英语写作.docx

1、英语写作找观点：十个角度1. money1) earn money = economic development2) save money3) waste money=values, consumerism2. time1) save time= efficiency2) waste time = efficiency3) kill time=entertainment3. health 1) beneficial to health2) detrimental to health4. knowledge and education1) broaden horizons2) enrich ex

2、perience3) acquire skills / knowledge4) obtain information5. psychology1) sense of achievement 2) addiction 3) loneliness4) stress, depression6. emotion1) interpersonal relationship, emotional ties2) sense of responsibility3) patriotism7. power and ability1) duty / obligation2) ability 8. environmen

3、t1) conserve the environment2) contaminate the environment 3) facilities, equipment 9. culture1) heritage, protect the culture2) exchange10. morality and crime1. 现在网上购物已经成为一种时尚Currently, many people _ in order to _, which has made online shopping _. Obviously, _. Moreover, _. Furthermore, _.Currentl

4、y, many people are crazy about online shopping in order to buy some commodities which /what they desire, which has made online shopping become a fashion. Obviously, online shopping can help customers save some money because online shop owners do not need to pay for storage and office space and reduc

5、e their costs. Moreover, customers can save time by shopping on line because they do not need to go from store to store personally 2. 网上购物有很多好处，但是也有不少问题Obviously, apparently, undoubtedly Online shopping can help consumers save a large amount of money because online shop owners need not Advantages:1.

6、 save money 2. save time 3. easy to compare and analyze Disadvantages: 1. be likely to be cheated 2. the true quality can not be guaranteed 3. difficult to control the expenditure 1. 背景信息2. 正反双方观点3. 中心思想4. 结尾提建议5. 主体部分阐述背景信息：句型1：平铺直叙说现象+目的（目的尽量笼统）：目的表达：for the purpose of doing, for the sake of doing

7、, in order to do通常还要表示时间Currently, at present, in the contemporary era, in the Information Age, in the modern times, in recent years现象：现象蕴含在问题中，有三种情况：1. 已经发生：现在完成时2. 计划进行：plan to do，expect to do，anticipate doing 3. 充满热情：be crazy about doing, be enthusiastic about doing 强调现象的普遍性：很多Many, a vast number

8、 / amount of ., an increasing number / amount of .Currently, many (a large number /amount of)_ have done (are planning to do) (are crazy about doing) _ in order to do 笼统_.句型2：过去分词短语+by+原因，现象：注意过去分词短语的逻辑主语和句子主语的一致。否则是语法错误。过去分词短语包括：motivated by激励, stimulated by刺激, boosted by推动, encouraged by鼓励, prompt

9、ed by促进, driven by驱使, 后面的名词包括：goal为之努力, purpose一般, aim一般, objective具体可行, expectation期待, anticipation期待 (of) 或者desire欲望, aspiration热切的盼望, ambition 抱负(for)过去分词by目标做.事情，现象At present, motivated by the goal of doing ., many (a large number / amount of, quite a few)have done (are planning to do, are crazy

10、 about doing) .Currently, motivated by the goal of buying desirable goods, many people are crazy about online shopping. 观点阐述主体段落方面1123主体段落的注意事项：1 使用表示顺序的连接词：第一点不用连接词，moreover, besides, also, next, plus, furthermore, then2 注意主语的改变：三角形结构3 注意引用他人的观点：Proponents (opponents) of 主题词汇 argue that 观点Those who

11、 support (favor, approve of, are in favor of) 主题词汇 believe that 观点Those who oppose (disapprove of, are opposed to, object to) believe that观点According to the proponents (supporters) of , 观点According to the opponents of ,According to those who support (favor, approve of, are in favor of), According to

12、 those who oppose (disapprove of, are opposed to, object to),For those who support (favor, approve of, are in favor of),For those who oppose (disapprove of, are opposed to, object to),上述句型使用在第一层次4 逻辑要严密：简单句表示观点的目的(for the purpose / sake of, in order to， so that )，原因(due to/ owing to, as a result of

13、+名词或者动名词, in that/because /since+句子)，结果(, which, ；therefore)Learning English can help young people find a desirable job in that English is the lingua franca in most multinational corporations. Learning English can help young people find a desirable job, which enables them to be financially independent or to achieve their values in lives.