英语议论文写作范文.docx

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英语议论文写作范文

英语议论文写作范文

　　　　Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?

Thefoodweateinthepastishealthierthanthefoodtoday.　　Astheagriculturalindustryhasdevelopedwiththeadvanceoftechnology,foodsareoftenpresentedwithchemicalmaterials.Forexample,therearevegetableswithpesticides,junkfoodwhichisfriedandgenetically-modifiedfoodswhicharepotentiallyharmfultohumanbeings,thuspeopletendtohavesomethingcookedbytheirown.Alltheseinformationpointstothefactthatthefoodweateinthepastishealthierthanthefoodweeattoday.　　Firstofall,itisobviousthatmodernpeoplesufferfromthepesticideremainsinvegetablesandfruits.Undeniably,withthehelpofthepesticide,theagriculturalproductivityhasbeengreatlypromoted,nottomentiontheshapeofthefruitsandvegetableslookmorepleasantthanitusedtobe.Therefore,inordertomakethefoodslookmoredelicateandsmellmoredelicious,peopleusepesticidetoprotectgoods.However,oneoftheunfavorableconsequencesisthatpesticideremainsresultinhorriblediseases,oratleastrenderpeoplevulnerabletotheinfectionofbacteriaandviruses.　　Moreover,people’sdietincludesalargeportionoffastfood,whichismostlyfriedandharmfultotheirhealth.Imaginethatweeatthehamburgers,Frenchfriesandcokeeveryday,themostlikelyresultisthatwewillgetoverweight.Nowonderrateofobesityisontherise,especiallyamongkids,becausetheyonlyeatwhattastesgood,unawareofwhatarehealthyandwhatarenot.What’sworse,heartdisease,hypertensionandsomeotherdiseasescouldbepartiallyattributedtotheoverintakeoffastfood.　　Inaddition,asthegenetically-modificationtechnologyappears,foodproducedinthiswaymayleadtosomepotentialharmtopeople’shealth.Accordingtosomemedicalresearches,thefoodthatisnotnaturallycultivatedmaychangetheorganizationofcertaingenesofhuman,andthusinfluencethenormalgrowthofhumanbody.Asaconsequence,thesafetyoffoodnowadaysisnotasreliableasthatinthepast.Takingallthereasonsabove,people’sdietstructureishealthierinthepastfortheydonothavetoeatfoodcontainingpesticides,geneticallymodified,ormostlyfried.　　Somepeoplethinkthatbicycleisthebestwaytotravelfromplacetoplace.Discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofthebicycle.　　NowherearebikesmorewidelyusedthaninChina.About300millionbikesarebeinguseddailyaroundthecountry,mainlyfortransportpurposes.Indeed,IwouldcertainlycycletoworkifIlivednearertomyworkplace.　　Ridingabikecontributestoourhealth.Attheveryleast,cyclingburnscalorie.Infact,itdoesmuchmore.Cyclinghelpstotrainoureye-hand-feetcoordinationandsharpensoursenseofbalance.Itiseasytolearnandnotphysicallydemanding.Itisprobablythebestsportforoverweightpeople.Besides,theairwillbealotcleanerifmorepeoplechoosetousebikesinsteadofcars.Bicycleisthemostenvironment-friendlymeansoftransportexceptforwalking,whichhastheintolerabledownsideofbeingtooslow.Actually,duetotrafficcongestion,cyclingisoftenthequickestwaytoreachyourdestination.Apartfrombeingcleanandquick,cyclingissafe.Thismeanssafetyforusandothers.Inlightoftheactualspeedatwhichabikeusuallytravels,thelikelihoodofacollisionwithpedestriansandfellowcyclistsisminimal.Evenintheeventofsuchanaccident,peopleinvolvedusuallygetawaywithafewscratchesattheworst.　　Havingsaidthat,amorecriticalridermayfindabikelessthansatisfactory.Forexample,itcan’tshieldagainstrainordust;thesaddleisoftenuncomfortable.Besides,bikesareunfitforlongdistancetravel.Afterall,mostpeoplecan’tridemorethan20milesatastretch.　　Takenalltogether,thebicycleisindeedabrillianthumaninvention.Unlikemanyotherdevices,bikereinforcesourrelianceonourselvesbothphysicallyandmentally.Thisneverfailstofascinateme.　　特点：

题目给出一种事物，要求考生同时指出这种事物的优点和缺点标志性文字：

Advantage&disadvantage　　　　1　　　　Strength&weakness　　Discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesof…Whataretheadvantagesanddisadvantagesof…?

　　难度在于：

1.就题目给出的话题，既要给出优点，同时还要缺点，对思维深度要求较高2.写作时要“留有余地”，把握文章的重点　　结构构思：

1.传统的写作思路，文章分成四段:

第一段引入话题，第二段给出优点，第三段给出缺点，第四段在收尾的同时，给出自己的看法　　特别提醒：

论述优、缺点，要有一个侧重，不需要使用同样比例的文字来论述优、缺点　　2.高分作文，在于文字方面制造亮点，不在于在结构方面铤而走险尝试新的方式　　范文讲解1：

Somepeoplethinkthatbicycleisthebestwaytotravelfromplacetoplace.Discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofthebicycle.　　写作思路：

1.文章分成四段:

第一段引入“bicycle”这个话题话题，第二段给出“bicycle”的优点，第三段给出其缺点，第四段在收尾的同时，给出自己的看法，即“bicycle”利大于弊2.优势advantages　　骑车对身体有好处　　普通版：

isgoodforourhealth升级版：

contributetoourhealth燃烧卡路里burncalories　　锻炼身体的协调能力trainourhand-eye-feetcoordination减肥thebestsportforoverweightpeople骑车很环保Environment-friendly　　塞车时，骑车很方便　　Duetotrafficcongestion,cyclingisthequickestwaytoreachyourdestination骑车很安全　　Evenintheeventofsuchanaccident,peopleinvolvedusuallygetawaywithafewscratchesattheworst.3.劣势disadvantages不能遮风挡雨　　Bicyclescannotshieldagainstrainordust坐垫不舒服　　Thesaddleisusuallyuncomfortable不适合长距离旅行Unfitforlongdistancetravel4.观点：

支持自行车　　Bicyclesneverfailtofascinateme.第一段：

目的：

引入话题　　NowherearebikesmorewidelyusedthaninChina.　　倒装句：

BikesareusednowheremorewidelythaninChina.雅思写作高分必备条件：

句式多变　　About300millionbikesarebeinguseddailyaroundthecountry,mainlyfortransportpurposes.重复题目里的观点：

　　Bicycleisthebestwaytotravelfromplacetoplace.　　Bicyclesarebeinguseddailyaroundthecountry,mainlyfortransportpurposes.高分作文的大忌：

机械地照搬题目里出现的语句和词汇　　Indeed,IwouldcertainlycycletoworkifIlivednearertomyworkplace.　　　　2　　　　..ifIlivednearertomyworkplace虚拟语气IfIwereworkinginaforeigncountry,…　　Ifstudentswereallowedtodecidetheirownsubjects,…高分写作必须杜绝的两种低级错误：

时态和单复数第一段：

例举数字，引入话题。

　　特别提醒：

例举的故事、数字、名人名句，精确性不重要，关键是能带入相关话题第二段：

阐述自行车的advantagesRidingabikecontributestoourhealth.开门见山指出第一个优势　　其它写法：

Ridingabicycledoeshaveitsappeals.　　Attheveryleast,cyclingburnscalorie.Infact,itdoesmuchmore.高分写作句型：

Attheveryleast,…Infact,itdoesmore.用attheveryleast（至少），引入第一个优势。

　　用Infact,itdoesmore（事实上，它的益处远不局限于此）来引入其它的优势。

　　例如:

Attheveryleast,bilingualeducationcansharpenastudent’slanguageability.Infact,itdoesmore.Cyclinghelpstotrainoureye-hand-feetcoordinationandsharpensoursenseofbalance.totrainourcoordinationandtosharpensenseofbalance　　体育相关的词语:

Coordination（协调）,senseofbalance（平衡性）,endurance（耐力）,explosiveforce（爆发力）,vitalcapacity（肺活量）,agility（灵活性）,capabilityinrapidresponse（反应能力）Asuitableamountofexercisehelpstokeepyoumoreresponsive,adaptiveandflexible.一定量的运动可以让你反应更快，而且更具适应性和灵活性。

　　Itiseasytolearnandnotphysicallydemanding.Itisprobablythebestsportforoverweightpeople.Besides,theairwillbealotcleanerifmorepeoplechoosetousebikesinsteadofcars.使用“Besides”，自然过渡到下一个advantage类似的词语:

Furthermore,moreover,inaddition,　　Bicycleisthemostenvironment-friendlymeansoftransportexceptforwalking,whichhastheintolerabledownsideofbeingtooslow.　　高分搭配：

intolerabledownside无法容忍的缺点与downside\\disadvantage搭配的词语：

　　普通版：

obvious（明显的）,great（大的）,main（主要的）,major（主要的）　　升级版：

considerable（相当大的）,distinct（明显的）,manifest（明显的）,intolerable（不可容忍的）,unendurable（无法容忍的）,unbearable（无法容忍的）,insufferable（无法容忍的）,inevitable（不可避免的）,doubly（双倍地）　　动词：

experience（遭遇）,sufferfrom（遭遇）,offset（抵消）,outweigh（抵消）,overcome（克服）,remove（消除）　　Thoughbilingualeducationmaysoundpracticalatfirstthought,itinevitablyputsstudentsatadistinctdisadvantage.　　Actually,duetotrafficcongestion,cyclingisoftenthequickestwaytoreachyourdestination.Trafficcongestion=trafficjam交通堵塞　　Thethoroughfaresinthecountrywerecongestedduringthepeakseasonoftourism.　　Apartfrombeingcleanandquick,cyclingissafe.Thismeanssafetyforourselvesandothers.写作句型：

Apartfrom….,cyclingis....Thismeans…用apartfrom引入新的advantage　　用thismeans来开始对新的优势的具体描述　　Inlightoftheactualspeedatwhichabikeusuallytravels,thelikelihoodofacollisionwithpedestriansandfellowcyclistsisminimal.Evenintheeventofsuchanaccident,peopleinvolvedusuallygetaway　　　　3　　　　withafewscratchesattheworst.短语的使用：

inlightof考虑到　　Theprogresswasindeedencouraginginlightofthesmallprofitthecompanypostedlastyear.intheeventof万一、倘若高科技的优势：

　　Inlightofthenaturalresourcesnuclearpowerstationsareconsuming,thelikelihoodofairpollutionisminimal.Evenintheeventofnuclearleak,peopleaffectedbyitareusuallyinformedofthepotentialdamage.　　特别提醒：

词组的使用，可以展示lexicalresource（词汇资源），达到高分的要求第三段：

骑车的缺点　　Havingsaidthat,amorecriticalridermayfindabikelessthansatisfactory.常见的“优势”过渡到“劣势”的句型：

　　Havingsaidthat,amorecritical…mayfind…　　Havingsaidthat,amorecriticalreadermayfindthecontenttooartificial.However,acarefulthoughtwouldrevealthatitisnotwithoutitsdrawbacks.　　Forexample,itcan’tshieldagainstrainordust;thesaddleisoftenuncomfortable.并列句：

句式多变shieldagainst阻隔　　Oursociety’shatredofacertainbehaviorcannotusuallyshieldagainstconductionsofthesamekindbyindividualsocialmembers.　　Besides,bikesareunfitforlongdistancetravel.Afterall,mostpeoplecan’tridemorethan20milesatastretch.　　atastretch一口气第四段：

收尾　　Takenalltogether,thebicycleisindeedabrillianthumaninvention.Unlikemanyotherdevices,bikereinforcesourrelianceonourselvesbothphysicallyandmentally.Takenalltogether综合来说Thisneverfailstofascinateme.用委婉的方式给出自己的观点类似的句子：

　　Thisappealstomeconstantly.　　Thisalways