初萌老师提供的经典写作模板.docx

1、初萌老师提供的经典写作模板作文模版第一环节：提纲环节两面型果因型“How”型开头段提出双方观点提出现象过渡句提出问题过渡句中间段自己观点的原因1原因1方法1自己观点的原因2原因2方法2自己观点的原因3原因3方法3结论段双方观点结论现象前景结论方法前景结论第一步：写出开头段模块1：两面型提出观点开头（转折法开头）模板：It is widely accepted that _（主题）,_（名扩插入语，对这个主题进行一些修饰）, 谓语动词+扩展从句（有宾语可以使用定从，无宾语可以使用状从）However, others argue that_（主题的近义词，避免与上一句重复）, more often

2、 than not （副词做插入语）, is harmful to the people _例如：工作压力是好事还是坏事？It is widely accepted that pressure in work, forcefully imposed on the employees in this competitive world, can bring some positive results on the grounds that it can stimulate the staff immensely. However, others argue that stress, more o

3、ften than not, is harmful to the people who cannot assume excessive pressure in their work. 模块2：果因型提出现象Recently, one of the hottest (most controversial) topic/issue arousing general concern is that _（主题）,_（名扩插入语，对这个主题进行一些修饰），谓语宾语定从。In my opinion, there are several factors responsible for this (pheno

4、menon, increase, situation, problem.)Recently, one of the hottest (most controversial) topic arousing general concern is that stress, more often that not, is harmful to the employees who cannot assume excessive pressure. It is no simply task to identify the negative effects of this phenomenon which

5、involves several complicated factors./ In my opinion, there are several factors responsible for this problem.模块3： Nowadays, mounting attention has been turned to the_（主题）, _（名扩插入语，对这个主题进行一些修饰Therefore it is high time that measures were taken to prevent this. Nowadays, mounting attention has been tur

6、ned to the high pressure in work, invariably brought to everyone in this competitive world. The immediate consequence is the damage of individual employees health. The longer-range result can be a decline in physic for the whole workforce since this problem has become more evident in each working un

7、it. Therefore it is high time that measures were taken to prevent this. 第2步：中间段的提纲模块4：两面型中间段提纲所要驳斥的观点的原因所支持的原因（复杂）中间段原因1（简短）原因1+例证原因2（简短）原因2+强调句 原因3（简短）原因3第3步：写出最后段模块5：两面型结尾： As the proverb says “No garden is without its weed”. _ (形容词) to some extent as _is（as的倒装句）, I still advocate _(自己的观点). 例如： Es

8、sential to some extent as work pressure is（as的倒装句）, I still advocate reducing it by efforts. 模块6：因果型结尾From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that _(主题)。We must call for an immediate action, because the current situation of (主题词) _, permitted to continue, will su

9、rely lead to the end/destruction/damage of/to _./ 或This situation/tendency will surely continue that it deserves more intensive research and public concern.模块7：How型结尾Following these suggestions may not guarantee the success/solution, but the pay-off might be worth the effort. It will benefit/contrib

10、ute to_(效果) eventually.第三环节：写作环节模块8：中间第2段But according to me, I firmly hold that its negative effect outweighs its benefits for the following reasons或work strain is more devastating than beneficial. To begin with, too much pressure can damage employees health, which in return produces a negative eff

11、ect on the work. Whats more, the enthusiasm of the staff can be quenched if they are exposed to overwhelming stress. Finally, a strained mind of the employee may reduce their efficiency in work, the most important factor to improve the output.Depict 第四部分 例文1安乐死问题：例文：It is admitted that the practice

12、of assisted suicide, a controversial issue in medical area, is to some extent positive on the grounds that it can help some dying patients to die painlessly under their requests. However, others argue that this kind of performance is inhumane because it may mercilessly deprive humans of their rights

13、 to live.But according to me, the permission of euthanasia is more cruel than considerate. The immediate reason to prohibit it lies in the fact that in many cases, a patients right to die has subtly become a duty to die. Besides, vicious crimes often come with this kind of mercy killing. Finally, as

14、sisted suicide or euthanasia, an easy yet prompt way to end human life, may throw away the patients opportunities to wait for a new treatment effective to terminal illness.As a proverb goes, No Garden is without its Weed. Humane to some degree as euthanasia is, any country cannot afford to permit it

15、s practice. If those approving this measure can take into consideration its serious consequences, euthanasia may seem unfair. 例文2：对教师的评估It is wildly accepted that students evaluating or criticizing their teachers, as a kind of feedback, is to some extent positive on the grounds that it can help to e

16、liminate unqualified or irresponsible teachers so as to enhance the quality of education. However, others argue that this kind of performance will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the class.The principal argument advanced by those opposing it is that by adopting this “critical” method,

17、students might be encouraged to be ready for arguing, to disagree and to criticize no matter the teachers are excellent or unqualified. The immediate consequence is that the contempt to teachers brings about the loss of discipline in the class. The longer-range result is the ruin of the teacher-stud

18、ent relationship, which will effect the students development, even to the rest of his life.But according to me, implementing evaluating system in school is an effective way to improve the quality of education. The most immediate reason is that it can bring about a benign competition among teachers s

19、o as to distinguish those unqualified or irresponsible teachers from the top ones. It is the motivation generated by this kind of rival-ship that makes a great progress in teaching. For example, New Oriental School, one of the first class language training centers, carries out the “evaluating system

20、” on teachers from the beginning of its establishment, which infuses immense energy to the growth of its “fleet”. Besides, by this practice, students and teachers would have better communication with each other for students can voice their own opinions and teachers are able to obtain a better feedba

21、ck about whether what they teach is grasped or not and whether the teaching methods are appropriate or not. Finally, this performance facilitates the students to have original ideas, gain a deeper understanding of their lessons and learn the art of disagreeing, the art essential for ones career deve

22、lopment.Critical or stressful to some extent as evaluating system is, it is indispensable in education area. If those who strongly oppose this practice can take into the consideration of the benefits it brings about, then evaluating and criticizing the teachers would not seem so unfair.例文3：playing a

23、 game is cheerful only when you win. Agree or disagree?It is stressed that playing a game, such as taking part in a relay race, is cheerful only when the competitors win on the ground that merely the final results can prove everything. However, others ague that this kind of attitude (mentality) is n

24、ot correct, for it may make the contestants overemphasize the outcome while ignore the course.The principle argument advanced by those supporters of the notion is that plentiful people affirm that winning a game is the main purpose of attending it. Another reason is that consequence is the best evid

25、ence to demonstrate the best qualities or outstanding capabilities of the competitors involved.But according to me, the opinions mentioned above are more unreasonable than proper. The immediate reason to support my view is that in every match or game, winning is not the ultimate aim. It is the proce

26、ss of participation, more important than final result, that can reflect the values of the contestants. To illustrate, Waldne, a 40-year-old table tennis player, just ranked 4th in Athens Olympics games last year. But he fully demonstrated his spirit of persistence to the world through the excellent

27、performance in the game. Besides, apart from the pleasure brought by a winning result, friendship, established between the competitors in the game, is also valuable. Not only can it help the athletes underestimate the importance of the result, but also let them enjoy the game itself. Finally, the at

28、titude of ignoring the final result can ease the nervous contestants who may play the game under pressure, the major barrier for players to fully exhibit their abilities.Practical as the notionwinning result is the fun for playing a gameis, I still insist on my view. If those approving of the attitu

29、de can take into consideration of the arguments I have proposed, it may seem unreasonable. 例文4：How do people achieve happiness?An ancient Greek pot once said, “Nothing is more indispensable than happiness in life”. In this competitive world, annoyance, worries and pressure, more often than not, dist

30、urb us. The immediate consequence is the decline of individuals heath. The longer-range result can be the deterioration of life quality since this problem has become increasingly evident in our country. Therefore, it is high time that measures were taken to help people to achieve happiness.The first

31、 clue to feel enjoyable is to become satisfied with your present life and to make a realistic evolution of yourself. It is the main source of unhappiness if you are extremely critical about yourself and pursue an unrealistic life style beyond your means. For example, to buy a well-known brand car, y

32、our thirst for a luxurious life, can burden you with a large amount of debts, as a result of which you have to overwork exhaustedly to earn more money. Instead of enjoying the new life after owing a car, you may feel highly stressful and worn out.Secondly, we should learn to modify our attitudes on the source of happiness. It makes no difference