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初萌老师提供的经典写作模板
作文模版
第一环节:
提纲环节
两面型
果因型
“How”型
开头段
提出双方观点
提出现象+过渡句
提出问题+过渡句
中间段
自己观点的原因1
原因1
方法1
自己观点的原因2
原因2
方法2
自己观点的原因3
原因3
方法3
结论段
双方观点结论
现象前景结论
方法前景结论
第一步:
写出开头段
模块1:
两面型提出观点开头(转折法开头)
模板:
Itiswidelyacceptedthat___________(主题),_____________(名扩插入语,对这个主题进行一些修饰),谓语动词+扩展从句(有宾语可以使用定从,无宾语可以使用状从)However,othersarguethat___________(主题的近义词,避免与上一句重复),moreoftenthannot(副词做插入语),isharmfultothepeople_________
例如:
工作压力是好事还是坏事?
Itiswidelyacceptedthatpressureinwork,forcefullyimposedontheemployeesinthiscompetitiveworld,canbringsomepositiveresultsonthegroundsthatitcanstimulatethestaffimmensely.However,othersarguethatstress,moreoftenthannot,isharmfultothepeoplewhocannotassumeexcessivepressureintheirwork.
模块2:
果因型提出现象
Recently,oneofthehottest(mostcontroversial)topic/issuearousinggeneralconcernisthat___________(主题),_____________(名扩插入语,对这个主题进行一些修饰),谓语+宾语+定从。
Inmyopinion,thereareseveralfactorsresponsibleforthis(phenomenon,increase,situation,problem…….)
Recently,oneofthehottest(mostcontroversial)topicarousinggeneralconcernisthatstress,moreoftenthatnot,isharmfultotheemployeeswhocannotassumeexcessivepressure.Itisnosimplytasktoidentifythenegativeeffectsofthisphenomenonwhichinvolvesseveralcomplicatedfactors./Inmyopinion,thereareseveralfactorsresponsibleforthisproblem.
模块3:
Nowadays,mountingattentionhasbeenturnedtothe___________(主题),_____________(名扩插入语,对这个主题进行一些修饰Thereforeitishightimethatmeasuresweretakentopreventthis.
Nowadays,mountingattentionhasbeenturnedtothehighpressureinwork,invariablybroughttoeveryoneinthiscompetitiveworld.Theimmediateconsequenceisthedamageofindividualemployee’shealth.Thelonger-rangeresultcanbeadeclineinphysicforthewholeworkforcesincethisproblemhasbecomemoreevidentineachworkingunit.Thereforeitishightimethatmeasuresweretakentopreventthis.
第2步:
中间段的提纲
模块4:
两面型中间段提纲
所要驳斥的观点的原因
所支持的原因(复杂)
中间段
原因1(简短)
原因1+例证
原因2(简短)
原因2+强调句
原因3(简短)
原因3
第3步:
写出最后段
模块5:
两面型结尾:
Astheproverbsays“Nogardeniswithoutitsweed”.________(形容词)tosomeextentas___________is(as的倒装句),Istilladvocate______________(自己的观点).
例如:
Essentialtosomeextentasworkpressureis(as的倒装句),Istilladvocatereducingitbyefforts.
模块6:
因果型结尾
Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayreasonablycometotheconclusionthat__________(主题)。
Wemustcallforanimmediateaction,becausethecurrentsituationof(主题词)_____________,permittedtocontinue,willsurelyleadtotheend/destruction/damageof/to______./
或Thissituation/tendencywillsurelycontinuethatitdeservesmoreintensiveresearchandpublicconcern.
模块7:
How型结尾
Followingthesesuggestionsmaynotguaranteethesuccess/solution,butthepay-offmightbeworththeeffort.Itwillbenefit/contributeto_____________(效果)eventually.
第三环节:
写作环节
模块8:
中间第2段
Butaccordingtome,Ifirmlyholdthatitsnegativeeffectoutweighsitsbenefitsforthefollowingreasons或workstrainismoredevastatingthanbeneficial.Tobeginwith,toomuchpressurecandamageemployee’shealth,whichinreturnproducesanegativeeffectonthework.What’smore,theenthusiasmofthestaffcanbequenchediftheyareexposedtooverwhelmingstress.Finally,astrainedmindoftheemployeemayreducetheirefficiencyinwork,themostimportantfactortoimprovetheoutput.
Depict
第四部分例文
1.安乐死问题:
例文:
Itisadmittedthatthepracticeofassistedsuicide,acontroversialissueinmedicalarea,istosomeextentpositiveonthegroundsthatitcanhelpsomedyingpatientstodiepainlesslyundertheirrequests.However,othersarguethatthiskindofperformanceisinhumanebecauseitmaymercilesslydeprivehumansoftheirrightstolive.
Butaccordingtome,thepermissionofeuthanasiaismorecruelthanconsiderate.Theimmediatereasontoprohibititliesinthefactthatinmanycases,apatient’srighttodiehassubtlybecomeadutytodie.Besides,viciouscrimesoftencomewiththiskindofmercykilling.Finally,assistedsuicideoreuthanasia,aneasyyetpromptwaytoendhumanlife,maythrowawaythepatient’sopportunitiestowaitforanewtreatmenteffectivetoterminalillness.
Asaproverbgoes,NoGardeniswithoutitsWeed.Humanetosomedegreeaseuthanasiais,anycountrycannotaffordtopermititspractice.Ifthoseapprovingthismeasurecantakeintoconsiderationitsseriousconsequences,euthanasiamayseemunfair.
例文2:
对教师的评估
Itiswildlyacceptedthatstudents’evaluatingorcriticizingtheirteachers,asakindoffeedback,istosomeextentpositiveonthegroundsthatitcanhelptoeliminateunqualifiedorirresponsibleteacherssoastoenhancethequalityofeducation.However,othersarguethatthiskindofperformancewillresultinalossofrespectanddisciplineintheclass.
Theprincipalargumentadvancedbythoseopposingitisthatbyadoptingthis“critical”method,studentsmightbeencouragedtobereadyforarguing,todisagreeandtocriticizenomattertheteachersareexcellentorunqualified.Theimmediateconsequenceisthatthecontempttoteachersbringsaboutthelossofdisciplineintheclass.Thelonger-rangeresultistheruinoftheteacher-studentrelationship,whichwilleffectthestudent’sdevelopment,eventotherestofhislife.
Butaccordingtome,implementingevaluatingsysteminschoolisaneffectivewaytoimprovethequalityofeducation.Themostimmediatereasonisthatitcanbringaboutabenigncompetitionamongteacherssoastodistinguishthoseunqualifiedorirresponsibleteachersfromthetopones.Itisthemotivationgeneratedbythiskindofrival-shipthatmakesagreatprogressinteaching.Forexample,NewOrientalSchool,oneofthefirstclasslanguagetrainingcenters,carriesoutthe“evaluatingsystem”onteachersfromthebeginningofitsestablishment,whichinfusesimmenseenergytothegrowthofits“fleet”.Besides,bythispractice,studentsandteacherswouldhavebettercommunicationwitheachotherforstudentscanvoicetheirownopinionsandteachersareabletoobtainabetterfeedbackaboutwhetherwhattheyteachisgraspedornotandwhethertheteachingmethodsareappropriateornot.Finally,thisperformancefacilitatesthestudentstohaveoriginalideas,gainadeeperunderstandingoftheirlessonsandlearntheartofdisagreeing,theartessentialforone’scareerdevelopment.
Criticalorstressfultosomeextentasevaluatingsystemis,itisindispensableineducationarea.Ifthosewhostronglyopposethispracticecantakeintotheconsiderationofthebenefitsitbringsabout,thenevaluatingandcriticizingtheteacherswouldnotseemsounfair.
例文3:
playingagameischeerfulonlywhenyouwin.Agreeordisagree?
Itisstressedthatplayingagame,suchastakingpartinarelayrace,ischeerfulonlywhenthecompetitorswinonthegroundthatmerelythefinalresultscanproveeverything.However,othersaguethatthiskindofattitude(mentality)isnotcorrect,foritmaymakethecontestantsoveremphasizetheoutcomewhileignorethecourse.
Theprincipleargumentadvancedbythosesupportersofthenotionisthatplentifulpeopleaffirmthatwinningagameisthemainpurposeofattendingit.Anotherreasonisthatconsequenceisthebestevidencetodemonstratethebestqualitiesoroutstandingcapabilitiesofthecompetitorsinvolved.
Butaccordingtome,theopinionsmentionedabovearemoreunreasonablethanproper.Theimmediatereasontosupportmyviewisthatineverymatchorgame,winningisnottheultimateaim.Itistheprocessofparticipation,moreimportantthanfinalresult,thatcanreflectthevaluesofthecontestants.Toillustrate,Waldne,a40-year-oldtabletennisplayer,justranked4thinAthensOlympicsgameslastyear.Buthefullydemonstratedhisspiritofpersistencetotheworldthroughtheexcellentperformanceinthegame.Besides,apartfromthepleasurebroughtbyawinningresult,friendship,establishedbetweenthecompetitorsinthegame,isalsovaluable.Notonlycanithelptheathletesunderestimatetheimportanceoftheresult,butalsoletthemenjoythegameitself.Finally,theattitudeofignoringthefinalresultcaneasethenervouscontestantswhomayplaythegameunderpressure,themajorbarrierforplayerstofullyexhibittheirabilities.
Practicalasthenotion—winningresultisthefunforplayingagame—is,Istillinsistonmyview.IfthoseapprovingoftheattitudecantakeintoconsiderationoftheargumentsIhaveproposed,itmayseemunreasonable.
例文4:
Howdopeopleachievehappiness?
AnancientGreekpotoncesaid,“Nothingismoreindispensablethanhappinessinlife”.Inthiscompetitiveworld,annoyance,worriesandpressure,moreoftenthannot,disturbus.Theimmediateconsequenceisthedeclineofindividual’sheath.Thelonger-rangeresultcanbethedeteriorationoflifequalitysincethisproblemhasbecomeincreasinglyevidentinourcountry.Therefore,itishightimethatmeasuresweretakentohelppeopletoachievehappiness.
Thefirstcluetofeelenjoyableistobecomesatisfiedwithyourpresentlifeandtomakearealisticevolutionofyourself.Itisthemainsourceofunhappinessifyouareextremelycriticalaboutyourselfandpursueanunrealisticlifestylebeyondyourmeans.Forexample,tobuyawell-knownbrandcar,yourthirstforaluxuriouslife,canburdenyouwithalargeamountofdebts,asaresultofwhichyouhavetooverworkexhaustedlytoearnmoremoney.Insteadofenjoyingthenewlifeafterowingacar,youmayfeelhighlystressfulandwornout.
Secondly,weshouldlearntomodifyourattitudesonthesourceofhappiness.Itmakesnodifference