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英语作文范文描写文Description写作
英语作文范文
描写文(Description)写作
(一)定义描写文是用生动的语言描写各种事物、环境以及人物的状态、表现等的文体。
(二)描写的种类1.人物描写
(1)人物外貌描写
(2)语言行动描写
(3)心理活动描写
2.景物描写
(1)动态描写
(2)静态描写
3.场面描写
(三)范文评析Sample1
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositionofnolessthan150wordsonMyEnglishTeacher.Remembertowriteclearly.
MyEnglishTeacher
MyEnglishteacherisawomanofmedium-height.Sheis
inherthirties.Shealwayshasasmileonherfaceandakind
wordforherstudents.Assheisalsoalittleplump,shegivespeopletheimpressionthatsheisapatient,responsibleandeasygoingteacher.
Thispictureofmyteacheristrue.Shedevotesherself
tothecauseofeducation.Shepreparesandorganizesherlessonssowellthatwearefullyattentiveinherclass.Afterclasssheoftengiveslessonstothestudentswhohavebeenabsentfromschoolbecauseofillness.WithherhelpwehavebecomemoreandmoreinterestedinourEnglishstudy.Wheneverwehaveproblemswewillturntoherforhelp.Asamatteroffact,sheismoreanintimatefriendtousthanarespectedteacher.
Wehavelearntagreatdealfromherdevotiontoherwork,herconscientiousnessinteaching,andherreadinesstohelpothers.
Sample2
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositionofnolessthan150wordsonTheSpringFestival.Remembertowriteclearly.
LunarNewYear.It
TheSpringFestival
TheSpringFestivalistheChinese
sthemostimportantholidayinChina.PeopleusuallycelebrateandspendtheSpringFestivaltogetherwiththeirparentsand
childrenathome.
WiththeNewYearroundthecorner,everyfamilyisbusygettingreadyforit.Allthehousewivesatthistimewouldgivetheirhouseanextracleaning,makealthethingsclean,tidyandkeepeverythinginitsrightplace.
OnNewYear'sEve,everyfamilymakesdumplingsandcookmanydeliciousdishes.Allthemembersofthefamilygathertogetherandhaveafamilydinner.Afterthebigmeal,theywatchTVtoenjoytheprogramsspeciallypreparedfortheFestival.Thechildrenletofffireworks,menplayMahjongandcards.Theystayupverylate.Justatmidnight,whentheclockstrikestwelve,theyletoffvariousfirecrackersoutdoorstoseetheOldYearoffandtheNewYearin.
评析:
本文采用三段式的行文形式,首段介绍春节是中国农历新年。
随后分别描写节前人们怎样为欢度新春做准备,并详细描述除夕晚上人们以何种方式庆贺新年的到来。
这样的构思结构显得自然流畅。
Sample3
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositionofnolessthan150wordson
Sunset.Remembertowriteclearly.
Sunset
RecentlyIwasinachangeablemood.Manytroubleswerecausedbymyownrandomthoughts.HowIlongedtohavealightheartandbeinaserenemood.
Afterschoolonmywaytothedormitory,Isawthesunhanginglowabovethehorizon.Theskywasalivewithlongstreaksofredandgold.Thesun,attheendofaday'sjourney,makesthecloudslookliketheGardenofEden.Charmedbythescene,Istoodstillonthepath,consciousneitheroftime,norspace,norpeoplewhopassedby.Afeelingofhappinessandadmirationcameoverme.Iwaslostinthebeautyofnature.
Itseemedamagicworld,aworldofcolors-red,orange,yellow,greenandblue.Theyshone,flashedandchanged.Graduallyeverythingwasveiledbythepurplefog.
Icametothelawnandsawthemagicredballfloodinganddyingthegrasswitharosycolor.Byandbythegoldensunlightfadedandfainted.Therosetintvanishedandthedaycooled.Thesunlightwasnomore.Duskgatheredthickerandthicker.
Inmyvisionisanemptyspaceoffields,sosmoothandvastinthedistance.Thesunsetisnotasexcitingassunrise,notsohotandwarmatduskasatnoon.Yet,itissoquietandserene.Itcanputupwitheverything.Youknow,eventheword“beautiful”isnotenoughtodescribeit.
NowIamatpeaceandinahappymood.Ilovesunset.
Sample4
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositionofnolessthan150wordsonAutumn.Remembertowriteclearly.
Autumn
Itisautumn.Theskyisclearandcloudless.Thesummerheatisgone.Theautumnwindbringsupcool.Atoncetheversioncomestomymind,“Autumnisrichwithfruitandgrain.”ActuallyIseepomegranatesredandroundonthestallinthemarketandthepearsbig,yellowandjuicy.Mymouthwatersforthem.Thegrainshavebeenharvested,therice,wheatandcorn.
Thelaureltreesgiveofffragrance.Theperfumemakesitswaystraightintomynose.Thebrightredcannasarestandingbehindrowsoftallplanetrees.Iamwaitingfortheirleavestoturnyellow.ThenIcantrampleonthefallenleavesonbothsidesoftheground.
Attimestheautumnrainkeepsfallingsilentlyonthetreesadflowersandtheground.Itwasheseverythingclean.Whenthesuncomesout,thedropletsshinebrightontheyellowleaves.
Whatabeautifulpainting!
Autumnistheseasonforharvest;nopains,nogains.ImuststudyhardsothatIcanhaveabigharvestinallmysubjects.
Sample5
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositionofnolessthan150wordsonCountryLifeinSummer.Remembertowriteclearly.
CountryLifeinSummer
ThesummerdaysIrecentlyspentwithmycousinsatmy
uncle'sinthecountryfilledmewithhappymemories.I'
llneverforgetthecountrylifeweenjoyedthere.
Weusuallygotupatdawnandtookawalkalongthebeautifulmeadowsofwildflowers.Theairwassobalmyandfresh,andthescenerysocharmingthatitmakesonethinkofcitylifewithscornandcontempt.Theprettybirdshadjustrisenfromtheirsleepandwerehoppingfrombranchtobranch,singingtheirmerrysongs.Soontheraysofthesunglitteredontheripplingbrook.Welayundertheshadeoftreesforanhourandthenwenthome.Asweseatedourselvesinthebowersurroundedbytallbamboos,eitherplayingchessorreadingpoems,wemighthaveentirelyforgottenthehotweather,haditnotbeenfortheclamorofcicadas,whichremindedusthatitwassummer.
Severalhourslater,theglorioussunwassittingdown
inthewest.Sometimes,whentheshowerhadstopped,theeveningappearedtobemorebeautifulBoys,girls,menandwomanbegantoenjoytherefreshingbreeze.Thenoutcamethebrightandlucidmoon.Occasionallyoneortwometeorswoulddartacrosstheskyasifthatwereplayingwiththefireflies.
Byandby,theworldwaswrappedinsleep.Thesweetnotesofaflutewereheard,butattimesdiedaway,amidthesighofthesoftwindthatwasstealingthroughthewoods.Oh,howtouchingthemusicwas!
Sample6
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositionofnolessthan150wordsonOlympicFlame.Remembertowriteclearly.
OlympicFlame
Nowthe26thCentennialWorldOlympicGamesareinfullswinginAtlanta.TheOlympicflameisburningredandbrightinthetorchatthecenteroftheOlympicsquare.Earlier
beforetheofficialopeningofthegamesithadbeenrelayedonebyonethroughthehandsofrunners,amongthem,studentssupportedbytheChinesehopeproject.Thousandsofpeoplelinedthestreetstowatchtherelay.
TherelayoftheOlympicFlameisthesymbolofthecontinuitybetweentheancientandmodernGames.DuringtheancientOlympicsasacredflameburnedatthealtarofZeus.AmodernversionoftheflamewasadoptedfortheBerlinGamesin1936,andthetraditionhasbeenobservedeversince.Thetorchusedtokindletheflameisfirstlitbythesun'sraysatOlympiainGreece,andthencarriedtothesiteoftheGamesbyrelaysofrunners.Shipsandplanesareusedwhennecessary.
Therunnersarespeciallychosen.Allofthemarehardworkingandasaresultbecomeoverachievers.Theflamekindlesthefireineveryone'shearttoencouragepeopletogoonandonandbringtheOlympicspiritintofullplay.
Sample7
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositionofnolessthan150wordsonMyFavoriteMonth.Remembertowriteclearly.
MyFavoriteMonth
JuneisthemonththatIlikebest.Itisthemonththatstirsthesenses.TheweatherinJuneisneithertoohotnortoocold.
Thetreesaregreenagainandthereareflowerseverywhere.ThebudsofMayareinfullblossomnowandtheirfragrancefillstheair.ThebirdsarebackfromtheSouthandsinghappilyallday.Thewindsofwinterwereharshandcold,butthegentlebreezesofJuneareplayfulandcaressing.Thecolorsofwinterweresomberandgray,butthecolorsofJunearebrightandgay.Everyonefeelsasenseofrenewal.Peoplecantakeofftheirheavywinterclothesandputontheirlightsummerclothes.Children,whohavebeenkeptindoorsallwinter,areplayingoutdoorsnowandanticipatingtheendoftheschoolterm.Thereisageneralfeelingofreleasefromcare,andeveryoneislookingforwardtothefuturewithhope.IsitanywonderthatJuneismyfavoritemonth?
Sample8
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositionofnolessthan150wordsonMyNewRoommate.Remembertowriteclearly.
MyNewRoommate
Itwasmyfirstdayattheinstitute.Igotintothe
buildingwhereIwasgoingtolive,andlookedatdoorafterdoorformyname.AtlastIfoundit.Intheroomtherewasalreadyastudentmakinghisbed.
Afterwesaid“Howdoyoudo”toeachother,hecontinuedhiswork,payingnomoreattentiontome.“Whatastuck-up
fellow,”Ithought,Iexaminedtheroom.ItwasnotdifferentinthefittingandfurnishingsfromanyotherroomIhadseen,butithadbeenthoroughlycleaned-bymynewroommate,no
doubt.
Ilookedathim.Hewasthin,shortanddark.Hishairwaslikeabundleofstraw.Hisdirtyclothesandtiredlookwereclearlysignsofalongtravel.Hisclothesweremadeofcheapcloth.Thecoa