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上海新东方六级作文笔记
评分原则——内容与结构
一总体评分
1.找:
idea
2.扫:
从,写作方法
3.感:
文字,文法,文体,文笔
二检查扣分点
1.作文格式
2.拼写
3.搭配
4.三“一致”
印象分——加分点/闪光点
十大闪光点(求求大家)
1.提问法
2.总结法
3.“一些人认为”
4.从句:
宾语从句、定语从句
5.并列句
6.理由词汇
7.理由段公式
8.路线句型
9.数据的表达
10.结语
十大闪光点之三——“一些人认为”——Some
无数的numerous/myriad(amyriadof)
大量的Agreat/large/huge/(in)considerable/significant/noticeablenumber/amount/quantity/portionof
对半的almost/nearly/some/closeto/approximatelyhalfof
大多的the(vast/overwhelming)majorityof
一些/另一些(抽象意义):
some–others,majority–minority
十大闪光点之三——“一些人认为”——people
公众thepublic
各行各业peoplefromallwalksoflife/thecircle/community/walkofeducation
学生examinees/testees/students
特殊人群readers/drivers
支持/反对者followers–objectors,dissenters–consenters
参与者participants/candidates/interviewees
¶十大闪光点之三——“一些人认为”——think
认为assume/argue/hold(theopinion)/claim/suggest/declare/say/assert/state/believe/insist/maintain/doubt/suspectthat
支持give/express/show/demonstrateone’ssupportfor
赞成/反对vote/ballotfor/against
castone’svote/ballot for/against
sidewith/standonthesideof
接受taketheadvise/followthesuggestion / accepttheopinion/ideathat
意见是one’sviewpointisthat/bewiththeviewthat
¶十大闪光点之一——提问法
A.直接提问法
B.间接提问法
C.连续提问法
¶十大闪光点之二——总结法
1.玫瑰Allroseshavethorns.
2.花园Nogardeniswithoutweeds.
3.金币Everycoinhas2sides.
4.利剑Everyswordhas2edges.
5.利弊Everyadvantagehasitsdisadvantages.
6.众口It’shardtopleaseall.
7.仁智Somanypeople,somanyminds.
8.伟人Greatmindsthinkalike.
9.毒肉Oneman’smeatisanotherman’spoison.
10.过及Throwthebabyoutwiththebathwater.
第一段:
1.背景法Alongwiththeadventof…
2.AsChinesesocietydevelops,greaterimportanceisattachedto…
3.Goneisthedays/years/age/period/era/timesinwhich/whenpeopleregard/take/consider/thinkof/takesth.asanew/strange/radical blessing / curse / phenomenon /concept/notion/creation/invention
4.提问法Isitablessingoracurse?
5.总结法Admittedly,therearemeritstobothsidesoftheargument.
6.Allroseshavethorns.
7.Nogardeniswithoutweeds.
8.Answersshallfindithardtopleaseall,astheoldsaygoes.
9.Astheproverbgoes:
“Everycoinhasitstwosides”,___isnoexception.
10.Astowhetheritisablessingoracurse,however,peopletakedifferentattitudes.
11.Atpresent,somepeoplethink____,whileothersclaim____. Bothsideshavetheirmeritsanddrawbacks.
12.Consensushasneverbeenreachedonthisissue.
13.Everyadvantagehasitsdisadvantages.
14.组合句型Astheproverbgoes:
"Somanypeople,somanyminds.",itisquiteunderstandablethatpeoplefromdifferentbackgroundsputdifferentinterpretationsonthesameissueofsth.
第二段
1.Ontheonehand/Foronething…
2.Supportersfirmlysuggestthat…
3.Themajorityisinfavoroftheidea/pointoutthefactthatsth.isbeneficialto…
4.Thesepeopleholdtheviewthat…
5.Thunderousapplausecouldbeheardtomaintaintheideathat…
6.因果法Theyalsoarguethatsthishelpfulto…
7.数据法Accordingtoarecentsurvey,…
第三段
1.Onetheothersideofthecoin/Ontheotherhand/Foranother
2.Adversecriticismcomplainsthat…
3.Criticismcouldalsobenoticedtoshowpeople’sconcernover…
4.Discommenders/Antiscouldnotconcurwiththeformerbyinsisting…
5.因果法Theminority,however,standsonadifferentground. Theycomplainthatitdoesharmtosth.
6.Moreover,theysuggest,sth.mightexertnegativeeffectson…
7.举例法Acaseinpoint,…
第四段
1.单刀式Allthingsconsidered,aunshakableconclusioncouldbesafelydrawnthat…
2.Asismentionedabove,…
3.Balancingtheadvantagesanddisadvantages/negativeeffectsandpositiveeffectsof…Iintendtostandonthesidethat…
4.Basedontheevidencebeforeme,Iamboundtoaccepttheviewpointthat…
5.Giventhefactorslistedbefore…
6.Iamwiththeviewthat/Iaminclinedtostandonthesidethat/Iwouldliketovotefortheformer/latterideathat/Iprefertheformer/latterviewpointthat…
7.对比式Inotetheadvantage/negativeeffect/influence/drawbackofsth,butthisalonecouldnotsubstantialoutweighthepositiveeffect/influence/merit/disadvantageofitasawhole.
8.展望式Lookingahead,wecansaywithfullconfidencethatChinawillraiseitseconomicandsocialdevelopmenttoanewleveldespiteofthecurrentdifficulties.
押题
电脑,电子辞典,留学,汽车,压力
[原创]六级写作之——第三课(ver.6502)
第三课——单一观点
¶十大闪光点之四——从句(主语,宾语,表语,定语,状语,同位语)
宾语从句——引出观点
定语从句——引出人事物
¶十大闪光点之五——并列句
1.简单连词:
and,or,but,if,because
2.关联连词:
both…and…,notonly…butalso…
3.短语连词:
asif,aslongas,inorderthat
4.分词连词:
supposing,considering,provided
2十大闪光点之六——理由段公式
1.序列词:
the序数词/firstandforemost/lastbutnotleast
theother/another
athird
oneof
2.+n.:
point/thing/fact/factor
merit/demerit/positiveinfluence/advantage
rule/principle
3.+VP:
toremember/tobekeptinmind/oughttobetakenintoconsiderationshallbeborne/keptinmind/couldnotbeforgot/neglected/ignored
worthmentioning
ofgreatimportance/significance
holdingthebalance
Iwouldliketomention/thattalks/thatholdswater
4.+isthat
5.+从句
十大闪光点之七——理由词汇
工作学习
1.昂贵:
costly,expensive,lavish,extravagant
2.帮助:
helpful,useful,beneficial,think/speak/praisehighlyofsth.,assist,free…from,makecontributionto,doone’sbitto
3.便利:
efficiency,convenience,easy,handy,simple,comfortable,ready-to-use,friendlyinterface
4.节省:
save/waste time/money/space/energy,time-consuming,“Livenow,paylater.”
5.节约:
economical,thrifty/thrift,frugal/frugality
6.经验:
socialexperience,enterthesociety,accumulate,inexperienced,green-hand,stepbystep
7.提高:
improve,enhance,develop,upgrade,better,perfect,upgrade,advance,makemuchprogress/improvementin…(field)
8.重视:
payattentionto,attachimportanceto,lay/giveemphasison,giveemphasisto,liststh.onthetopofagenda,rankthefirst,sth.comesfirst
9.重要:
important,indispensable,essential,crucial,decisive,vital,fundamental,decisive,critical,inseparable,beoflessimportance,becomeone’sutmostconcern
10.信任:
credit,decentbackground,world-renowned,trustworthy,respect,honor
十大闪光点之七——理由词汇
性格态度
1.独立:
independence,individuality,byoneself,standonone’sownfeet
2.目标:
ambition,strategicgoal,aim,realize,dreamscometrue,target
3.能力:
competition,capability,ability,proficiency,creativity,tolerance,perseverance,capacity
4.缺点:
overbearing傲慢的,arrogant,selfish,dependent,conservative保守的,isolated,self-centered,indifferent,neglect,paynoattentionto,turnablindeyeto,turnacoldshouldertosb.,turnadeafearto
5.团结:
cooperate,teamspirit,teamplayer,considerate,thoughtful,sociable,worktogether,jointeffort
6.信心:
(self)confidence,convince
¶十大闪光点之七——理由词汇
环境卫生
1.肮脏:
dirty,filthy,messy,atsixesandsevens
2.环境:
environment,surroundings,workingcondition
3.卫生:
publichealth,hygiene
4.污染:
pollute,pollutant,poisonous,harmful,contaminate,contaminant
安全健康
1.安全:
insafe,free…from
2.疾病:
disease,illness,attack,seriousthreat,spread
3.健康:
mental/physicalhealth,physicalwell-being,strong,energetic,keepfit,figure,buildup,loseweight
4.危险:
indanger,risk,hazard,harmful
第一段:
1.对比法Thereisnoconsensusofopinionsamongpeopleaboutsth. Somepeopleareoftheviewthat… Whileotherstakeanoppositeside,firmlybelievingthat… AsfarasIamconcerned,theformer/latternotionispreferableinmanysenses.Thereasonsareobvious.
2.Ifonehasconsideredthefollowingperspectives,hecouldonlyagreewiththetitlestatementasIdo
3.反问法Canwestresstheimportanceof…toomuch?
Never!
4.总分法Iwouldstatemyobjectiontothisissueafteranalyzingthefollowingthreereasons.
5.Amongcountlessfactorsthatinfluencemydecision,therearetwo/threeconspicuousaspects.
6.Thisviewisbasedonthepropensityoffollowingpoints.
7.Toassumethatsth.isbeneficialisdestinedtomissthefollowingpoints.
8.TherearenumerousreasonswhyIadvocatetheargumentofsth.andIwouldexploreafewofthemostimportantoneshere.
9.Inthefollowingparagraph,Iwillventuretoexplorethereasonswhy…谦虚
第二段:
层次标志词
1.Inthefollowingparagraph,Iwouldventuretoexplorethereasonswhy…
2.Tostartwith,firstofall,firstandforemost,whenitcomesto,Nowthereisagrowingawarenessthat...
3.Itistimeweexplorethetruthof...
4.Nowhereinhistoryhastheissuebeenmorevisible.
5.Besides,inaddition,what’smore/worse,tomakethematterworse…
6.Finally,lastbutnotleast,thelastbutnottheleast…
7.Themainreason/factor/advantagethatcanbeseenbyeveryoneisthat…
8.Themajoreffectisthat…效果(affect影响)
9.Another…thatwemustconsider/takeintoconsideration/cannotignoreisthat…
10....butthatisonlypartofthehistory.
11.Anotherequallyimportantaspectis...
12.Aisbutoneofthemanyeffects.Anotheris...
13.Besides,otherreasonsare...
理由段公式
a)Thefirstpointtobekeptinmindisthat
b)ThesecondmeritIwouldliketomentionisthat
c)Thethirdthingthatshouldbetakenintoseriousconsiderationisthat
d)Thefourthrulethatcouldnotbeforgot/neglected/ignoredisthat
列举法
1.Oneverystrongargumentfordoingsth.isthat…
2.Wemaylookintoeverypossiblereason,however,foremostreasonfor(doing)sth.is…
3.Thefirstreasoncanbeseenbyeverypersonisthat…
4.Thosewhoobjecttothisideaforgetauniversaltruth:
…
5.First,wecanobserveeasilythat…
6.Theothernotoriousdisadvantagesofsth.isthat…
7.Someagreewiththestatementwitho