剑桥雅思考官范文汇总文档格式.docx

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Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?

Overall,Idisagreewiththeopinionexpressed.Iwouldliketobeginbypointingoutthat‘traditionalskillsandwaysoflife’arenotautomaticallyofonecountry,butofacultureorcommunity.34

Inmanyways,thehistoryofcivilizationinthehistoryoftechnology:

fromthediscoveryoffiretotheinventionofthewheeltothedevelopmentoftheInternet,wehavebeenmovingonfrompreviouswaysofdoingthings.Sometechnologies,suchasweaponsofmassdestruction,areofnegativeimpact.Others,suchasmedicaladvances,positivelyhelppeopletolivebetterorlonger,andsoverymuchhelptraditionalwaysoflife.Surely,fewpeoplewouldseektopreservesuchtraditionsaslivingincaves. 

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Interestingly,technologycanpositivelycontributetothekeepingaliveoftraditionalskillsandwaysoflife.Forexample,thepopulationsofsomeislandsaretoosmalltohavenormalschools.Ratherthanbreakingupfamiliesbysendingchildrentothemainland,educationauthoritieshavebeenabletousetheInternettodeliverschoolingonline.Inaddition,theInternet,andmodernrefrigerationtechniques,arebeingusedtokeepalivethetraditionalskillsofproducingsalmon;

itcannowbeorderedfrom,anddeliveredto,anywhereintheworld. 

Inconclusion,withoutsuggestingthatalltechnologyisnecessarilygood,Ithinkitisbynomeans‘pointless’,inanyway,totrytokeeptraditionsalivewithtechnology.Weshouldnotignoretechnology,becauseitcanbeourfriendandsupportourwayoflife. 

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剑三TEST3

Inmanycountrieschildrenareengagedinsomekindofpaidwork.Somepeopleregardthisascompletelywrong,whileothersconsideritasvaluableworkexperience,importantforlearningandtakingresponsibility.

Whatareyouropinionsonthis?

Theissueofchildrendoingpaidworkisacomplexandsensitiveone.Itisdifficulttosaywhohastherighttojudgewhetherchildrenworkingis‘wrong’or‘valuable’.Opinionswillalsodifferasto‘learning’benefits:

nodoubtteachersandfactoryowners,forexample,wouldhavevaryingconcerns. 

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Animportantconsiderationisthekindofworkundertaken.Youngchildrendoingarduousandrepetitivetasksonafactoryproductionline,forexample,arelesslikelytobe‘learning’thanolderchildrenhelpinginanoldpeople’shome.Therearehealthandsafetyissuestobeconsideredaswell.Itisanunfortunatefactthatmanyemployersmayprefertousetheservicesofchildrensimplytosavemoneybypayingthemlessthanadultsanditisthistypeofexploitationthatshouldbediscouraged. 

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However,inmanycountrieschildrenworkbecausetheirfamiliesneedtheadditionalincome,nomatterhowsmall.Thiswascertainlythecaseinthepastinmanyindustrializedcountries,anditisverydifficulttojudgethatitiswrongforchildrentodaytocontributetothefamilyincomeinthisway.52

Nevertheless,inbettereconomiccircumstances,fewparentswouldchoosetosendtheirchildrenouttofull-timepaidwork.Iflearningresponsibilitiesandworkexperienceareconsideredtobeimportant,thenchildrencanacquirethesebyhavinglight,part-timejobsorevendoingtaskssuchashelpingtheirparentsaroundthefamilyhome,whichareunpaid,butundoubtedlyofvalueinchildren’sdevelopment. 

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剑四

TEST2

Happinessisconsideredveryimportantinlife.

whyisitdifficulttodefine?

whatfactorsareimportantinachieveinghappiness?

Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperience.

Happinessisverydifficultdodefine,becauseitmeanssomanydifferentthingstodifferentpeople.Whilesomepeoplelinkhappinesstowealthandmaterialsuccess,othersthinkitliesinemotionsandlovingpersonalrelationships.Yetothersthinkthatspiritualpaths,ratherthaneitherthematerialworldorrelationshipswithpeople,aretheonlywaytotruehappiness.59

Becausepeopleinterprethappinessforthemselvesinsomanydifferentways,itisdifficulttogiveanydefinitionthatistrueforeveryone.However,iftherearedifferentkindsofhappinessfordifferentindividualsthenthefirststepinachievingitwouldbetohaveadegreeofself-knowledge.Apersonneedstoknowwhoheorsheisbeforebeingabletoknowwhatitisthatmakeshimorherhappy. 

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Ofcourse,factorssuchaslovingrelationships,goodhealth,theskillstoearnalivingandapeacefulenvironmentallcontributetoourhappinesstoo.Butthisdoesnotmeanthatpeoplewithouttheseconditionscannotbehappy.38

Overall,Ithinkanabilitytokeepclearperspectivesinlifeisamoreessentialfactorinachievinghappiness.BythatImeananabilitytohaveaclearsenseofwhatisimportantinourlives（thewelfareofourfamilies,thequalityofourrelationships,makingotherpeoplehappy,etc.）andwhatisnot（aproblematwork,gettingannoyedabouttrivialthings,etc.）.66

Likeself-awareness,thisisalsoverydifficulttoachieve,butIthinkthesearethetwofactorsthatmaybethemostimportantforachievinghappiness.26

大作文

Test37分

Creativeartistsshouldalwaysbegiventhefreedomtoexpresstheirownideas（inwords,pictures,musicorfilm）inwhicheverwaytheywish.Thereshouldbenogovernmentrestrictionsonwhattheydo.

Iagreewiththestatementthatthereshouldbenogovernmentrestrictiononcreativeartistswhoexpressthemselvesinthewaytheydoandthattheymustbegivenfreedomforthesame.Expressionhasalwaysbeenthekeynoteinaperson’slife.Itistheresultofmereexpressionofourthoughtsthatweareabletocommunicate.Restrictionsonhowwepresentourthoughtsissenseless.

Creativeartistsplayamajorroleinoursociety,beitthegovernment,oldpeolple,theyouthorthechildren.Theirworksenlightenourminds,nomatterifissactualorentertainmentbased.Itisdiservingthatafteradays’workwhenwewanttotakesometimeoffforourselves,welookoutforsomeleisure.Forinstance:

eitherpleasantmusicorafamilymoviewhichsoothesthemind.Entertainmentgiveusanoverviewofanewsideoflifewhicheveryindividualrespects.Thereisalmosteverythinggoodinwhatisgiventousthroughthemediaworldwhichismadeupofartists.

Onthecontrarysometimestheseartiststendtobeunscrupuous.Theyconvertrumoursintofactsandpresentthembeforeus.Thismightimpairthereputationofsomeillustriouspeopleintoday’ssociety.Onsuchoccasions,certainrestrictionsareunderstandable.Neverthelesswealldoknowwhatisrightorwrong.Rulesandregulationsnotalwaysarethesolutiontohowartistspresenttheirownideas.Henceitisdoltishtobeimpetuousandthegovernmentshouldenforcealternativewaystocontrolthemedia.

Respectforonesideasisnotonlyhypotheticalbutmustbepractised.Itisthroughrespectthateachoneofuscanberecognisedasauniquepersonintheworld.Thiscanbeachievedbylookingatthebrightsideofwhatmediai.e.thecreativeartistsdisplayforus.Notadaycangobywhenwedon’tlookoutforcolourfuldreamsandabeautifullifewhichwecanfindeitherthroughmusic,poetry,films,pictures;

everythingthatthecreativeartistofferus.

TEST4

Inmanycountriesschoolshavesevereproblemswithstudentbehaviour.

Whatdoyouthinkarethecausesofthis?

whatsolutionscanyousuggest?

PoorstudentbehaviourseemstobeanincreasinglysidespreadproblemandIthinkthatmodernlifestylesareprobablyresponsibleforthis.

Inmanycountries,thebirthrateisdecreasingsothatfamiliesaresmallerwithfewerchildren.Thesechildrenareoftenspoilt,notintermsofloveandattentionbecauseworkingparentsdonothavethetimeforthis,butinmorematerialways.Theyareallowedtohavewhatevertheywant,regardlessofprice,andtobehaveastheyplease.Thismeansthatthechildrengrowupwithoutconsiderationforothersandwithoutanyunderstandingofwheretheirstandardoflivingcomesfrom.

Whentheygottoschoolagetheyhavenotlearntanyselfcontrolordiscipline.Theyhavelessrespectfortheirteachersandrefusetoobeyschoolrulesinthewaythattheirparentsdid.

Teacherscontinuallycomplainaboutthisproblemandmeasuresshouldbetakentocombatthesituation.ButIthinkthesolutiontotheproblemlieswiththefamilies,whoneedtobemoreawareofthefutureconsequencesofspoilingtheirchildren.Iftheycouldraisethemtobeconsiderateofothersandtobesocial,responsibleindividuals,thewholecommunitywouldbenefit.

Perhapsparentingclassesareneededtohelpthemtodothis,andhighqualitynurseryschoolscouldbeestablishedthatwouldsupportfamiliesmoreintermsofraisingthenextgeneration.Thegovernmentshouldfundthiskindofparentalsupport,becausethisisnolongeraproblemforindividualfamilies,butforsocietyasawhole.

TestB

Somepeoplebelievethatchildrenshouldbeallowedtostayathomeandplayuntiltheyaresixorsevenyearsold.Othersbelievethatitisimportantforyoungchildrentogotoschoolassoonaspossible.

Whatdoyouthinkaretheadvantagesofattendingschoolfromayoungage?

Inmanyplacestoday,childrenstartprimaryschoolataroundtheageofsixorseven.However,becauseitismorelikelynowthatbothparentswork,thereislittleopportunityforchildrentostayintheirownhomeuptothatage.Instead,theywillprobablygotoanurser