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剑桥10小作文范文

剑桥10小作文范文

1.剑桥雅思全真试题4第一篇小作文范文

ThetablegivesabreakdownofthedifferenttypesoffamilywhowerelivinginpovertyinAustraliain1999.

Onaverage,11%ofallhouseholds,comprisingalmosttwomillionpeople,wereinthisposition.However,thoseconsistingofonlyoneparentorasingleadulthadalmostdoublethisproportionofpoorpeople,with21%and19%respectively.

Couplesgenerallytendedtobebetteroff,withlowerpovertylevelsforcoupleswithoutchildren（7%）thanthosewithchildren（12%）.Itisnoticeablethatforbothtypesofhouseholdwithchildren,ahigherthanaverageproportionwerelivinginpovertyatthistime.

olderpeopleweregenerallylesslikelytobepoor,thoughonceagainthetrendfavouredelderlycouples（only4%）ratherthansingleelderlypeople（6%）.

Overallthetablesuggeststhathouseholdsofsingleasultsandthosewithchildrenweremorelikelytobelivinginpovertythanthoseconsistingofcouples.

T0T\是不是这个，，累死我了

2.雅思强人请进,给我的小作文打个分,并给点建议

个人觉得假如9分的作文，小作文占3分的话，这篇应当在1.5左右我水平也不是很高，给你几个我的建议把1.肯定分段写，我没有看到题目，但是我剧烈建议文章肯定要分段，这样看起来更有条理.2.留意一些小的语法错误，例如其次行的thetrendinUSA,JapanandSwedenisupwards,trend是可数的，upwards最好当副词用，个人觉得做表语并不合适.小的语法错误往往带来许多的失分.3.时态.Theproportionreachesat15%inUSAand14%inSwedenby1982.reaches明显应当为reached.看得出来这个图表牵涉到将来时态，你也留意了运用，但是还是遗漏了一些.倒数其次行At2040,theproportionofpopulationaged65andoverisquitedifferentfromitwasin1940,is应当改用willbe,Japanhas改为Japanwillhave，前面的Swedenenjoys改为Swedenwillenjoy4.尝试用一些从句.你的文章中多为一些简洁句型，从句可以为文章增分.5.尝试一些替换词，oldpeople可以有许多替换词，你这里oldpeople消失的次数过于多了，稍显累赘.seniorcitizens,elderlypeople/individuals什么的6.也看得出来你学过并尝试运用了一些表示增长与下降的词，也留意了程度上的运用，这些值得赞扬.就写这么多了，作文需要多练，多看别人写的文章积累阅历，祝你雅思有一个好成果。

3.求大神改一改我的雅思作文,剑桥7t1的小作文

Thistableillustratesthe[data]（normallywesayillustratethechangesorthesituation,orshowyouthedata）ofconsumersspendingonvariousitemsin[thefollowingfivecountries,]（omitthem!

）Ireland,Italy,Spain,SwedenandTurkeyin2002.Accordingtothetable,it'sobviousthatIrelandandand（!

）Turkeyspent（I'dratheruseaccountfor）the[most]（highest）percentageofmoney,[while]（with）28.91%forIrelandand32.14%forTurkey,onfood,drinksandtobacco.Theother3countrieshad[similar]（nearlyeven.Heresimilarwillraiseconfusion.）percentageatanaverageofnearly17%,whichisfarlowerthan（thatof）thepreviouscountries.ThenintheitemofclothingandfootwearItalystoodoutwitha9%andtherestofthecountriesrangefrom5%to7%.[Differentfrom]（incontrastwith）theformer2items,[countries]（thecountries'）spendingdidn'tvarytoomuchfromeachotherintheitemofleisureandeducation.Italywentto4.35%andSpainsitat1.98%.[Everycountryhasitsuniquewayoflife]（It'sthepeoplenotthecountrythathavetheirwayoflife.I'drathersayPeopleindifferentcountrieshavedifferentlifestyles.）.Wecanjudgethemonlythroughconsumersspending[,but]（.But）itmaybebetterif[we]（they）spendmoremoneyoneducationandleisure.注：

中括号里的内容是觉得有问题的部分，之后括号内的内容是给出的替换.时间关系只能说这么多了，盼望能帮到你.。

4.急求雅思小作文

piechart

ThepiechartsshowchangesinAmericanspendingpatternsbetween1966and1996.

Foodandcarsmadeupthetwobiggestitemsofexpenditureinbothyears.Togethertheycomprisedoverhalfofhouseholdspending.Foodaccountedfor44%ofspendingin1966,butthisdroppedbytwothirdsto14%in1996.However,theoutlayoncarsdoubled,risingfrom23%in1966to45%in1996.

Otherareaschangedsignificantly.Spendingoneatingoutdoubled,climbingfrom7%to14%.Theproportionofsalaryspentoncomputersincreaseddramatically,upfrom1%in1996to10%in1996.However,ascomputerexpenditurerose,thepercentageofoutlayonbooksplungedfrom6%to1%.

Someareasremainedrelativelyunchanged.Americansspentapproximatelythesameamountofsalaryonpetrolandfurnitureinbothyears.

Inconclusion,increasedamountsspentoncars,computers,andeatingoutweremadeupforbydropsinexpenditureonfoodandbooks.

5.雅思c7t4小作文,求范文

ThepiechartsbelowshowunitsofelectricityproductionbyfuelsourceinAustraliaandFrancein1980and2000.

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ThechartscomparethesourcesofelectricityinAustraliaandFranceintheyears1980and2000.Duringtheseyearselectricityproductionalmostdoubled,risingfrom100unitsto170inAustralia,andfrom90to180unitsinFrance.

In1980Australiausedcoalasthemainelectricitysource（50units）andtheremainderwasproducedfromnaturalgas,hydropower（eachproducing20units）andoil（whichproducedonly10units）.By2000,coalhadbecomethefuelformorethan75%ofelectricityproducedandonlyhydropowercontinuedtobeanothersignificantsourcesupplyingapproximately20%.

Incontrast,Franceusedcoalasasourceforonly25unitsofelectricityin1980,whichwasmatchedbynaturalgas.Theremaining40unitswereproducedlargelyfromoilandnuclearpower,withhydropowercontributingonly5units.Butby2000nuclearpower,whichwasnotusedatallinAustralia,haddevelopedintothemainsource,producingalmost75%ofelectricity,at126units,whilecoalandoiltogetherproducedonly50units.Othersourceswerenolongersignificant.

Overall,itisclearthatby2000thesetwocountriesreliedondifferentprincipalfuelsources:

AustraliareliedoncoalandFranceonnuclearpower.

6.10个英语小作文,50字左右什么都行,要快点,急

MyteacherisMissLi.Sheismyfavoriteteacher.She'stall,slimandverysmart.Herfavoritecolourisblue.Sheelikesreadingandtravellingwhensheewasfree.Besides,sheishelpfulandpatientasshe'salwaysreadytohelppeoplewhogotintrouble.Sheeverwonthefirstprizeintheteachingcompetitionialwayslikedoinghouseworkwheniamfreeinweekends.AndOnsaturdaythisweek,Iwashedmyclothesandshoes.Iamreallyfondofdoingitbecauseifeelhappywheniputmyselfinbusy.Andididcooksomedishes.Andmyparentsenjoyitverymuch.Theysaiditwasdeliciousandiwashappy.Laternfestivalisoneofmyfavoritefestivals.Myparentsalwaystakemetograndma'shometospendsometimewiththem.Weeatdumplingstogetherandwealwayshaveagreattime!

andinthisYear'sLanternFestival,ialsowenttomygrandparents'home.Itseemedthattheyarehappytoseeme.thenwewentouttohaveagreatmeal.itwasreallycool!

INTRODUCTIONWood,ishard,toughsubstancethatformsthetrunksoftrees,andthathasbeenusedforthousandsofyearsasafuelandasamaterialofconstruction（seeBuildingConstruction）.Technically,thetermwoodincludessimilarmaterialsinotherpartsoftheplant,includingeventheso-calledveinsinleaves,butonlythoseportionsofwoodwhichhavecommercialimportancearediscussedinthisarticle.HouseFrameConstructionHouseFrameConstructionCarpentersconstructthewoodenframeforasuburbanhomenearHouston,Texas.Withthecommonuseofsteelandconcreteformostbuildingconstruction,workopportunitiesforcarpentershavebeenconcentratedintheareaofresidentialconstruction.EncartaEncyclopediaPhotoResearchers,Inc./SpencerGrantFullSizeForthebotanicalaspectsofwood,includingitsstructureandgrowth,seeTree;Xylem.Forgrowthanddistribution,seeForest.Forthecultivationoftreesforwood,seeForestry.Forthecuttingoftreesandthemanufactureoflumber,seeLumberIndustry.II.GRAINANDSTRUCTUREHeartwoodandSapwoodHeartwoodandSapwoodThisdiagramshowsthetypesofwoodfoundinatypicaltreetrunk.Thewoodatthecenterofthetrunk,theheartwood,isolder,darker,andmoredurablethantheyoungerwoodsurroundingit.Asatreegrows,athinlayerofcellscalledthecambiumgeneratesnewwood,calledsapwood,justunderthebark.Sapwoodissofterandtendstobelighterincolorthanheartwood.Asthesapwoodages,naturalsubstancescalledextractivesinvadethesapwoodandgraduallyconvertittoheartwood.EncartaEncyclopediaMicrosoftCorporation.AllRightsReserved.FullSizeThetypicalmarkings,calledgrain,thatarefoundonalltypesofnaturalwoodareduetothestructureofthewood.Woodconsistsessentiallyoffinecellularductsortubes,whichcarrywateranddissolvedmineralsfromtherootstotheleaves,andwhicharethusarrangedmoreorlessverticallywithinthetrunk.Whenthewoodiscutparalleltotheaxisofthetrunk,straight-grainedlumberisusuallyproduced.Insometrees,however,theductsarehelical;thatis,theytwistaroundthetrunkastheyascend.Suchtreesproducecross-grainedlumber,whichisalsoobtainedfromordinarytreeswhenthecutisnotparalleltotheaxisofthetrunk.Manywoodshaveprominentannualrings.Thetrunkofatreedoesnotgrowinlength,exceptatitstip,butdoesgrowinwidth.Theonlyportionofthetrunkthatisengagedinactivegrowthisthecambium,athinlayerentirelysurroundingthetrunk.IntreesoftheTemperateZone,thecambiumlaysdownnewwoodduringthespringandsummer,andinmosttreestheearlywoodismoreporousandthereforelighterincolorthanthewoodproducedlaterintheseason.Thetrunkofatreeisthussurroundedeachyearbyanewpairofconcentricsheaths,onedarkerthantheother.Althoughthethinlayerofcambiumistheonlypartofthetrunkthatisaliveinthesensethatitisengagedinactivegrowth,livingcellsarealsointerspersedamongthexylemcellsofthesapwood.Asthetreegrowsolder,however,thecentralportionofthetrunkdiescompletely;theductsbecomepluggedwithgumsorresins,ormerelyair（seeGum）.Thiscentralpartofthetrunkiscalledheartwood.Theinternalchangesareaccompaniedbychangesincolortypicalofthespeciesoftrees,sothattheheartwoodisusuallydarkerthanthesapwood.III.CLASS