专四写作讲座之作文闪光点.docx

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专四写作讲座之作文闪光点

作文是各类英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。

在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的语法、词汇、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定会使你的作文如虎添翼！

　　高分作文标志

　　1、是否长短句交叉；

　　2、是否会使用插入语；

　　3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；

4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；5、句型使用是否准确、地道。

　　下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：

　　1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we/I（比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.）举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：

Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Bydoingso，itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.

　　2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。

　　如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。

　　比如说：

Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat…

　　3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。

（考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion等等）比如上面例子applicable替换proper,approaches替换ways,implement替换carryout,sharpenone’scompetitiveedge替换enhanceone’scompetitiveness（提高某物竞争力）

模拟练习　ComputerandI

　　以下是30个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下。

　　1.individuals,characters,folks替换（people,persons）

　　2:

positive,favorable,rosy（美好的），promising（有希望的），perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior替换good

　　3:

dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,ill（有害的）替换bad

　　如果bad做表语，可以有belessimpressive替换

　　eg.Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive.

　　4.（anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,ahostof,many。

。

。

ifnotmost）替换many.

　　注：

用many,ifnotmost一定要小心，many后一定要有词。

　　Eg.Manyindividuals,ifnotmost,harbortheideathat….同理用most,ifnotall,替换most.

　　5:

asliceof,quietafew,several替换some

　　6:

harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat）替think

　　（因为是书面语，所以要加that）

　　7，affair,business,matter替换thing

　　8:

shared代common

　　9.reaphugefruits替换getmanybenefits

　　10formypart,frommyownperspective替换inmyopinion

　　11:

Increasing（ly）,growing替换moreandmore（注意没有growingly这种形式。

所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.

　　Eg.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.

　　Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.

　　12.littleifanything,或littleornothing替换hardly

13..beneficial,rewarding替换helpful,  

14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,替换customer

　　15.exceedingly,extremely,intensely替换very

16.hardlynecessary,hardlyinevitable...替换unnecessary,avoidable

　　17.sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb替换sbtakeinterestin/sb.beinterestedin

　　18.captureone'sattention替换attractone'sattention.

　　19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect

20.beindicativeof,besuggestiveof,befearfulof代indicate,suggest,fear

21.giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger替换cause.

22.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth替换..reasonsforsth

23.desire替换want.

24.pourattentioninto替换payattentionto

25.bearinmindthat替换remember

26.enjoy,possess替换have（注意process是过程的意思）

27.interaction替换communication

28.frownonsth替换beagainst,disagreewithsth

29.tonameonlyafew,asanexample替换forexample,forinstance

30.nextto/virtuallyimpossible,替换nearly/almostimpossible

希望大家能够在平时的学习中多总结精彩、地道的词汇和句型闪光点！

常用连接词

ToAdd:

　and,again,andthen,besides,equallyimportant,finally,further,furthermore,nor,too,next,lastly,what'smore,moreover,inaddition,first（second,etc.）,

ToCompare:

　whereas,but,yet,ontheotherhand,however,nevertheless,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,bycomparison,where,comparedto,upagainst,balancedagainst,but,although,

conversely,meanwhile,afterall,incontrast,althoughthismaybetrue　

ToProve:

　because,for,since,forthesamereason,obviously,evidently,furthermore,moreover,besides,indeed,infact,inaddition,inanycase,thatis

ToShowException:

　yet,still,however,nevertheless,inspiteof,despite,ofcourse,onceinawhile,sometimes

ToShowTime:

　immediately,thereafter,soon,afterafewhours,finally,then,later,previously,formerly,first（second,etc.）,next,andthen

ToRepeat　inbrief,asIhavesaid,asIhavenoted,ashasbeennoted,

ToEmphasize:

　definitely,extremely,obviously,infact,indeed,inanycase,absolutely,positively,naturally,surprisingly,always,forever,perennially,eternally,never,emphatically,unquestionably,withoutadoubt,certainly,undeniably,withoutreservation

ToShowSequence:

　first,second,third,andsoforth.A,B,C,andsoforth.next,then,followingthis,atthistime,now,atthispoint,after,afterward,subsequently,finally,consequently,previously,beforethis,simultaneously,concurrently,thus,therefore,hence,next,andthen,soon

ToGiveanExample:

forexample,forinstance,