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雅思写作G类作文讲义

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张弛新

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雅思写作互动及欣赏区

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Task1（G）

✧TypesofLetter

1.Complaint

2.Enquiry

3.Request

4.Apology

5.Acknowledgement

6.Suggestion

7.Jobapplication

8.Recommendation

9.Self-introduction

10.Invitation

TacticsforTask1（GeneralTraining）

Structure

DearSirorMadam,——unknownauthority/stranger

DearMr./Ms./Prof/Dr（Surname）,——knownauthority

Dear（name）,——friend/relative

Re:

（position）——onlyforapplicationletter

Asoneofyour（identity）s,Iamwritingthislettertoexpressmy（emotion）——formal

Iam（name）,writingtoyoufor（purpose）——informal

Question1&2——explanationofthewholeeventandexpressionofsomeemotion

Question3——offeryourownsolution

Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreplyandthanksforyourgreatefforttodealwithit.

Yourssincerely

（Englishname）

EmotionWords

Complain

Request

Thanks

Apology

Invitation

App/Recom

JunkWords

discomfort

concern

thanks

regret

invitation

confidence

dissatisfaction

confusion

appreciation

sorrow

disturbance

interest

thankfulness

grief

annoyance

enquiry

irritation

MediumWords

uneasiness

perplexity

remorse

request

self-assurance

discomposure

bewilderment

repentance

boldness

Favorablewords

disconcertion

solicitude

chagrin

proposition

aplomb

perturbation

bafflement

contrition

solicitation

poise

vexation

compunction

lamentation

✧Complaint–说明意图+解释情况+解决方案

例：

Youliveinaroomincollegewhichyousharewithanotherstudent.Youfinditverydifficulttoworktherebecauseheorshealwayshasfriendsvisiting.Theyhavepartiesintheroomandsometimesborrowyourthingswithoutaskingyou.

WritealettertotheAccommodationOfficeatthecollegeandaskforanewroomnextterm.Youwouldpreferasingleroom.Explainyourreasons.

1.Iamwritingtocomplainabout…/that…

2.Iamwritingtoexpressmydissatisfactionwithsomebodyaboutsomething

3.Iammostreluctanttocomplain,but…

4.IfeelsorrytotroubleyoubutIamafraidIhavetomakeacomplaintabout…

Examples:

IamwritingtocomplainabouttheserviceontheBeijing-ShanghaitrainwhichItookonAugust16,2001.

IamwritingtoexpressmydissatisfactionabouttheWalkmanIboughtattheduty-freeshopinyourairportonFebruary14,2005.

✧Endofacomplaintletter

1.Iwouldbegrateful/Ishallappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldtakethematterintoconsiderationandsolveitatyourearliestconvenience.

2.Iwouldliketohavethismattersettledbytheendof…/within14days.

Writingtask1

Youliveinaroomincollegewhichyousharewithanotherstudent.Youfinditverydifficulttoworktherebecauseheorshealwayshasfriendsvisiting.Theyhavepartiesintheroomandsometimesborrowyourthingswithoutaskingyou.WritealettertotheAccommodationOfficeatthecollegeandaskforanewroomnextterm.Youwouldpreferasingleroom.Explainyourreasons.

DearSirorMadam,

IamwritingtoinformyouthatIwishtomoveintoanewroomnextterm.Iwouldpreferasingleroom,asIfindthepresentsharingarrangementinconvenient.

Imustexplainthatthereasonformydissatisfactionismyroommate’sinconsideratebehavior.Foronething,hisfriendsareconstantlyvisitinghim;foranother,heregularlyholdsnoisyparties.Inaddition,hesometimesborrowsmythingswithoutaskingme.Inthesecircumstances,Ifinditdifficulttoconcentrateonmystudies,andIamfallingbehindinmyassignments.

Iamsureyouwillagreethattheonlysolutionisformetomoveintoaroomofmyown,whereIwillbefreefromsuchdistractions.Therefore,Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldfindasingleroomforme,preferablynotinthesamebuildingbutasneartothecollegecampusaspossible.

Yourssincerely,

JaniceKennedy

考生样卷：

DearSir,DearMadam,

Iamwritingyoutoexpressmydissatisfactionwithmyroommateandrequesttoanotheraccommodationnextterm.

MymainproblemisthatIcannotstudyinmyroombecausemyroom-matealwayshasfriendsvisiting.Healsohasparties,whichusuallyendsearlyinthemorning,severaltimesaweek.Furthermoreheoftenborrowsmythingswithoutaskingme.

Icannotacceptthissituationanylonger.EspeciallybecauseIhaveveryimportantexamsnexttermandIreallymuststudyhard.ThisiswhyIwouldbeverygratefulifIcouldhaveanotherroomnextterm.Itwouldbemostconvenientformenothavingtosharemyroomwithsomeoneelse.

Iamlookingforwardtohearfromyousoon.

Yoursfaithfully

DeeWhite

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修正版：

DearSirorMadam,

Iamwritingyoutoexpressmydissatisfactionwithmyroommateandrequestalternateaccommodationstartingnextterm.

ThemainproblemisthatIfinditextremelydifficulttostudyinmyroombecausemyroommateconstantlyhasfriendsvisitingandthrowloudpartieswhichoftenlastuntilearlymorning.Thisdoesnotjusthappenonceortwiceamonth.Hehasthesepartiesseveraltimesaweek,eversincethebeginningoftheterm.Inaddition,myroommateoftenborrowsmythingswithoutaskingme.Evenafternumerouspoliterequests,therehasbeennochangeinmyroommate’sbehaviour.Ithasnowgottentothepointthatwedon’teventalktoeachother.Thishasaddedalotofunduestress,whichhasstartedtotakeitstollonmystudies.

BecauseIhaveveryimportantexamsnextterm,Imustrequestanewroom,andIwouldliketohaveasingleroom,ifthatisatallpossible.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyouwouldconsiderthisrequestatyourearliestconvenience.Thankyouforyourhelpinthismatter.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.

Yourssincerely,

SamZhang

Writingtask1

Youhavereceivedyourpayforyoursummerholidaypart-timejob,butyourpayislessthanyouwerepromised.Pleasewritealettertothemanageroftheunit,clearlystatingwhatworkyouhavedoneandhowlongyourworktook.Whileexplainingyourcase,putforwardyourdemandandsuggestion.

DearManager,

Ihavereceivedthe$800chequewhichyoupaytomeasapart-timesoftwareprogrammerinyourcompanyduringmylatestsummervacation.However,Iamatalosswhytheamountis$100lessthanyoupromisedtopayme.

Itwascontractedthatapart-timesoftwareprogrammer’sweeklywageis$300.Isignedthecontractwithyouandconsequentlyworkedinyourcompanyforatotalof3weeks.Intheperiod,Iwenttoandfromworkontimeandtoyoursatisfaction,Icompletedeachtaskthatyouassignedmewithoutanyerrors.

Also,noblameaboutmewaseverheardinanyaspect.Somytotalincomeshouldbe$900,whichis$100morethanthatIgainedfromyou.Ifirmlyinsistonyourkindexplanationofthedifferenceandmakingitupassoonaspossible.

Yourearlyreplywouldbehighlyappreciated.

Yourssincerely

JanetSmith

✧Enquiry–目的+具体问题+（急切心情+感激+联系方式）

1.Iamwritingforinformationabout…

2.Iamwritingtoseeifitispossibleforyoutoprovidemewithinformationregarding…

3.Iwouldbemostgratefulifyoucouldsupplymewiththefollowinginformation.

✧EndofanEnquiryletter

1.Thankyouforyourconsideration

2.Iamexpectingyourearlyreply.

3.Iamlookingforwardtoyourimmediateresponse.

4.Inaddition,ifyoucouldletmehavedetailsof…Iwouldbemorethangrateful.

Writingtask1

Aspartofastudentsocialsurveyproject,youareorganizingagrouptovisitahistoricalexhibitioninasmalltown.Writealetteraskingforinformationregardingsuchthingsasthecontentsoftheexhibition,andthedatesofitsopeningandclosing,andifthereareanydiscountsavailable.

DearSir,

Iamorganizingagroupofstudentstopayavisittothehistoricalexhibitioninyourtown.Thisvisitwillbepartofourschool’sactivitiestoencouragethestudentstotakepartinsocialsurveys.Therefore,Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldsupplymewiththefollowinginformation.

Firstofall,whatarethedatesbetweenwhichtheexhibitionwillbeheld,andwhatarethedailyopeninghours?

Secondly,whatisthesizeoftheexhibition,whatisitsthemeandwhatobjectsareondisplay?

Thirdly,arethereanyotheractivitiesbeingheldinconnectionwiththeexhibition?

ImustpointoutthatIhopetobringoverstudentstotheexhibition.SoIwouldliketoinquireifthereisanydiscountavailableonentranceticketsforstudents.Ifso,howmuchisthediscountandwhatistheminimumnumberofstudentsnecessarytoqualifyforit?

Ilookforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,

GeorgeMoore

✧Apology–目的+原因+再次表示歉意/补救措施

1.Iamwritingtoapologizefor…

2.Iamterriblysorry,but…

3.Thankyoufor…,butIamsorrytosaythat…

✧Endofanapologyletter

1.Ihopeyoucanacceptmyapologies.Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.

2.Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.

3.IwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldtellmeifthereisanywaythatIcanmakeupforit.Idoapologizeforanyinconveniencethismaycauseyou.

Writingtask1

Oneofyourpenpalswillshortlybevisitingyourcity.Forsomereasons,youcannotmanagetomeetherattheairportontime.Writealetteraskinghertowaitforyouattheairportandtellherhowtoidentifyyou.

DearMary,

Iamverymuchlookingforwardtoyourvisittomycity.Justthink:

afteralltheseyearsofwritingtoeachother,wewillfinallyhavethechancetomeet!

However,IregrettoinformyouthatIwillnotbeabletomeetyouattheairportassoonasyouarrive.

Thereasonisthatyourflightwillarriveearlyinthemorning,andthequickestIcangettotheairportwillbeabo