雅思写作改错练习附答案.docx

1、雅思写作改错练习附答案雅思写作改错练习(附答案) 为了关怀大家备考雅思作文，提高写作水平，下面我给大家带来雅思写作改错练习(附答案)，期望大家宠爱! 雅思写作改错练习(附答案) 1Futurism, an early twentieth-century movement in art, rejected all traditions and attempts to glorify contemporary life by emphasizing the machine and motion. 2 But, for a small group of students, professional

2、training might be the way to go since well-developing skills, all other factors being equal, can be the difference between having a job or not. 3 For a group of remaining in existence, a profit-making organization must, in the long run, produces something consumers consider useful or desirable. 4 Fo

3、r a result of two or three centuries of scientific investigation we have come to believe that Nature is understandable in the sense that when we ask her questions by way of appropriate observations and experiments，she will answer truly and reward us with discoveries that endure. 5 At the same time,

4、young people should be encourage to communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skills, which may help them greatly to reduce dependence in their parents. 6 When a new movement in art attains a certain fashion, it is advisable to find out what their advocates are aiming at, for, how

5、ever farfetched and unreasonable their principles may seem today, it is possible that in years to come they may be regarded as normal. 7 Numerous other commercial enterprises, from theaters to magazine publishers, from gas and electric utilities to milk processors, bring better and more efficiently

6、services to consumers through the use of computers. 8 The American economic system is, organizing around a basically private-enterprise, market-oriented economy in that consumers largely determine what shall be produced by spending their money in the marketplace for those goods and services that the

7、y want most. 9 Thus, in the American economic system it is the demand of individual consumers, coupled with the desire of businessmen to maximize profits and the desire of individuals to maximize their incomes, which together determine what shall be produced and how resources are used to produce it.

8、 10 The individual now has more information available than any generation, and the task of finding that one information relevant to his or her specific problem is complicated, time-consuming, and sometimes even overwhelming. 参考答案 1Futurism, an early twentieth-century movement in art, rejected all tr

9、aditions and attempts to glorify contemporary life by emphasizing the machine and motion. 错误: and并列连接两个谓语，应当是平行构造。所以attempts应当改为attempted. 2 But, for a small group of students, professional training might be the way to go since well-developing skills, all other factors being equal, can be the differ

10、ence between having a job or not. 错误: 培育良好的技能不是well-developing而是well-developed. 3 For a group of remaining in existence, a profit-making organization must, in the long run, produces something consumers consider useful or desirable. 错误: For a group of remaining in existence应当是For a group to remain in

11、 existence.只有后者才可以做一个目的状语。produces应当是produce，由于在插入语in the long run的前边有must. 4 For a result of two or three centuries of scientific investigation， we have come to believe that Nature is understandable in the sense that when we ask her questions by way of appropriate observations and experiments，she w

12、ill answer truly and reward us with discoveries that endure. 错误: For a result of应当是As a result of.介词搭配不当. 5 At the same time, young people should be encourage to communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skills, which may help them greatly to reduce dependence in their parents. 错误

13、: should be encourage应当是should be encouraged,情态动词的被动语态. dependence in应当是dependence on, 介词搭配不当. 6 When a new movement in art attains a certain fashion, it is advisable to find out what their advocates are aiming at, for, however farfetched and unreasonable their principles may seem today, it is possi

14、ble that in years to come they may be regarded as normal. 错误: their advocates应当是its advocates. Its在这里指代的是a new movement in art.所以不能是their. 7 Numerous other commercial enterprises, from theaters to magazine publishers, from gas and electric utilities to milk processors, bring better and more efficien

15、tly services to consumers through the use of computers. 错误: efficiently services应当是efficient services. 这也是很多同学经常犯的一个错误。副词不能修饰名词，必需得改为形容词。 8 The American economic system is, organizing around a basically private-enterprise, market-oriented economy in that consumers largely determine what shall be pro

16、duced by spending their money in the marketplace for those goods and services that they want most. 错误: organizing around a basically private-enterprise应当是organized around a basically private-enterprise.这里应当是过去分词来做一个伴随状语，而不应当是如今分词，由于它是主语的承受者。in that应当是in which.由于只有in which才能引导一个定语从句。in which=where, 在

17、引导一个定语从句时，后面需要加上一个完好句。而in that只能引导一个状语从句=because. 9 Thus, in the American economic system it is the demand of individual consumers, coupled with the desire of businessmen to maximize profits and the desire of individuals to maximize their incomes, which together determine what shall be produced and

18、how resources are used to produce it. 错误: which应当是that.与前面的it is构成一个强调句型。强调原句中的主语。 10 The individual now has more information available than any generation, and the task of finding that one information relevant to his or her specific problem is complicated, time-consuming, and sometimes even overwhe

19、lming. 错误: one information应当是one piece of information. 由于information是不行数名词，前面必需加量词修饰。CKQ 11 While talking to you, your could-be employers is deciding whether your education, your experience, and other qualifications will pay him to employ you and your wares and abilities must be displayed in an orde

20、rly and reasonably connected manner. 12 With economic growth has come centralization: fully 76 percent of Japans 119 million citizens lives in cities which community and the extended family have been abandoned in favor of isolated, tow-generation households. 13 After six months of arguing and final

21、16 hours of hot parliamentary debates, Australias Northern Territory became the first legal authority in the world to allow doctors to take the lives of incurably ill patients whom wish to die. 14 The great interest in exceptional children shown in public education over the past three decades indica

22、te the strong feeling in our society that all citizens, whatever his special conditions, deserve the opportunity to fully develop their capabilities. 15 Your humor must be relevant with the audience and should help to show them that you are one of them or that you understand their situation and are

23、in sympathy with their point of view. 16 The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for circumstances they want, and if they cannot find them, make them. Such is the remark made by Bernard Shaw, a great writer. This view has been shared now by more and more people. 17 The

24、 current passion to making children compete against their classmates or against the clock produce a two-layer system, in which competitive A-types seem in some way better than their B type fellows 18 Science moves forward, they say, not so much through the insights of great men of genius as because

25、of more ordinary things like improving techniques and tools. 19 The shareholders as such have no knowledge of the lives, thoughts or needs of the workmen employing by the company in which he hold shares, and his influence on the relations of capital and labor are not good. 20 During the discussion o

26、f rock singing verses at last months stockholders meeting, Levin assert that music is not the cause of societys ills and even cited his son, a teacher in the Bronx, New York, who uses rap to communicate with students. 参考答案 11 While talking to you, your could-be employers is deciding whether your edu

27、cation, your experience, and other qualifications will pay him to employ you and your wares and abilities must be displayed in an orderly and reasonably connected manner. 错误: While talking to you在这里没错。当主句的主语和状语从句的指代的是同一个人或物时，状语从句的主语可以省略，这就是状语从句省略构造。your could-be employers is应当是your could-be employer

28、s are.否那么主谓不全都。pay him应当是pay him or her. 12 With economic growth has come centralization: fully 76 percent of Japans 119 million citizens lives in cities which community and the extended family have been abandoned in favor of isolated, tow-generation households. 错误: 119 million citizens lives应当是119

29、million citizens live. 否那么主谓不全都。which应当是where或in which. which引导的定语从句应当是一个不完好的句子，where或in which的后面才能加上一个完好句 13 After six months of arguing and final 16 hours of hot parliamentary debates, Australias Northern Territory became the first legal authority in the world to allow doctors to take the lives of

30、 incurably ill patients whom wish to die. 错误: whom wish to die应当是who wish to die. whom引导的定语从句应当是一个不完好的句子，whom在定语从句中只能做宾语。而在who引导的定语从句，who既可以做主语，也可以做宾语。 14 The great interest in exceptional children shown in public education over the past three decades indicate the strong feeling in our society that

31、all citizens, whatever his special conditions, deserve the opportunity to fully develop their capabilities. 错误: Indicate应当是indicates.由于该句的主语是The great interest。否那么主谓不全都。whatever his special conditions应当是whatever their special conditions. Their在这里指代all citizens。 15 Your humor must be relevant with th

32、e audience and should help to show them that you are one of them or that you understand their situation and are in sympathy with their point of view. 错误: must be relevant with应当是must be relevant to. 介词搭配不当. 16 The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for circumstances they want, and if they cannot find them, make them. Such is the remark made by Bernard Shaw, a great writer. This view has been shared now by more and more people. 错误: This view has been shared now应当是This view is shared