剑桥10小作文范文.docx

1、剑桥10小作文范文剑桥10小作文范文1. 剑桥雅思全真试题4 第一篇小作文范文 The table gives a breakdown of the different types of family who were living in poverty in Australia in 1999. On average, 11% of all households, comprising almost two million people, were in this position. However, those consisting of only one parent or a sing

2、le adult had almost double this proportion of poor people, with 21% and 19% respectively. Couples generally tended to be better off, with lower poverty levels for couples without children (7%) than those with children (12%). It is noticeable that for both types of household with children, a higher t

3、han average proportion were living in poverty at this time. older people were generally less likely to be poor, though once again the trend favoured elderly couples (only 4%) rather than single elderly people (6%). Overall the table suggests that households of single asults and those with children w

4、ere more likely to be living in poverty than those consisting of couples. T0T是不是这个，累死我了 2. 雅思强人请进,给我的小作文打个分,并给点建议 个人觉得假如9分的作文，小作文占3分的话，这篇应当在1.5左右我水平也不是很高，给你几个我的建议把1.肯定分段写，我没有看到题目，但是我剧烈建议文章肯定要分段，这样看起来更有条理.2.留意一些小的语法错误，例如其次行的the trend in USA,Japan and Sweden is upwards,trend是可数的，upwards最好当副词用，个人觉得做表语并

5、不合适.小的语法错误往往带来许多的失分.3.时态.The proportion reaches at 15% in USA and 14% in Sweden by 1982.reaches明显应当为reached.看得出来这个图表牵涉到将来时态，你也留意了运用，但是还是遗漏了一些.倒数其次行At 2040,the proportion of population aged 65 and over is quite different from it was in 1940,is应当改用will be,Japan has 改为Japan will have，前面的Sweden enjoys 改

6、为Sweden will enjoy4.尝试用一些从句.你的文章中多为一些简洁句型，从句可以为文章增分.5.尝试一些替换词，old people可以有许多替换词，你这里old people消失的次数过于多了，稍显累赘.senior citizens,elderly people/individuals什么的6.也看得出来你学过并尝试运用了一些表示增长与下降的词，也留意了程度上的运用，这些值得赞扬.就写这么多了，作文需要多练，多看别人写的文章积累阅历，祝你雅思有一个好成果。 3. 求大神改一改我的雅思作文,剑桥7t1的小作文 This table illustrates the data(nor

7、mally we say illustrate the changes or the situation, or show you the data )of consumers spending on various items in the following five countries, (omit them!)Ireland, Italy,Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002.According to the table, its obvious that Irelandand and(!)Turkey spent(Id rather use account

8、 for) the most(highest) percentage of money, while(with) 28.91% for Ireland and 32.14% for Turkey, on food, drinks and tobacco. The other 3 countries had similar(nearly even. Here similar will raise confusion.) percentage at an average of nearly 17%, which is far lower than (that of) the previous co

9、untries. Then in the item of clothing and footwear Italy stood out with a 9%and the rest of the countries range from 5% to 7%. Different from(in contrast with) the former 2items, countries(the countries) spending didnt vary too much from each other in the item of leisure and education. Italy went to

10、 4.35% and Spain sit at 1.98%.Every country has its unique way of life(Its the people not the country that have their way of life. Id rather say People in different countries have different life styles.). We can judge them only through consumers spending, but(.But) it may be better if we(they) spend

11、 more money on education and leisure.注：中括号里的内容是觉得有问题的部分，之后括号内的内容是给出的替换.时间关系只能说这么多了，盼望能帮到你.。 4. 急求雅思小作文 pie chart The piecharts show changes in American spending patterns between 1966 and 1996. Food and cars made up the two biggest items of expenditure in both years. Together they comprised over half

12、 of household spending. Food accounted for 44% of spending in 1966, but this dropped by two thirds to 14% in 1996. However, the outlay on cars doubled, rising from 23% in 1966 to 45% in 1996. Other areas changed significantly. Spending on eating out doubled, climbing from 7% to 14%. The proportion o

13、f salary spent on computers increased dramatically, up from 1% in 1996 to 10% in 1996. However, as computer expenditure rose, the percentage of outlay on books plunged from 6% to 1%. Some areas remained relatively unchanged. Americans spent approximately the same amount of salary on petrol and furni

14、ture in both years. In conclusion, increased amounts spent on cars, computers, and eating out were made up for by drops in expenditure on food and books. 5. 雅思c7t4小作文,求范文 The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. 考官范文： The char

15、ts compare the sources of electricity in Australia and France in the years 1980 and 2000. During these years electricity production almost doubled, rising from 100 units to 170 in Australia, and from 90 to 180 units in France. In 1980 Australia used coal as the main electricity source (50 units) and

16、 the remainder was produced from natural gas, hydro power (each producing 20 units) and oil (which produced only 10 units). By 2000, coal had become the fuel for more than 75% of electricity produced and only hydro power continued to be another significant source supplying approximately 20%. In cont

17、rast, France used coal as a source for only 25 units of electricity in 1980, which was matched by natural gas. The remaining 40 units were produced largely from oil and nuclear power, with hydro power contributing only 5 units. But by 2000 nuclear power, which was not used at all in Australia, had d

18、eveloped into the main source, producing almost 75% of electricity, at 126 units, while coal and oil together produced only 50 units. Other sources were no longer significant. Overall, it is clear that by 2000 these two countries relied on different principal fuel sources: Australia relied on coal a

19、nd France on nuclear power. 6. 10个英语小作文,50字左右 什么都行,要快点 ,急 My teacher is Miss Li.She is my favorite teacher.Shes tall,slim and very smart.Her favorite colour is blue.Shee likes reading and travelling when shee was free.Besides,she is helpful and patient as shes always ready to help people who got in

20、trouble.She ever won the first prize in the teaching competition i always like doing housework when i am free in weekends.And On saturday this week,I washed my clothes and shoes.I am really fond of doing it because i feel happy when i put myself in busy.And i did cook some dishes.And my parents enjo

21、y it very much.They said it was delicious and i was happy. Latern festival is one of my favorite festivals.My parents always take me to grandmas home to spend some time with them.We eat dumplings together and we always have a great time!and in this Years Lantern Festival,i also went to my grandparen

22、ts home.It seemed that they are happy to see me.then we went out to have a great meal.it was really cool! INTRODUCTION Wood, is hard, tough substance that forms the trunks of trees, and that has been used for thousands of years as a fuel and as a material of construction (see Building Construction).

23、 Technically, the term wood includes similar materials in other parts of the plant, including even the so-called veins in leaves, but only those portions of wood which have commercial importance are discussed in this article. House Frame Construction House Frame ConstructionCarpenters construct the

24、wooden frame for a suburban home near Houston, Texas. With the common use of steel and concrete for most building construction, work opportunities for carpenters have been concentrated in the area of residential construction.Encarta EncyclopediaPhoto Researchers, Inc./Spencer GrantFull Size For the

25、botanical aspects of wood, including its structure and growth, see Tree; Xylem. For growth and distribution, see Forest. For the cultivation of trees for wood, see Forestry. For the cutting of trees and the manufacture of lumber, see Lumber Industry. II.GRAIN AND STRUCTUREHeartwood and Sapwood Heart

26、wood and Sapwood This diagram shows the types of wood found in a typical tree trunk. The wood at the center of the trunk, the heartwood, is older, darker, and more durable than the younger wood surrounding it. As a tree grows, a thin layer of cells called the cambium generates new wood, called sapwo

27、od, just under the bark. Sapwood is softer and tends to be lighter in color than heartwood. As the sapwood ages, natural substances called extractives invade the sapwood and gradually convert it to heartwood.Encarta Encyclopedia Microsoft Corporation. All Rights Reserved.Full SizeThe typical marking

28、s, called grain, that are found on all types of natural wood are due to the structure of the wood. Wood consists essentially of fine cellular ducts or tubes, which carry water and dissolved minerals from the roots to the leaves, and which are thus arranged more or less vertically within the trunk. W

29、hen the wood is cut parallel to the axis of the trunk, straight-grained lumber is usually produced. In some trees, however, the ducts are helical; that is, they twist around the trunk as they ascend. Such trees produce cross-grained lumber, which is also obtained from ordinary trees when the cut is

30、not parallel to the axis of the trunk. Many woods have prominent annual rings. The trunk of a tree does not grow in length, except at its tip, but does grow in width. The only portion of the trunk that is engaged in active growth is the cambium, a thin layer entirely surrounding the trunk. In trees

31、of the Temperate Zone, the cambium lays down new wood during the spring and summer, and in most trees the early wood is more porous and therefore lighter in color than the wood produced later in the season. The trunk of a tree is thus surrounded each year by a new pair of concentric sheaths, one dar

32、ker than the other. Although the thin layer of cambium is the only part of the trunk that is alive in the sense that it is engaged in active growth, living cells are also interspersed among the xylem cells of the sapwood. As the tree grows older, however, the central portion of the trunk dies completely; the ducts become plugged with gums or resins, or merely air (see Gum). This central part of the trunk is called heartwood. The internal changes are accompanied by changes in color typical of the species of trees, so that the heartwood is usually darker than the sapwood. III.CLASS