届二轮复习短文改错模拟试题10篇训练之三十四13页word版.docx
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届二轮复习短文改错模拟试题10篇训练之三十四13页word版
2019届二轮复习短文改错模拟试题10篇训练之三十四
【1】
Nowadaysmanysingersandbandshavelittletodowithgoodmusic.Theyknowlittleaboutwhatgoodmusicmean.Whatisthecause?
Sofarmostofthesesingershaveseemusicasa“job”becauseitisagoodsourceofmakingmoney.Andifyouhavegoodappearanceandsomeexpensiveclothestoshowoffatyourconcerts,thenyouvoiceisnotsoimportantasitshouldbe.Thepublicwillprefertoadmiremoreaboutthemostinterestedpartsofyourbodyandevenforgotthatyouaretheretoshowyourmusicskills,notyourdancing,whichisimportanttoo,butnotatsuchahighlevel.However,theyounggenerationshouldbeunderstandtalentandagoodvoicemattermoreintheirmusicalcareer.Alltheperformanceswhichhavelittletodowithgoodmusicfailinbewelcomedonstage.Ifayoungmanhasagreatvoiceandwantstobecomeasuccessfullysinger,heshouldtakesomespecialcoursesinthisareabecausetheywillhelphimimprovesingingabilities.
答案
Nowadaysmanysingersandbandshavelittletodowithgoodmusic.Theyknowlittleaboutwhatgoodmusic
.Whatisthecause?
Sofarmostofthesesingershave
musicasa“job”becauseitisagoodsourceofmakingmoney.Andifyouhave
goodappearanceandsomeexpensiveclothestoshowoffatyourconcerts,then
voiceisnotsoimportantasitshouldbe.Thepublicwillprefertoadmiremoreaboutthemost
partsofyourbodyandeven
thatyouaretheretoshowyourmusicskills,notyourdancing,whichisimportanttoo,butnotatsuchahighlevel.However,theyounggenerationshould
understandtalentandagoodvoicemattermoreintheirmusicalcareer.Alltheperformances
havelittletodowithgoodmusicfail
bewelcomedonstage.Ifayoungmanhasagreatvoiceandwantstobecomea
singer,heshouldtakesomespecialcoursesinthisareabecausetheywillhelphimimprovesingingabilities.
【2】
Ithinkhaveatleastonegoodteacherisveryimportant.Heorshecangivethemmotivationtodowell,eveninasubjectwemaynotalwaysfindeasy.Ifwegetonwellourteachers,learningbecomesafun.Ontheotherhand,ifwefindithardtolikeourteachers,lifeatschoolwillbeawfulbutwe'llfeelwecan'tsucceedatanything,nomatterwhathardwetry.TheteacherwhohelpsmemostwasmyEnglishteacher,MrsKelly.Shealwaysmadethelessonsinterested.Irememberwelaughedalotinherclassesandlookedforwardforthem.IhopethatIcanbeagoodteacherjustasherinthefuture.
答案
Ithink
atleastonegoodteacherisveryimportant.Heorshecangive
motivationtodowell,eveninasubjectwemaynotalwaysfindeasy.Ifwegetonwell
ourteachers,learningbecomes
fun.Ontheotherhand,ifwefindithardtolikeourteachers,lifeatschoolwillbeawful
we'llfeelwecan'tsucceedatanything,nomatter
hardwetry.Theteacherwho
memostwasmyEnglishteacher,MrsKelly.Shealwaysmadethelessons
.Irememberwelaughedalotinherclassesandlookedforward
them.IhopethatIcanbeagoodteacherjust
herinthefuture.
【3】
Inordertostrengtheningoursenseofsocialresponsibility,thestudentsinourschoollaunchedanactivityofdonatingbookstothechildreninpoorareas.WegatherinfrontoftheschoollibraryintheafternoonofJan.15th.Eachofthemgaveawaysomebookswhatwetreasured.Weevenwroteournamesandaddressonthefrontpages,hopetobecontactedandmakefriendswiththechildrenwhowouldreceivethebooks.Abouttwothousandbookswerecollectedinandsentaway.Anactivitynotonlyprovidedagoodchanceforusshowloveforothers,butalsohelpedustomakenewfriends.
答案
Inorderto
oursenseofsocialresponsibility,thestudentsinourschoollaunchedanactivityofdonatingbookstothechildreninpoorareas.We
infrontoftheschoollibrary
theafternoonofJan.15th.Eachof
gaveawaysomebooks
或
或
wetreasured.Weevenwroteournamesand
onthefrontpages,
tobecontactedandmakefriendswiththechildrenwhowouldreceivethebooks.Abouttwothousandbookswerecollected
andsentaway.
activitynotonlyprovidedagoodchanceforus
showloveforothers,butalsohelpedustomakenewfriends.
【4】
Thismorning,intheEnglishclass,ourteachershowedtousamovieABeautifulMind.ThemovietoldhimastoryaboutabrilliantprofessorJohnNash.Hemadesomanybrilliantachievementsinseveralfield.HefinallywontheNobelPrize,whatprovedthathisgreatbreakthroughhadgreataffectedpeople.Johnhadaseriousmentalillnessifhewasyoung,soherefusedtotakemedicinewhichcouldmakehismindthinkingslowly;hekeptdoinghisresearchwhilestrugglingwithhismentalillness.Theluckythingwasthathiswifesupportedhimalltime.Becauseofthesupportfromhisfamily,Johncanworkonhisjob.AfterwinningtheNobelPrize,hethankedhiswife.
答案
Thismorning,intheEnglishclass,ourteachershowed
usamovieABeautifulMind.Themovietold
astoryaboutabrilliantprofessorJohnNash.Hemadesomanybrilliantachievementsinseveral
.HefinallywontheNobelPrize,
provedthathisgreatbreakthroughhad
affectedpeople.Johnhadaseriousmentalillness
hewasyoung,
herefusedtotakemedicinewhichcouldmakehismind
slowly;hekeptdoinghisresearchwhilestrugglingwithhismentalillness.Theluckythingwasthathiswifesupportedhimall
time.Becauseofthesupportfromhisfamily,John
workonhisjob.AfterwinningtheNobelPrize,hethankedhiswife.
【5】
Afewdaysagowhentakingthewalkwithmymotherinthepark,Icameacrossaforeigner.Judgedbyhispuzzledexpression,Ithoughthemightinneedofhelp.SoIwentupandaskedwhetherIcouldhelphiminEnglish.Hetoldmehehadgotlost.Hehadturnedtoseveralpasserbyforhelp,andtheycouldn'tspeakEnglish.Thenhetoldmehisdestination.Fortunately,Iwasquitefamiliartotheplace.Inordertomakemyselfunderstand,Itoldhimhowtogothereasclearaspossible.AlthoughitwasthefirsttimethatIhavetalkedtoaforeignerfacetofacehetotallyunderstoodwhatIsaidandthankedforme.
答案
Afewdaysagowhentaking
walkwithmymotherinthepark,Icameacrossaforeigner.
byhispuzzledexpression,Ithoughthemight
inneedofhelp.SoIwentupandaskedwhetherIcouldhelphiminEnglish.Hetoldmehehadgotlost.Hehadturnedtoseveral
forhelp,
theycouldn'tspeakEnglish.Thenhetoldmehisdestination.Fortunately,Iwasquitefamiliar
theplace.Inordertomakemyself
,Itoldhimhowtogothereas
aspossible.AlthoughitwasthefirsttimethatI
talkedtoaforeignerfacetofacehetotallyunderstoodwhatIsaidandthanked
me.
【6】
Thefirstdaywegotohighschool,ourheadteachertoldusthenewswhichweneededtotakethemilitarytraining.Wewereallshockingatthenews,becauseofitwassohotoutside.Howterriblyitwas!
Thenextday,wemetourtraininginstructor,whowereyoungandhandsome.Hewasstrict,buthumorous,tellinghimjokeswhenwerested.Atnight,heaskedussingmilitarysongs.Weevencompetedwithotherteams.Thedaysofthemilitarytrainingswerebeautiful,andwefoundthetrainingwasnotthathard.Webecamestrongerandmadefriendstoourmilitaryinstructor.
答案
Thefirstdaywe
tohighschool,ourheadteachertoldusthenews
weneededtotakethemilitarytraining.Wewereall
atthenews,because
itwassohotoutside.How
itwas!
Thenextday,wemetourtraininginstructor,who
youngandhandsome.Hewasstrict,buthumorous,telling
jokeswhenwerested.Atnight,heaskedus
singmilitarysongs.Weevencompetedwithotherteams.Thedaysofthemilitary
werebeautiful,andwefoundthetrainingwasnotthathard.Webecamestrongerandmadefriends
ourmilitaryinstructor.
【7】
Whiletakingawalkwithmypetdogthismorning,Ifoundthemiddleagedmannearbywasshoutingonhisphone.Obvious,hehadabadday.Beforeheleft,Inoticedhiskeyswereontheground.SoIimmediatelypickedupandranawaytofindtheman.Severalminuteslater,Ifoundhim,whomwasstillshoutingonhisphonebesidehiscar.Iwalkedtohimandaskedifhecouldholdonalittleseconds.Atfirst,hewasangryaboutmyinterrupt.ThenIshowedtohiskeysandexplainedthewholething.Onheardmywords,heimmediatelyhanguphisphoneandapologizedforhisrudeness.
答案
Whiletakingawalkwithmypetdogthismorning,Ifound
middleagedmannearbywasshoutingonhisphone.
,hehadabadday.
heleft,Inoticedhiskeyswereontheground.SoIimmediatelypicked
upandranawaytofindtheman.Severalminuteslater,Ifoundhim,
wasstillshoutingonhisphonebesidehiscar.Iwalkedtohimandaskedifhecouldholdona
seconds.Atfirst,hewasangryaboutmy
.ThenIshowed
hiskeysandexplainedthewholething.On
mywords,heimmediately
uphisphoneandapologizedforhisrudeness.
【8】
Yesterday,asIwasqueuingatthecheckoutatastore,therewasanoldladyinthefrontofmeinline.SheseemedveryconfusingwhenthecashieraskedherpayUS$38.ShehadaboutUS$5inherwallet.Thecashiertoldherthatshecouldnotbuytheitemsbecauseshedidn'thaveenoughmoney.So,ItoldthecashierIwouldpayforthatshebought.Afterwards,Ipaidforalltheitems.WhenIgotoutside,theladywasstandingthere.WhileIwastalkingabouther,herdaughterappeared.ShetoldmethathermotherhadAlzheimer'sdisease.Thenshenoticedthathermotherhadthreebagofgroceriesandwonderedhowshemanagedtopayforthemwithenoughmoney.ItoldherthatIhadpaidforit