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1、14374writing雅思写作G类作文讲义主讲： 张弛新欢迎使用新东方在线电子教材张驰新随笔分类：雅思写作互动及欣赏区新闻“报”料雅友大联盟必下载文件：小新课堂 笔记 version 8.0雅思回家复习计划 插入雅思写作答题纸Task 1 (G) Types of Letter 1. Complaint2. Enquiry3. Request4. Apology5. Acknowledgement6. Suggestion 7. Job application8. Recommendation9. Self-introduction10. InvitationTactics for Task

2、 1 (General Training)StructureDear Sir or Madam, unknown authority/strangerDear Mr./Ms./Prof/Dr (Surname), known authorityDear (name), friend/relative Re: (position)only for application letterAs one of your (identity) s, I am writing this letter to express my (emotion) formalI am (name) , writing to

3、 you for (purpose) informalQuestion 1&2explanation of the whole event and expression of some emotionQuestion 3offer your own solution Looking forward to your early reply and thanks for your great effort to deal with it.Yours sincerely(English name)Emotion WordsComplainRequestThanksApologyInvitationA

4、pp/RecomJunk WordsdiscomfortconcernthanksregretinvitationconfidencedissatisfactionconfusionappreciationsorrowdisturbanceinterestthankfulnessgriefannoyanceenquiryirritationMedium Wordsuneasinessperplexityremorserequestself-assurancediscomposurebewildermentrepentanceboldnessFavorable wordsdisconcertio

5、nsolicitudechagrinpropositionaplombperturbationbafflementcontritionsolicitationpoisevexationcompunctionlamentation Complaint 说明意图+解释情况+解决方案例：You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. The

6、y have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you.Write a letter to the Accommodation Office at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.1. I am writing to complain about/that2. I am writing to express my dissatis

7、faction with somebody about something3. I am most reluctant to complain, but4. I feel sorry to trouble you but I am afraid I have to make a complaint aboutExamples:I am writing to complain about the service on the Beijing-Shanghai train which I took on August 16, 2001.I am writing to express my diss

8、atisfaction about the Walkman I bought at the duty-free shop in your airport on February 14, 2005. End of a complaint letter1. I would be grateful / I shall appreciate it very much if you could take the matter into consideration and solve it at your earliest convenience.2. I would like to have this

9、matter settled by the end of/ within 14 days.Writing task 1You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Wr

10、ite a letter to the Accommodation Office at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next term. I would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arran

11、gement inconvenient. I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommates inconsiderate behavior. For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him; for another, he regularly holds noisy parties. In addition, he sometimes borrows my things without asking me. In these circumstan

12、ces, I find it difficult to concentrate on my studies, and I am falling behind in my assignments. I am sure you will agree that the only solution is for me to move into a room of my own, where I will be free from such distractions. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for m

13、e, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible. Yours sincerely,Janice Kennedy 考生样卷：Dear Sir, Dear Madam,I am writing you to express my dissatisfaction with my room mate and request to another accommodation next term.My main problem is that I cannot study in my

14、room because my room-mate always has friends visiting. He also has parties, which usually ends early in the morning, several times a week. Further more he often borrows my things without asking me.I cannot accept this situation any longer. Especially because I have very important exams next term and

15、 I really must study hard. This is why I would be very grateful if I could have another room next term. It would be most convenient for me not having to share my room with someone else. I am looking forward to hear from you soon.Yours faithfullyDee White考官评分：6.5分修正版：Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing y

16、ou to express my dissatisfaction with my room mate and request alternate accommodation starting next term.The main problem is that I find it extremely difficult to study in my room because my roommate constantly has friends visiting and throw loud parties which often last until early morning. This d

17、oes not just happen once or twice a month. He has these parties several times a week, ever since the beginning of the term. In addition, my roommate often borrows my things without asking me. Even after numerous polite requests, there has been no change in my roommates behaviour. It has now gotten t

18、o the point that we dont even talk to each other. This has added a lot of undue stress, which has started to take its toll on my studies.Because I have very important exams next term, I must request a new room, and I would like to have a single room, if that is at all possible. I would be very grate

19、ful if you would consider this request at your earliest convenience. Thank you for your help in this matter. I look forward to hearing from you soon.Yours sincerely,Sam ZhangWriting task 1You have received your pay for your summer holiday part-time job, but your pay is less than you were promised. P

20、lease write a letter to the manager of the unit, clearly stating what work you have done and how long your work took. While explaining your case, put forward your demand and suggestion. Dear Manager, I have received the $800 cheque which you pay to me as a part-time software programmer in your compa

21、ny during my latest summer vacation. However, I am at a loss why the amount is $ 100 less than you promised to pay me. It was contracted that a part-time software programmers weekly wage is $ 300. I signed the contract with you and consequently worked in your company for a total of 3 weeks. In the p

22、eriod, I went to and from work on time and to your satisfaction, I completed each task that you assigned me without any errors. Also, no blame about me was ever heard in any aspect. So my total income should be $ 900, which is $ 100 more than that I gained from you. I firmly insist on your kind expl

23、anation of the difference and making it up as soon as possible. Your early reply would be highly appreciated. Yours sincerely Janet Smith Enquiry 目的+具体问题+（急切心情+感激+联系方式）1. I am writing for information about2. I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding3. I w

24、ould be most grateful if you could supply me with the following information. End of an Enquiry letter1. Thank you for your consideration2. I am expecting your early reply.3. I am looking forward to your immediate response.4. In addition, if you could let me have details of I would be more than grate

25、ful.Writing task 1As part of a student social survey project, you are organizing a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town. Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any dis

26、counts available.Dear Sir, I am organizing a group of students to pay a visit to the historical exhibition in your town. This visit will be part of our schools activities to encourage the students to take part in social surveys. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could supply me with the followin

27、g information. First of all, what are the dates between which the exhibition will be held, and what are the daily opening hours? Secondly, what is the size of the exhibition, what is its theme and what objects are on display? Thirdly, are there any other activities being held in connection with the

28、exhibition?I must point out that I hope to bring over students to the exhibition. So I would like to inquire if there is any discount available on entrance tickets for students. If so, how much is the discount and what is the minimum number of students necessary to qualify for it?I look forward to y

29、our reply. Yours sincerely, George Moore Apology 目的+原因+再次表示歉意 / 补救措施1. I am writing to apologize for 2. I am terribly sorry, but3. Thank you for , but I am sorry to say that End of an apology letter1. I hope you can accept my apologies. Please allow me to say sorry again. 2. Once again, I am sorry f

30、or any inconvenience caused.3. I would be very grateful if you could tell me if there is any way that I can make up for it. I do apologize for any inconvenience this may cause you.Writing task 1One of your pen pals will shortly be visiting your city. For some reasons, you cannot manage to meet her a

31、t the airport on time. Write a letter asking her to wait for you at the airport and tell her how to identify you.Dear Mary,I am very much looking forward to your visit to my city. Just think: after all these years of writing to each other, we will finally have the chance to meet! However, I regret to inform you that I will not be able to meet you at the airport as soon as you arrive. The reason is that your flight will arrive early in the morning, and the quickest I can get to the airport will be abo