上海新东方六级作文笔记.docx

1、上海新东方六级作文笔记 评分原则内容与结构一总体评分1. 找：idea2. 扫：从，写作方法3. 感：文字，文法，文体，文笔二检查扣分点1. 作文格式2. 拼写3. 搭配4. 三“一致”印象分加分点/闪光点十大闪光点（求求大家）1. 提问法2. 总结法3. “一些人认为”4. 从句：宾语从句、定语从句5. 并列句6. 理由词汇7. 理由段公式8. 路线句型9. 数据的表达10. 结语十大闪光点之三“一些人认为”Some无数的numerous/myriad (a myriad of)大量的A great / large / huge / (in)considerable / significan

2、t / noticeable number / amount / quantity / portion of对半的almost / nearly / some / close to / approximately half of大多的the (vast / overwhelming) majority of一些/另一些（抽象意义）：some others, majority minority十大闪光点之三“一些人认为”people公众the public各行各业people from all walks of life / the circle/community/walk of educat

3、ion学生examinees / testees / students特殊人群readers / drivers 支持/反对者followers objectors, dissenters consenters参与者participants / candidates / interviewees 十大闪光点之三“一些人认为”think认为assume / argue / hold (the opinion) / claim / suggest / declare / say / assert / state / believe / insist/ maintain / doubt / susp

4、ect that支持give / express / show / demonstrate ones support for赞成/反对vote / ballot for/againstcast ones vote / ballotfor / againstside with / stand on the side of接受take the advise / follow the suggestion/accept the opinion / idea that意见是ones viewpoint is that / be with the view that 十大闪光点之一提问法A. 直接提问法

5、B. 间接提问法C. 连续提问法 十大闪光点之二总结法1. 玫瑰All roses have thorns.2. 花园No garden is without weeds.3. 金币Every coin has 2 sides.4. 利剑Every sword has 2 edges.5. 利弊Every advantage has its disadvantages.6. 众口Its hard to please all.7. 仁智So many people, so many minds.8. 伟人Great minds think alike.9. 毒肉One mans meat is

6、another mans poison.10. 过及Throw the baby out with the bath water.第一段：1. 背景法Along with the advent of2. As Chinese society develops, greater importance is attached to3. Gone is the days / years / age / period / era / times in which / when people regard / take / consider / think of / take sth. as a new

7、 / strange / radicalblessing/curse/phenomenon/ concept / notion / creation / invention4. 提问法Is it a blessing or a curse?5. 总结法Admittedly, there are merits to both sides of the argument.6. All roses have thorns.7. No garden is without weeds.8. Answers shall find it hard to please all, as the old say

8、goes.9. As the proverb goes: “Every coin has its two sides”, _ is no exception.10. As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.11. At present, some people think _, while others claim _.Both sides have their merits and drawbacks.12. Consensus has never been rea

9、ched on this issue.13. Every advantage has its disadvantages.14. 组合句型As the proverb goes: So many people, so many minds., it is quite understandable that people from different backgrounds put different interpretations on the same issue of sth.第二段1. On the one hand / For one thing2. Supporters firmly

10、 suggest that 3. The majority is in favor of the idea / point out the fact that sth. is beneficial to4. These people hold the view that5. Thunderous applause could be heard to maintain the idea that6. 因果法They also argue that sth is helpful to7. 数据法According to a recent survey, 第三段1. One the other si

11、de of the coin / On the other hand / For another2. Adverse criticism complains that3. Criticism could also be noticed to show peoples concern over4. Discommenders / Antis could not concur with the former by insisting5. 因果法The minority, however, stands on a different ground.They complain that it does

12、 harm to sth.6. Moreover, they suggest, sth. might exert negative effects on 7. 举例法A case in point, 第四段1. 单刀式All things considered, a unshakable conclusion could be safely drawn that 2. As is mentioned above, 3. Balancing the advantages and disadvantages / negative effects and positive effects of I

13、intend to stand on the side that 4. Based on the evidence before me, I am bound to accept the viewpoint that 5. Given the factors listed before6. I am with the view that / I am inclined to stand on the side that / I would like to vote for the former / latter idea that / I prefer the former / latter

14、viewpoint that7. 对比式I note the advantage / negative effect / influence / drawback of sth, but this alone could not substantial outweigh the positive effect / influence / merit / disadvantage of it as a whole.8. 展望式Looking ahead, we can say with full confidence that China will raise its economic and

15、social development to a new level despite of the current difficulties.押题电脑，电子辞典，留学，汽车，压力原创六级写作之第三课（ver.6502）第三课单一观点 十大闪光点之四从句（主语，宾语，表语，定语，状语，同位语）宾语从句引出观点定语从句引出人事物 十大闪光点之五并列句1. 简单连词：and, or, but, if, because2. 关联连词：both and, not only but also3. 短语连词：as if, as long as, in order that4. 分词连词：supposing,

16、considering, provided2 十大闪光点之六理由段公式1. 序列词：the 序数词 / first and foremost / last but not leastthe other / anothera thirdone of2. + n. ：point / thing / fact / factormerit / demerit / positive influence / advantagerule / principle3. + VP ：to remember / to be kept in mind / ought to be taken into consider

17、ation shall be borne / kept in mind / could not be forgot / neglected / ignoredworth mentioningof great importance / significanceholding the balanceI would like to mention / that talks / that holds water4. + is that5. + 从句十大闪光点之七理由词汇工作学习1. 昂贵：costly, expensive, lavish, extravagant2. 帮助：helpful, usef

18、ul, beneficial, think / speak / praise highly of sth., assist, free from, make contribution to, do ones bit to3. 便利：efficiency, convenience, easy, handy, simple, comfortable, ready-to-use, friendly interface4. 节省：save / wastetime / money / space / energy, time-consuming, “Live now, pay later.”5. 节约：

19、economical, thrifty/thrift, frugal/frugality6. 经验：social experience, enter the society, accumulate, inexperienced, green-hand, step by step7. 提高：improve, enhance, develop, upgrade, better, perfect, upgrade, advance, make much progress/improvement in (field)8. 重视：pay attention to, attach importance t

20、o, lay / give emphasis on, give emphasis to, list sth. on the top of agenda, rank the first, sth. comes first9. 重要：important, indispensable, essential, crucial, decisive, vital, fundamental, decisive, critical, inseparable, be of less importance, become ones utmost concern10. 信任：credit, decent backg

21、round, world-renowned, trustworthy, respect, honor十大闪光点之七理由词汇性格态度1. 独立：independence, individuality, by oneself, stand on ones own feet2. 目标：ambition, strategic goal, aim, realize, dreams come true, target3. 能力：competition, capability, ability, proficiency, creativity, tolerance, perseverance, capaci

22、ty4. 缺点：overbearing傲慢的, arrogant, selfish, dependent, conservative保守的, isolated, self-centered, indifferent, neglect, pay no attention to, turn a blind eye to, turn a cold shoulder to sb., turn a deaf ear to5. 团结：cooperate, team spirit, team player, considerate, thoughtful, sociable, work together,

23、joint effort6. 信心：(self)confidence, convince 十大闪光点之七理由词汇环境卫生1. 肮脏：dirty, filthy, messy, at sixes and sevens2. 环境：environment, surroundings, working condition3. 卫生：public health, hygiene4. 污染：pollute, pollutant, poisonous, harmful, contaminate, contaminant安全健康1. 安全：in safe, free from2. 疾病：disease, il

24、lness, attack, serious threat, spread3. 健康：mental / physical health, physical well-being, strong, energetic, keep fit, figure, build up, lose weight4. 危险：in danger, risk, hazard, harmful第一段：1. 对比法There is no consensus of opinions among people about sth.Some people are of the view thatWhile others ta

25、ke an opposite side, firmly believing thatAs far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious.2. If one has considered the following perspectives, he could only agree with the title statement as I do3. 反问法Can we stress the importance of too much?N

26、ever!4. 总分法I would state my objection to this issue after analyzing the following three reasons.5. Among countless factors that influence my decision, there are two/three conspicuous aspects.6. This view is based on the propensity of following points.7. To assume that sth. is beneficial is destined

27、to miss the following points.8. There are numerous reasons why I advocate the argument of sth. and I would explore a few of the most important ones here.9. In the following paragraph, I will venture to explore the reasons why 谦虚第二段：层次标志词1. In the following paragraph, I would venture to explore the r

28、easons why2. To start with, first of all, first and foremost, when it comes to, Now there is a growing awareness that. 3. It is time we explore the truth of . 4. Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible.5. Besides, in addition, whats more/worse, to make the matter worse6. Finally, last but

29、 not least, the last but not the least7. The main reason/factor/advantage that can be seen by everyone is that8. The major effect is that效果（affect影响）9. Another that we must consider/take into consideration / cannot ignore is that10. . but that is only part of the history. 11. Another equally importa

30、nt aspect is . 12. A is but one of the many effects. Another is . 13. Besides, other reasons are.理由段公式a) The first point to be kept in mind is thatb) The second merit I would like to mention is thatc) The third thing that should be taken into serious consideration is thatd) The fourth rule that coul

31、d not be forgot / neglected / ignored is that列举法1. One very strong argument for doing sth. is that2. We may look into every possible reason, however, foremost reason for (doing) sth. is3. The first reason can be seen by every person is that4. Those who object to this idea forget a universal truth: 5. First, we can observe easily that6. The other notorious disadvantages of sth. is that7. Some agree with the statement witho