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英语写作

找观点：

十个角度

1.money

1）earnmoney=economicdevelopment

2）savemoney

3）wastemoney=values,consumerism

2.time

1）savetime=efficiency

2）wastetime=efficiency

3）killtime=entertainment

3.health

1）beneficialtohealth

2）detrimentaltohealth

4.knowledgeandeducation

1）broadenhorizons

2）enrichexperience

3）acquireskills/knowledge

4）obtaininformation

5.psychology

1）senseofachievement

2）addiction

3）loneliness

4）stress,depression

6.emotion

1）interpersonalrelationship,emotionalties

2）senseofresponsibility

3）patriotism

7.powerandability

1）duty/obligation

2）ability

8.environment

1）conservetheenvironment

2）contaminatetheenvironment

3）facilities,equipment

9.culture

1）heritage,protecttheculture

2）exchange

10.moralityandcrime

1.现在网上购物已经成为一种时尚

Currently,manypeople_________inorderto_______,whichhasmadeonlineshopping_________.Obviously,_________________.Moreover,_____________.Furthermore,_________________.

Currently,manypeoplearecrazyaboutonlineshoppinginordertobuysomecommoditieswhich/whattheydesire,whichhasmadeonlineshoppingbecomeafashion.Obviously,onlineshoppingcanhelpcustomerssavesomemoneybecauseonlineshopownersdonotneedtopayforstorageandofficespaceandreducetheircosts.Moreover,customerscansavetimebyshoppingonlinebecausetheydonotneedtogofromstoretostorepersonally

2.网上购物有很多好处，但是也有不少问题

Obviously,apparently,undoubtedly…

Onlineshoppingcanhelpconsumerssavealargeamountofmoneybecauseonlineshopownersneednot

Advantages:

1.savemoney

2.savetime

3.easytocompareandanalyze

Disadvantages:

1.belikelytobecheated

2.thetruequalitycannotbeguaranteed

3.difficulttocontroltheexpenditure

1.背景信息

2.正反双方观点

3.中心思想

4.结尾提建议

5.主体部分阐述

背景信息：

句型1：

平铺直叙说现象+目的（目的尽量笼统）：

目的表达：

forthepurposeofdoing,forthesakeofdoing,inordertodo

通常还要表示时间

Currently,atpresent,inthecontemporaryera,intheInformationAge,inthemoderntimes,inrecentyears

现象：

现象蕴含在问题中，有三种情况：

1.已经发生：

现在完成时

2.计划进行：

plantodo，expecttodo，anticipatedoing

3.充满热情：

becrazyaboutdoing,beenthusiasticaboutdoing

强调现象的普遍性：

很多

Many,avastnumber/amountof…..,anincreasingnumber/amountof….

Currently,many（alargenumber/amountof）_______havedone（areplanningtodo）（arecrazyaboutdoing）_________inordertodo笼统______.

句型2：

过去分词短语+by+原因，现象：

注意过去分词短语的逻辑主语和句子主语的一致。

否则是语法错误。

过去分词短语包括：

motivatedby激励,stimulatedby刺激,boostedby推动,encouragedby鼓励,promptedby促进,drivenby驱使,

后面的名词包括：

goal为之努力,purpose一般,aim一般,objective具体可行,expectation期待,anticipation期待（of）或者desire欲望,aspiration热切的盼望,ambition抱负（for）

过去分词＋by＋目标＋做….事情，现象

Atpresent,motivatedbythegoalofdoing…..,many（alargenumber/amountof,quiteafew）…havedone（areplanningtodo,arecrazyaboutdoing）…….

Currently,motivatedbythegoalofbuyingdesirablegoods,manypeoplearecrazyaboutonlineshopping.

观点阐述

主体段落

方面1＝1＋2＋3

主体段落的注意事项：

1．使用表示顺序的连接词：

第一点不用连接词，moreover,besides,also,next,plus,furthermore,then

2．注意主语的改变：

三角形结构

3．注意引用他人的观点：

Proponents（opponents）of主题词汇…arguethat观点

Thosewhosupport（favor,approveof,areinfavorof）主题词汇…believethat观点

Thosewhooppose（disapproveof,areopposedto,objectto）…believethat观点

Accordingtotheproponents（supporters）of…,观点

Accordingtotheopponentsof…,

Accordingtothosewhosupport（favor,approveof,areinfavorof）…,

Accordingtothosewhooppose（disapproveof,areopposedto,objectto）…,

Forthosewhosupport（favor,approveof,areinfavorof）…,

Forthosewhooppose（disapproveof,areopposedto,objectto）…,

上述句型使用在第一层次

4逻辑要严密：

简单句表示观点的＋目的（forthepurpose/sakeof,inorderto，sothat），原因（dueto/owingto,asaresultof+名词或者动名词,inthat/because/since+句子），结果（,which,；therefore）

LearningEnglishcanhelpyoungpeoplefindadesirablejobinthatEnglishisthelinguafrancainmostmultinationalcorporations.

LearningEnglishcanhelpyoungpeoplefindadesirablejob,whichenablesthemtobefinanciallyindependentortoachievetheirvaluesinlives.