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,HowtoDepictCharactersEmotions,ContinuationWriting,Questions:
WhatemotionsdidXuintendtoexpressbycomposingthispoem?
InwhatwaysdidXumanagetoshowhisemotionsvividly?
LeadinAppreciateapoem,SayingGood-byetoCambridgeAgainVeryquietlyItakemyleaveAsquietlyasIcamehere;QuietlyIwavegood-byeTotherosycloudsinthewesternsky.ThegoldenwillowsbytheriversideAreyoungbridesinthesettingsun;TheirreflectionsontheshimmeringwavesAlwayslingerinthedepthofmyheart.ThefloatingheartgrowinginthesludgeSwaysleisurelyunderthewater;InthegentlewavesofCambridgeIwouldbeawaterplant!
再别康桥轻轻的我走了,正如我轻轻的来;我轻轻的招手,作别西天的云彩。
那河畔的金柳,是夕阳中的新娘;波光里的艳影,在我的心头荡漾。
软泥上的青荇,油油的在水底招摇;在康桥的柔波里,我甘做一条水草!
ThatpoolundertheshadeofelmtreesHoldsnotwaterbuttherainbowfromthesky;ShatteredtopiecesamongtheduckweedsIsthesedimentofarainbow-likedream.Toseekadream?
JusttopoleaboatupstreamTowherethegreengrassismoreverdant;OrtohavetheboatfullyloadedwithstarlightAndsingaloudinthesplendourofstarlight.ButIcannotsingaloudQuietnessismyfarewellmusic;EvensummerinsectshelpsilenceformeSilentisCambridgetonight!
那榆荫下的一潭,不是清泉,是天上虹,揉碎在浮藻间,沉淀着彩虹似的梦。
寻梦?
撑一支长蒿,向青草更青处漫溯,满载一船星辉,在星辉斑斓里放歌。
但我不能放歌,悄悄是别离的笙箫;夏虫也为我沉默,沉默是今晚的康桥!
VeryquietlyItakemyleaveAsquietlyasIcamehere;GentlyIflickmysleevesNotevenawispofcloudwillIbringaway,悄悄的我走了,正如我悄悄的来;我挥一挥衣袖,不带走一片云彩。
WhatemotionsdidXuintendtoexpressbycomposingthispoem?
InwhatwaysdidXumanagetoshowhisemotionsvividly?
3)therosyclouds;thegoldenwillows;theshimmeringwaves;thefloatingheartgrowinginthesludge;thegentlewavesofCambridge;thatpoolundertheelmtrees;thegreengrass;theboatfullyloadedwithstarlight;thesplendorofstarlight;summerinsects,
(1)Thegoldenwillowsbytheriversideareyoungbridesinthesettingsun.(比喻)
(2)Thatpoolundertheshade.holdstherainbowfromthesky.(拟人)(3).shatteredtopiecesamongtheduckweedsisthesedimentofarainbow-likedream.(比喻)(4)Evensummerinsectskeepsilenceforme.(拟人),2.InwhatwaysdidXumanagetoshowhisemotionsvividly?
1)VeryquietlyItakemyleave;QuietlyIwavegood-bye;GentlyIflickmysleeves;NotevenawispofcloudwillIbringaway.,2)alwayslingerinthedepthofmyheart;Iwouldbeawaterplant!
;ButIcannotsingaloud;Quietnessismyfarewellmusic.,Action&Gestures,Psychologicalactivities,Surroundings,Moreexamplesfromliteraryworks,Maryfeltherspiritssinkevenlower.玛丽觉得她的情绪更低落了。
Maryfeltawaveofangersweepoverher.玛丽感到一阵愤怒。
心理活动描写,Maryfelthercheeksflush.玛丽感到面颊发红。
WhenhesawthelightfromMaryscandle,hiseyeswidenedevenfurther,butthecryingstopped.当他看到玛丽的蜡烛发出的光时,他的眼睛睁得更大了,但是哭声停止了。
神态描写,Hescowled(怒视),slammingthedoorbehindhim.他怒气冲冲,摔门而去。
Shefumbled(摸索)forthekey,herheartbeatingfasterthanagallopinghorse.她摸索着找钥匙,心跳得比一匹疾驰的马还快。
Takingadeepbreath,Marypushedopenthedoorandsteppedinside.玛丽深吸了一口气,推开门走了进去。
Sheswallowedhardandsteppedintoahugeroom.她使劲咽了一下口水,走进一个大房间。
动作描写,Therainbeganagainthatnight.Itbeatagainstthewindow,wakingMaryup.Shelistenedasthewindhowledaroundthehouseanddownthechimney.Shetriedbutcouldnotgetbacktosleep.“Stupidwind!
”shethought.那天晚上又开始下雨了。
雨拍打着窗户,把玛丽吵醒了。
她听着风在房子周围呼啸,从烟囱里呼啸而下。
她想睡,但还是睡不着。
“愚蠢的风!
”她想。
环境+心理活动描写,续写中常见主观感受描写(学伴专题七),No.1开心,平庸版:
Hewashappy.进阶版:
动作描写:
Tearsofhappiness__Susans_.(沿着脸颊奔流而下)She__.(落下开心的泪水)Ibeamedat(笑容满面)him,“Welcomeback,.”Hegrinnedwithdelight(咧嘴开心地笑)whenhesawus.神态描写:
Hereyes_.(闪烁着快乐的光芒)Herface__withpleasure.(容光焕发)Hersmile__thewholeroom.(她的笑容照亮了整个房间。
)Thesmileonherface____.(像钻石一样闪耀)Hecastusaglance,withhisfacewearingabroad/wide/radiant/warmsmile.(她看向我们,面带灿烂/温暖的笑容。
)Hereyesbrimmedover(溢满)withwarmexcitedtears.(热泪盈眶),poureddown,cheeks,shedtearsofjoy,shone/glittered/sparkled/twinkledwithjoy,litup,litup,shonelikeadiamond,No.1开心,心理描写:
Awildjoy___him.(极度的开心控制占据了他)Joy__insideher.(她心中涌起喜悦。
)Hearingthis,everybody____.(欣喜若狂)Herheartwaspounding/beatingwithexcitement.(砰砰直跳)Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,itseemedasifthebabywereonthetopoftheworld.(小婴儿开心极了。
)Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.(一阵阵激动声穿过他们。
),tookholdof,welledup,waswildwithjoy,No.2悲伤,平庸版:
Hewassad.进阶版:
动作描写:
She_,hidingherfaceinherhands.(她掩面啜泣。
)He___.(失望地叹了口气。
)Hestruggledto_histears.(抑制泪水)Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.Herhandsweretrembling.Shewasonthevergeoftears.(快要哭了)Whenheembracedmewithhisarmsopenwide,Ifeltmythroatchokewithsob/tightened.(当他张开双臂拥抱我时,我觉得自己喉头哽咽。
),sobbed,sighedwithdisappointment,fightback/swallowagainst/holdback/chokeback,No.2悲伤,神态描写:
Thenews_acloudofgloomoverhisface.(蒙上了一层忧郁的阴影)Theysattherewithgloomylooksontheirfaces.(带着一脸忧郁。
)Hiseyesbrimmedwithtearsofsorrow.(他的眼里噙满了悲伤的泪水。
)心理描写:
Myheartseemedto_(tear).(心都要撕碎了)Uponhearingthebadnews,she__(感到被一股悲伤控制淹没压倒)andcouldnthelpcryingbitterly