改错&写作.ppt

1、高三二高三二轮复复习改改错&写作写作Find and correct the mistakes in writing.Remember the right expressions.Put the important points into use.Learning aimsWriting：Accuracy（准确使用语法和词汇）（准确使用语法和词汇）2015年考试大纲说明年考试大纲说明变化变化Writing:调查显示大部分学生经常与父母沟通，但仍有调查显示大部分学生经常与父母沟通，但仍有一些同学认为与父母分享想法很尴尬。就此现象写一些同学认为与父母分享想法很尴尬。就此现象写一篇短文：一篇短文：1

2、.重视家庭沟通的好处：加强家庭联系，减少压重视家庭沟通的好处：加强家庭联系，减少压力，建立自信力，建立自信2.你如何与家人沟通你如何与家人沟通Onemansfaultisothermanslesson.前车之鉴。前车之鉴。Accumulation of wonderful and useful expressions in writing.(1)embarrass(v.)-(adj.)embarrassed/embarrassing -(n.)embarrassment(2)communicate(v.)-(n.)communication communicate with sb.与某人交流与

3、某人交流(3)suggest(v.)-suggestion(可数可数n.)suggest doing sth./suggest that(should)do(4)strength(n.)力量，力气力量，力气-(v.)strengthen strengthen the bond of 加加强强联系系(5)confident(adj.)-confidence(n.)-confidently(adv.)build up ones confidence(6)attach importance to doing sth./lay emphasis on/stress the importance of

4、重重视Littledropsofwatermakethemightyocean.涓滴之水汇成洋涓滴之水汇成洋(7)reduce/relieve/release the pressure/stress on sb.减减轻某人的某人的压力力(8)bridge/narrow the gap between and 消除隔消除隔阂，减少差距，减少差距(9)stick to sth./insist on/hold onto 坚持持 stickstuck-stuck(10)as far as Im concerned/in my opinion/in my view 在我看来在我看来(11)a great

5、 many students/a large number of students 很多学生很多学生(12)be faced with difficulties/face difficulties 面面对困困难Constantdroppingwearsawayastone.滴水穿石滴水穿石Practice:put what has been accumulated into use in context.A recent survey shows that most students often communicate with their parents.But a large number

6、 of students feel_(embarrass)when sharing their opinions with them.Actually,everyone should attach importance to family _(communicate).It can _(strength)the bond of the whole family or bridge the gap _ children and parents.Besides,_(share)your personal problems and emotions will greatly help reduce

7、the pressure on you and build up your _(confident).As far as I am _(concern),I usually turn to my parents for help when I _(face)with difficulties.They can always give me some good _(suggest).Besides,my family always have a special dinner together every Saturday evening,_ helps us enjoy every single

8、 bit of life.Arecentsurveyshowsthatmoststudentsoftencommunicatewiththeirparents.Butalargenumberofstudentsfeel_(embarrass)whensharingtheiropinionswiththem.Actually,everyoneshouldattachimportancetofamily_(communicate).Itcan_(strength)thebondofthewholefamilyorbridgethegap_childrenandparents.Besides,_(s

9、hare)yourpersonalproblemsandemotionswillgreatlyhelpreducethepressureonyouandbuildupyour_(confident).AsfarasIam_(concern),IusuallyturntomyparentsforhelpwhenI_(face)withdifficulties.Theycanalwaysgivemesomegood_(suggest).Besides,myfamilyalwayshaveaspecialdinnertogethereverySaturdayevening,_helpsusenjoy

10、everysinglebitoflife.embarrassedcommunicationstrengthenbetweensharingconfidenceconcernedamfacedsuggestionswhichPractice:proofreadingA recent survey shows a great many student communicate with their parents.And there are still some students thinking that its embarrassed to share ideas with parents.In

11、 terms of this situation,I want to express my opinions.To start with,we ought to attach great importance to communicate with parents,which can strengthen the bond of the family and relieve your pressure.Besides,its family communication which builds up our confidence and bridge the gap between us and

12、 parents.As far as my family is concerned,we usually enjoy a special dinner together in every Saturday evening,shared our problems.I think my family will stick the tradition forever.A recent survey shows a great many student communicate with their parents.And there are still some students thinking t

13、hat its embarrassed to share ideas with parents.In terms of this situation,I want to express my opinions.To start with,we ought to attach great importance to communicate with parents,which can strengthen the bond of the whole family and relieve your pressure.Besides,its family communication which bu

14、ilds up our confidence and bridge the gap between us and parents.As far as my family is concerned,we usually enjoy a special dinner together in every Saturday evening,shared our problems.I think my family will stick the tradition forever.Butstudentsembarrassingcommunicatingourthatbridgessharingto短文改

15、短文改错打油打油诗 短文改错要做好，常见类型应记牢。名词爱考“数”与“格”，冠词在前“错/多/少”。动词时态和语态，非谓语搭配莫错了。连代形副错一样，多是故意来混淆。介词多半考搭配，多漏误用想周到。句法涉及到“一致”，从句多考连接词。词法句法均未错，逻辑推理去寻找。Lookbeforeyouleap.三思而后行三思而后行改改 错满分分10分。本分。本题给出一篇出一篇100个个单词的短文的短文，文中有，文中有10处错误，错误类型包括：型包括：词法、法、句法、行文句法、行文逻辑等等。要求考生。要求考生对每个句子每个句子进行判断，如有行判断，如有错即将其改正。即将其改正。Correctthemist

16、akesifyouhavecommittedthem,andavoidthemifyouhavenot.有则改之，无则加勉有则改之，无则加勉2015年考试大纲说明年考试大纲说明题量考点年份动词名词连词形容词/副词代词冠词介词14课标全国1改1改1删4改1改1加1改13课标全国2改1改2加改2改1改1删1改12课标全国3改1删1改1改1改2改加01改11课标全国3改2改1改1改01加2改删10课标全国2改删2改1改2改1改1加1改合计117610546高考短文改错命题规律改改错：Union is strength.Whenever youre faced with difficulties,cooperation plays an important part in getting you out of trouble.There was a time when I was too proud that I looked down upon my classmate,refusing to work together with them.Therefore,it was no doubt