美国大学入学申请书范本.docx

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美国大学入学申请书范本

美国大学入学申请书范本

　　篇一:

申请美国大学入学文书范本

　　IguessitwasinevitablethatI’dbeonhockeyskatesatsomepointinmylife,butIdidnotexpectthatI’dbecomeoneofararegroupoffemaleicehockeyofficialsbeforeIevenreachedhighschool.Beingbornintoafamilyofhockeyplayersandfigureskaters,itseemedthatmydestinyhadalreadybeendecided.

　　Rightfromthebeginning,mytwoolderbrothersandmyfatherstrappedmeupandthrewmeontotheice.Iloveditand,inmymind,IwasonmywaytobecomingafemaleGretzky!

Butmymomhadtothinkofsomethingfasttodragherlittlegirlawayfromthissportofruffians.Entermyfirsthotpinkfigureskatingdress!

Thatwasallittooktolaunchfifteenyearsofcompetitivefigureskating.Eventhoughfigureskatingsoonbecamemypassion,Ialwayshadanunsatisfiedyearningforicehockey.Ittookagreatdealofconvincingfrommyparentsthatcompetitivefigureskatingandicehockeydidn’tmix.Mycompromisebecamerefereeingicehockey;littledidIknowthatIwasbeginninganactivitythatwouldinfluencemycharacterandwhoIamtoday.WhenIbegan,Iwouldonlyworkwithmydadandbrothers.EveryonewasfriendlyandacceptingbecauseIhadjuststarted.IsoonrealizedthoughthattogetbetterIneededtostartrefereeingwithpeopleIwasn’trelatedto,andthat’swhenmyexperiencedrasticallychanged.Anapologeticsmileandan“I’msorry”wasn’tgoingto

　　getmethroughgamesnow.AsIbeganofficiatinghigher-levelgamesanddealingwithmorearrogantcoaches,Isuddenlyenteredanewmale-dominatedworld,aworldIhadneverexperiencedbefore.Myconfidencewasshot,andallIwantedtodowasgetthrougheachgameandbeabletoleave.SometimesIwaseventooscaredtoskatealongtheteams’benchesbecauseIwouldgetupsetbywhatthecoacheswouldyelltome.“Doyouhaveahotdatetonight,ref?

”wasatypicalcommentthatcoacheswouldspitatmeduringthecourseofagame.Intheireyes,Ididnotbelongonthatice,andtheyweregoingtodowhatevertheycoulddotomakesurenowomenwantedtoofficiatetheirgames.Iwasdeterminednottoletthemchasemeofftheice.

　　Imadethedecisiontostandupformyself.Ineverrespondedrudelytothecoaches,butIdidnotletthemwalkallovermeanddestroymyconfidenceanymore.Istartedtoactandfeelmorelikethe4-yearcertifiedAtlanticDistrictOfficialthatIam.Therewerestillafewsituationsthatscaredme.OnetimeIcalledapenaltyinachampionshipgameduringthethirdovertimeandtheteamIpenalizedendeduplosingbecausetheygotscoredon.IknewIhadmadetherightcall,eventhoughIwasunnervedwhenIsawthelosingteams’parentswaitingformeatmylockerroom;forthemomentIwishedIhadn’tcalledthatpenalty.Althoughitwasscaryatthetime,Istoodmygroundandovercamemyfears.Thatwasanimportant

　　stepping-stoneinmyofficiatingcareerandinmylife.

　　Afterfouryearsofrefereeing,Istillcan’tsayit’seasy.EverygamehandsmesomethingnewandIneverknowwhattoexpect.NowIhavetheconfidenceandpreparationtodealwiththeunexpected,onandofftheice.Inowalsoknowtotakeeverythingwithagrainofsaltandnotletitgettome.Ihavelearnedthatlifeisjustlikebeingoutontheice;ifIampreparedandactwithconfidence,Iwillbeperceivedasconfident.ThesearethelittlelessonsthatI’mgratefultohavelearnedasawomanreferee.

　　ThingstoNoticeAboutThisEssay

　　1.Theauthortellsaninterestingstoryaboutherexperiencesasareferee.

　　2.Asenseofherpersonality—determination,flexibility,goodhumor—comesthroughinthenarration.

　　3.Detailslike“Doyouhaveahotdatetonight,ref?

”makethenarrationmemorable（we’dlovetohearmoreofthesekindsofdetails）.

　　4.Theessayneedsafasterstart.Thefirstparagraph（threesentences）saysthesamethinginboththefirstandthirdsentences—andgivesawaytheessay’ssurpriseinthesecond!

Agoodrevisionwouldallofparagraphoneandstartatparagraphtwo.

　　5.There’stoomuchframehereandnotenoughpicture.Theessayneedsfurtherdevelopment,especiallyaboutthedifficultiesof

　　becomingandbeingaref,tokeepitvivid.

　　6.Theauthorshould“dwell”inthemeaningoftheexperiencealittlemoreattheend—“Iwonderabout…Ialsothink…SometimesIbelieve….”Significantexperienceslikethisone,woventhroughmanyyearsoftheauthor’slife,don’tmeanjustonething—therearemoreinsightsandlessonstoexplorehere.

　　篇二:

申请国外大学的范文和指导

　　除了通用申请的Essay之外,有些学校还提供另外写一篇Essay的机会。

有些学校让你在他们提供的题目中作出选择;而有些学校则没有任何限制。

比如耶鲁大学的要求非常简单,只是要求你写一篇500单词以内的你想让耶鲁阅读的Essay即可,基本没有任何限制。

哈佛大学也是让你自行决定写什么内容、什么题目,只不过给出了几个可能的写作题目建议:

　　a）你生命中的一个不寻常经历;

　　b）你在其他国家旅行和生活的经历;

　　c）对你最具影响力的书;

　　d）某学术经历（课程、研究项目、论文、或研究课题）;

　　e）过去一年中你读过的一系列图书。

　　请记住,这些只是哈佛建议的题目,决不是要限制你从中挑选,你完全可以自定题目来写。

　　题目样本

　　请提供你的个人自传