初三作文之初中英语作文评语集文档格式.docx

1、 better be more careful of your spelling. its important to compose a graft beforehand. 3.情感调控类评语 i appreciate your handwriting. you have a good knowledge of english proverbs. you are quite aware of making meaningful sentences. you are richer than others in collecting and using typical sentences and

2、idioms. im expecting greater progress from you in writing .come on.if you need my help,never hesitate to come to me. 警句： hard work leads to success. not to advance is to go back. no one is without faults. keeping is harder than winning.keep it up. 二、 微观写作技能方面的评语 1.专项点拨类评语 its proper to use the prove

3、rb in para.2 quite clever. you are good at using attributive clauses in your writing. the “struck” sentence is perfectly used. youd better use “third person” in the first para. its good to use the past tense in your writing. 2.佳句欣赏类评语 教师可以在句尾统一标注赞美性的符号（如eexcellent）或标识不同星级等。 what a wonderful sentence

4、 using “cover”. its really clever of you to use this beautiful sentence. the inverted sentence is well wtitten. 3.谋篇布局类评语 a good beginning. a perfect ending.well-organized. perfectly-expanded. the first para. makes a good beginning. the last para. makes a perfect ending. all the points have been cov

5、ered. its clever of you to use a topic sentence at the beginning of a para. its wonderful to use proper conjunctions between sentences. you are good at developing para. you have made great progress in developing passage. i am glad to see the sentence conherence in your last para. better pay more att

6、ention to the relationship between sentences. its really wonderful to start/end your sentences with adverbials. 在起始年级应侧重对学生写作行为规范的引领，重在对学生进行词语方面的引导；对高年级学生则应侧重对文章的结构、行文的逻辑、句子的变化等方面的指点和引导。 虽然这些评语对我们大部分学生来说不太适合，以为他们连老师评他们什么都看不懂，但我们平时对作文的批改确实没做到这么仔细，有很大启发。 备注：此文引自豆丁网！【篇二：初中英文评语模板】 wang junjie you have m

7、ade some progress in your english this term. working hard in the main subjects makes you get more successful than before. liu jiahao you are a lovely and innocent boy。although you are so active in class，your grade is just so-so。you are enthusiastic，getting along well with classmates，but you love fun

8、 and games，that effects your study。if you can deal with study and play well，you will be a great boy。 bill you have made progress in english. word harder and i believe you mill be good at english. jay you are good at chinese. i appreciate your chinese passages. though you have little english foundati

9、on, you show great interest in learning english. you need to keep trying your best. james your english is not very good, but i think if you work hard, youll mode much progress in english. believe in yourself. i believe your english will be good if you work hard and come to ask me for help if you nee

10、d. jook your work is quite good except for a few spelling mistakes. try to spell you r words correctly. avoid misspelling! qing zhifeng although youre late in achieving, you have caught up well youre your studies. i would like to see you getting fast development of your written and oral skills in en

11、glish ian you are really doing a good job in your english. your english is excellent, yon have achieved great success, of course this is because you work hard and you have interest in english. i hope you can continue to work hard and i believe youll be the best. ill be proud of you! jill youd better

12、 be more careful! pay more attention to verbs and their uses! work harder and then youll make much progress! li xianlongyou are a quiet boy. i can see your great improvement in english. you listen carefully in class and participate in the class activities quite well. you understand what is being tau

13、ght and sometimes you are active in answering questions. you can speak english very clearly. keep up the good effort. i believe you can make it. moon you come from a far away country, but our mind and heart are close. during nearly one year time, all the teachers like you very much and you get along

14、 well with others. hope you will have a good vacation. elvis you have changed a lot. i can see your great improvement in english. you listen carefully in class and participate in the class activities quite well. jack you are the loveliest boy i have seen. i like your smartness very much. if you can

15、study harder, i will feel happier. zhang peng if you share part of your energy in studying, i believe you can do quite better. do not lose heart; we are all here with you. jason i find youve made a lot of progress! i think you can work more next semester! he zeyang pay attention to what you have to

16、do. i hope you can take a serious attitude towards your studying, no matter it is chinese, english or math, etc. zhang minqing you are an active student. maybe other students envy your energy and your diligence. sometimes, you are not strict with yourself, so you break the school rules unconsciously

17、. in my opinion, if you can be stricter with yourself, you would become much better. dont lose heart, if you try, you are surely better. li kuncheng do hope you can get great progress in writing and study harder? never give up and try hard, you will see a different world. study hard. you should know

18、 what is the most important for a student. liang jiahao im sure you can do your work better next time. you have done your work better this time. i believe that nothing is impossible as long as you work hard. kennyou can make it. windy you have a solid foundation in english. you are also hardworking

19、in class and can finish homework within the given time. generally speaking, you are fairly good. jennifer you often raise your hands in class. you absorb what is being taught very well. you are a fast learner and you can read the texts and weekly topic fluently. it will be great if you can imitate m

20、ore to improve your pronunciation. dai lingzhi you show great interest in learning english. in class, you like to answer the teachers questions and enjoy performing very much. what you need to improve on is to learn how to work independently and try to find some ways to memorize english words. mort

21、though you have a little foundation of english, you try to keep up with others. i can see your great improvement, especially from your performance in class recently. you are catching up, keep up the good effort. shirley this semester, your interest in english isnt like before. whats wrong with you?

22、in class, you should try to follow the teacher and participate in the class activities. you really need to keep trying her best. julia you are an honest student, respect the teachers, get along well with your classmates .you always take pride in our class and often do many things that can make our u

23、nit better. however, i think you should pay more attention to the way you study, and then i believe you can get better grades. keep on! lisa you are very careful in class. you take notes and completed the homework with in the given time. therefore, you have got high score in english exam. at the sam

24、e time you have very good behavior. you are easy to get along with. you also respect teachers and the other students very much. zhan yachun your handwriting is really beautiful. i like it! you can take part in the acclivities in this class. thats good! keep up the good effort. though you have little

25、 foundation of english, you try to keep up with the others. i can see your great improvement. especially from your performance in class recently, you are catching up. you are a very sweet girl. you enjoy learning english and are improving very fast. in class you are very active in thinking and parti

26、cipate in the class activities very well. you can speak english clearly and confidently. keep up the good effort. you are a quiet boy. i can see your improvement in english. you listen carefully in class and raise your hands very often. now you can speak english much better than before. come on.【篇三：

27、初中评语集锦】 初中生操行评语集锦 （一） 某某某：努力过，奋斗过，并有所进步，这值得高兴。只是学习如驾车登山，不进则退，聪明的你之所以在学习上不象我们希望的那样，是因为你还缺乏主动性，只有鼓足学习的热情，并且脚踏实地，不断积累，才能不至于埋没自己的良好天资。 某某某:从你的作文中，谈话中可以看出你是个爱憎分明，正直、有爱心的孩子；在你的内心深处，肯定有一颗强烈的上进心，只是表面装成一副毫不在乎的样子。做的不错，这学期进步了，一直在努力地学习，拼命地追赶，虽然结果不是很理想。但最重要的是你为之奋斗过，这就足以令人欣喜了。在这一学期里，你受表扬的次数明显增多。自我控制能力有所提高，午休及自习课上

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29、积极，老师是多么高兴。可你有时也很让老师生气，作业不及时完成，订正不够自觉主动，字迹潦草，很让老师伤心。你知道吗？如果你改掉这些小毛病，你肯定会成为一名好学生，老师期待着这一天。你是个听话懂事、诚实质朴、令人信任的男孩。能严格遵守学校的各项规章制度。学习非常刻苦，积极思考，认真完成作业。学习上有钻研精神，成绩优秀。希望更上一层楼。你曾对老师说，有些知识不明白，可你却很少问老师，其实学问学问，要学要问，只学不问，哪有学问。希望你再加把劲，继续努力，不懂就问，这样你的进步会更快，更大，相信不久的将来。你会取得好成绩，老师期待着你有更大的进步。你是个听话懂事、善解人意、令人信任的女孩。学习认真，成绩优异，。但是班干工作，你不够主动大胆。你有时只是埋头在自已的小天地里，对集体活动，班级纪律欠热心。希望你平时多带动班级中其他的同学，共同进步。更希望你有敢想敢干的作风，提高自己各方面的能力，为班集体作出更大的贡献。你是一个内秀，性格不张扬的女孩。学习成绩名列前茅，平时积极上进，工作认真负责，真令人欣赏。要是能更好地融入班级中，那就太棒了。在老师眼里，你是一个聪明，活泼善于开动脑筋，勇于探索，富有进取心的好学生。“胸中有丘壑。”你是个深藏不露的孩子，从你不经意的言谈中就知道你懂得很多。一切似乎都很完美。只是你进取心不够强烈，有时容易自我满足。希望明白，强烈的进取心