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雅思作文找分论点

找分论点的方法：

绝大多数大作文话题都可以通过以下几个方面进行扩展（简称论据扩展十二大法则），现列举如下：

经济（economy）、就业（employment）、时间（time）、空间（space）、心理（psychology）、生理（physiology）、环境（environment）、教育（education）、文化（culture）、科技（technology）、情感（emotion）和个人权利（humanright）。

　　我将通过列举一些例题来印证这十二大法则的实战性。

　　Somepeoplethinktobaccoshouldbemadeillegalinthesamewayasotherdrugsbecausetheproductscontainingitareaddictive.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?

　　通过审题，此题问是否同意烟草行业被取缔。

同意则要列举烟草的一系列缺点，反之不同意，可列举其优点。

我们马上来看看十二大法则，当然不是每一项都应用，但是大多数都可以适用。

　　Advantages

　　经济：

revenue-risingforthecountryandbusinessmenconcerningthisarena,

　　就业：

offertheopportunitiesofemploymentinvariousfronts,includingmanufacturing,transporting,selling,governing,forresidents

　　时间：

 killingthetime

　　心理：

 relieveone’spressure

　　文化：

 forming/shapingcigarculture

　　Disadvantages

　　经济：

 money-consumingforsmokers

　　生理：

 beaddictivetoit,　harmfultosmokers’health,leadingtolungcancer

　　环境：

 airpollution　potentialhazardoffire

　　空间：

 passivesmoking/second-handsmoking

　　情感：

 beoverly-dependentonsmoking

　　用了上述办法，扩展出来的论据就能更加全面，有条理。

下面我再列举一个题目，来做brainstorming。

　　Manypeopleareoptimisticaboutthe21stcenturyandseeitasanopportunitytomakepositivechangestotheworld.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththeiroptimism?

　　通过审题，此题无非就是我们21世纪是利大于弊还是弊大于利，所以只要列举21世纪发展的优缺点就可以了。

我将通过之前介绍的十二大法则来进行素材的扩展。

　　Advantages:

　　经济：

 economybepromoted,efficiencybeincreased

　　科技：

 advancedtechnologyfacilitatespeople’slife

　　时间：

 time-savingwhenconductingvariouskindsofactivities

　　个人权利：

humanrightsbelaidmoreemphasison

　　心理：

 increasingnumberofrecreationalactivitiestohelppeoplerelievefrompressure

　　Disadvantages:

　　就业：

 growingpopulation,　fiercecompetition

　　心理：

 pressurecomingfromarangeofaspects

　　环境：

 environmentalpollutioncontinuinggettingworse

二所对应的短语

1经济与效率

⏹有利于经济

Spur/boostimpeleconomy,generategovernmentrevenue,investmoreto..,earnforeigncurrency,create/generatejobopportunitiesandease/relieve/alleviatethepressureofunemployment,improvelivingstandard,easethefinancialburdenofstudents.redistributetheincome

⏹不利于经济

Hinder/hamper/impedethegrowthofeconomy,worsenthesituationofunemployment,layaheavyburdenonstudents’families,endangerthestabilityandsafetyofthesociety,

⏹不赞成国家投资的理由：

Wehaveaverylimitedbudget.Weshouldmakefulluseofthetaxpayers’moneytobenefitthecommonpeople.

Chinaisstilladevelopingcountry,whichisshortonfunds.Athousandandonethingsremaintobetakencareof.

Therearestillmanypeoplelivingbelowthepovertyline,andmanyeligiblechildrencannotreceivethebasiceducationforlackofmoney.

Priorityshouldwithoutdoubtbegiventothedevelopmentofinfrastructure,notthebuildingofartcenters.

2时间与空间（土地资源的占用）

⏹省时间:

time-saving

Savemuchtime,improveefficiency,makemoreprofits（可以转到经济）

Savespace,toconstructmorehealthcare-relatedbuildingstobenefitthepublicandentertainmentestablishmentstoenrichtheirspiritualandculturallife.

⏹浪费时间time-consuming

Sth/doingsthdirectly/indirectly

Waste/lavishtime

Occupythecherishedlandresources,

3就业与竞争

Becomingincreasinglycompetitive,whichisunfavorabletoseekingjobs,nottomentiondecentjobs,worsenthesituationofunemployment,leadtomanystress-relateddecreasessuchasdepression,insomnia,tonamebutafew.

Create/generatemoreandmorejobopportunities,foster/develop/cultivateastrongsenseofcompetitionandcooperation（转经济与效率）

4压力与健康

Imposeheavystrainon/leadtomoreandmoreemotionalandabnormalpsychologicalproblems/leadtomanystress-relateddecreasessuchasdepression,insomnia,tonamebutafew.

Ease/relieve/alleviatepressure,whichisfavorabletostudyingmoreefficiently/developtheirinterestsinotherfields

5智力与教育（心态，视野，精神状态）

正方：

Widenhorizons/enrichspirituallife/helpcultivateindependence/helpcultivatethesenseofcompetitionandcooperation/increasetheircreativityandimagination/helpfindjobseasily/getachancetoexperiencethetotallydifferentcultures/inspirechildren’sinterestin/traditionalwayandthinkinghaveenduredthetestoftimeandcouldhelpyoungpeopletoavoidmistake;/mostmanualworkinvolvesonlybasicknowledge;/makeitpossibleforthestudentstoaccumulatejobexperienceearlier;/Saveagreatdealoftimeandfundforboththegovernmentandthestudents/Gettingstudents’physicallyreadyfortheircareerisalsoapartofeducationpurpose;/deepentheirunderstandingofcertaincategories/layasolidfoundationforfurtherstudy/Astrongbodyisindispensableinthesuccessofsports/Studentscanlearnfromthesameprofessorsascollegesstudentsdo./Studentscandownloadandstorethelessons,whichenablesthemtochoosetheconvenienttimeforthemtostudy/Studentscancommunicatewithprofessorsthroughemailwhenquestionsoccur./Reducethecostofschoolbuildingsandthetripbetweenhomeandcampus/．deepenstudents’memoryofimportantknowledge/isnecessaryinlearningwhichrequiresmemorizingthings/bringasenseofbelonging

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反方

1.stiflethedevelopmentofcreativity,imaginationandinterest/occupytheirstudytime/goastrayeasily/exposethemtothedarksidesofsociety/doesharmtotheirmentalhealth/failtoenjoycolorfullife/exertheavyfinancialburdenonthestudent’sfamily/Differentwayoflifeandcultureputstudents’physicalandmentalhealthatrisk./causebrainstraininthestudent’shomeland/istime-consuming/Collegesanduniversitiesarenotonlyplacesforlearningbutforsocialactivitiesaswell./Stayingbeforecomputerstoolongmayexertnegativeimpactonbothmentalandphysicalhealthoftheuser./Studentscangeton-the-siteguidancefromthefacultymembers./Passingonknowledgeisonlypartoftheroleofeducation.Teacherscannotbereplacedinmoldingstudents’characteristicsandteachingthecorrectattitudestowardssocietyandothers/Teachershelpstudentstochooseinformationandlearnitinacorrectway./Teachers’helpisnecessarywhenquestionsoccur./makeiteasierforthestudentstofindtheirjob/stimulatethedevelopmentofeconomywithwell-trainedlaborpool/facilitateunderstandingoftheoreticalknowledge

6发展与污染

Argumentsfortourism:

1.Boostthelocaleconomy,increasethegovernmentrevenue,earnforeigncurrencyandimprovethelivingstandardofthelocals.Relievethepressureofunemployment.

2.Enhancemutualunderstanding,removehostilityandprejudice,promotegoodwillandstrengthenties.Maintainworldpeace.

3.Showcasethebrilliantcultureandglorioushistory.Promotecross-culturalcommunication.Improvetheimageofaplace.Increasereputationandupgradethestatusintheinternationalcommunity.

4.Improvethelivingenvironmentandbetterthebasicfacilities.Increaseinvestmentininfrastructure.

5.Improvethequalityofthelocals.Exposethemtotheoutsideworld.Widentheirvisionanddevelopabroadermind.

leadtotheextinctionofsomespecies

resultinshortageofenergyandnaturalresources

beirreparableandirreversibledamage

breaktheecologicalbalance

leadtoextravagantwasteofpublicfunds

bethedryingupofourlimitednaturalresourcesandthedeteriorationoftheenvironment

contaminateenvironment

generateelectromagneticradiationandjeopardizehumanhealth

bringabouttheriskssuchascomputervirus,nuclearleakage,biologicalweapons,globalwarming,exhaustionofnaturalresourcesandextinctionofmanyplantandanimalspecies

bearootofallevil

aggravatethetrafficjamsandworsenthecrowdedness

willpayahighpriceforthisnegativedevelopmentof

7权力与隐私

Violate/invade/intrude（侵犯（动词））rights/privacy/pride/dignityseriously

Thebrazenviolation/invasion（侵犯（名词））ofrights,interests,privacyanddignity.

8责任与义务

Take/shoulder/assumetheresponsibility

Shirkofftheresponsibility