读后续写人物情绪描写.pptx

1、,How to Depict Characters Emotions,Continuation Writing,Questions:,What emotions did Xu intend to express by composing this poem?In what ways did Xu manage to show his emotions vividly?,Lead in Appreciate a poem,Saying Good-bye to Cambridge AgainVery quietly I take my leaveAs quietly as I came here;

2、Quietly I wave good-byeTo the rosy clouds in the western sky.The golden willows by the riversideAre young brides in the setting sun;Their reflections on the shimmering wavesAlways linger in the depth of my heart.The floating heart growing in the sludgeSways leisurely under the water;In the gentle wa

3、ves of CambridgeI would be a water plant!,再别康桥轻轻的我走了，正如我轻轻的来；我轻轻的招手，作别西天的云彩。那河畔的金柳，是夕阳中的新娘；波光里的艳影，在我的心头荡漾。软泥上的青荇，油油的在水底招摇；在康桥的柔波里，我甘做一条水草！,That pool under the shade of elm treesHolds not water but the rainbow from the sky;Shattered to pieces among the duckweedsIs the sediment of a rainbow-like dream

4、.To seek a dream?Just to pole a boat upstreamTo where the green grass is more verdant;Or to have the boat fully loaded with starlightAnd sing aloud in the splendour of starlight.But I cannot sing aloudQuietness is my farewell music;Even summer insects help silence for meSilent is Cambridge tonight!,

5、那榆荫下的一潭，不是清泉,是天上虹,揉碎在浮藻间，沉淀着彩虹似的梦。寻梦？撑一支长蒿，向青草更青处漫溯，满载一船星辉，在星辉斑斓里放歌。但我不能放歌，悄悄是别离的笙箫；夏虫也为我沉默，沉默是今晚的康桥！,Very quietly I take my leaveAs quietly as I came here;Gently I flick my sleevesNot even a wisp of cloud will I bring away,悄悄的我走了，正如我悄悄的来；我挥一挥衣袖，不带走一片云彩。,What emotions did Xu intend to express by com

6、posing this poem?In what ways did Xu manage to show his emotions vividly?,3)the rosy clouds;the golden willows;the shimmering waves;the floating heart growing in the sludge;the gentle waves of Cambridge;that pool under the elm trees;the green grass;the boat fully loaded with starlight;the splendor o

7、f starlight;summer insects,（1）The golden willows by the riverside are young brides in the setting sun.（比喻）(2)That pool under the shade.holds the rainbow from the sky.（拟人）(3).shattered to pieces among the duckweeds is the sediment of a rainbow-like dream.(比喻)(4)Even summer insects keep silence for me

8、.（拟人）,2.In what ways did Xu manage to show his emotions vividly?,1)Very quietly I take my leave;Quietly I wave good-bye;Gently I flick my sleeves;Not even a wisp of cloud will I bring away.,2)always linger in the depth of my heart;I would be a water plant!;But I cannot sing aloud;Quietness is my far

9、ewell music.,Action&Gestures,Psychological activities,Surroundings,More examples from literary works,Maryfelt her spirits sinkeven lower.玛丽觉得她的情绪更低落了。Mary felta wave of anger sweep over her.玛丽感到一阵愤怒。,心理活动描写,Maryfelt her cheeks flush.玛丽感到面颊发红。When he saw the light from Marys candle,hiseyes widenedeve

10、n further,but the crying stopped.当他看到玛丽的蜡烛发出的光时，他的眼睛睁得更大了，但是哭声停止了。,神态描写,Hescowled(怒视),slamming the door behind him.他怒气冲冲，摔门而去。Shefumbled(摸索)forthe key,her heartbeating faster than a galloping horse.她摸索着找钥匙，心跳得比一匹疾驰的马还快。Taking a deep breath,Marypushed open the doorand stepped inside.玛丽深吸了一口气，推开门走了进去。

11、Sheswallowed hardand stepped into a huge room.她使劲咽了一下口水，走进一个大房间。,动作描写,The rain began again that night.Itbeat against the window,waking Mary up.She listened as the windhowledaround the house and down the chimney.Shetried but could notget back to sleep.“Stupid wind!”she thought.那天晚上又开始下雨了。雨拍打着窗户，把玛丽吵醒

12、了。她听着风在房子周围呼啸，从烟囱里呼啸而下。她想睡，但还是睡不着。“愚蠢的风！”她想。,环境+心理活动描写,续写中常见主观感受描写（学伴专题七）,No.1 开心,平庸版：He was happy.进阶版:动作描写：Tears of happiness _ _ Susans _.(沿着脸颊奔流而下)She_ _.(落下开心的泪水)I beamed at(笑容满面)him,“Welcome back,.”He grinned with delight(咧嘴开心地笑)when he saw us.神态描写：Her eyes _.(闪烁着快乐的光芒)Her face _ _ with pleasur

13、e.（容光焕发）Hersmile _ _thewholeroom.（她的笑容照亮了整个房间。）The smile on her face _ _ _ _.(像钻石一样闪耀)He cast us a glance,with his face wearing a broad/wide/radiant/warm smile.（她看向我们，面带灿烂/温暖的笑容。）Her eyes brimmed over(溢满)with warm excited tears.（热泪盈眶）,poured down,cheeks,shed tears of joy,shone/glittered/sparkled/twi

14、nkled with joy,lit up,lit up,shone like a diamond,No.1 开心,心理描写：A wild joy _ _ _ him.(极度的开心控制占据了他)Joy_ _insideher.(她心中涌起喜悦。)Hearing this,everybody _ _ _ _.(欣喜若狂)Her heart was pounding/beating with excitement.（砰砰直跳）When his mother kissed him on the cheek,it seemed as if the baby were on the top of the

15、 world.(小婴儿开心极了。)Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.(一阵阵激动声穿过他们。),took hold of,welled up,was wild with joy,No.2 悲伤,平庸版：He was sad.进阶版：动作描写：She_,hidingherfaceinherhands.(她掩面啜泣。)He _ _ _.(失望地叹了口气。)He struggled to _ his tears.(抑制泪水)He stood silently,tears rolling down his cheeks.Herhandsweretrembling.Sh

16、ewasonthevergeoftears.(快要哭了)When he embraced me with his arms open wide,I felt my throat choke with sob/tightened.(当他张开双臂拥抱我时，我觉得自己喉头哽咽。),sobbed,sighed with disappointment,fight back/swallow against/hold back/choke back,No.2 悲伤,神态描写：Thenews_acloudofgloomoverhisface.(蒙上了一层忧郁的阴影)Theysattherewithgloomylooksontheirfaces.(带着一脸忧郁。)His eyes brimmed with tears of sorrow.(他的眼里噙满了悲伤的泪水。)心理描写：My heart seemed to _(tear).(心都要撕碎了)Upon hearing the bad news,she _ _(感到被一股悲伤控制淹没压倒)and couldnt help crying bitterly