterest。
否那么主谓不全都。
whateverhisspecialconditions应当是whatevertheirspecialconditions.Their在这里指代allcitizens。
15Yourhumormustberelevantwiththeaudienceandshouldhelptoshowthemthatyouareoneofthemorthatyouunderstandtheirsituationandareinsympathywiththeirpointofview.
错误:
mustberelevantwith应当是mustberelevantto.介词搭配不当.
16Thepeoplewhogetoninthisworldarethepeoplewhogetupandlookforcircumstancestheywant,andiftheycannotfindthem,makethem.SuchistheremarkmadebyBernardShaw,agreatwriter.Thisviewhasbeensharednowbymoreandmorepeople.
错误:
Thisviewhasbeensharednow应当是Thisviewisshared