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betterbemorecarefulofyourspelling.
it’simportanttocomposeagraftbeforehand.
3.情感调控类评语
iappreciateyourhandwriting.
youhaveagoodknowledgeofenglishproverbs.
youarequiteawareofmakingmeaningfulsentences.
youarericherthanothersincollectingandusingtypicalsentencesandidioms.
i’mexpectinggreaterprogressfromyouinwriting.comeon.
ifyouneedmyhelp,neverhesitatetocometome.
警句:
hardworkleadstosuccess.
nottoadvanceistogoback.
nooneiswithoutfaults.
keepingisharderthanwinning.keepitup.
二、微观写作技能方面的评语
1.专项点拨类评语
it’spropertousetheproverbinpara.2quiteclever.
youaregoodatusingattributiveclausesinyourwriting.
the“struck”sentenceisperfectlyused.
you’dbetteruse“thirdperson”inthefirstpara.
it’sgoodtousethepasttenseinyourwriting.
2.佳句欣赏类评语
教师可以在句尾统一标注赞美性的符号(如e—excellent)或标识不同星级等。
whatawonderfulsentenceusing“cover”.
it’sreallycleverofyoutousethisbeautifulsentence.
theinvertedsentenceiswellwtitten.
3.谋篇布局类评语
agoodbeginning.
aperfectending.
well-organized.perfectly-expanded.
thefirstpara.makesagoodbeginning.
thelastpara.makesaperfectending.
allthepointshavebeencovered.
it’scleverofyoutouseatopicsentenceatthebeginningofapara.it’swonderfultouseproperconjunctionsbetweensentences.
youaregoodatdevelopingpara.
youhavemadegreatprogressindevelopingpassage.
iamgladtoseethesentenceconherenceinyourlastpara.
betterpaymoreattentiontotherelationshipbetweensentences.it’sreallywonderfultostart/endyoursentenceswithadverbials.
在起始年级应侧重对学生写作行为规范的引领,重在对学生进行词语方面的引导;
对高年级学生则应侧重对文章的结构、行文的逻辑、句子的变化等方面的指点和引导。
虽然这些评语对我们大部分学生来说不太适合,以为他们连老师评他们什么都看不懂,但我们平时对作文的批改确实没做到这么仔细,有很大启发。
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【篇二:
初中英文评语模板】
wangjunjie
youhavemadesomeprogressinyourenglishthisterm.workinghardinthemainsubjectsmakesyougetmoresuccessfulthanbefore.
liujiahao
youarealovelyandinnocentboy。
althoughyouaresoactiveinclass,yourgradeisjustso-so。
youareenthusiastic,gettingalongwellwithclassmates,butyoulovefunandgames,thateffectsyourstudy。
ifyoucandealwithstudyandplaywell,youwillbeagreatboy。
bill
youhavemadeprogressinenglish.wordharderandibelieveyoumillbegoodatenglish.
jay
youaregoodatchinese.iappreciateyourchinesepassages.thoughyouhavelittleenglishfoundation,youshowgreatinterestinlearningenglish.youneedtokeeptryingyourbest.
james
yourenglishisnotverygood,butithinkifyouworkhard,you’llmodemuchprogressinenglish.believeinyourself.ibelieveyourenglishwillbegoodifyouworkhardandcometoaskmeforhelpifyouneed.
jook
yourworkisquitegoodexceptforafewspellingmistakes.trytospellyourwordscorrectly.avoidmisspelling!
qingzhifeng
althoughyou’relateinachieving,youhavecaughtupwellyou’reyourstudies.iwouldliketoseeyougettingfastdevelopmentofyourwrittenandoralskillsinenglish.
ian
youarereallydoingagoodjobinyourenglish.yourenglishisexcellent,yonhaveachievedgreatsuccess,ofcoursethisisbecauseyouworkhardandyouhaveinterestinenglish.ihopeyoucancontinuetoworkhardandibelieveyou’llbethebest.i’llbeproudofyou!
jill
youdbetterbemorecareful!
paymoreattentiontoverbsandtheiruses!
workharderandthenyoullmakemuchprogress!
lixianlong
youareaquietboy.icanseeyourgreatimprovementinenglish.youlistencarefullyinclassandparticipateintheclassactivitiesquitewell.youunderstandwhatisbeingtaughtandsometimesyouareactiveinansweringquestions.youcanspeakenglishveryclearly.keepupthegoodeffort.ibelieveyoucanmakeit.
moon
youcomefromafarawaycountry,butourmindandheartareclose.duringnearlyoneyeartime,alltheteacherslikeyouverymuchandyougetalongwellwithothers.hopeyouwillhaveagoodvacation.
elvis
youhavechangedalot.icanseeyourgreatimprovementinenglish.youlistencarefullyinclassandparticipateintheclassactivitiesquitewell.
jack
youaretheloveliestboyihaveseen.ilikeyoursmartnessverymuch.ifyoucanstudyharder,iwillfeelhappier.
zhangpeng
ifyousharepartofyourenergyinstudying,ibelieveyoucandoquitebetter.donotloseheart;
weareallherewithyou.
jason
ifindyouvemadealotofprogress!
ithinkyoucanworkmorenextsemester!
hezeyang
payattentiontowhatyouhavetodo.ihopeyoucantakeaseriousattitudetowardsyourstudying,nomatteritischinese,englishormath,etc.
zhangminqing
youareanactivestudent.maybeotherstudentsenvyyourenergyandyourdiligence.sometimes,youarenotstrictwithyourself,soyoubreaktheschoolrulesunconsciously.inmyopinion,ifyoucanbestricterwithyourself,youwouldbecomemuchbetter.don’tloseheart,ifyoutry,youaresurelybetter.
likuncheng
dohopeyoucangetgreatprogressinwritingandstudyharder?
nevergiveupandtryhard,youwillseeadifferentworld.
studyhard.youshouldknowwhatisthemostimportantforastudent.
liangjiahao
imsureyoucandoyourworkbetternexttime.youhavedoneyourworkbetterthistime.ibelievethatnothingisimpossibleaslongasyouworkhard.
kenny
oucanmakeit.
windy
youhaveasolidfoundationinenglish.youarealsohard—workinginclassandcanfinishhomeworkwithinthegiventime.
generallyspeaking,youarefairlygood.
jennifer
youoftenraiseyourhandsinclass.youabsorbwhatisbeingtaughtverywell.youareafastlearnerandyoucanreadthetextsandweeklytopicfluently.itwillbegreatifyoucanimitatemoretoimproveyourpronunciation.
dailingzhi
youshowgreatinterestinlearningenglish.inclass,youliketoanswertheteacher’squestionsandenjoyperformingverymuch.whatyouneedtoimproveonistolearnhowtoworkindependentlyandtrytofindsomewaystomemorizeenglishwords.
mort
thoughyouhavealittlefoundationofenglish,youtrytokeepupwithothers.icanseeyourgreatimprovement,especiallyfromyourperformanceinclassrecently.youarecatchingup,keepupthegoodeffort.
shirley
thissemester,yourinterestinenglishisn’tlikebefore.what’swrongwithyou?
inclass,youshouldtrytofollowtheteacherandparticipateintheclassactivities.youreallyneedtokeeptryingherbest.
julia
youareanhoneststudent,respecttheteachers,getalongwellwithyourclassmates.youalwaystakeprideinourclassandoftendomanythingsthatcanmakeourunitbetter.however,ithinkyoushouldpaymoreattentiontothewayyoustudy,andthenibelieveyoucangetbettergrades.keepon!
lisa
youareverycarefulinclass.youtakenotesandcompletedthehomeworkwithinthegiventime.therefore,youhavegothighscoreinenglishexam.
atthesametimeyouhaveverygoodbehavior.youareeasytogetalongwith.youalsorespectteachersandtheotherstudentsverymuch.
zhanyachun
yourhandwritingisreallybeautiful.ilikeit!
youcantakepartintheacclivitiesinthisclass.that’sgood!
keepupthegoodeffort.
thoughyouhavelittlefoundationofenglish,youtrytokeepupwiththeothers.icanseeyourgreatimprovement.especiallyfromyourperformanceinclassrecently,youarecatchingup.
youareaverysweetgirl.youenjoylearningenglishandareimprovingveryfast.inclassyouareveryactiveinthinkingandparticipateintheclassactivitiesverywell.youcanspeakenglishclearlyandconfidently.keepupthegoodeffort.
youareaquietboy.icanseeyourimprovementinenglish.youlistencarefullyinclassandraiseyourhandsveryoften.nowyoucanspeakenglishmuchbetterthanbefore.comeon.
【篇三:
初中评语集锦】
初中生操行评语集锦
(一)
某某某:
努力过,奋斗过,并有所进步,这值得高兴。
只是学习如驾车登山,不进则退,聪明的你之所以在学习上不象我们希望的那样,是因为你还缺乏主动性,只有鼓足学习的热情,并且脚踏实地,不断积累,才能不至于埋没自己的良好天资。
某某某:
从你的作文中,谈话中可以看出你是个爱憎分明,正直、有爱心的孩子;
在你的内心深处,肯定有一颗强烈的上进心,只是表面装成一副毫不在乎的样子。
做的不错,这学期进步了,一直在努力地学习,拼命地追赶,虽然结果不是很理想。
但最重要的是你为之奋斗过,这就足以令人欣喜了。
在这一学期里,你受表扬的次数明显增多。
自我控制能力有所提高,午休及自习课上的纪律好多了。
学习成绩也因此有所提高。
希望下学期能更好。
你是个尊敬师长,团结同学的好学生。
运动场上你英姿飒爽,班级工作认真负责。
更难得的是英语成绩也提高了,希再接再历。
你生性活泼,善于与同学交往,人缘好。
这学期,你进步不少,已经改掉了许多不好的习惯,让我看到了希望。
努力吧,我不相信像你这么灵巧的女孩学习会搞不好。
某某某:
你很自信,有目标,这是好事,但你对自己要求不太严格,造成你的成绩起伏不定,很不理想。
有时不能正确看待学习上的一些小挫折,有急躁情绪。
希望你能吸取教训,认真总结,不断充实和完善自己,为将来打下坚实的基础。
在校尊敬老师,团结同学,关心集体是你的特点、优点。
看到你用心听课时发言是那么积极,老师是多么高兴。
可你有时也很让老师生气,作业不及时完成,订正不够自觉主动,字迹潦草,很让老师伤心。
你知道吗?
如果你改掉这些小毛病,你肯定会成为一名好学生,老师期待着这一天。
你是个听话懂事、诚实质朴、令人信任的男孩。
能严格遵守学校的各项规章制度。
学习非常刻苦,积极思考,认真完成作业。
学习上有钻研精神,成绩优秀。
希望更上一层楼。
你曾对老师说,有些知识不明白,可你却很少问老师,其实学问学问,要学要问,只学不问,哪有学问。
希望你再加把劲,继续努力,不懂就问,这样你的进步会更快,更大,相信不久的将来。
你会取得好成绩,老师期待着你有更大的进步。
你是个听话懂事、善解人意、令人信任的女孩。
学习认真,成绩优异,。
但是班干工作,你不够主动大胆。
你有时只是埋头在自已的小天地里,对集体活动,班级纪律欠热心。
希望你平时多带动班级中其他的同学,共同进步。
更希望你有敢想敢干的作风,提高自己各方面的能力,为班集体作出更大的贡献。
你是一个内秀,性格不张扬的女孩。
学习成绩名列前茅,平时积极上进,工作认真负责,真令人欣赏。
要是能更好地融入班级中,那就太棒了。
在老师眼里,你是一个聪明,活泼善于开动脑筋,勇于探索,富有进取心的好学生。
“胸中有丘壑。
”你是个深藏不露的孩子,从你不经意的言谈中就知道你懂得很多。
一切似乎都很完美。
只是你进取心不够强烈,有时容易自我满足。
希望明白,强烈的进取心