专四写作讲座之作文闪光点.docx

1、专四写作讲座之作文闪光点作文是各类英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的语法、词汇、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定会使你的作文如虎添翼！高分作文标志 1、是否长短句交叉；2、是否会使用插入语；3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词； 4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词； 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项： 1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention sho

2、uld be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 如however / therefore /for

3、example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that 3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge替换enhance ones

4、 competitiveness(提高某物竞争力) 模拟练习Computer and I 以下是30个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下。1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons) 2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad 如果bad做表语，可

5、以有be less impressive替换 eg. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation, as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a se

6、a of, a multitude of ,a host of, many。, if not most)替换many. 注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。 Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.同理 用most, if not all ,替换most. 5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it i

7、s widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因为是书面语，所以要加that) 7，affair ,business ,matter 替换thing 8: shared 代 common 9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits 10for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion 11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词

8、时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly. Eg.sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth. 12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly13.beneficial, rewarding替换helpful,14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer15.exceedingly, extremely, int

9、ensely 替换very16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable . 替换 unnecessary, avoidable 17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in 18.capture ones attention替换attract ones attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect20.be indicative of ,be sugge

10、stive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换.reasons for sth23.desire 替换want.24.pour attention into 替换pay attention to 25.bear in mind that 替换remember26. enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)27. inte

11、raction替换communication28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth29.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance 30. next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible希望大家能够在平时的学习中多总结精彩、地道的词汇和句型闪光点！常用连接词To Add:and, again, and then, besides, equally important, finally,

12、further, furthermore, nor, too, next, lastly, whats more, moreover, in addition, first (second, etc.),To Compare:whereas, but, yet, on the other hand, however, nevertheless, on the other hand, on the contrary, by comparison, where, compared to, up against, balanced against, but, although, conversely

13、, meanwhile, after all, in contrast, although this may be trueTo Prove:because, for, since, for the same reason, obviously, evidently, furthermore, moreover, besides, indeed, in fact, in addition, in any case, that isTo Show Exception:yet, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, of cours

14、e, once in a while, sometimesTo Show Time:immediately, thereafter, soon, after a few hours, finally, then, later, previously, formerly, first (second, etc.), next, and then To Repeatin brief, as I have said, as I have noted, as has been noted,To Emphasize:definitely, extremely, obviously, in fact, i

15、ndeed, in any case, absolutely, positively, naturally, surprisingly, always, forever, perennially, eternally, never, emphatically, unquestionably, without a doubt, certainly, undeniably, without reservationTo Show Sequence:first, second, third, and so forth. A, B, C, and so forth. next, then, following this, at this time, now, at this point, after, afterward, subsequently, finally, consequently, previously, before this, simultaneously, concurrently, thus, therefore, hence, next, and then, soonTo Give an Example: for example, for instance,