改错&写作.ppt

改错&写作.ppt

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高三二高三二轮复复习改改错&写作写作Findandcorrectthemistakesinwriting.Remembertherightexpressions.Puttheimportantpointsintouse.LearningaimsWriting：

Accuracy（准确使用语法和词汇）（准确使用语法和词汇）2015年考试大纲说明年考试大纲说明变化变化Writing:

调查显示大部分学生经常与父母沟通，但仍有调查显示大部分学生经常与父母沟通，但仍有一些同学认为与父母分享想法很尴尬。

就此现象写一些同学认为与父母分享想法很尴尬。

就此现象写一篇短文：

一篇短文：

1.重视家庭沟通的好处：

加强家庭联系，减少压重视家庭沟通的好处：

加强家庭联系，减少压力，建立自信力，建立自信2.你如何与家人沟通你如何与家人沟通Onemansfaultisothermanslesson.前车之鉴。

前车之鉴。

Accumulationofwonderfulandusefulexpressionsinwriting.

（1）embarrass（v.）-（adj.）embarrassed/embarrassing-（n.）embarrassment

（2）communicate（v.）-（n.）communicationcommunicatewithsb.与某人交流与某人交流（3）suggest（v.）-suggestion（可数可数n.）suggestdoingsth./suggestthat（should）do（4）strength（n.）力量，力气力量，力气-（v.）strengthenstrengthenthebondof加加强强联系系（5）confident（adj.）-confidence（n.）-confidently（adv.）builduponesconfidence（6）attachimportancetodoingsth./layemphasison/stresstheimportanceof重重视Littledropsofwatermakethemightyocean.涓滴之水汇成洋涓滴之水汇成洋（7）reduce/relieve/releasethepressure/stressonsb.减减轻某人的某人的压力力（8）bridge/narrowthegapbetweenand消除隔消除隔阂，减少差距，减少差距（9）sticktosth./insiston/holdonto坚持持stickstuck-stuck（10）asfarasImconcerned/inmyopinion/inmyview在我看来在我看来（11）agreatmanystudents/alargenumberofstudents很多学生很多学生（12）befacedwithdifficulties/facedifficulties面面对困困难Constantdroppingwearsawayastone.滴水穿石滴水穿石Practice:

putwhathasbeenaccumulatedintouseincontext.Arecentsurveyshowsthatmoststudentsoftencommunicatewiththeirparents.Butalargenumberofstudentsfeel_（embarrass）whensharingtheiropinionswiththem.Actually,everyoneshouldattachimportancetofamily_（communicate）.Itcan_（strength）thebondofthewholefamilyorbridgethegap_childrenandparents.Besides,_（share）yourpersonalproblemsandemotionswillgreatlyhelpreducethepressureonyouandbuildupyour_（confident）.AsfarasIam_（concern）,IusuallyturntomyparentsforhelpwhenI_（face）withdifficulties.Theycanalwaysgivemesomegood_（suggest）.Besides,myfamilyalwayshaveaspecialdinnertogethereverySaturdayevening,_helpsusenjoyeverysinglebitoflife.Arecentsurveyshowsthatmoststudentsoftencommunicatewiththeirparents.Butalargenumberofstudentsfeel_（embarrass）whensharingtheiropinionswiththem.Actually,everyoneshouldattachimportancetofamily_（communicate）.Itcan_（strength）thebondofthewholefamilyorbridgethegap_childrenandparents.Besides,_（share）yourpersonalproblemsandemotionswillgreatlyhelpreducethepressureonyouandbuildupyour_（confident）.AsfarasIam_（concern）,IusuallyturntomyparentsforhelpwhenI_（face）withdifficulties.Theycanalwaysgivemesomegood_（suggest）.Besides,myfamilyalwayshaveaspecialdinnertogethereverySaturdayevening,_helpsusenjoyeverysinglebitoflife.embarrassedcommunicationstrengthenbetweensharingconfidenceconcernedamfacedsuggestionswhichPractice:

proofreadingArecentsurveyshowsagreatmanystudentcommunicatewiththeirparents.Andtherearestillsomestudentsthinkingthatitsembarrassedtoshareideaswithparents.Intermsofthissituation,Iwanttoexpressmyopinions.Tostartwith,weoughttoattachgreatimportancetocommunicatewithparents,whichcanstrengthenthebondofthefamilyandrelieveyourpressure.Besides,itsfamilycommunicationwhichbuildsupourconfidenceandbridgethegapbetweenusandparents.Asfarasmyfamilyisconcerned,weusuallyenjoyaspecialdinnertogetherineverySaturdayevening,sharedourproblems.Ithinkmyfamilywillstickthetraditionforever.Arecentsurveyshowsagreatmanystudentcommunicatewiththeirparents.Andtherearestillsomestudentsthinkingthatitsembarrassedtoshareideaswithparents.Intermsofthissituation,Iwanttoexpressmyopinions.Tostartwith,weoughttoattachgreatimportancetocommunicatewithparents,whichcanstrengthenthebondofthewholefamilyandrelieveyourpressure.Besides,itsfamilycommunicationwhichbuildsupourconfidenceandbridgethegapbetweenusandparents.Asfarasmyfamilyisconcerned,weusuallyenjoyaspecialdinnertogetherineverySaturdayevening,sharedourproblems.Ithinkmyfamilywillstickthetraditionforever.Butstudentsembarrassingcommunicatingourthatbridgessharingto短文改短文改错打油打油诗短文改错要做好，常见类型应记牢。

名词爱考“数”与“格”，冠词在前“错/多/少”。

动词时态和语态，非谓语搭配莫错了。

连代形副错一样，多是故意来混淆。

介词多半考搭配，多漏误用想周到。

句法涉及到“一致”，从句多考连接词。

词法句法均未错，逻辑推理去寻找。

Lookbeforeyouleap.三思而后行三思而后行改改错满分分10分。

本分。

本题给出一篇出一篇100个个单词的短文的短文，文中有，文中有10处错误，错误类型包括：

型包括：

词法、法、句法、行文句法、行文逻辑等等。

要求考生。

要求考生对每个句子每个句子进行判断，如有行判断，如有错即将其改正。

即将其改正。

Correctthemistakesifyouhavecommittedthem,andavoidthemifyouhavenot.有则改之，无则加勉有则改之，无则加勉2015年考试大纲说明年考试大纲说明题量考点年份动词名词连词形容词/副词代词冠词介词14课标全国1改1改1删4改1改1加1改13课标全国2改1改2加改2改1改1删1改12课标全国3改1删1改1改1改2改加01改11课标全国3改2改1改1改01加2改删10课标全国2改删2改1改2改1改1加1改合计117610546高考短文改错命题规律改改错：

Unionisstrength.Wheneveryourefacedwithdifficulties,cooperationplaysanimportantpartingettingyououtoftrouble.TherewasatimewhenIwastooproudthatIlookeddownuponmyclassmate,refusingtoworktogetherwiththem.Therefore,itwasnodoubt